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Posted: 17 years ago
good tht sumeet saved kk and not armaan
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
very gud bachcha.......sweet part.......the lines are woven well....... 👏

i think i know the mystery of dotted line 😉 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part vanita.
humm dotted lines this thing happened 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great, Vanita, bas ekbaar sabko pata chal jaaye ki Kumkum Armaan se nahi magar Sumit se pyar karti hai, reat updating, mindblowing part. Keep writing.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Episode no.60

(armaan comes)

Hiten: -arey armaan kahan the tum kal poora din…
Armaan: -wo sir meri ek important meeting……..thi………..
Hiten: -meeting aur yahan???????/
Armaan: -sir aap bhool rahe hain ki main yahan ek meeting ke silsile mein hi aaya tha jo ki kal poora ho gaya…..
Hiten: -arey haan….dekho na tumse milkar laga hi nahik ki hum abhi mile hain……..
Armaan: -mujhe bhi.......
Hiten: -by the way tumhari meeting kaisi rahi......
Armaan: -as usual great…………
Hiten: -wo sab toh theek hain lekin tumne wo sab miss kar diya jo ki kal hua tha………..
Armaan: -mujhe sab pata…
(sujal intereeupts)
Sujal:-arey armaan tum kab aaye...........
Armaan:-bas abhi abhi..
Sujal:-waise hiten mujhe lagta hain ki tumhe armaan ko batana chahiye ki aakhir kal hua kya tha.....
Armaan:-ek minute main kumkum se............
Sujal:-arey mulakatein toh hoti rahegi...tum jao na.....
Armaan: -lekin…
Sujal: -hiten aap dekh kyun rahe hain …..le ke jayiye na isey….
(Armaan looks sujal in anger)
Armaan:-main bas kumkum se mil aaun...
Sujal:-kumkum se milna hain koi baat nahi main bhejta hoon use....
Armaan:-lekin.....
Sujal:-main keh raha hoon na bhejta hoon use....
Hiten:-haan armaan chalo bahut sarai baatein karni hain tumse.......chalo......
Armaan:-ekin......
Hiten:-chalo...........
(hiten takes awy armaan and sujal smiles)


Break

(gauri comes)

Gauri: -kya hua itna muskara kyun rahe ho….
Sujal: -pata hain abhi abhi yahan pe armaan aaya tha…
Gauri: -toh??????????????
Sujal: -arey armaan aaya tha……
Gauri: -armaan??????????
Sujal: -hey bhagwan aap inhe akal dena kyun bhool jate hain aur baad mein yeh humse chalak hone ka dva karti hain….
Gauri: -sujal tum seedhe seedhe bata rahe ho ki main…
Sujal: -arey pagli maine tumhe batay than a ki armaan kumkuum aur sumit ke beehch…..
Gauri: -oh!!!!!!!!!haan………wo aaya tha….
Sujal: -haan aur maine….
(sujal naraates everything)
Gauri: -baap re baap………..usey toh bahut gussa aaya hoga..
Sujal: -gussa……..kaise dekh raha thaw o mujhe………..
(gauri stares at sujal)
Sujal: -kya hua?????
Gauri: -kuch nai bas dekh rahi hoon ki tum kitne utaavle ho kumkum aur sumit ki madad karne mein…
Sujal: -unke liye toh main apni jaan bhi de sakta hoon….
Gauri:-haan....
Sujal:-mujhe ab bhi yaaad hain ki kis tarah kumkum ne meri madad ki thi mujhe mere pyar se milvane ke liye....
Gauri:mujhe bhi yaad hain wo har ek lavsa jo ki sumit ke muh se nikla tha.....
Sujal:bahut si gehrayi thiun baaton mein...
Gauri:jinka matlab hume baad mein aaya...
Sujal:sach toh yeh hain ki aaj agr hum sath hain...
Gauri: -toh sirf sumit kumkum ke wajah se…………..aur agar khush hain….
Sujal: -toh wo bhi unke wajah se………….
Gauri: -bilkul theek kaha tumne……….
Sujal: -isiliye ab meri baari hain unke liye kuch karne ki….
Gauri: -haan hum unki madad zaroor karenge…..
Sujal:-main jahan hoon wo sirf mere doston ke wajah se aur isiliye ab main apne doston ki madad karunga wahan pahuchne mein jahan wo pahuchna chahte hain.....
Gauri:-aur is vaade mein main tumhare sath hoon....
Sujal:-isi sath ke liye toh main itna kuch kar raha hoon lekin phir bhi yeh kam hoga jo ki un dono ne hamare liye kiya hain............
Gauri:-wo dekho..........

