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Posted: 18 years ago
wht is there in the courier
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Janu just caught up on reading ur ff and its going great. It is just amazing. Keep it up!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi very good part.what's in courier now.plz update soon.it's getting interesting.
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Posted: 18 years ago
jaldi likho bachcha.......waiting.it's really gud 😊 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Please we all want to know why Kumkum got shocked.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Chaliye kyon ho gayi Kumkum shocked, aisa kya tha us courier me aur kya usse Sumit-Kumkum ke rishte me padegi darar, kya un dono ke raste alag ho jaayenge? Magr ye dekhna hai to chaliye mere sath, jahan Kumkum ki halat aisi hai ki uske sharir ko kataa jaaye to usme se khoon bhi naa nikle.................................

Kumkum courier ko dekhkar dang reh jaati hai, Sumit Kumkum ko dekh raha hota hai aur Kumkum ki aankho me se aansoo ki dharayen behni shuru ho jaati hai, ye dekhkar Sumit

Sumit: Kumkum, Kumkum. Kya huva. Aisa kya hai?

Kumkum courier Sumit ke hath me deti hai.

Sumit: Are, isme to photos hai, kisne bheje? Aur isme aisa kya hai ki tum aise react kar rahi ho.

Kumkum: (Bahot sehemi si) Tum khud dekhlo.

Sumit woh dekhta hai aur woh bhi bahot pareshan ho jaata hai.

Sumit: Ye kiski harkat hai, ye behooda mazak.

Kumkum: (Rote rote) Kyon, Sumit. Hamarte sath aisa kyon ho raha hai?

Sumit: Ye atit ki woh kali chhaya hai jo jab bhi samne aati hai to hum apne aapko bhi sambhal nahi paate. Tumhari aur Jatin ki aur meri aur us Renuka ki engagement ki tasveere, shit.....

Kumkum: Kyon hume baar baar ye taklife mil rahi hai, Sumit, main janti hoon ki meri aisi tasveere dekhkar tum par kya guzar rahi hogi. Aur ye kaam un dono ka hi ho sakta hai.

Sumit: Is halat se tum bhi to guzar hi rahi ho kyonki isme meri bhi to.......Ye log hume alag karna chah rahe hai. Hamari itni barbaadi ke bavjood woh log aisa kar rahe hai, woh log insan nahi haivaan hai.

Kumkum: Magar, ab bas, ab aur nahi. Yeh mera atit hai jisse main dafna chuki hoon, ab mera atit, mera vartaman aur mera bhavishya. tum ho. Mera pyar, meri pooja, meri rooh, sirf aur sirf mera pati Sumit hai. Ab in logo ke gande iraade hamari zindagi nahi ujad sakte. Main tumhari patni hoon, tum meri atma ho aur ye rishta ab har janam me tumse hi shuru hoga aur tum par hi khatm. Tum ho to ye Kumkum hai.

Sumit: Aur Kumkum hai to hi Sumit hai. Tum mera wajood ho, meri saanse, meri dhadkan, meri zindagi. Aaj in sabko main jala raha hoon aur isse jo agni paida hogi woh pooja ki pavitra agni hogi kisiko jalanewali aag nahi.

Sumit un sab photos ko jalaa deta hai, Kumkum ke samne.

Kumkum: Thank you so much for being with me, Sumit.

Sumit: Thanks tumhe nahi muje kehna chahiye. Magar ab ek baat bolu.

Kumkum: Kaho.

Sumit: Jab ye sab khatm hi ho chuka hai to kyon naa tum woh gift khol lo.

Kumkum: Woh to main karoongi hi afteral woh mere pati ne jo diya hai magar Mr.Wadhwa aapko office nahi jaana.

Sumit: (Dukh ke sath) Office?

Kumkum: Ji haan, office.

Sumit: Woh kya hai naa ki main bahot zyada thak gaya hoon to kal jaoonga.

Kumkum: Thik hai, jaisi tumhari marzi.

Sumit: Mgar ab gift to kholo.

Kumkum: Haan baba, khol hi to rahi hoon.

Kumkum gift kholti hai aur usme se ek bahot hi sexy night gown nikalta hai. Kumkum dekhakar Sumit ki or dekhne lagti hai, kya ho raha hai woh uske samaj me hi nahi aa raha hota hai aisa uska reaction hota hai.

