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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwww ths ws sooo damnn sweet yaar....suchh a cute cute lovely lovelyy part 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ya it was soooooo nice. Please Update the next part. It was a very sweet conversation.
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Looking forward to the next part.
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part 16:
su gets up and sees kk still sleeping...he goes near her and touches her forehead....
he finds that the temperature has dropped down so with relief he goes to freshen up... 😛

su is getting ready to go to office ........
su comes near kk .....

su: tumne davayi le li??? 😛

kk: jee... 😳

su :theek hai come…. breakfast kar lo....

kk(with hesitation):woh...woh....main baad main karoongi abhi mann nahin hai...

su: nahi tum abhi nashta kar rahi ho…tumhari tabiyat kharaab hai....

kk: maine kaha na...main baad main kha loongi....aap meri itni chinta mat keejiye... 😕

su: maine dadaji se waada kiya hai..tumhe kabhi dukh na dene ka aur...tumari khayal rakhne ka...isiliye .. 😭

kk to herself ".. meri parvah thi to mujhe iyna dukh kyun diya…kyun chot pahunchayi mujhe"

su: kya soch rahi ho?? aao nashta karo....

kk:main nahi aa sakti hoon...maine aaj vrat rakha hai... 😕

su: kya?? ye tum kya keh rahi ho??is halat main vrat ??...pagal to nahin ho tum…dimag kharaab ho gaya hai…raat mein kitna bukhaar tha jaanti ho na tum…saari raat pattiyaan rakhin hain maine..pata hai na 😳

kk: jee haan…par ye vrat maine dadaji ke liye rakha hai....

su: ohh to phir ek baar drama karna shuru kar diya tumne.... 😡

kk gets shocked and shattered on hearing these words....
kk(with tears in her eyes): drama karna mujhe nahi aata hai..aur waise bhi drama karne ki zaroorat bhi nahi hai mujhe....

su: zaroorat hai na....mujhe tang karne ki zaroorat ....mere khilaf mere parivar ko behkane ki zaroorat aur meri bachi kuchi khushiyaan chinane ki zaroorat hai na..... 😡

kk: bas karo su.....ye vrat maine sirf dadaji ke liye rakha hai aur isme behas karne ki koi dilchaspi nahi hai mujhe ... 😭

kk leaves the place and su gets tensed....

su " ye kk mujhe chain se jeene nahi degi" he then comes to hall...

dadima:su aaj hamare ghar main pooja hai beta ....jaldi aana...

su: pooja ...kaunsi pooja dadima....

dadima: woh aaj kk ka aakhri vrat hai beta....kk dadaji ke liye ek saal se vrat rakh rahi hai....woh har mahine vrat rakhti hai....aaj aakhri mahina hai....isliye....kk hamare parivar ki devi hai beta...

su nods his head with a fake smile and thinks...

su " iska matlab kk shadi ke pehle se hi ye vrat rakhti aayi hai....maine use galat samajha ....ab main kya karoon" 😳

su decides to say sorry to her and goes inside ....
su goes in and sees kk standing near the window...
su: woh....kk....main.... 😳

kk still sobbing leaves the place...su feels very bad..... 😭

It's evening and kk is doing the aarti ...she is very tired and can't even stand ...

su comes in and joins the pooja.......

KK is feeling very sick… 😭

Kk-kya kaaroon…sumit se kahoon….nahin main nahin kahoongi… 😭
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She's feeling very weak and dizzy…

Kk-mujhe aarti tak sambhalna hi hoga…… 😕 kk finishes the pooja and due to illness she is about to fall...su sees this and rushes towards her … 😳 .kk faints
su holds kk in his hands.... 😳
all get panicked and rush towards kk....

su: maa...pls pani le aao....

veena gets water and su sprinkles the water on kk's face .... 😳

su: kk....kk.....kk tum thi ho?...kk? 😳

kk slowly opens her eyes.....

su gets relieved and gets up....

dadima: su...kk ko kamre mein le ja su...main khane le liye kuch lati hoon....

su: jee dadima.....

su holds kk's hand and takes her to the room 😳 ...kk keeps on looking at su 😳 .....

he then makes her sit on the bed comfortably....

dadima comes in with the food...

dadima-kk…beta tu thik to hai na..kk?

Kk-ji…main thik lag raha hai ab

dadima: ye lo su...kk ko khila dena...kk beta tu aaram kar 😳

su: main. 😃 ..

dadima:haan tumhe khilana hai.....

su feels uncomfortable but still for dadima's happiness takes a piece and feeds it to kk 😳

kk with tears in her eyes eats it…..

Dadi ma-beta teri tabiyat kharab thi to kya zarurat thi sumit ka intezaar karne ki….tujhe pehle bata dena chahiye than na…

KK-nahin dadima…dadaji chahte they ki hum sab milkar pooja karein….