Break

(thye see all in pairs)

Sujal: -sahi kahan tumne aaj unhone sirf hamari nahi balki sabki madad ki hain…………..
Gauri: -insano ke bhes mein wo devta hain…..
Sujal: -aur isi devta ko unka hak dilaane ke liye yeh sujal apni jaan ki baazi tak laga dega…
Gauri: -nahi sujal nahi …………….gauri aur sujal is ladai ko ladenge na ki main aur tum alagg alag……….
(both hug each other)
Kavya: -lo aaj ka din bhi khatam hone ko aaya………..
Kashish: -ab wapas jakar hume apne competition ki taiyaari bhi karni hain……..
(Sumit meets angad)
Angad: -kya hua tu kab aaya….
Sumit: -jab tu anita ko dekh raha tha…
Angad: -main nahi toh..
Sumit: -dekh anagd ek dost hone ke naate main sirf itna kahunga ki apne dil ki baat ko dil mein mat rakhna …..varna kahin der na ho jaye…hume usse kuch nahi chupana chahiye jisse hum bahaut pyar karte hain……….ja aur jakr keh de jo bhi tere dil mein hain aur agar ki baat chupayi hai nth batade….zindagi baar baar mauka nahi deti…………….
(angad goes to anita)
Anita: -hamara trip bhi khatam….
Angad: -haan….
Anita: -is trip mein maine bahut ache se tumhe jana hain angad………
(anagd in sad mood)
Anita: -mere vishwas ko kabhi tutne mat dena………
Angad: -tum mere sath ho????????
Anita: -hamesha………..
Angad: -to phir yeh angad tumhe kabhi bhi dukh nahi dega……….
(both look at each other)
Angad: -anita mujhe tumse kuch kehna hain……
Anita: -mujhe bhi tumse kuch kehna hain………..
Angad: -pehle main…..
Anita: -nahi pehle main……….
Angad: -anita mujhe jo kehna hain wo aaj hi kehna zaroori hain….
Anita: -aur mujhe jo kehna hain wo abhi kehna zaroori hain…..
Angad: -anita lekin……
Anita: -naahi main……
Angad: -acha kaho……
Anita: -wo main keh rahi thi ki …………….i……………i…………i…………i……i………llllllloooooo……….
(aguri interrupts)
Gauri: -anita……..kahan hain zara idhar toh aana………
Anita: -mujhe jana hoga.lekin tumse apni baat main kahungi zaroor……………
(anita leaves)
Angad:-mujhe pata hain ki tum kya kehna chahti thi....lekin jo main kehna chhahta tha shayad uske baad tum mera chehra kabhi nahi dekhna chahogi.....
(remebers his challenge with his freind to bring anita in the prom party)
Angad: -shuruat toh main eek mazaak se ki thi lekin pata hi nahi chala ki kab yeh mazaak mere zindagi ka sach ban gaya……….aur ab main tumhe kisi bhi keemta par khona nahi chhata hoon………….
(kumkum goes to kashish)
Kumkum: -kashish ………
Kashish: -haan……..
Kumkum: -kya dekh rahi ho……..
Kashish: -nahi main toh competiton ke bare mein soch rahi hoon..
Kumkum: -oh!!waise mere dimaag mein ek baat hain keh du….
Kashish:haan....
Kumkum:-dekho kal cllge jakar pehle tumhe uar kavya ko compete karna hoga yeh dekhna ke liye ki tum dono mein se part kaun lega........
Kashish:haan........(in sad she said)
Kumkum: -toh bas mujhe aise hi laga ki kyun na tum dono mil jao aur itne majboot ban jao ki koi aur cllge tum dono ka muqabla kar hi nahi paye…kyun…….
(kashish looks at kumkum)
Kumkum: -kehna mera kaam tha karna tumhara…….soch lena………..
(kumkum smiles and leaves)
Kashish: -kavya………
Kavya: -haan bolo…….
Kashish: -mujhe tumse kuch puchna hain…..
Kavya: -pucho..
Kashish: -wo..main soch rahi thi,……ki kyun na hum aur tum sath sath…..competition mein part le….
(kavya in a shock)
Kashish: -wo mera matlab hain ki yeh toh sab colleges ki jung hain aur hamari nahi toh kyun na hum apne college ke liye….tum smajah rahe ho na
Kavya: -haan main samajh raha hoon..lekin sath sath..
(kashish gets sad)
Kavya: -hone ka idea bahut acha hain..
Kashish: -kya???????????
Kavya: -haan………
Kashish: -matlab ki..
Kavya: -haan baba..
Kashish: -iska matlab…..
Kavya: -matlab ki hum stah mein part lenge ab chale …
Kashish: -kahaan?????????
Kavya: -preparations karne………….
Kashish: -haan chalo……….
(all this is seen by sumit kumkum)
Kumkum: -aaj main bahtu khush hoon….
Sumit: -haan….
Kumkum: -har taraf sirf pyar ka rang hain ..
Sumit: -har fiza mehki hui hain…….
Kumkum: -har phool khil utha hain…
Sumit: -har Roshni chmak uthi hain……..
Kumku: -aur har janam sumit kumkum ka sah majboot hota rahega….
(both look at each other)
Sumit: -I love you….
Kumkum: -I lovge you too…….
(both hug each other)
(all this is seen by someone ..the same person as before)

