kksu on the line of love - Page 24

Great direction, magar ye Armaan kyon kabab me haddi ban raha hai, ise hatao, I just hate him, jo bhi Kumkum-Sumit ke bich me aayega I just hate that. Keep it up, We can't wait, plz keep writing & updating.

all i want to say is the story, scripts and songs is JAkaaas... 👏 keep up the good work. 👏

hi
i read 5-6 parts together
the story is going very well
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Episode no.55

(sumit looks)
Sumit: -kumkum…….
(kumkum is hanging)
Sumit: -kumkum .kuch nahi hoga.
(he tries giving kumkum his but could not reach)
Kumkum: -sumit mera hath choot raha hain……
Sumit: -kuch nahi hoga tumhe kumkum main hoon na.
(sumit takes the rope)
Sumit:-kumkum ise pakdo…
Kumkum: -sumit…….
Sumit: -kumkum ise pakdo..
(he throws and kumkum catches it)
Sumit: -bas kumkum main aa raha hoon……
Hiten: -arey yeh sumit aur kumkum kahan gaye..
Kavya: -arey wo dekho..
Hiten: -kumkum………..
Kasturi: -sumit……….
(everyone rush down)
Sumit: -bas bas apna hath do..
Kumkum: -aaaaaahhhhhhmmmmm
Sumit: -aa jao.
(kumkum climbs up when they both look at each other in fear)
Hiten: -kumkum tum theek toh Ho na……
(kumkum keeps silent)
Kasturi:sumit.
Sumit: -main theek hoon di……
(hiten hugs sumit)
Hiten: -thanx sumit agar tum na hote toh.
Sumit: -kuch nahi hota kumkum ko..
Armaan: -yeh kya hua.
Sujal: -kuch nahi bas anajli gir gayi thi.

Break

Armaan: -kya.kaisi hain wo mian dekh kar aata hoon…….
Sujal: -ab uski koi zaroorat nahi.
(arman stops and looks at him)
Sujal: -kumkum ke sath uska sumit hain……..
Armaan: -toh.
Sujal: -toh kuch nahi bas main keh raha tha ki ab chinta ki koi baat nahi hain.
Gauri: -waise sujal agar kisi apne ko takleef hoti hain toh uska ehsaas uske sabse kareebe ko ho hi jata hain na.
Sujal: -right..
Gauri: -anyways.chalo lets continue………
Sujal: -armaan chale.
(sujal leaves & armaan keeps looking at him)
Armaan: -apna my foot kumkum ne mujhse khud kaha ttha ki wo aur sumit kabhi nahi.,……..
Angad: -chalo chalo ab sab theek ho gaya hain……….
Anita: -right lets move and kumkum sambhal ke.
Kasturi: -don't worry sumit hain na..kyun sir
Hiten: -haan kasturi….
(looks at sumit)
Hiten: -aaj tumne jo mere liye kiya hain wo main zindagi bhar nahi bhool sakta…..
Sumit: -maine apni zindagi ko bachaay hain jiska mujhe poora poora haq hain.
Hiten: -tumhari zindagi..
Kasturi: -sir uske kehne ka matlab hain ki agar kumkum ko kuch hoo jata to uski zimmedari hoti..
Hiten: -haan……….
(both sumit and kumkum still looking at each other)
Hiten: -sumit aaj tumne mujhpe ek ehsaan kiya hain tumhe jo chahiye aaj tum mujhse maang sakte ho.
Sumit: -soch lijiye.
Hiten: -soch liya……….main apni zubaan se kabhi mukartata nahi.
Sumit: -theek hain meri ek amanat aapke pass hain…
Hiten: -amanat????????
Sumit: -haan meri zindagi hain aapke pass waqt aane par main wahi aapse maang lunga..

