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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for the wonderful write up JJ and Mathi. Waiting eagerly for the next part. This Sukanya will never change.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 bachcha.........yaar sukk ke peeche hi sab pade rehte hain 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part.keep it up.plz update soon. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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superb part mathi now dont put us tension cont soon 😛 👏 👏
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part 5:
on seeing the lady sukanya got shocked...

suk:tum....yahan....

lady: jeee...

suk: tum payal ho na...

lady: haan main wahi payal hoon jipe wadwa parivar ne chori ka ilzam lagakar baahar kar diya...

suk:(thinking she can use her) haan maine bhi tumare liye sab ke sath bahut bahaas ki....... phir bhi koi faida nahi...akhir tumne choti si chori to kee na...us ke liye itni badi saz...a kuch zyada hi hain...

payal: haan madam ...chodiye main uske bare main aur baat nahi karna chahti...boliye aap kaisi hain...??

suk: main theek hun tum iss school main kaam karti ho kya??

payal: haan main HM ki peon hoon...yahan..

suk starts thinking for a minute

suk:ohhh....mujhe tumse kuch madat chahiye..

pay: madam aap kahiye to.... main mana kaise kar sakti hoon ...bataiye madam kya karna hain...

suk: tum andar jakar ye pata karna hain ki su kya kar raha hain...??

pay: ithni se baat ..main abhi patha karke aayi...



after sometime payal returns........

pay: madam su apni classmate... reshma naam ki ladki ko kuch sikha raha hain...

sukanya on hearing this thinks of a plan and turns towards payal

sukanya takes a bundle of 100-rupee notes and gives it to payal

suk: ye lo payal....tumare liye hain..

payal(gazing at the money ):mere liye .......itna paisa....

suk:haan....le lo

sukanya gives the money to payal and continues..while payal is looking at the money happily...

suk:is se bhi zyada tumhe main doongi ...agar tum meri madat karogi to.....

hearing this payal with her eyes wide open......

pay: is se bhi zyada !!!!!!!.. madam aap jo kuch kahengi wo main karoongi ....boliye na madam kya karna hain??

sukanya takes her to a secluded place and explains her the plan.........

pay (after hearing the plan): samjhiye madam aap ka kaam ho gaya ...

sukanya gives wicked smile ........



inside the school:

su: reshma main tumhein ek baat poochoon...

res: haan poocho....

su: tum tuition kyun nahi ja rahi ho...agar tum tuition jati to acha ....samakh rahi ho na what i want to say...?

res: nahi su tuition evening main hota hain aur mujhe evening zaldighar jana hota hai....

su with a surprised look on his face asks her :kyun.???

res: ab tak kisi ko nahi pata hai....main tumhe apna friend nahi balki bhai samajhkar ye keh rahi hoon...

su keenly watches her...

she continues.......

res: mere mummy- papa alag rehte hain isliye main apni dadima ke pas hoon aur unka ghar yahan se door hai....main evening tuition jaoon to dher ho jayegi

su: i am so sorry reshma .....main hoon na tum chinta mat karo theek hai....



su decides to help reshma and teaches her by coming to school early….



after 2 days ,afternoon:

payal in headmistress' room cleaning the table....

pay: madam aap ko pata hain hamare school ke bare main log kya kehte hain...

HM:kya kehte hain payal?.......

pay: yahi hain ke aapke yahan aane ke baad ye school bahuth acha ho gaya hai....

and she starts praising her management and HM feels very happy on hearing dat..

slowly payal says..

pay:magar mujhe dar lag raha hain madam…..kahin ek ladke ki wajahe se sare school ka naam badnaam na ho jaye....

HM:what.. tum kya keh rahi ho...saf saf batao..