Sumit: Actually, tumhare liye saari lene gaya tha magar phir ye dekha to khayal aaya ki saari to tum hamesha hi pehnti ho aur isme tum bahot hi sweet lagogi to agar tumhe lage ki ye pehnne layak hai to hi, koi force nahi hai magar raah zroor dekhunga ki tum isse pehnogi.

Kumkum sharma jaati hai aur bahar chali jaati hai magar bahar sab mehndi laga rahe hote hai isliye usse bhi mehndi lagane bitha diya jaata hai, Sumit usse ek kone mese dekh raha hota hai, Kumkum jab jab uski or dekhti hai tab tab shrma jaati hai. Uski mehndi ka rang bahot gehra hone se sab usse ek baat kehte hai ki Sumit usse bahot pyar karta hai aur ye sunkar Kumkum Sumit ki or dekhti hai tab Sumit usse flying kiss deta hai aur uski nazar jook jati hai magar andar se usse bhi bahot accha lagta hai. Phir raat ho jaati hai sari taiyaari karte karte Kumkum ko der ho jati hai aur Sumit so jaata hai, kamre me aakar usse aise dekh woh bhi uske balo me hath rakhkar uske gaal par kiss karti hai aur sharma jaati hai. Raat bitti hai aur subah lagbhag 4 baje Kumkum uthti hai sargi ki rasm ke liye aur woh bahar jaati hai

Dadima: Kumkum, ye tumhari pehli karva choth hai aur har karvachoth sans apni bahoo ko sargi deti hai.

Veenaji: Aur aaj main tumhe ye de rahi hoon.

Kumkum dono ke paanv chhuti hai.

Dadima: Kumkum.

Kumkum: Ji dadima.

Dadima: Tu janti hai ki ye sargi agar pati ke hatho khayi jaaye to bahot accha hota hai.

Kumkum phir ye sunkar chali jaati hai aur apne kamre me aati hai. Sumit soya huva hota hai, usse dekh Kumkum ke kano me dadima ke shabd gunj uthte hai aur phir woh bed pe baithkar sargi khane ke liye chammach uthati hai, tabhi uske pichhe se uske hatho ko Sumit pakad leta hai aur uske kaano ke paas jaakar

Sumit: Agar pati ke hatjo sargi khayi jaye to zyada accha hota hai.

Aisa kehkar Sumit Kumkum ko sargi khilata hai aur phir dono vapas so jaate hai, subah jab Kumkum uthti hai to dekhti hai ki Sumit uske bajoo me nahi hai isliye woh uth jaati hai aur jaise hi bed se utarne ki koshish karti hai ki woh dang reh jaati hai.

To be continued........................................

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Posted: 18 years ago
Your write so well and you stop at such a point that I keep wanting more. Do write soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Aisa kya ho gya ki Kumkum halat isi ho gayi, hume ye nahi pata magar jnna to padega hi to chaliye Kumkum ke paas aur vaise bhi woh din aa hi gya jiska hume intezaar tha...........................................

Kumkum uthti hai, us din 19 November hoti hai, woh janti hai ki us din Sumit ka birthday hai mgar usse woh yaad hai aisa nahi dikhana tha, rozz Sumit Kumkum ke baad uthta hai magar us din woh Kumkum ke bajoo me nahi hota, usse bed par naa dekh Kumkum usse dhhondhhne jaati hai aur bed se utarne ki koshish karti hai magar woh chonk jaati hai kyonki uske kamre me bahot saare red roses ke bucket hote hai, woh zameen par pair rakhti hai to zameen par baho saare colouring baloons ar ed rosr ki pankhdiya bichhi hoti hai, uska dhyam table par jaata hai wahan bucket, ek gift aur chitthi hoti hai, Kumkum wahan jaakar sabse pehle chitthi padti hai, jisme likha hota hai ki,

Nahi janta ki ye koun si aarzoo hai, nahi janta ki ye koun si justajoo hai magar hamari khwaish hai ki har subah aap ko dekhkar hi ho kyonki aap woh roshni hai jo khud jalkar hume sooraj ki pehli mulayam kirno ki tazgi aur takat deti hai. Aur yahin haseen subah aapke naam karne ye tohfa aapke liye, aapke samne bahot chhota hai magar phir bhi aapke deewane ki taraf se, isse wahin kholna.