Don't worry the suspense will open now in few time…..as for who tht person is from the beginning keeping an eye on sukk……..

End
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Posted: 17 years ago
could it be hiten just my guss.
nice part 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
i think it could be Hiten too.........i hope the suspence is out soon...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
i knw u ppl want to knw d suspense..jus wait till today i will update it todat........actually i had fever........anyways thnx..........tc
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Posted: 17 years ago
do take care of your fever first update it later but really want to know the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago


Episode no.61

(last night in the camp)

(someone knocks at the door)
Kasturi: -kaun hain anita…
(hiten doesn say anything)
Kasturi: -andar aa jao……..
(hiten enters and gets frightened)
Kasturi: -kya hua……….
(silence)
Kasturi: -dekh na pack lagaya hain…….aur aankh mein kuch hala gaya hain……
(hiten sees and laughs)
Kasturi: -tu has rahi hain……
(gets angry)
Kasturi: -arey aakar meri madad kar na………….
(hiten comes forward making noisy footsteps)
Kasturi: -jaldi aa……….
(hiten goes there)
Kasturi: -dekh na pata nahi kaise koi cheez chali gayi hain aaknh mein…..
(hiten holds her hand)
(kasturi feelks something)
Kasturi: -anita tere hath toh kitne kare hain bilkul hiten ke tarah……..
(hiten slowly takes his hands to her face)
(kasturi still feels something)
Kasturi: -pata nahi kuch azeeb sa lag raha hain……….
(hiten touches her eyes, tries to open it and then blows air to remove the dust)
Kasturi: -aah…….
(hiten removes it and kasturi rubs her eyes and says)
Kasturi: -thanks………pata hain agar yeh meri aankh se nahi jata na toh pata nahi main ………
(Opens her eyes and says )
Kasturi: -pata nahi main hiten sir……………
(sees hiten and gets astonished)
Kasturi: -aaaaaaapppppppppppp
Hiten: -mere liye…..
Kasturi:-sssssiiiiiiiiirrrrrrrrr.......aaaaaaapppppppppp.... ......
Hiten:-tum kuch keh rahi thi,............

Break

Kasturi:-mmmmaaaiiiiiinnn.......nahi toh.main kya kahugi..........
Hiten:-agar tumhari aankh se yeh kachra nahi jata toh tum mujhe......
Kasturi:-sir mujhe kuch kaam hain main aati hoon..........
(kasturi runs away)
Hiten: -toh tum mujhe dekh nahi pati……
(hiten smiles and leaves)
(kumkum's room )
(kumkum rings the bell)
(servant comes)
Servant: -mam aapne bulaya…………
Kumkum: -zara gauri ko kehna ki mere room mein aaye……….
Servant:-ji mam..........
(servant leaves)
(servant goes to gauri)
Servant: -mam…..
Gauri: -jeeeeeeeeee….
Servant: -mam aapko kumkum mam ne bulaya hain…….
Gauri: -theek hain tum jao main chali jaungi…
Srvant: -ok mam………
(gauri moves towards kumkum's room)
Gauri: -aahhhhhhh………
(gauri gets a strain in her leg)
(sujal comes)
Sujal: -kya hua……..
Gauri: -aaaaahhhhhh……
Sujal: -kya hua……..
Gauri: -pair mein lag ……….
Sujal: -tum chalo aaram kar lo……..
Gauri:-aahhhhhhh........
Sujal:-chalo baba.........utho...
(helps her getting up)
Gauri: -uff…..abhi lagan tha………..
Sujal: -main bhi yehin soch raha hoon….
Gauri: -kyun?????????
Sujal: -wo kya hain na main abhi gym nahi gaya…..
Gauri: -what????????????
Sujal: -poor me………
Gauri: -I hate you………….
Sujal: -I love you……….
Gauri: -shut up……..
Sujal: -abhi kahogi toh main yehin utaar dunga………
Gauri: -kya???????
Sujal: -jaldi………
Gauri: -I love you…….
Sujal: -good……..ab chalo…………