Pay:madam ek ladka aur ladki rozz jaldi school akar akele main baat karte hain….Patha nahin aisi kya baat hai ki who rozz....


hearing this HM got tensed and calls su's class teacher and enquires abt the matter

but she is unaware of it so HM decides to call su and reshma and enquire..........



evening:

kk:su kal mera birthday hain...main tumare ghar main subhah aakar cake katungi...

su:aah mujhe yaad hai...main kaise bhoolonga tumari birthday stupid....kal hum sab milkar celebrate karenge......

kk was happy on hearing this.



the next day morning

wadwa house:

su forgets kk's birthday and leaves for school….

kk comes ...wearing a new dress..

she comes and takes blessings from veena

veena: many many happy returns beta...aisa hi har din khush rehna.....

kk: su kahan hai aunty...

veena: su school ja chuka hai...

kk got disappointed and says to herself

"aisa kya kaam hai ki su rozz mujhe chodkar jaldi jah raha hai...

aaj mere kehne par bhi who chala gaya....aur meri birthday bhi bool gaya…."

kk becomes sad but doesnt show it and the birthday celebrations take place...

sukanya takes this chance and comes near kk and says

" are kk..su tumara birthday bhool gaya kya?....ye to bahut buri baat hai...
su ko aisa karna nahi chahiye na..."

kk was listening to all this silently thinking how su forgot her birthday

and sukanya continues "kk tumhe pata hain aaj kal su bahut jhoot bhi bol raha hai"
kk stares at her...

" who rozz ye jhoot bolkar school jaldi jha raha hai ki main rahul ke sath padne ke liye ja raha hoon aur tumhe to pata hain na rahul ki thabiyath theek nahi hain... patha nahi su aisa kyun kar raha hai..."

this made kk think abt su's behaviour and why he suddenly changed like this...



after the celebrations kk and anju left for school....



in the school:

kk and anju are surprised to see that except their class all other classes are standing in the assembly and

HM is scolding everyone very angrily..



after assembly su kk's class alone was standing in front of HM room

kk was wondering wat was happening....



To know wat has happened keep reading........

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great, very well written. Keep it up. Continue, fast.
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great part 👏 👏 👏
again at tension hummmmmmmmm 😛
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PART 6:

After sometime payal comes out of HM's room and asks kk to come in.
Kk enters the HM room with lot of hesitation and fear…
Kk: good morning madam..
HM: hmm….to tum is class ki leader ho??
Kk: yes madam..
HM: u have to be ashamed of urself . don't say urself to be the class leader …..
Kk 's heart beat increases and she keep on… looking at HM..
HM: being a class leader u should know each and everything that is happening in the class...
She continues…
HM: but tumhe ye bhi nahi pata hai ki tumhari class ki ek ladki aur ladka rozz akele main baith kar baatein karte hain…us ladki ka naam hai reshma aur us ladke ka naam hai (just thinking a bit as she forgot su's name) wohh……haan su……
Hearing su's name kk was shell shocked and her eyes are filled with tears….
HM: acha hain mujhe ye baat jaldi pata chal gayi …varna iss school ke naam par bahut bada daag lag jaata…
Then HM scolds her about her carelessness and her inefficiency to be a leader then asks su and reshma to come in..
Su comes in and looks at kk……..
HM: tum iss ladki ke sah akele kya karte ho?
Su: madam reshma ko maths padhata hoon… isliye …main use maths padha raha.. tha aur kuch nahi ……….
HM: agar use kuch doubts hain to teachers hain …tuition hai … ye sab chodkar tumse padhne kyun aayi?? Tum genius ho kya maths mein???
Su didn't tell anything and kk lifts her face and sees su's face with an expectation that he will tell something….and refuse that he had made mistake but he keeps quiet …..reshma looks at su with tears of thankfulness….
Finally after a long process of warnings and pardons the HM says "main tumhe warning dekar chod rahi hoon… kyunki ye tumari pehli mistake hai… isliye….aisa tumne dobara kiya to main tumhe maaf nahi karoongi…….
Finally, as a punishment su was not made the class leader and kk was again elected as the class leader..