Break

Hiten: -mujhe pata nahi ki kiske bare mein baat kar rahe ho lekin lagta hain tum usse bahut pyar karte ho…….
Sumit:-khud se jyada........
Hiten:-toh theek hain udhaar raha mujhpar.kabhi bhi aazma lena...
Kasturi:-ab chale.
Hiten:haan chalo.kumkum..
Kasutir:sir aap chaliye na sumit use le ayega.
Hiten: -theek hain par dhyan se…
Kasturi: -haan baba chaliye…….
(they go ahead)
(they boh are still lookin at each other wen kumkum strongly hugs sumit)
Kumkum: -aaj pata chala ki tumse main ek pal ke liye bhi dur nahi reh sakti..
(kumkum started crying)
Sumit: -kumkum……
Kumkum: -nahi sumit aaj jab mera pair phisla toh ek pal ke liye toh mujhe lag ki mane tumhe…
Sumit: -shhhhhhhhhhhh…..
Kumkum: -nahi reh sakti main tumhare bina..
Sumit: -aur nahi kabhi rahogi………
(kumkum looks at him)
Sumit: -nahi kumkum ro mat is tarah tum mujhe aur mere iraado ko kamjor bana rahi ho..
Kumkum: -lein main kya karu.
Sumit:kumkum tum meri kamjori nahi balki meri taakat ho.
(kumkum looks at him and wipes her tears)
Sumit: -haan kumkum………tum mere liye wo hausla ho jiske sath main zindagi ki badi si badi chunati ko bhi chunauti de sakta hoon……
Kumkum: -main tumse bahut pyar karti hoon…..
Sumit:-hamara yeh pyar hi hain jiske wajah se badi si badi museebat bhi hamaara kuch nahi bigaad sakti.......
Kumkum:-tum theek keh rahe ho..
Sumit: -toh waada karo aajke baad tumhare in aankhon se kabhi hi aasu nai ayenge…
Kumkum:-hmmm.
Sumit:-kyunki yeh sirh aasu nahi balki me liye wo beshkeemti here hain jiski chamak ko main halka nahi hone dena chahata.
Kumkum:-vaada..........
Sumit:-yeh hui na baaat..waise kumkum mujhe tumse kuc kehna hain.
Kumkum:-kya......
Sumit:-wo thoda weight kam karo na........
Kumkum:-sumit..........
(she beats him and then both hug tightly………)

End
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Jakas Vanita, maan gaye tumko. 👏 . Great. Jaam................ Yaar, don't stop & keep writing.

hi very good.keep continuing.having fun while reading. 👏 👏

Episode no.55

Hiten: -kumkum.
Kumkum: -ji bhaaiya hum ass aa gaye.
(kumkum leaves sumit)
Kumkum: -sumit…..chhalo agar hum nahi gaye toh wo phir se ayenge.
Sumit: -kumkum???????/
(laughing)
Kumkum: -chaloooooooooo…
(they climb)
(at the top)
Angad: -hhhaaaaaaaaa……..finally……..
Anita: -true…
Kavya: -humlog pahuch gaye…
Angad: -nahi abhi toh ek kaam karna aur baaki hain.
Kavya:wo kya...
Angad:abhi toh tumhe upar se niche fekna hain..
Kavya: -kya????????
Kashish: -angad……….
Anita: -kavya.
Kashish: -kavya yeh sirf mazaak kar raha hain.
Anita: -haannn…
Kavya: -main main janat tha.
Angad: -acha…
Kavya: -aur nahi toh kya.
Anagad: -theek hain phir main tumhe abhi yahan se fek kar tumhari soch ko..
Kavya: -nahi nahi nahi nahi.theek hain.
Angad: -ab aaya oot pahar ke niche…………..
Kavya:-ek din tujhe bataunga.
Angad:-kya kaha.
Kavya:-kuch nahi.......

Break

Hiten:-aa jao kasturi.
(kasturi trips)
Hiten:-sambhal ke.
(hiten holds her and then both look )
Kumkum: -thoda sa pyar hua hain
.thoda hain baaki..
hum toh dil de hi chuke.
Bas teri haan hain baaki…..
(both leave each other)
Kumkum:-sumit jab pyar hota hain toh kaisa lagta hain..
Sumit: --kumkum yeh mujhe kaise pata……..
Kumkum: -toh kisse puche.
Sumit: -hmmmmmmmmm
Kumkum: -bhaiaya………
Hiten: -haaan..aaaannnnnnn….mmmmmmmmujhe kya pata…….
Sumit: -di aapko.
Kasturi: -mmmmainnahi jaanti.
Kumkum: -acha..
Sumit: -ohhhhhh..
Kumkum: -pata nahi kyun hume aisa laga ki shayad aaplogo ko pata ho……..
Hiten: -hume??????????nahi toh kyun kasturi……
Kasturi:-ji.ji sir..........
Hiten:-waise tumlog aaye kab...........
Kumkum:-tabhi aap jab kasturi ko apni baaahon mein..
(hiten chokes out)
Kumkum:-kya hau main toh bas yeh keh rahi thi ki aap jab kasturi ko apne baahon mein lekar......
Sumit:-use sambhal raha the.....
Hiten: -wo haan….main bas.
Kumkum:theek hain baiya hum kuch nahi keh rahe hain..
Hiten: -main chalta hoon.tum log aa jao…
Kumkum: -lekin bhaiay suniye toh…….
Hiten: -koi mujhe bula raha hain…
(hiten leaves)
Kumkum: -bhaiaya bhaiaya……….

