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Posted: 17 years ago
Episode no.64

(hiten looking them in anger)
Kumkum: -bhaiya aap…………
(hiten shouts)
Hiten: -kumkum!!!!!!!yahan aao……..
Kumkum: -lekin bhaiya….
Hiten: -maine kaha yahan aao jaldi……..
Kumkum: -haan bhaiya…..
(kumkum goes to him)
Kumkum: -bhaiay wo main aapko batane wali thi………
(kumkum all very tensed)
Hiten: -wo sab chodo pehle mere aankh mein kuch chala gaya hain use hatao…..
(sumit and kumkum shocked)
Kumkum: -kya????????
Hiten: -meri aankhon mein kuch chala gaya hain use nikalo…………
Kumkum: -oh…..aapko kuch dikhayi nahi de raha hain matlab……
(both take a relieved breath)
Hiten: -tum khush ho rahi ho….
(in question)
Kumkum: -nahi bhaiaya……………
Hiten: -toh kuch karti kyun nahi kumkum……
Kumkum:-jee bhaiya........
(sumit hides)
Kumkum: -yahan dekhiye…
(kumkum takes out the dust in his eyes)
Hiten: -aaaaaahhhhh…..ab theek hain……
Kumkum:-acha...........
Hiten:-ab kaho .....
Kumkum:-kya??????????????
Hiten:-wahi jo tum kehne wali thi............
Kumkum:-ohhhhhhh....wo............
Hiten:-haan wo kaho......
Kumkum:-kuch nahi bhaaiya bas yehi ki aap game khelenge ki nahi........
Hiten:-haan haan chalo yehi kehne toh main aaya tha tabhi aankhon mein kuch chala gaya..........
Kumkum:oh!!!!!!!!!

Break

Hiten:-toh ab chale......
Kumkum:-haan haan chaliye.......
Hiten:-hm...........
(sumit comes out)
(takes a deep breath)
Sumit: -thank god ……
(looks up)
Sumit: -aaj toh aapne bacha liya varna pata nahi aaj kya hota……..
(he also leaves)
(everyone reaches the place)
Host: -so aall ready….hgm..not bad sabhi interested lag rahe haqin so whats waitin lets start the game……dj play the music………
(game continues for few minutes wen only our very own players are left)
Host: -so ab sirf aap dus bache hain…………
(someone shouts)
Person: -dus nahi 12…
(robby and kripa enters)
Angad: -hi robby…..ab kaisa hain tu…………
Robby: -bahut acha..agar kripa mera itna kahayal na rakhti toh yeh kabhi nahi hota………
Kumkum: -haan sach hain kripa hamare sath kahin nahi gayi aur saara din room mein seva karti rahi………..
(kripa turns out to kumkum)
Kripa: -kumkum I am so sorry..mujhe maaf kar do…………..maine tumhe aur robby ko baut galat samjha.main maafi ke kaabil toh nahi lekin phir bhi kyat um mujhe maaf kar sakti ho toh……..
Kumkum: -kripa ek taraf apna dost kehti ho aur dusre hi taraf maafi maang kar hamare dosti ko chota baan rahi ho………..doston se maafi nahi maangte…….
Kripa: -thnx kumkum aur sumit tumhara bhi baut bahut shukriya…………
(kumkum thinks y sumit)
Kripa: -pata hain kumkum jab maine yeh sab galat samjha tha tab sumit hi tha jisne mujhe mere asli pyar ke bare mein ehsaas dilaya…
(kumkum looks at sumit in question)
Sumit: -kripa maine tumhe sirf tumhara sahi raasta dikhaya hain manzil dikahayi hain raaste toh tumne khud tai kiya hain……
Kjripa: -phir bhi agar tumlog na hote tohmian aaj yahan nahi hoti…………
Kavya: -bas bas bahut ho gaya yeh emotions ab game bhi khel le……
Robby: -haan bilkul…………..
Host: -frnds it was gr8 so lets get back to the game.hit the music………..