The whole day went like this and finally su and kk start to leave ….
As su was about to leave, payal comes to him….
Payal: su ye kk tumari achi dost hai na to isne HM ke samne kyun nahi kaha hai ki tum aise hi ladke ho??
Su wonders why kk said like that and then thinks kk might have done this due to some reason……
On the way to home su calls kk but she doesn't respond to him
Kk in her mind " maine kabhi nahi socha ki su aisa kar sakta hai……main iss baat ko accept bhi nahi karti hoon aur inkar bhi nahi kar rahi hoon….main kya karoon…"
Su again calls kk and she looks at him
Su: kk mujhe tumse ek request karni hai.
Kk: hmmmm
Su: tum plsss iss baat ko mere ghar par nahin repeat karogi….
Su in a very perturbed mood cant talk more and kk doesnt say anything….

The next day sukanya calls anju..
Suk: anju tum jakar dadaji se ye kehna ki su aur kk ke beech jhagda hua hai…theek hai..?
Anju: ok ma……..

Dadaji's room:
Anju: dadaji…
Dadaji: anju…..andar aao beta….
Anju: dadaji.. aap ko pata hai su aur kk ke beech jhagda ho gaya hai….
Dadaji: kya….??? Mujhe nahi pata….
Anju: haan dadaji wo dono baat bhi nahi kar rahe hain…
Dadaji: kyun kya hua????
Anju: kk se hi poochiye…
Anju runs out of the room leaving dadaji in a confused state..
Dadaji asks sukanya to call kk and ask her to meet him..
Sukanya decides that this is the right time to take her move and makes a call to kk.
Suk: hello kk tumhe dadaji bula rahe hain..wo tumse bahut naaraz hain…
Kk gets confused and says that she's coming.   ; ; ;
Kk says to herself "kahin dadaji ko sumit ke bare mein sab pata to nahin chal gaya?…

Wadwa house:
Kk:
dadaji..
Dadji: kk…ye kya ho raha hai beta..??? tumne mujhe kuch bhi nahin bataya?..
Kk (with tears in her eyes thinking that dadaji knows abt su): dadji mujhe maf kar deejeye…main kuch nahi janti hoon….mujhe nahi pata ki su rozz reshma se milne ke liyes school jaldi jaata tha mujhe to ye sab HM se pata chala…wo mujhe bhi bahut daant rahi thin…maine kabhi socha bhi nahin tha ki sumit aisa…………..
Kk breaks down,tells dadaji all that happened…
Dadaji is shocked and he pacifies her
Dadaji: kk….ro mat …main su se baat karoonga..par tum iss baat ko kisi se mat kehna…vaadaa?
Kk keeps her hand on dadaji's hand and gives him the promise
Dadaji(to himself) " main sapne maine bhi aisa nahin socha tha ki su aisa karega…u beta tumne mera vishwaas tod diya…bahut chot pahunchi hai mere dil ko……"

next day: (its a holiday)
Su was studying in his room and sukanya came in and sat beside him..
Suk: su….tumare school main kuch problem hui hai kya..????
Su in a scared voice : haa…n nahi…….par kya baat hai??..aap aise kyun pooch rahe ho?
Suk:hmmm…dadaji bahut naraaz they kk ke aane ke baad se…kk ne unse kya kaha hoga…????
Su decides to find what happened n goes to dadaji's room.

Dadaji's room:
Su comes in and sees dadaji sitting on a chair facing the other side..
Su: dadaji….
Dadaji(without turning back): hmmm……to abhi meri yaad kaise aayi??
Su: aisa nahi hai dadaji….mujhe exam ke liye padhnaa tha isliye…..
Dadaji: ohhh pata hai…tum rahul ke saath group study bhi kar rahe ho na..?? Su( after sometime with fear): haan.. ka..ka..ka..kar raha hoon..
Dadaji(turning and facing su): isme darne ki kya baaat hai…
Su wiping his sweat….: main kyun darunga..
Dadaji: haan wo to main janta hoon .agar tumhe thoda bhi dar hota to tum itni badi baat nahi chupate mujhse …..
Su was taken aback and he stares at dadaji…..
Dadaji: su tumne mujhse itna bada jhoot kaise kaha?? Ab mujhe khjud par hi shak ho raha hai ki maine tumari parvarish me koi kami chod di…

