FF- Is Pyar Ko Kya Naam Dun*Updatd Pg122* - Page 55

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Posted: 17 years ago
Really sorry for not replying to your other parts Verni. I just read the 4 parts together now...

Woh Asit bhi na!! grrr 😡 but i'm glad that Sumit saved Kumkum 👏 It was sad to know about Prachi though, bechari 😭 but i guess she's got Soumy to cheer her up 😊

Again all the parts were very well written. keep it up!
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Now I'm just eagerly waiting for next part 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
U write really well Verni 😛 ...

I m telling naa...main chod deti hoon likhna 😆 ...

Wht say 😆 ?

Loved it simply 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ roku : bachcha, pehle to no sorry re..... main bhi kabhi kabhi nahi padh paati.....to.... 😳 😳 .... and hum sab ko sabse pehle khud se hi seekhna hota hai.... usi mein time nikal jaata hai.... doosron ko dekhna ka time kahan? 😳 😳 ... thoda philosophical naa 😳 😳

@ nitz : bas dekhte jao aage aage kya hogaaaa 😉 😉 😉

@ sonu : thanku bachcha.... achcha zyaada makkhan mat maar 😉 😆 😆

@ preshi : its okk bachcha.... jab time mile tab padho 😉 😳 ... yup will write soon. 😊

@ reshu : tu mil, tab lagati hun thappad.... nlayakkk 😡 😡 😡 .... bas ab ya to aisi baatein chod .....ya mujhse baat karna.... 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago



Next morning, Sumit goes to Kumkum's room. She was trying to wear saree, but due to pain in her right hand , she was unable to wear properly. She was unable to fold her hand properly.

Kk : Ouchhh…

Su (going near her and holding her hand) : Sambhal ke Kumkum….

She was embarrassed to see Sumit, as she wasn't wearing the saree properly, and was still tying her plates near waist, and plates on her shoulder. Sumit understands and luks down. 😳 😳

Su : Wo…. Tumhe problem hai…. To main kar dun…

Kumkum luks at him, he was innocently luking down, glanced at her once…and again luked down. 😳 😳

Sumit slowly sits down and makes plates, without luking at her, he luked at plates. Kumkum kept luking at him, and adored him of his sincerity. He slowly tucks in the plates and in this process, his hand touches her stomach. Kumkum feels something special. 😉 😉 😳

Su : Pata hai Kumkum , mujhe saree pehnna dadai ne sikhaya tha. 😛

Kk (surprised) : Achcha? 😛

Su (getting up and making plates near her shoulder, without luking at her, but Kumkum kept luking at him) : Haan, main unhe taiyaar bhi karta tha… mujhe bohut achcha lagta tha dadi ko sajana. 😆 😆

While talking, he finishes it.

Su : Lo ho gaya. Chalein ab?

Kk : Hmm.

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At the set, everyone asks Kumkum about her health, Sumit was with her all the time. Prachi comes and hugs her.

Pr : Hii bachchaaaaaaaa………. Kaisa hai? 😃 😃

Kk : Ekdum theek. 😊

Pr ( laughing) : That's better. I really missed u yaar…. 😃 😛

Kk : Achcha itna miss kiya to phone kar leti ya mil jaati. 😛 😆

Pr : Yaar…. Kya karun… ab Sumit to shoot pe aa nahi raha tha…. To …. (softly whispering) is director ne mujhe paka daala yaar…. Mere shots ke peeche pada rehta tha. 😆 😆 😆

Both laugh at this. 😃

Then the director comes along with Sumit.

Dir : So Kumkum how are u now?

Kk : Fine, sir. 😊

Pr : Sir, hum 10 minute baad shoot karenge…. Mujhe Kumkum ke paas baithna hai thodi der. 😛

Dir : Ya sure, waise bhi thoda time hai.

Sumit and Prachi sit with Kumkum. they were busy talking, when they hear a voice,

"Hello everyone."

They luk at that side, it was Asit. All three stand up. Kumkum is scared to see him.

Sumit, slowly slid his fingers in between Kumkum's fingers' and held her hand tightly, Kumkum luks at him and Sumit luks at her, assuring that he is there. 😳 Prachi keeps her hand around her shoulder. 😳 😳

Pr : Hello.

As : Hii Sumit.

Sumit doesn't reply.

As : No problem, Hello dear Kumkum.

Sumit luks at angrily. Kumkum luks other side.

As : Waise Kumkum, hamari meeting adhoori reh gayi thi us din…. Should we continue some time?..... Jab tum chaho.

Sumit tries moving towards him, 😡 😡 but Kumkum fastens her grip on his hand, which was in her hand. He luks at her and she shakes head negatively.