Break

(both laughs)
(kasturi gets hold of sumit's ears)
Sumit: -aaaaahhhhh…didi..aaaaaahhhhhhhhh
Kasturi: -kyun ab bolo.
Sumit: -kya????
Kasturi: -keh rahe ho kya.ab nahi bolna.us waqt toh bahaut bol rahe the………..
Sumit: -wo toh main bas.
Kasturi: -bas kya haan..bolo……
Sumit:-sory di sach bolne ke liye.
Kasturi: -kya?????????
Sumit: -sory sory…ab chodo na please….
(leaves his ears)
Kasturi: -ab main bhi tum dono ki madad nahi karungi…….
Kumkum: -kasturi plz sory…
(kasturi goes to hiten)
Kumkum: -kasturi common yaar mana ek laski apni dil ka haal itni aasaani se nahi kehti lekin…
Hiten: -kya baat hain bhai..yeh baat toh tumne bilkul theek kahi.
Kasturi: -kya??????
Hiten: -haan……ek ladki jitna bhav khati hain koi aur nahi karta…
Kasturi: -acha………..
Sumit: -I agree…..
Hiten: -dekha.thank you..
Sumit: -bilkul…….
Kumkum: -acha hum nakhre dikhaate hain…..
Sumit: -aur nahi toh kya……….
Kumkum: -agar hum nahi honge toh tum logo ka kuch nahi hota…..
Hiten: -kisne kaha .
Kasturi: -humne..kyun.
Anita:-correct........
Kashish:- i agree too.....
Angad: -we don't..
Hiten: -bilkul…ladkiyon ka kaam toh baahut hi aasaan hota hain………
Kasturi:-acha.toh lag agyi shart.
Sumit:-theek hain..toh phir kal aap sab hume paise kam ke dikhayengi jjo ki sirf ek aaadmi kar sakta hain..
Kumkum:-toh theek hain aqaplog bhi kal kahane se lekar kapde dhone tak sabhi ladki wala kaam karenge..
Hiten: -lag gayi shart.
(gives his hand)
Kasturi: -ab toh hum shart jeet kar hi hath milayenge..
Kumkum: -correct..lets go girls……..
(hiten and sumit together)
Sumit hiten: -lets go guys…
(all leave and two screens come)

End
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Simply great, superb, mindblowing. AAge likho.

Episode no.57

Kashish: -tum logo ko lagta hain na ki humne theek kiya…..
Kumkum: -bilkul unlogo ko toh sabak sikhana hi padega.
Anita: -correct aura ab unhe pata chalega ki hamare bina unka kya wajood hain..
Kasturi: -as ayega oot pahar ke niche…..
Kumkum:-bitane toh do ek unhe hamare bina.achi tarah samajh aa jayega..
Kasturi:-so lets keep going.
Kashish: -kahan??????
Kumkum: -lets go out and enjoy its our day girlsssss……..
(yeahhhhhhhhhhh………..)
Kavya: -humne bahut galat kiya …….
Angad: -kaise………
Kavya: -hume unse panga…
Angad: -arey ise kaiko liya re apne sath..chodke aana chahiye tha isko.
Sumit: -kaisi baatein kar rah hain.
Hiten: -haan ab jab okhli mein muh diya hain toh sar dubne ka kya dar…
Sumit: -haan bilkul aakhir wo samajhti kya hainn apne aapko.
Hiten: -haa jaiisi ki unke bina hum kuch bhi nahi kar sakte..
Kavya: -lekin yeh baaat......
Angad: -jhuth hain bilkul.........
Sumit: -hum bhi unhe dikha denge ki aakhir hum bhi unke bina reh sakte hain….
Hiten: -toh aaj hi se hum iski khushi manayenge……..
Angad: -kyun na……
Kavya:-kya?????????
Angad:-bolne doge.kyun.
Kavya: -bolo na…….
Angad: -tu bolne dega kya????????/
Kavya:-bolobolo.........
Angad:-kyun na...
Kavya:-ab tum itna der lagaoge toh.
Angad:-teri toh..
Sumit:-angad angad.
Angad: -tum dekh lena isiki wajah se hum.
Sumit: -chod na..bol.
Angad: -main ………………
Kavya: -ab kyun chup ho gaye maine toh kuch nahi kaha..
Anagd: -chalo hotel mein jakar khaya piya jaye.ab toh koi tension hi hain.kyun hiten…….
Kavya: -lekin meri baat toh suno…..
Angad : -muh band rakho.
Kavya: -lekin……
Angad: -shut up….
Sumit: -nahi nahi mujhe nahi lagat hain ki aap kar payenge……
Hiten: -aisi koi baat nahi hain chalo main bhi dekhta hoon mujhe kaun rokta hain.
Sumit: -toh chalo……..
(they leave towards the hotel and are shocked to see)