Dadaji starts scolding su and su is standing silently..he tries to explain him but in vain
Finally dadaji tells " su aaj ke baad main tumse kabhi bhi baat nahi karunga….yahi tumari saza hai…."
Hearing this su feels as if the whole world is shaking for him and tears roll down his cheeks………
Dadaji: par main is baat ko kisi ko bhi nahi kahoonga ye mera wada hain.. ab tum ja sakte ho
Su with a heavy heart comes out of the room " yeh kya hua …. Ab main apne dadaji ke pyar ke bina kaisa jeeyunga….ye sab kk ki vajah se hua hai ..main use nahi chodunga…
With anger in his eyes su goes straight to kk
" kumkummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm( he shouts)……."
Kk turns back
Su: tum samajhti kya ho kumkum Sharma…sabit kya karna chahti ho…tumhe kya lagta hai tum mere daadaji ko ye kahogi ki tum bahut acchi ho aur main bura….mere dadaji ko mujhse door karogi tum?….
Kk:main kyun kuch saabit karungi…saabit wo karta hai jo galat hota hai….aur rahi baat dadaji ki ..to maine dadaji se keval sach bola ….…
Su: haan …haan main hi galat hoon aur sabse badi galati maine tumse dosti karke tumhe…apna dost samakh ke ki…

Kk: shaayad mujhe bhi aaj aisa hi mehsoos ho raha hai…mera dost to kho gaya hai…tum mere sumit ho hi nahin…
Su: to thik hai…aaj se hamare beech ke saare rdhtey khatm aur ab humare beech keval aur keval nafrat hi rahegi…hameshaa…
Kumkum and sumit both are in tears …remembering their chilhood days..
Saying this su and kk walk away in opposite directions while sukanya watching all this gives a wicked smile…….

Edited by mathimurali - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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superb part 😳 .
cont soon 👏 👏
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PART 7:

Sukanya (to herself): ab tak sab kuch theek chal raha hain aura aage mujhe ye sochna hoga ki is nafrat ko kaise badhana??
Thinking this she comes in to kitchen and sees veena…..
She sees that veena is bit disturbed …
Suk: bhabhi aap pareshan lag rahe ho???kya baat hai??
Veena: sukanya tumhare bhaiyya bhi na kabhi bhi kuch bhi kartha hai……
Suk: kyun bhabhi kya kiya hunhoone??
Veena: woh business ke liye abroad jana hai…aur vaha hi rehna hoga…isliye main pareshan ho
Suk thinks "agar su abroad chala gaya tho mera kaam aasan ho jayega"
Suk: bhabhi ..aap aur su bi abroad chaliye ….bas aapko paresan ho hi nahi saktha…
Veena: par mummiji aur dadiji ko chodkar……main kaisi…
Suk: woh sab samalne ke liye main hoona….aap chintha math kareye….
Veena thinks and finally decides to go along with kul to US..

Su,veena and kul left for US…….dadaima ,dadaji stayed in India …..as years passes by kk becomes very close to dadaji and dadima and dey have come to a state that dey cant live without kk……….