Pr : ya sure…. Hum sab aayenge… us meeting mein….. along with ur wife and children….. and media……. How's that? 😉 😆

Asit makes a face and goes from there. 😆

Pr : Kumkum , dekha…. Aise logon ko jawaab dena chahiye…. Yeh aisi hi language samjhte hain…. Ras… 😆 😆

Su : Ayyyy…. Gaali nahi….. 😆 😆

Pr : Okayyy….. Par inke liye ye best words hain….. 😉 😆

Su : achacha,ab chalein…. Shooting bhi kar len….

They go inside.

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Kumkum is running, sweating, panting…….

She reaches a place, she doesn't know where?

Kk : Main kahan hun?....... main….. Sumitttt….. Sumittt….. Tum theek ho naa…..Sumitttt… 😭

"SUMITTTTT"

She wakes up from the sleep, she was dreaming. 😳

She was sweating and breathing hard. Her eyes filled with fear and tears.

Sumit rushes to her room and opens the door,

Su : Kya hua Kumkum?

He goes and sits near her. She hugs him tightly and buries her face into his chest , she sobbed and feared. 😭

Sumit consoles her, and caresses her hair.

Su : Kumkum……. Kumkum kya hua?.... Koi bura sapna dekha?.... Kumkum… kuch batao bhi….. warna mujhe kaise pata chalega.. hmm 😳 😳

Kk (still in his arms and hugging him, sobbing and still afraid) : Sumit…. Please… Please…. Mujhe thodi der….. …….. Please Sumitt…..

Sumit understands that she was fearing and he lets her be , in his arms. 😳

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Next morning,

At breakfast table,

Su : Tum theek ho?

Kk : huh….. haan……. Theek hun.

Su : Kal kaafi darr gayi thi….. 😳

Kk : I am sorry….. wo bura sapna dekha to achanak……. 😳

Su : It's okk…. No problem.. Chalo main chalta hun phir.

Kk : Main…. Matlab?..... main bhi chal rahi hun. 😕

Su : Nahi , aaj tum nahi jaogi. 😳

Kk : Kyun? 😕

Su : Kyunki aaj jis jagah shoot karna hai… wo Mumbai se thodi doori pe hai… raat ho jaayegi…. Shoot pe rehna…. Phir itni door travel karna… Kumkum abhi bhi tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai…. I can't risk it. 😳 😳

Kk : Nahi Sumit…. Main chalungi….. Sumit main theek hun….. main chalungi aapke saath. 😕

Su : Kumkum, zidd nahi karte….. aur tumhe darne ki koi zarurat nahi…. Main raat ko aa jaonga….. aur baahar security tight hai…. Hmm….. Tumhe kuch nahi hoga… 😳 😳

Kk : Mujhe……. Sumit, mujhe apni nahi aapki fikr hai… kal maine sapna dekha….aap…. 😉 😳

She keeps quiet….. Sumit understands why yesterday she was so afraid. He goes near her. 😳 😳

Su : Kumkum, waise chinta to tumhari hogi mujhe… main to itne logon ke saath rahunga… mujhe kya hoga…. Par main itni door le jaake tumhari tabiyat aur nahi kharaab hone de sakta….. tumhe kuch nahi hoga…. Aur main apna poora khyaal rakhunga….okk.. Okay??? 😳 😳


Kumkum is still not satisfied…

Kk : Sumit…..

Su : Kumkum please…. Dekho tum aise udaas hogi to mujhe bohut bura lagegaaa… please… 😳 😳

Kk : Theek hai jaaiye….

Sumit keeps his hand on her head and smiles……. And goes….

Kk (after he had gone, to herself) : Ya Rabb…. Sumit ki hifazat karna… 😳 😳 😊

Saying this, she joins her hands and closes her eyes.
😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Happy happy happy happy........ tum sab nowwwwwww 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Happy??Superduper happy..Kaya part thi di!! kaya part thi specially saari wala..😍mmmuuuaaahhh di...You r gr8...I've read it 5 times then replying...It was out standing....
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Posted: 17 years ago
very happy meri thurf sa thara liya 🤗 .
abb kk sapna may be su ka passs 😳 😳 and saree wala scence upp 😳 😳 😛
next part kal hona chahiya😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Very sweet part Verni...keep it up 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Verni Di..terrific!!!!..

I was cool...esp the dream sequence part.. 😳 my fav scene 😳 ...Aap sumit ke saath kuch bura karne waale ho na?.. 😭

Di..wo jo i-d maine aapko diya tha na?..main khud hi uska password bhul ayi hun..m making another i-d wo aapko de doongi 😭 ... 😳 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowowo both parts are amazingggggggg 72 and73 parts are awsomeeee

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