Break

(music plays and stops and gauri is not able to reach)

Host: -got you!!!!!!!!!
Sujal: -awwwwwww….
Gauri: -alright..kya karna hain mujhe………..
Sujal: -tumhe yahan sabke saamne kehna hain ki tum sabse jyada kisse pyar karti ho……..
(gauri looks at him)
Host: -good…….
Gauri: -alright mujhe sabse jayada pyar apni……..
(sujal very curious)
Gauri: -apne ma se hain…
(sujal breaks)
Sujal: -uske baad….
Gauri: -sawaal sirf ek hona hain sorry…
(she blinks one eye to sujal)
(music starts and now its sujal)
Angad: -sujal agar tum apni ek galti ko sudharna chahte ho toh wo kaun si galti hogi….
(sujal looks at gauri)
Sujal: -galti…..waise toh maine kabhi koi galti nahi ki hain haan lekin ek haseen gustaakhi zaroor ki hain aur wo hain zindagi mein pyar karna…….
Kavya: -kya baat kahi hain yaar tabhi main aisi galti nahi karta……
Gauri: -acha baad mein batati hoon…………..
(music plays and this time it is robby)
Kumkum: -robby…..
Sumit: -robby us insaan ka naam lo jisse tum sabse jyada pyar karte ho……….
Robby: -pari hain uska naam khyalo mein hain uska kaam rehti hain mere dil mein wo, bhagwan ki kripa se aayi hain wo……..
(kripa blushes)
Sumit: -not bad haan………….
(usic plays and stops)
Hiten: -aaaaaawwww…….
Kasturi: -chalo ab jab robby gaya hain toh kripa tumhara yahan kya kaam???????
Kumkum: -chalo ab tum yeh batao ki agar tumhe apne pyar ko manana pare toh aap kaise karengi……….
Kripa: -mere pyar mein itni shakti hain ki agar mera pyar mujhse naraaz ho bhi jaye toh bhi mujhe use manane ki zaroorat nahi padegi kyunki wo kabhi aisa hone nahi dega…..
Kasturi: -how sweet….
(music plays)
Kumkum: -aayiye angad ji….
Anita: -main saza dungi..
Sumit: -nahi ise toh main saza dunga.
Anita: -nahi main..
Kumkum: -acha baba tum hi do..
Anita: -angad agar tumhe mujhse kuch confess karna ho toh kar lo…….main bura nahi maunungi……….
(angad in a thought)
Angad: -wo……wo………..anita mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai wo yeh ki………wo………….
Sumit: -tu toh aise keh raha hain jaise ki tune koi bahut bada jurm kiya hain…….
Angad: -wo…main kehna chahta tha ki anita aaj tumhare wajah se main ek acha insaan ban pay hoon aur isi liye main tumhara shukriyada ada karna cahhata hoon..thnx for everything……….lekin ab main jo kehne wala hooon use sunkar shayad main tumhe kho……….
(music plays interrupting him)
(angad in a thought)
(music plays and anita)
Sumit: -lo bahia ab meri baai acha anita kyat um kisise pyar karti ho….sirf haan ya na mein jawaab do……….
(anita looks at angad)
Anita: -haan bahut kisise sacche dil se………….
Sumit: -maind blowing…….
(music plays and hiten)
Kasturi: -aapne apni zindagi ka sabse bada faisla kya liya hain……..
(hiten thinks and says)
Hiten: -main kumkum ki engagement ka faisla liya hain………..
(kumkum in shock, sumit heart broken, kasturi shocked, angad far away smiling)
(everyone in a shock)
(tears roll down sumit's and kumkum's eyes)

End 😃
preethi thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
engagment with hum 😕 .
cont cannt wait 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
continue soon
hope kk tells hiten abt su
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great, magar muje lagta hai ki Hiten ko pata hoga, shayad........... Magar great, Vanita, mindblowing, sab ek sath ho gaye magar ab Sumit-Kumkum ko bhi ek kardo, un dono ki ye duriya mujse bardast nahi hoti, Keep Writing.
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Posted: 17 years ago
nw its time u ppl contribute....i want u ppl to guess wat has happened aahead and whose so ever concept matches with my concept will get an refreshment...i willl update one episode only for tht person who can guess wat might have happened ahead..........so wats waitin lets make thisd more interesting...........please do write ur thinking........please....i willl be really happpy if u ppl write....you ppl can post till torow evening or monday morning cause then i will update my concept and will see u has won...please do ttake part........... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
hmm well ill have to think
according to me
i think may eb hiten knows abt kk and su and he has fixed kk and su marriage and not kk and armaan 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Episode no.65