After some years…
Veena had send photos of su to everyone….
Sukanya shows the photos to anju but she is not very much interested in seeing them…
Then sukanya takes the photos and goes to kk's house and goes to kk's room….
Kk's room:
Suk: kk…….
kk:suk aunty aayiye....
suk:kk ye lo su ka photos hai ....veena ne beja...
kk not looking into the photos leaves th eplace to do some other work....
suk takes the photos and starts talking abt su...
suk:kk ....ye dekho su kithna acha lag raha hai....aur ye ladki kaun hai???
kk turns back...
actually su was alone in the photo...
suk:lagtha hai su ko bahuth girl friends hai...
kk "ye su kabhi nahi sudharega"
suk" ab mera kaam hogaya hai"....
After some years…..
Kk is doing her final year graduation and su too doing his final year graduation in US…
One fine morning:
Kk comes to wadwa house in the morning as it is her routine practice..
Kk: dadaji…..
Dadaji: kk tum aagaye main tumara inthazar kar raha hoon…
Kk: aap ne mujhe yaad kiya tho main aagaya..are aap ab thak davahi nahi kaya…
Dadaji: main tumara inthazar kar raha tha…
Kk: dadaji aap bhi na….
Kk gives him medicine, dadima comes in…
Dadima: lo…aap ko maine davayi detha tho aap nahi kaya ab kk dediya tho jatse kaaliya…
Dadaji:are rajeshwari….mera kk deraha hai tho main mana kaisa karoonga…
Dadaji laughs at dadima and dadima with a fake angry leaves the room
Kk: dadaji aap bhi na…..dadima ko naraz kar diya…dadima………
Kk goes after dadima…
Kk: dadima…aap dadaji ka bathon ko bura math maneye na…
Dadima: are pagli main naraz nahi balki bahut kush hoon ki who bhi tumse intha pyar kartha hai jaisa main karthi hoon…
Kk got emotional..
Dadima: hum ko hamara beta aur poottha ka kami kabhi mehsus nahi kiya sirf tumari vaje se…tum sadha kush rehna beta…….
Dadima gives her blessing and kk leaves to college….

In the afternoon dadji got a mild heart attack and dadima calls the doctor immediately
Doctor: madam aap ki pathi ko mild heart aatck huha hai…ab sab theek hai par aap inka kayal rakna aur davaye waqt per dedigiye na
Dadima got tensed ..
Kk hearing the news comes to wadwa house to see dadaji….

Kk(with tears): dadaji ….aap theek tho hai na?????
dadaji: haan main theek hoon...tum ithna paresan math ho kk...
kk still crying....
dadaji trying to console her...
kk:main college nahi jaavoonga jab tak aap theek nahi ho jatha..
dadaji: kk amin theek hoon ...mujhe kuch nahi hooha...ye tho chota aatck hai...
tum jab college nahi jana tab mera bada attack hoga...
dadaji laughs at kk but she is not interested and cries and leaves the place..
dadima: are aap kyun kk ko paresan kar rahi ho...
dadaji:nahi rajeswari mujhe aisa lag rah hai ki main zyada din nahi rahoonga...
dadima(emotionally): aisa kabhi math kehna..
dadima starts crying...
dadaji: are main tho aisa hi kaha ....mujhe jaldi se su aur kk ki shadi ko dekna hai..
dadima: par...(thinks for a sec)theek hai main kul se bath karoonga ...

dadima calls kul...
kul:ma...papa kaisa hai...main aaj hi india aayunga..tickets bi ready hai..
dadima:nahi beta ..uske koi zaroorath nahi..yaha sab theek hai...tumara papa bilkul
theek hai....tum chintha mat karo...
kul: jee ma...aap papa ka kayal rakdeejiye na ...waisa bhi 1 mahene ke bath amin aur veena waha
rahe hai..
dadima: theek hai...kul mujhe tumse kuch zaroori bath karni hai...
kul:jee ma booliya ...kya bath ahi...
dadima:tumara papa su aur kk ke shadhi ko dekna chahtha hai..
kul:wohh theek hai ma par su aur kk ab pad rahe hai na ...
thoda hum wait kyun na kar saktha ..??
dadaima: nahi kul ye tumara dadaji ka ichcha hai aur waise bhi hun dono tho padayi poori ka
diya hai na...
kul: woh sab thekk hai ma ...phir bhi...
and then kul thinks and continues:theek ahi ma main su se bath karoonga...
dadima : baath karke phone karna ....rah de hoon...
dadaima keeps the phone and prays to god dat su shuld accept this proposal...

meanwhile dadaji convinces sharma and asks him to talk with kk...

