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Posted: 17 years ago
Where r u Vanita........it's been months that u last updated.......abhi tho Sukk ka bich twist shuru hua tha.........jaldi continue soon......
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi vanita your ff is just fabulous!!!! 👏
i love angad and kavya fights just so funny 😆
hope u will continue soon plzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
all epis are soo amazinggggg i love it and i hatee tinaa khaa sayy aya gii sumitour kumkum ka bach mainn plzzzzzzzz kill her from betten kumkum our sumit
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Posted: 16 years ago
i m back after a boom....
nw i am back 4ever to my city to apend my time in writing ff....wich i left ...
do catch wat comes next tomorrow..
as i will continue wat i left and nw i promise to gv more of fun and love.
tc..
will update episode tmrw.....4 sure.........
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: vanita_000

i m back after a boom....

nw i am back 4ever to my city to apend my time in writing ff....wich i left ...
do catch wat comes next tomorrow..
as i will continue wat i left and nw i promise to gv more of fun and love.
tc..
will update episode tmrw.....4 sure.........

Welcome back finally...........I've been waiting 4 ur ff 2 continue from where u had left.................was missing it 2 much.........sooooooo sooooooo happy 2 c u back..................will be desperately waiting 4 ur ff............
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Posted: 16 years ago
welcome back
wowwwwww
we will have lots more of kusu love
it would be really nice
hope to see them soon

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Posted: 16 years ago

Episode no.81

(kk waiting 4 su)

Kumkum: - yeh sumit abhi tak nahi aaya……..

(sumit and tina arrive at the party)

(kk checks her sell phone)

Kumkum: - sumit ke miss call….abhi phone lagati hoon….

(kk calls up su)

(phone rings)

Sumit: -hello….

Kumkum: -hello…sumit kahan ho tum…

Sumit: -hello…

(he cannot listen coz of d music)

Kumkum: -kahan ho tum???????

(phone disconnects)

Kumkum: -music ki awaz……….lagta hain sumit prom night mein hain…….lekin wo toh mujhe pick…….

(thinks in mind)

Kumkum: -ho sakta hain ki kuch……problem..lekin kya??????wahi chalkar dekhti hoom……

(kumkum gets ready and goes)

(prom night…)

(tina comes)

Tina: -kya hua sumit??????

Sumit: tina wo kumkum ne phone kiya tha lekin kuch sunayi nahi daiya…….

Tina: -arey sumit usne phone kiya toh kya hua???????

Sumit: -tina ab tak kumkum ko aa jana chahiye tha.

Tina: -arey wo traffiuc mein hogi….aur jaante hue ki tum wait kar rahe ho usne tumhe party ke andar jane ko kehne ke liye phone kiya hoga….

Sumit: -lekin uske bina???????

Tina: -to kya hua…..

(sumit sees her)

Tina: -I mean wo nahi chahte ki tum wait karo….

Sumit: -tum theek keh rahi ho lekin..

Tina: -lekin wekin kuch nahi..ab chalo.

(she takes sumit in)

Break

(they go inside)

Anita: -yeh angad bhi na .pata nai kahan chala gaya ahin……..

(rocky comes)

Rocky: -hye sexy……..

Anita: -shut up……..

Rocky: -anita mujhe toh laga tha ki tum bahut hi intelligent ladki ho lekin.

Anita: -lekin kya???????

Rocky: -ab jaane do tum angad ki…..

(he goes)

Anita: -ek minute…

(he stops)

(angad coming with a drink)

Rocky: -wssup angad…….

Angad: -tum.raasta chodo…….

Rocky: -yeh kya baat hui angad amin toh tumhe congratulate karne aaya hoon.

Angad: -kis liye……

Rocky: -arey usi shart ke liye jo ki tumne mujhse lagaya tha ki tum anita ke sath hi prom night par aaoge……

Angad: -wo shart…….

Rocky: -abhi chalo.yaar aisa mat karo kam se kam hath toh milao……

(angad in mind)

Angad: -agar is male ko yehi thanda karna hoga toh mujhe)

(he shakes hands with rocky)

(sum1 claps)

(angad turns and sees it to be anita)

(angad shocked)

Angad: -anita….

Anita: -waah angad…waah…..

Angad: -anita meri baat toh suno….

Anita: -mere taraf se bhi toh ek inaam lo…

(she comes and slaps angad)

(everyone shocked)

Angad: -anita please meri baat suno….

Anita: -meri zindagi ki sabse badi bhool thi ki amine tum par vishwas kiya….ek ladki ki izzat ke sath mazak karne mein tumhe sharam nahi aayi……tumne toh mujhe apne aap se nafrat karva diya…..kyun angad kyun….

