pyrasa bandhan updated pg40 on 06.02.07 - Page 14

very nice but connnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnt sooon

Graet, magar yar aur mat tadpao, dono ko milwado, asli Kumkum ki writer ke jaisi mat bano, un dono ko milwado, dono ko kuch ho woh chalega magar kisi ek ko hi taklif mat pahonchao aur meri Kumkum to hargiz nahi. Sorry, Sorry. I have been emotional. Kya karoo Kumkum ki halat dekhi nahi jaati. Jaldi likho.

Wonderful. Kya pyar hai Sumit Kumkum ka. Lovely update.

she's not breathing properly....to overcome suffocation she's taking long breaths......

Su-kk?....kya hua?...kk?....

Rohit-ruk sumit...isko baithaana hoga....ise breathing mein problem ho rahi hai....kk?...

They make her sit but she's still very pale and weak.....

Sumit-bhaiyya?....inhaler doon?...

He makes her sniff the inhaler....

KK is crying bitterly now..in a semi-concious state......

Rohit hugs her and cajoles her in his arms....

Rohit-kk?....dekh bhaiyya hai yahaan ...bhabhi hain...sumit hai....sab hain na?...tu bilkul thik ho jayegi...ro mat munnu...kk?....KK ...baba ro mat dekh attack pad jayega..kk...


Sumit is very tensed.....

sumit-kk?....sumit ka kehna maanogi na?....mera kehna maanti ho na tum?....pls ro mat....tumhaari rabiyaat aur kharaab ho jayegi na aise toh?.....

She gets a little pacified.....

Sumit-very good....chalo ab leto yahaan par..
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kk lies down holding his hand....

KK(faintly)-bhaiyya?.....

Rohit-(holds her other hand)main yahiin hun kk.....

Just then anjali and sharman come rushing....

Sharman-bhai...injection lo...

sumit quickly injects her...

Sumit-bas kk...dekho ab thodi der mein bukhaar chala jayega ok...?tum bas aaraam karo.....

She soon falls asleep.....her temperature decreases gradually......

Sumit is still keeping wet cloth on her forehead.....

Its 2 o clock...

Anjali brings coffee.....

Anjali-sumit...coffee pee le....

rohit-infact sumit...ab tu aaram kar le thodi der....subah se laga hai...thodi der rest kar le...thak gaya hoga.....

Sumit-nahin bhaiyya...upset bhi maine kiya tha na...meri wajah se hi hua hai sab kuch...main bhi thik karoonga...jab tak ye thik nahin hoti...main kuch aur nahin karoongaa....coffee aap pi lo pls....

sumit is worried for her....

that's it for now...i'll update more later..

What dedication and love. Lovely.

Great, kya likha hai. Ab pyar ka izahar bhi ho jaane do. Wonderful. Sumit-Kumkum ekdoosre ke liye jo parva karte hai uske bare me tumne yahan bakhoobi dikhlaya hai. Hats off to you. Magar aage jaldi likho.

kumkum and sumit are alone in the room......
sumit is still keeping wet cloth on her forehead....

kk(faintly)...pani....

Su-pani piyoge kk?...ek minute bas...

HE pours water in the glass kept on the table and makes her sit.....

Su-aao main pila deta hoon....

KK(weakly)-main pi loongi...de do

Su-taakat nahin hogi kk...tum rehne do...main pila raha hoon na....

But she's still upset and takes the glass from his hand...as she tries to drink water the glass slips out of her hand and it breaks....

KK starts crying....sumit hugs her quickly...

Su-kk...baba ro mat..kk...koi baat nahin ...koi baat nahin...kk??....

She wants to move away thinking about the last night but her heart compells her to sob in his arms...

Rohit and anjali rush to her......

Rohit-kk?...kya hua?...

Sumit(holding her hand)..kuch nahin bhaiyya....glass choot gaya haath se....aur kuch nahin...

KK-tum jao.....jao yahaan se....kyun aaye ho?..

Rohit-kk?..nahin kk...

KK(crying)-chale jao tum...kyun hamare ghar aaye ho jao....

She'd crying pathetically and her breath starts troubling...

KK-ja...jao...bh...bhai...bhaiyya...saans...

She panting n trying hard to breathe......

Rohit-kk?..kk?....

Anjali-(rushes with inhaler)...kk...beta inhaler le...kk?...

Sumit-kk?....

KK-nahin...tum jaao....jaao...

She's not able to breathe....rohit rubs her back...

Rohit-kk...inhaler le...

Kk-n .....nahi....is ko...

Su-(scared)...thi...thik hai...main...main jaa raha hoon...par tum pls inhaler le lena kk...

He leaves the room n watches thru the window....

Rohit-ye..ye le kk...

But the inhaller falls on the floor...

KK-(in tears)...bhaiyya...saans...saans..nahin...

Anjali-rohith...uki saans ...rohit..saaans nahin aa rahi hai rohit hurry up...

Rohit picks up the inhaler n mekes her inhle the medecine...she gets relieved..n sleeps in his arms....

Outside...sumit is helpless at her condition n cries his heart out.... 😭 😭

very emotional.
bt small part.cont soon

Great writing, keep it up, magar ab mujse meri Kumkum ki halat sahi nahi jaati plz kuch karo, pyar ka izahar karva do aur dono ko milvadi, main tumse hath jodkar vinati karti hoon, meri Kumkum ko itni taklif mat do. Magar kya baat hai tum bahot kamaal ka likh rahi ho.