US su's house:

kul: su....yaha aana tumse kuch zarrori bath karna hai..
su:jee papa...
kul:su tumara padayi pura hone wala hai aur dadaji ka thabiyath bi kuch theek nahi hai
isliye main ye decide kar diya hai ke hum sab india wapas chale jaye...
su: haan papa aap theek keh raha hai...
kul:aur dadaji bhi yahi chahtha hai aur woh yeh bhi chahtha hai ki hum india jaahte hi
tumara shadi ho jaye kk ke sath...
su(shocked):wat???
kul:haan ye tumara dadaji ka icha hai....poora karna aur na karna tumara marzi ....
su totally confused and not able to answer anything and kul continues...
kul:su ek bath poochu????
su : jee papa...
kul: tum kisi aur ko ke sath pyarrr.....
su (stops him from continuing):nahi pap aisa nahi .....
kul: tum socho aur tumara decision bolo ok...
kul leaves leaving su perturbed...

sharma's house:
shama goes to kk's room
sharma:main andhar aa saktha hoon....
kk:arey papa permission kyun pooch rahe ho??andhar aayiye na...
sharma: ab tho aap badi hoogayi...
kk: phir bhi main aap ka vahi choti kk hoon ....
kk and sharma laughs and continues....
sharma: haan kk waqt tho aisa chalgay ki mujhe patha bhi nahi chala ki tumari shadhi ki umar ho gayi...
kk: shadiiiii?????
sharma: haan kk dadaji tumari aur su ki shadi ke bare main poovh raha tha...
kk(shocked):papa....
sharma:main ne keh diya ki tum mera bath zaroor manoogi....aur su bahut acha ladka hai...
turning towards kk and says emotionally
" kk hamara parivar ke liya wadwa parivar ne ithna kiya hai main ishe badkar kya kar saktha hoon...
kk silently listening....
sharma:par tumhe kohi jabardasthi anhi ....tume tumari live decide karne ka poora hak hai..
soch kar tumari javab do kk"
sharma leaves.......tears roll down kk's cheeks..

US su's house:
su decides to tel his decision to kul dat he cant marry kk as he hates her a lot...
as su was about to leave phone rings...ans su picks up the phone..
su: hello...who is on the line???
other end(in a tough voice):tumara dadaji....
su cant control his happiness and with lot of happiness as he was talking to him after 10 years...
su:dadaji.......aap.....aaap kaisa hai...main ...aap ..main
he was unable to talk ....
dadaji:tum kaisa ho...su..
su: main...main theek hoon...aap ...aaap kaisa hai dadaji...
dadaji: hmmm acha hoon aur ishe bhi acha hoga agar tum kk ke sath shadi karne ke liye haa keh do...
su cant answer and he kept quiet...
dadaji:faisla tumara hath main hai...
dadaji keeps the phone and su starts thinking....
finally he decided to accept the marriage for the sak eof his family and goes to kul and
says yes to the marriage

sharma house:
kk finally decided to tel sharma dat she cant accept the marriage....
kk goes to sharma room...and stops at the door....
inside the room sharma was talking with kul over phone..
sharma:sach...su ne haa keh diya .....ye bahut kushi ki bath hai....
kul:haan..ab tho hum rishtheydar bangaye hain...
sharma: haan...ye kuch kabar main apki bhabhi kena tha ...woh bahut kushi hoogi..
sharma keeps the phone down and sees anjali standing dere
sharma (with lot of joy):anjali...tume suna....
anjali:jee ....
sharma is happy and hugs anjali..
anjali:are aap kya kar rahe ho....kisi ne dekh liya tho...
sharma: amin bahut kush hoon....bahut.....

kk was watching all dis from outside and changes her mind for her family and goes in
kk:papa.....
shrama:haan kk andhar aavo...
kk goes in...
kk:(cant tel anything but gathers all her strength and says):papa..
mujhe is shadhi se manzoor hoon....
kk runs away from the place crying..
sharma and anjali says :sharmakar jaa rahi hain....

ab kk aur su shadhi ke liye haa keh diya hai aur aage kya huha
unki shadi hoogaya ya nahi yeh janne ke liye keep on reading.....

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