Dadima-sumit…iski tabiyat kabse kharab hai?

Su-dadima woh….kk ko kal raat se bukhaar tha….

KK-nahin……..wo…halka hi tha….

Dadima-par ab tu aram karegi…sumit isko khila…tu khila kyun nahin raha hai 😳

Su very uncomfortably feeds her again and dadima leaves….

kk understands that su is feeling uncomfortable...

kk:su main ye kha loongi.....aap rehne deejiye.... 😃

su-thik hai….ab thik to ho na tum?

kk-haan….

su gives the plate to kk and goes out.....

next day morning....

kk gets coffee for su ...

su:ab tabiyat kaisi hai..... 😛

kk: theek hai....

kk gives the coffee to su...su drinks the coffee....

su: achi coffee hai...

su smiles and then leaves....kk too smiles to herself.... 😳


su and trisha leave for office.......

board room:

su, trisha ,kul and other managers are having a discussion about marketing a product...

su:hi everyone....hum sab yaha hamare milk product ke bare main baat karne ke liye maujood hain...

su: aap sab to jante hain ki hamara milk product acha nahi chal rah hai....isliye hamein jaldi kuch karke iske rotation ko badana hai...any suggestions....
all started giving so many suggestion but none was perfect ....

after a long session of discussions...

trisha: i have one suggestion....

su: haan trisha bolo...

trisha: ab hamein kisi na kisi tarah sales ko increase karna hoga.....iske liye
doosron ki tarah free gifts ya attractive advertisements karne hain...aisa ham karein to
hamare competetors bhi waisa hi karenge aur isme hamara loss hi hoga....

su: u r right ....lekin sales ko badhane ke liye hum kya karenge..

trisha: hum apne milk products ke sath spoon dete hain na....

su: haan ....

trisha: agar hum us spoon ka size bada kar dein to customer har bar extra quantity
use karega aur jaldi hi bottle khatam ho jayega aur hamara sales bhi increase hoga...

su: this seems to be good...
all accept it ....

trisha: sales increase hone ke baad hum advertisement and free gifts bhi denge .....

all r happy with the idea and applaud trisha for the gr8 suggestion...

the meeting is over and su comes near trisha and offers her a handshake... 😃

su: trisha ...i am proud of u ....keep it up .....

trisha: bhaiyya.....sab tareef bhabhi ko deejiye.... 😃 😃

su: kk ko.....kyun??

trisha: ye suggestion kk bhabhi ka hai......maine kal is problem ke bare main socha..
....woh to bhabhi ne jhat se ye idea de diya....u know bhaiya u r very lucky....bhabhi sabse best hai....

su smiles and trisha leaves ......

at home kk calls rishi and tells him about the kidnapper and asks for his help...

rishi:kk tum chinta mat karo ..kal main apni aunty ke ghar se wapas aa raha hoon...hum kal hi us aadmi ko pakad lenge.....aur is kidnapping ke peeche kaun hain ye hame pata chal jayega...

sukanya hears this ……..

kk: theek hain rishi kal main taiyyar rahoongi.....bye....

sukanya hears this and decides to create problem bet su and kk
using this matter.....

in the evening su returns home and goes to his room...
he sees kk sitting and reading a book....
kk sees su and gets up ...

kk: main aap ke liye chai lekar aati hoon...

su: jaldi nahi hai...aaram se lana....tum weak ho....zyada strain mat lo..abhi aaram ki zarurat hogi... 😳

kk is surprised to hear su talking nicely to her..
kk starts to leave ...

su: suno....

kk turns back...

su: trisha ne kaha tumne use milk product ka idea diya hai....thanks.... 😳

kk smiles ...: its ok....

kk leaves and sukanya comes in ...

su: buaji..andar aayiye ....

suk: su mujhe ek naya cell phone lekar de na ....

su: kyun aap ke cell ko kya hua...

suk: woh to ek mahine phele hi kharab hogaya ....

su: to aap ne mujhe pehele nahi bataya …. main le aata na...

suk: haan...main ghar ka phone hi use karti thi...par ab to lag raha hai ki mujhe ek minute bhi nahi milega phone karne ke liye 🤢

su: kyun buaji??? kya hua landline ko....??

suk: hmmm ....woh to apni patni se poochna....sara din phone par hi baat kar rahi hai....woh tumare friend ka naam kya hai.....(acts as if she had forgotten the name)haan rishi ke sath... 🤢 😡

su thinks "kk rishi ke sath ........"

su: ohhh....buaji main kal apko naya cell phone la kar deta hoon ...

su starts thinking and suk sees this.....

suk " aag to laga di ab isme ghee dalkar badhana hai "...and gives a wicked smile and leaves....

su "lagta hai buaji ko galat fehmi hui hoga"..he consoles himself and goes to freshen up..

kk enters with coffee….