Kumkum: -kya?????????
Hiten: -haan tum sab aise kyun chauk gaye…..
Kasturi: -lekin yeh sab achanak……
Hiten:-achanak kahan iska apna ek waqt hain.......
Kumkum:-matlab???????
Hiten:-matlab yeh ki meri zindagi ka sabse bada faisla kumkum ke engagement ka faisla hain lekin.....
Sumit:-lekin???????
Hiten:-lekin yeh faisla mujhe kab len ahain yeh toh khud kumkum tai karegi na.......
(everyone relieved)
(kumkum and sumit take a deep breathe)
Kasturi: -aapne toh hume dara hi diya tha….
Hiten: -isme darane ki kya baat thi…
Kasturi: -aap nahi samjhenge….
Hiten: -kya??????/
Kasturi: -kuch nahi.chodiye…….
(music again pplays and kasturi is out)
Gauri: -kasturi kya tumne kabhi kisi apne se ahut jyada pyar kiya hain????????
(kasturi looks at hiten)
Kasturi: -haan apne aap se bhi jyada….
(hiten in dilemma and jealous)
Hiten: -acha kaun??????mera matlab hain uska naam….
Sujal: -iska jawab den eke liye toh is eek baar phir se out hona padega………….
(music plays betwen sumit and kumkum)
(kumkum sits on the chair and is shocked)
(everyone screams the name of sumit being out)
Hiten: -acha sumit tum kisi apne ke liye ek aisa gaana gaon jiski awaz tumhare dil tak jaye aur dhadkano ko uski gunj sunayi de………….

Break


(a music comes)
Sumit: - tum lakh chupao pyar magar……..
Tum lakh chupao pyar magar ,
Duniya ko pata chal jayega…………
Lekin chup chupke milne se…
Lekin chup chupke milne se milne ka maa toh ayega……….
(a second song he insists on singing)
Sumit: -ab jo geet main agane wala hoon wo mere dil ke us Roshni ke liye jise main apne aap se bhi jyada pyar karta hoon………….wo yahan maujood hain aur main usse kehna chahta hoon ki……….

(music comes)
Sumit: -hum yaar hain tmharae
Dildar hain tumhare
Humse mila karo
Humse mila karo….
Koi shikhwa agar ho..
Aur shikayat agar ho..
Humse gila karo….
Par tum mila karo……………………..(kasturi says hiten tht the song is for her)
Jaaan maine bhi pyar kiya hain.
Haan maine bhi pyar kiya hain………………….
(after a moment)
Kumkum: -jaan maine bhi pyar kiya hain….
Haan maine bhi pyar kiya hain……….
(hiten in dilemma)
Hiten: -ab yeh kisliye??????
Kastuir: -apne dost ka sath den eke liye….
Hiten:-matlab???????
Kasturi:-matlab jis tarah main aapki office mein madad karti hoonusi tarah kumkum ne bhi sumit ki madad ki...
(kastuir turns her face around)
Kasturi: -lagta hain yeh dono meri jaan leke rahenge……
Hiten:-aaaaahhhhhhhh...
Kasturi:-sir chale...........
(again turns and says)
Kasturi: -aajkal toh yeh james bond ho rahe hain hye bhagwan bacha le…..
Host: -toh aajke shaam ke winner hain miss kumkum…………give an aaplause…..
Everyone claps)
Host: -lekin lekin hum inhe aise nahi jane denge…….
Kumkum: -matlab?????
Host: -aapko bhi hamare liye ek gaana gaana hoga kyunki hume pata hain ki aap bahut acha gaati hain…..so whats waitin lets shoot………
(kumkum looks at sumit)
Kumkum: -haan hain koi toh wajah…..
Jo jeen ka maza yun aane laga..
Yeh hawaon mein hain kya
Thoa sa jo nasha yun chaane laga…..
Pucho na pucho mujhe kya hua ain teri baaataon mein aakar…
Pucho na pucho mujhe kya mila hain teri baahon mein jeekar.....
Yeh ishq haye baithe bithaye jannat dikahaye ho..
O rama……………..
Yeh ishq haye baithe bithaye jannat dikahaye ho..
O rama……………..

