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Posted: 17 years ago



Episode no.80

(evening)
(Angad calls anita)
Anita: -hello..
Angad: -kahan ho tum……
Anita: -ghar mein aur kahan….
Angad:-main lene aa raha hoon tum taiyaar rehna.........
Anita:-aao toh .
Angad: -theek hain main aa raha hoon.
Anita: -ek baar kaho na.
Angad:-kya????????
Anita:-i hate you.
Angad: -tumne kabhi bataya nahi....
Anita: -oh yes I forgot.i hate you……
Angad: -but I love you………..
(anita laughs)
Anita: -bye………
Angad: -lekin suno toh.
Anita: -bye.
Angad: -kaho toh………
Anita: -keh toh rahi hoon…bye.
(disconnects it)
Angad: -arey??????????
Anita: -I love you………..
(kumkum at home)
(sumit comes from back through the window)
Sumit: -kumkum……
Kumkum: -sumit……….nahi nahi main lagta hain kuch jyada hi miss kar rahi hoon…
Sumit: -arey pehle is jeete jaagte insaan ko toh miss kar lo phir karna yaad ko.
(kumkum shocked)

Break

Kumkum: -sumit tum yahan???????
Sumit: -haan .
Kumkum: -sumit bhaiya aa jayenge tum abhi yahn se jao.
Sumit: -suno toh main keh rtaha tah.
Kumkum: -nahi sumit abhi jaon..kloi aa.
Sumit: -arey main keh raha tha ki…
Kumkum: -abhi nahi sumit tum samajhte kyun nahi..
Sumit: -kumkumj……..shhhhhhhh……
Kumnkum: -sumit……..
Sumit: -shhhhhh………
(kumkum quietly looks at him)
Sumit: -main tumhare liye kuch laaya hoon………
Kumkum: -mere liye……..
(sumit takes out a dress)
Sumit: -yeh laya hoon main tumhare lye..
Kumkum: -yeh lekin.
Sumit: -kuch mat kehna…main chahta hoon ki meri kumkum aaj sirf mere liye aaye aur yeh pehne…..
Kumkum: -acha toh sumit mujhe inme dekhna chahta hain.
Sumit: -haan lekin sirf sumit aur sumit………..
Kumkum: -acha suno na.abhi koi aa jayeg tum jaon na.
Sumit: -kyun abhi kyun.
Kumkum: -agar abhi jaoge nahi toh phir aoge kaise..
Sumit: -oh….iska matlab hume jana hoga.
Kumkum: -ji
Sumit: -main kya bol raha taha..ki kyun na aaj party mein nahi jakar hum yani main aur tum kahin abahar akele mein…….
Kumkum: -sumit jaon………
Sumit: -nahi toh phir hum.
Kumkum: -bhaiaya aa rahe hain.
Sumit: -kya????????
(he runs away)
(kumum laughs)
Sumit: -ae madam…..
(kumkum turns)
Sumit: -I love you……………
(goes)
Tina: -main aisa kya karu ki aaj sumit mere sath………
(thinks)
Tina: -sumit kyat um ek baar ghar aa sakte ho.
(sumit comes)
Sumit: -tumne muje.kya baat hain bolo.
Tina: -sumit mujhe please madad kar do na ki aaj party mein main kya pehnu.
Sumit: -tina main kaise…………

Break

Tina: -kyun nahi pehle bhi toh tum hi mere liye select karte the na.
Sumit: -tina tab ki baat kuch aur thi.
Tina: -muje kuch nahi sunaa bas karo.
Sumit: -ok baba ok ….hmmmmmm yeh yeh acha lagega.
Tina: -yeh…ghreat thanks……..
(servant brings coffee)
Servant: -madam coffee.
Tina: -haan do.
(tina makes it fall on sumuit)
Tina: -I am so sorry.
Sumit: -uf…
Tina: -sorry..wash room wahan hain.
(sumit goes and washes)
(tina picks up his phone and sms to kk)
Tina: -(from su cell) kk main tumhe shaam ko 8 baje lene aaunga…….
(sumit comes)
Sumit: -kya hua.
Tina: -wo kumkum ka sms aaya tha ki wo apne aap aa jayegi……aur tumhe party mein milegi….
Sumit: -main phone kar leta hoon.
Tina: -anhi usne kaha ki wo khud I phone karegi baad mein….
Sumit: -acha theek hain….
Tina: -sumit agar tum kumkum ko pick nahi kar rahe ho toh mujhe kar lo.
(he thinks)
Sumit: -theek hain taiyaar rehna 7 baje……
Tina: -ok…………
Kumkum: -sumit ka message..8 baje..theek hain…….
(time passes to 7)
(sumit comes and picks up tina)
SUmit: -kumkum ne abhi tak phone nahi kiya mai hi kar leta hoon.
(tina shocked)
(phone rings but kk does not picks it up, she was in was room)
Sumit: -phone nahi utha rahi hain….
Tina: -ho sakta hain ki wo nikal gayi ho aur phone bhul gayi ho.hume chalan chahiye…
Sumit: -theek hain..
(tina laughs)
Tina: - (in mind)maine kaha than a kumkum Kasturi aaj sumit ke sath main hi rahungi sath bhi aur partner bhi…aage aage dekho hota ahin kya……..
(kk waitin and su tina going screens arrive together)

End
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh God! Don't tell me another big fight comming up.......I want Sukk to dance 2gether...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh this tina i am already hating her 😡
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi this tina is big problem. hope all will be fine with su-kk. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh Vanita.......1 week has passed & no update........ please write it soon.........waiting to see what happens between Sukk & Tina.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
I read it and it is very good work. Congrats!!! But it has been along time u have not posted please continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
i'm so sorry guys.actually i was in my trng in mumbai for ki8ngfisher and now i will start again all over frm where i left......anyways the storyline of the new show is what my serial is also abt...neways i8 will update the episode now..tc...... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: vanita_000

i'm so sorry guys.actually i was in my trng in mumbai for ki8ngfisher and now i will start again all over frm where i left......anyways the storyline of the new show is what my serial is also abt...neways i8 will update the episode now..tc...... 😃

Welcome back Vanita!!!!!

Was really missing the fanfic...wondered if u'll write again..but now doubts cleared..

do rite soon pls..😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
thts wht i was thinking where u went
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
wel back vanita
we r missing fc a lot

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