KK-sumit coffee…

Su-(still thinking about suk's words)…

KK-sumit…..

Su-haan…

KK-coffee pi lijiye …

Su- thanks……kk wo…tum …who actually… 😳

KK-ji….

Su-kk…actually main…

Sumit then thinks that buaji must have been mistaken and on asking kk, he will hurt her…. 😳

KK-aap kuch keh rahe hain …? 😉

Su-nahin…bas…tum aaram kar lo ab…ye keh raha tha…….pls feel comfortable….aaram se let jao…… 😃

kk-ok……

They smile at each other……. 😳

KK lies down on the bed and thinks " aaj sumit pehli baar mujhse acche se pesh aaye…." 😳

Thinking all this ….she falls asleep….sumit, on seeing her asleep….switches off the lights and leaves….


the next day
rishi comes to pick up kk and kk leaves with him in his bike....

they both go straight to the market and start searching for the kidnapper...

kk turns around to find him when suddenly her eyes fall on a car....she immediately recognises it to be su's car...

kk sees su getting in to the car with a girl .....kk gets shocked and tries to see the girl's face ..its reshma... 😕 😡

kk gets shell shocked and tears start rolling down her cheeks and she is standing still like a statue...
rishi sees the kidnapper and calls kk....but kk cant hear it ....

so rishi shakes kk...

kk: haan .....kya ..kya rishi??

rishi: kahaan kho gayi ...maine us kidnapper ko dekh liya ..tum yahin theherna main abhi aata hoon...
rishi proceeds forward but stops and comes back to
kk....

rishi:kk ...tum theek ho na....

kk hides her tears and says....

kk: haan theek hoon...tum jao...jaldi...
rishi keeps his hand on kk's shoulder and says...

rishi: sambhalke....

su who is about to start the car sees rishi keeping his hand on kk's shoulder and gets shocked..... 😡 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr88888888888888 keep it up bachcha...i know bohut din baad i commented...but i was busyyyy 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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guys reply na.....
thanx verni di.... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome. Great Update. looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi nice part.waiting for next part soon. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great chemistry and their unsaid love and caring for eachother. Loved it.
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PART 17:
kk moves away from the place.....su fully confused tries to look again but can't find anyone so decides to leave..
on the way su is thinking when reshma is asking something.....
resham:su..su...kya ho gaya tumhe....kya soch rahe ho???
su:haan....nahi... main kuch nahi soch raha hoon...
su to himself " kk aur rishi ek sath ...kyun wahan jate hain...rishi ne mujhse
kuch nahi chupaya ab tak...par usne is bare main kuch nahi kaha..."😕

kk completly shattered, sits on a chair and hears someone calling her from behind..
its kk's college friend ruhaan..
ruhaan: kk ...kaisi ho??
kk( wipes off her tears):haan theek hoon????tum kaisa ho??
ruhaan : perfect....kal mera shadi hain....main to abhi soch raha tha tumare ghar jaane ki liye aur tum yahaan
mil gayi....
kk: ohhh ....congrats...
ruhaan: kk agar tum bura na mano to kya main invitation yahin par hi de doon...
kk: no formalities ruhaan...de do ...main zaroor aaoongi...
ruhaan: ok...par tumhe apne pati ko bhi sath ke laana hai....
ruhaan gives the invitation to kk..
kk: woh ..ruhaan darasal mere pati kuch kaam main busy hain ....isliye woh nahi aa paayenge...
par main koshish karoongi...
ruhaan: ok....tum zaroor aana....bahut kaam hain....mujhe jana hai....bye..
kk: ok bye...
kk again starts thinking " mujhe kyun su ko reshma ke sath dekhkar itna dukh ho raha hai...
main to use divorce dene ka faisla le chuki hoon par ab mujhe kyun aisa lag raha hi ki main su ke
or kheenci ja rahi hoon ....kyun mujhe su ko reshma ke sath dekhkar bura lag raha hain...kyun mera mann
bar bar su ko hi yaad karta hai..kyun..."😉
kk is thinking when rishi comes there......
rishi: kk ..maine us admi ko pakadkar poocha....bahut dhamki dene ke baad usne kaha
ki kisi payal naam ki aurat ne paise dekar tumhe kidnap karvaya tha.....
kk: payal????ye kaun hai..??
rishi: hamein pata karna hoga....usne address bhi diya hai.....
kk: to chalo jaakar abhi dekhte hain....
rishi and kk go in search of payal but find that her house is locked and she had gone out of station so
they decide to come another day....and leave
su reaches home and searches for kk...
suk:su....kisko dhoond raha hai...
su: kk ko...kk kaham hai...
suk(sarcastically):kk to ghar par hai hi nahi...woh subah se gayab hai...
pata nahi kahan chali gayi....
su(to himself)"ab tak kk ghar nahi aayi" ... 😕
su goes to balcony and sees kk coming with rishi in bike ..
kk comes inside the room...
su: kahaan gayi thi tum....
kk(confuse what to tell):woh ..main woh main apni ..ek friend ki ghar gayi thi...
wahan late hogaya....
su thinks why kk is telling lie to him and gets confused....😕