Break

(all girls were ready to go out)
Hiten: -arey itni raat ko ..
Sumit: -kahan ja rahi ho..
Kumkum: -girls aisa kyun lag raha hain ki koi hume pukaar raha hain…..
Kasturi: -yeh haamara din hain chalo chalkar celebrate karte hain..
Anita: -haan agar tumlogo ko apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya ho toh koi aur baat hain….
Angad: -galti my foot………..
Hiten: -tum log kahin bhi jao hume koi fark nahi padta…………kyun.
Kavya: -correct………..jao jahan jana hain……………
Angad: -tu bhi kuch keh na.
(sumit looks towards kumkum)
(kumkum makes faces and leaves)
Hiten: -kya hua….
Sumit: -nahi jana hain……..
Hiten: -kya??????
Sumit: -mera matlab ki hume fark nahi padta toh galti ki raah mein toh jana hi nahi hain……..
(kumkum gets angry)
Kumkum: -toh fir theek hain will you people mind if..
Angad: -sure…….
Kavya: -hum bhi ja rahe hain enjoy karne.
Kashish: -kuch nahi hoga…..
Hiten: -wo toh dekha jayega.
Kasturi: -kashish tu bhi kaisi baatein kar rahi hain.chgodo na inhe..enjoy your day..
Kavya: -yu toooooooo..
(girls leave)
Kumkum: -ab pata chalega unhe.
Kasturi: -haan dekhte hain ki kya karte hain wo……..
(all boys go to the room)
(hiten caals up the hotel)
Hiten: -hamare liye khane ka intezaam kijiye………
Reception:-sir wo actually hamre hotel ke cook ka achanak hi tabeeyat kharaab ho gaya hain aur isiliye dinner nahi hain.
Hiten: -what do you mean……
Reception: -sir agar aap hume waqt de toh hum khana bahar se mangava dete hain.
Hiten: -lekin usme toh waqt lag jayega.
Reception:-lekin sir humne toh pehle hi inform kar diya tha ki aisa kuch hua ain .
Hiten: -kise kaha tha aapne………
(reception says a name)
Hiten: -kya???aapne unse kaha tha,……….

Break

Angad: -kya hua??????
Hiten: -hotel ke cook ka tabeeyat kharab ho gaya hain.
Sumit: -toh kya kahan nahi hain klya…….
Hiten: -nahi..
Angad: -lekin unhe hume pehle inform karna chahiye tha……..
Hiten: -unhone inform kiya tha………
Sumit: -kise????????
Hiten: -kavya………tumhe kaha than a..
(angad gets up to hit)
Sumit: -angad.kya kar rahe ho.
Anagd: -maine kaha tha na ki yeh kuch na kuch gadbad toh karega hi…….
Kavya: -meri kya galti hain..
Angad: -jab tumhe pata that oh kyun nahi kaha jab maine kaha tah.
Kavya: -arey maine toh kehne ki koshish ki thi lekin tumne mujhe kuch kehne hi nhai diya.
Hiten: -guys guys gvuys.yun jhagadne se kuch nahi hoga.
Angad: -toh kya kare.bhook lag raha hain.
Sumit: -lets cook……
Hiten: -that's a good idea.
Angad: -then wats waiting lets move.
Kavya: -chalo……..
(they go to the kitchen)
Kavya: -lekin hum banayenge kya???????
Sumit: -wo……..
Angad: -arey hum wo banate hain.
Hiten: -roasted chicken?????
Sumit: -sounds good……
Anagd: -toh phir lets start….
(they srat preparing)
Kavya: -lekin ise banate kaise hain…
(everyone hits him…)
(after a while girls come and in the kitchen get shocked)

End
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great
this kavya also naaa 😆 😆 😆
wht is the state of the kitchen now 😆 😆 😆
continue soon