Break

(kumkum's room)
(kumkum goes to the wash room)
(sumit comes)
(kumkum comes without seeing who it is)
Kumkum: -acha hua tum aa gayi……..
(sumit is shocked to see kumkum)
(kumkum is wearing a dress very sexy which is srapless and has ropes to tie…at the back……….)
Kumkum: -zara meri dress ke ribbons bandh do na………….
(sumit thinks)
Sumit: -abhi nahi kahunga ise..lagta hain yeh mujhe gauri samajh rahi hain..
(sumit smiles)
Sumit: -gauri you are great………….
(sumit walks towards kumkum)
Kumkum: -dekh na maine socha ki aaj raat ki party mein main yeh dress pehnu….achi hain na…..
Sumit;: -hmmmmmmmm…….
Kumkum: -toh phir aa na der kyun laga rahi hain……
(sumit walks and then gets to her)
kumkum: -pata nahi main kaisi lagungi…pehli baar aisa dress pehna hain………..
(sumit reaches her and sees her back)
Sumit: - (in mind) kya karu….
(sumit raises his hand to the back…………and hesitstes to touch it)
Kumkum: -baandh………
(sumit touches and then removes her hairs)
Kumkum: -jaldi…..
(sumit ties it)
Kumkum: -thanks……………
(kumkum leaves wen he holds her hands and kumkum feels something)
(sumit pulls her back)
(kumkum gets to know someone else is there)
(sumit again removes the hairs and …………………kisses her on her back shoulders)
(kumkum gets a feeling of love)
(she turns back immediately)
Kumkum: -tummmmm?????????????
Sumit: -nahi gauri….
Kumkum: -wo mujhe laga ki gauri aur maine servant se kaha ki gauri pata nahi maine nahi dekha tum aaye aur maine kaha aise pta nahi…..
(sumit puts his fingers on her lips)
Sumit: -shhhhhhhhhhh……………
(kumkum looks at him…………)
Sumit: -acha hua gauri nahi aayi….
(kumkum looks at him with love in eyes)
(music plays)
(zindagi rocks song)
Bewafa lag rahi thi……(both look at each other's eyes)
Jab talaash hamari…….(kumkum eyes shown)
Bewafa lag rahi thi……(kumkum eyes)
Jab talaash hamari…..
Ek khushboo uthi aur ……..
Rut badal gayi saari………
Saamne tum kahre the……(sumit's eyes)
Faila ke baahein……..
Jaise har dard mera……
Khud miloge sahare……(sumit hold kumkum's hands)
Ek din fursat mein..........(kumkum's eyes)
Thaame hath hamare.....
Ek din fursat mein..
Thaame hath hamare....(kisses her hands)
Le gayi us dagar pe jahan rehti hain bahare……….

Kumkum: -sumit koi aa jayega……..
Sumit: -aane do….
Kumkum: -koi dekh lega….
Sumit: -dekhne do………
Kumkum: -bhaiya aa jayenge…….
Sumit: -saala hain aane do……
Kumkum: -kasturi,……….jayegi….
Sumit: -wo nahi aayegi…
Kumkum: -kyun…..
Sumit: -wo mera kaam hain……….
Kumkum: -lekin……..
Sumit: -shhhhhhhh……….aaj tum bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho…………..
Kumkum: -mmmmainnn……..
Sumit: -haan tum aur jaannna nahi chahogi ki main kya kehna chahta hoon……..
Kumkum: -abhi nahi……..
Sumit: -mujhe toh abhi kehna hain………..
Kumkum: -acha kaho………..
Sumit: -ab rehne do tumhe interest nahi hain………
Kumkum: -nahi hai kaho na…
Sumit:-kya.......
Kumkum:main kaisi lag rahi hoon.....
Sumit: -kaisi…..
Kumkum: -sumit……
Sumit: -kumkum……….
Kumkum: -sumit…
Sumit: -kumkum…
Kumkum: -sumit………
Hiten: -kumkum………….
Sumit: -main nahi saala hain..
Kumkum: -kya?????????
(kumkum gets nervus)
Kumkum:-sumit tum jao..
Sumit:main kehna chahta trha ki tum aaj....
Kumkum: -sumti tum njao mujhe kiuch nhai sunna hain….jao jao yahan se nahi wahan se nahi waahn se toh bhaiya …..tum jao………..
Sumit: -kumkum meri baat toh suno kumkum..
(shouts)
Sumit:-kumkum.......
(kumkum gets silent and listens and sees him)
(Sumit bends his head and goes on his knees)
Sumit: -aaj tum……..
Kumkum: -sumit……….
(sumit gets up kisses her forehead and leaves)
(kumkum keeps on looking him)
……………………………(stars meet in the sky)………………………………..

End
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