at night..
kk comes near su..
kk: su kal mere college friend ki shadi hai....usne tumhe bhi bulaya hai...
su(in an angry tone): mujhe kuch aur zaroori kaam hai...tum jao....
kk feels bad and leaves the place...
su "kk mujhse jhoot kyun keh rahi hai...rishi ke sath uska kya rishta hai..." su is confusing himself and finally
tells to himself "main kyun iske bare main soch raha hoon...kk kisi ke sath jaye isme mujhe kya fikar..." saying this su tries to sleep 😉
but cant as the same thought keeps on occupying his mind.... 😆😆

the next day evening kk goes to ruhaan's wedding ....
as kk enters she saw su's car standing outside and gets surprised ....
kk starts searching for su and finally finds him getting into the car and leaving...
kk tries to stop him but in vain....
thinking why su came here kk enters the wedding hall and looks at the stage....
seeing there kk gets shocked .......
its reshma standing as bride...
kk feels happy at heart and regrets for suspecting su with reshma....
kk slowly goes to the stage and gives the gift to ruhaan and reshma..
reshma on seeing kk hugs her and asks for excuse and takes kk to one corner place.....
reshma: kk...kaise ho tum....
kk: haan achi hoon....shadi mubarak ho...
resham: thanks kk...su abhi chala gaya ...keh raha tha kuch kaam thai...
kk: ohhhh..
reshma: tum khush ho na...
kk keeps silent...
reshma: mujhe pata hai...tumare aur su ke beech bahut galatfehmiyaan hai...
shayad un sab ko main nahi mita sakoongi par kuch to zaroor karoongi...
kk looks at her .......
reshma: tumhe pata nahi hai kk.....us din kya hua....
reshma explains kk how she asks help to su and how the headmistress misunderstood their friendship.......
reshma:us din su ne mere liye hi HM ke samne kuch nahi kaha...
woh janta tha main apni mummy papa ke alag rehne ki waje se kitna pareshan thi
isliye usne kuch nahi kaha taki mere parents ke bare main sab ko nahi pata chale....
kk has tears in her eyes.... 😭😭
reshma: su ki waje hi meri parents ab ek sath hain aur su ne ek bhai bankar meri sari khushiyan
lauta di hain....sach much kk tum bahut khushnaseeb ho...
reshma: maine su se kai bar tumhare bare main baat karne ki koshish ki par tumhe to patha hai na
su kitna short tempered hai isliye usne mujhe ek bar bhi baat karne nahi di...par mujhe apni bhabhi par
poora viswas hai....aap bhaiya ko samjha dogi....haina....
saying this reshma holds kk's hand and kk with tear filled eyes holds her hands and assures it ......

after function kk wishes reshma again and invites her to come for dinner one day and leaves....
kk's room:
kk enters the room and locks it .....she goes staright to the bed and starts crying.....😭
flashes of the things happened from the childhood till today come to her mind .......

kk "maine shak ka parda apne aankhon main bandhkar apni achi
zindagi ko kho diya....su mere liye hi bana hua hain aur main su ke liye...
ye sach mujhe ab tak nazar hai aaya lekin ab sab saaf hai....
maine socha su ke sath shadi karke bahut badi galati ki maine par
ab mujhe pata chala ye shadi hi mere liye sab kuch hai ....su ka charcter
badon aur bachon se uska pyar ye sab dekhkar mere mann main su ke liye pyar ho gaya ...
par us ka ehsaas mujhe nahi hua lekin ab mujhe ye ehsaas ho gaya hai ki main su se pyar karti hoon...bahut pyar
karti hoon ....aur aaj main is pyar ko su ke samne koobool karoongi.... 😳😳
kk wipes her tears and turns back and surprised to see su standing standing
near the door...
seeing him kk breaks down and starts crying .....
su locks the door and comes near kk and puts his hands on her shoulder...kk gets up...
kk(sobbing): su...main...
su: shhhhhhhhh.....maine sab kuch sun liya....kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahim hai...
kk:nahi su mujhe kehne do...aaj tak maine tumare saath jo bhi kiya hai...uske liye mujhe maaf kar do...
plssssssssss
kk starts crying again.... 😭
su keeps his hands on kk's cheek and tries to wipe her tears...
kk holds su's hand and starts crying again ....den kk hugs su tightly su hugs her back 🤗🤗

Edited by mathimurali - 17 years ago

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