Angad: -anita aisa kuch nahi hain…wo shart meri bhool thi lekin ab main tumse sach mein….

Anita: -bas angad ab nahi ab nahi…

(she leaves)

Rocky: -chchchchchchchhchc…….baut bura hua mujhe toh lga tha ki tum shart lekin yeh acha nahi hua..ab kya hoga angad…..

(he laughs)

Rocky: -dekh lo angad aaj tum jeet ke b\hi haar gaye…all the best kyunki ab anita hain bilkul akeli aur wo hain badi sexy…ab main aur..

(angad holds his collar)

Angad: -agar anita ke taraf aankh utha ke bhi dekha toh main teri jaan le lunga…..

Rocky: -oohhhhh….angry young man.agar bacha sakte ho toh bacha le apni anita ko..

Lets go guys…..

(they leave)

(anagd in tears)

(kk enters the prom alone)

(sees sumit with tina)

Break

Host: -guys and girls.jaisa ki aap sab jaante hain ki aaj prom mein partners aaye hain. So plz join d dance floor…

Tina: -sumit lets dance na.

Sumit: -nahi tina main kk ka wait ……..

Tina: -haan tum usi ke sath dance karna lekin jab tak wo nahi aati tab tak toh apne best frnd ke sath dance kar lo….plz.plz……

Sumit: -theek hain lekin kk ke aane ke baad.

Tina:haan baba chale jana.

(they go to the dance floor)

(music starts)

Host: -ab jab aapne dance kar liya hain toh jab tak music bandh nahi hota tab tak aap apne partners ko change nahi kar sakte..

(kk sees them dancing)

Music starts

Pyar hain ya saza

Ae mere dil bata

Tootta kyun nahi

Dard ka silsila.

Is pyar mein ho kaise kaise imtihaan.

Yeh pyar likhe kaisi kaisi daastaan...

Ya rabba....

Dede koi jaan bhi agar.

Dilbar pe hoi na

Dilbar pe ho na koi asar..

(su sees kk and tries to go)

Tina: -sumit tum abhi anhi ja sakte.

Sumit: -tina kk aa gayi hain main waha……

Tina: -sumit paanch minute ki toh baat hain main jeet rahi hoon aur plz main haarna nahi chahte.tum toh jaante ho..plz……..

(kk in mnd)

Kumkum: -kyun sumit..kyun jab tum yahaan itne jaldi aa gaye toh tumne mujhe kyun kaha……..agar tumhe tina ke sath aana that oh mujhe ek baar keh dete……

(Anagd and anita are also there)

(all see each others place…..)

End

Precap: -kumkum: -tina tum kitni bhi koshish kar lo lekin mere aur sumit ke sacche pyar ke beesh kabhi nahi aa sakti..aur yeh main tumhe isi party mein dikhaungi…….

(kumkum to anita)

Kumkum: -anita har rishte ko todne se pehle saare pehlu ko jaanna bahut zaroori hain isiliye tumhe pata hain tumhe kya karna hain.

Anita: -angad mujhe tumse ek sabot chahiye……pyar ka……..

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Posted: 16 years ago
Woow welcome back
Awesome lovely
Loved it
hats off
Love
Annie
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks a lot 4 writing......................was waiting 4 a long time 4 the ujpdate.............
Looks like kk comes 2 know that Tina's behind all the mess from the precap...................but hope 2 c some romantic parts between Sukk in the next part...................do write it sooooooonnnnnnnnn .....................
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Posted: 16 years ago

Episode no.82

(kk goes)

(su sees her going)

sumit: -kumkum…

(he tries to leave)

Tina: -kahan ja rahe ho sumit?????????

Sumit: -wo kumkum ja rahi hain..

Tina: -kahin nahi bas yehin kahin ja rahi hogi………

Sumit: -nahi mujhe jana hain.

(he leaves her in d middle and goes)

(tina angry)

Tina: -yeh acha nahi kiya tumne kumkum……

(garden)

(kk standing)

(sumit comes)

Sumit: -kumkum…..

Kumkum: -tum yahaan.

Sumit: -kya hua tumhe tum wahan aise…….

Kumkum: -please sumit tum yahaan se abhi……..

Sumit: -lekin kya hua??????

Kumkum: -kya hua??

Sumit: -haan….main tumhara kabse yahaan intezar kar raha hoon……

Kumkum: -tum???????

Sumit: -haan…….tumhi ne toh tina ko kaha ki tum saat baje apne aap aaogi aur main kabse tumhara…

(tina comes)

Break

(kk angry)

Tina: -kya hua sumit..kumkum…….

Sumit: -dekho na yeh mujhse naraz hain lekin pata nahi kya…….