Kumkum woh tohfa kholti hai aur usme se red colour ki bahot hi heavy sari nikalti hai aur usme ek note hoti hai ki, ab almari ke drawer ko kholo. Kumkum aisa karti hai wahan ek white rose ke sath gift aur chitthi nikalti hai, Kumkum phir se chitthi padti hai, aur usme likha hota hai ki,

Hum kabhi akele nahi rehte kyonki hamare sath aapki awaz gunjati rehti hai, ye dil ki dhdkane bhi saanso ke sath joodi rehti hai kyonki aapki payal khanati rehti hai. Open the gift. Kumkum gift kholti hai to usme se payal aur bichchhiyan nikalti hai aur usme note hota ki ab dinnig table par jaao. Kumkum wahan jaati hai.

Wahan ek doosra gift, pink rose aur chitthi hoti hai, jisse Kumkum padti hai.
Aapke har kadam ke sath hamara kadam chalega kyonki humsafar hoon apka jo hardam apka parwana rahega. Gift dekho. Kumkum gift dekhti hai jisme se naye sandles nikalte hai, aur note hoti hai jisme usse hall ke table ke paas jaana hota hai, Kumkum wahan jaati hai.

Wahan Yellow Rose, gift aur chitthi hoti hai, jo Kumkum padhti hai aur likha hota hai ki,
Bahot husn chhipa hai tumahar daman me, har waqt main hi bsta hoon tumhari aankho me, sacchai hoti hai tumhare har bolme aur sadgi hi sadgi nazar aati hai tumhare roop me. Please, open the gift. Kumkum gift kholti hai to usme se us saari se matching chudiyan aur sindoor ki dibbi, bindiya aur makeup ki saari chiz nikalti hai aur note me terrace par jaane ke liye likha hota hai aur Kumkum terrace par jaati hai.

Terrace par red rose, gift aur chitthi hote hai, Kumkum chitthi padti hai, jisme likha hota hai ki
Bahot kam chize hai jisse chand chhip jaayega, agar koi hira bhi aapko dekhega to aapke husn ke samne sharma jaayega. Open the gift. Kumkum gift open karti hai to usme note nahi hota magar usme kangan, neckless, joomke hote hai. Usi waqt Kumkum par phoolo ki barsaat hoti hai aur picche se koi kehta hai ki,

Koun kehta hai ki ye duniya pyar par nahi chalti, are yaaro zara mere samne aayi gazal ko to dekho, ye shayar aur duniya yahin kahenge ki zameen aasma ke bin nahi chalti.

Kumkum ghoomkar dekhti hai aur uski aankh me khushi ke aansoo hote hai, aur Sumit bhi usse dekh bahot khush hota hai, uske hath me ring hoti hai aur woh Kumkum ko pehnata hai aur poochhta hai,

Sumit: Kumkum, will you marry me?

Kumkum haan kehkar uske gale lag jaati hai

Kumkum: Ye sab kya hai Sumit?

Sumit: Aaj tumhara pehla karvachoth hai aur isliye main chahta hoon ki inhi chizo se tum sajo savro. Kya meri ye khwaish poori ho sakti hai?

Kumkum: Ye Kumkum poori tumhari hai to kya tumhari khwaish poori nahi hogi? Main tum jaisa chahte ho vaisa hi karoongi.

Sumit: Man tumse baat kehna chahta hoon ki, ki ki.....

Kumkum: Kaho naa.

Sumit: Baad me.

Kumkum: Thik hai. Magar ab chale hum taiyaar ho jate hai aur tumhe bhi to office jaana hai.

Sumit: Haan, aaj to meeting hai. Chalo.

Dono fresh hone jaaate hai.

To be continued.

Abhi asli mazaa to baki hai to ab zaroor dekhiye kyonki 19 November ki subah aisi hai to dopahar aur sham aur raat kaisi hogi ye dekhna baki hai, so, keep watching.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Woooowwwwwwwwww simply amazing. So mesmerizing. Such a a great update. I am eagerly waiting to know what will happen on this great day 19th Nov.
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Posted: 18 years ago
so sweet of sumeet continue soon

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