Break

(sumit leaves from there)
(kumkum follows him)
(she keeps her hand on him)
Kumkum: -sumit kya hua hain??????
Sumit: -kuch nahi……..
Kumkum: -kuch toh hua hain…….
Sumit: -maine kaha na kuch nahi…
Kumkum: -dekho mere tarf..
(she turns him)
Kumkum: -dekho meri taraf..
(sumit looks at her)
Kumkum: -yeh kya tumhari aankhon mein yeh..
Sumit:arey kuch nahi bas kuch chala gaya hain...
(kumkum takes his hand and keeps it at her head)
Kumkum: -ab bataon ki baat kya hain.
Sumit: -kumkum????
Kumkum: -sumit agar tumhe kuch hota hain toh uska ehsaas muje sabse pele hota hain………….
(sumit lookat at her)
Kumkum: -tumhe tumse bhi behtar jaanti hoon, dhadkan hooon tumhari har aahat ko pehchaanti hoon…..
(sumit tightly hugs hr)
Kumkum: -sumit??????????
Sumit: -aaj ek pal ke liye aisa laga ki meri dhdkane hi ruk gayi….
(kumkum looks at him)
Sumit: -aisa laga ki maano tum mujhse dur ja rahi ho……….
(still looks at him)
Sumit: -bas wahi yaad aa gaa aaj agar jo hiten ne kaha wo sach hota toh………….
(keeps her finger on his lips)
Kumkum: -kuch nahi hota……
(sumit looks at her)
Sumit: -lekin???/
Kumkum: -lekin lekin kuch nhai main jaanti hhon ki hum dono ka rishta janmo ka hain aur issath ko duniya ki ki taakat nahi mita sakti……
(looka at her)
Kumkum: -har chatattan har deewar ko jhkna hoga hamare pyar ke saamne …….itni shakti ain hamare pyar mein aur utni hi takat hain mera tumhare upar ke vishwas mein………….
Sumit: -kumkum……
Kumkum: -haan sumit………..mujhe yakeen hain ki tum mujhe apne aap se kabhi bhi dur nahi hone doge toh mujhe kisi baat ka dar nahi hain………….
Sumit: -thnx kumkum……aaj tumne mere vishwas ko auyr pakka kar diya..bas ek pal ke liye main dar sa gaya tha…
Kumkum: -anhi hamare rishte mein dar nahi hausla hain …….
Sumit: -izhaar nhai ikraar hain aur pyar ka sirf aur sirf nihaar hain…..is pyar ko main kabhi nahi tutne dunga aur aaj yeh mera vaada hain tumse…
(kumkum holds his hands)
Kumkum: -tumhare har faisle main tumhare sath hoon har faisle main tum hoon…….
(both hug each other)
(hiten sees kumkum hugging someone and does not see the boys face)
Hiten: -kumkum kiske sath……kahin kumkum ko pyar toh nahi ho gaya…………lekin kisse….kahin jisse main soch rah hoon….
(kasturi sees hiten seeing them)
Kasturi: -sir aap………..
Hiten: -wo dekho kumkum kisise …main dekhke aata hoon ki kaun hain wo khushnaseeb………
(hiten walks ahead and kasturi gets panicked)

End 😃


noone guessed it neways thnx for it .a lot.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
hope hiten sees sumeet
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
now wht will hiten do 😛 .
i thnk kk would be alone .
cont
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Posted: 17 years ago
lovely piece of fiction. enjoyed it

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