(kk leaves)

(kk in mind)

Kumkum: -sumit ne mujhe sms kiya lekin use yeh baat pata nahi?????????

Sumit: -kumkum…

Tina: -ruko sumit.main jati hun.man pata karke tumhe kehti hoon.ho sakta hain jo wo tumse na keh sake wo mujhse keh de..main jati hun…

Sumit: -lekin…..

Tina: -tum tension mat lo……

(tina goes to kumkum)

Tina: -kumkum.

(kk turns)

Tina: -kumkum isme sumit ki koi galti nahi hain wo toh maine sumit ko bola ki wo mere sath chale kyunki main kisiko nahi jaanti aur tum toh phir bhi sabko jaanti ho…isiliye sumit ne tumhe 8 baje aane ko kaha…lekin phir meri baat sunkar wo nahi aa paaya….

(kk shocked to listen)

(kk in mind)

Kumkum: -jab sumit ko nahi pata ki usne mujhe 8 baje bola tha phir tian ko kaise…

(kk thinks what aal tina had told wen she came.)

(tina: -mera rahul.main aur sumit hamesha sath rehte aaye hain…sumit mujhe nahi bhul sakta….wo mere wajah se late hua…..maine use sath chalne ko kaha..)

Kumkum: -iska matlab tina sumit ko pasand karti hain aur use muhse dur karna chahte hain..

(kk goes to tina)

Kumkum: -tina tum theek keh rahi ho isme sumit ki koi galti nahi hain usne toh apni dosti apnayi hain.ab main toh uski apni hun aur tum mehmaan ho isiliye use tumhara khayal rakhna hain..lekin main sumit se puchungi ki usne mujhe aath baje kyun kaha???wo mujhe apne aap bhi toh aane bol sakta tha na?????

(tina scared)

Break

Tina: -kumkum kumkum..arey isme usey bolne ka kya faayda.kyun baton ko uljha rahi ho.

Kumkum: -baaton ko ki tumko.

Tina:-mujhe??????

Kumkum:-haan tumhe.......

Tina:-kya matlab????????

Kumkum:-matlab yeh ki mujhe sms sumit ne nahi balki tumne kiya tha taaki tum uske sath aao aur mujhe usse dur karo.main sab samajh gayi oon.

Tina:-acha hua ki tum sab samajh gayi..

Kumkum: -main nahi tum nahi samjhi…..

Tina: -acha tumhara pyar mere bolne par tumhe chodkar mere pass aaya ab toh tum samajh gayo hogi ki main sumit ko tumse dur toh kar dungi issey acha hoga ki tum khud dur ho jao…kamse kam tumhe takleef toh nahi hogi…….

(kumkum smiles)

Kumkum: -wo kya hain na mujhe tum par gussa nahi balki taras aa raha hain..tum sumit ki sabse achi dost ho a lekin tumhi use nahi samajh paayi.sumit ko kumkum se koi dur nahi kar sakta aur yeh baat main tumhe abhi saabit kar dungi.

Tina: -kumkum????????/

Kumkum: -na na ……..tina acha yehi hoga kitum yeh chaale chalne chod do.

Tina: -acha nahi toh kya????????

Kumkum: -nahi toh muh ke bal girogi ki kabhi uth nai paogi.

Tina: -toh dekhte hain ki kaun jeettta hain……..best of luck…ab muqabla barabari ka hain…..

(she tries to leave)

Kumkum: -muqabla barabari ka nahi hain…..

(tina shocked)

Kumkum: -mere pass sumit ka pyar hain jo tumhare pass nahi…..

(she smiles)

Kumkum: -isiliye is jung ki shuruat tumne ki hain aur iska ant main karungi…….

(kk leaves)

(kk sees anita crying at a corner)

Kumkum: -anita….kya hua????????

Anita: -kumkum….

(sees her and hugs her and tells her the story)

Kumkum: -dekh anita main jaanti hun ki tumhare sath jo bhi hua wo galat hua lekin hamesha yaaad rakhna ki kabhi kisi ko bhi saza dene se pehle usey ek mauka zaroor dena……shayd tum bhi jaanti ho ki angad ko ek mauka dena chahiye….hum pyar toh kar lete hain lekin use nibha nahi paate…..aur isiliye hum hamesha apni hi galti par pachtate hain..

(Anita thinks)

End

Precap: -kk dancing with sumit closely and tina jealous…

Kumkum: -yeh toh tha mera pehla jawab..aage aage dekho hota hain kya.

(tina angry)

Anita: -thank with so much kumkum agar tum na hoti toh main kabhi sahi aur galat ka faisla nahi kar paati…..

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