pyrasa bandhan updated pg40 on 06.02.07 - Page 13

they reach home....

su-ok...main chalta hoon ab.... 😭

kk-andar aane ke liye tumhe kabhi poochna to nahin padta tha pehle...... 😭

su-uski zarurat aaj bhi nahin hai.......main bhaiyya bhabhi se din mein mil chuks hoon...aur waise bhi raat ho gayi hai....tum jao..... 😭
Suddenly it starts raining.....kk gets wet... 😃

Su-kk....barish tez hai jaao....bheego nahin.....jaldi jao.... 😳

KK-tum jaao....tumhe mujhse kya karna hai...u go...i'll do what i want to..... 😕

Su(angry)-ye kya bachpana hai.....chalo jaldi andar jao..... 😡

KK-tum jaao yahaan se bas..... 😡

Sumit gets agry and cluthes her hand and drags her inside.... 😡 😳

Su-kk....ye kya bachpana tha....tumhe koi baat ek baar mein samajh nahin aati......beemar pad jati to....zimmedaari to meri hoti na.....

KK-tumhe ab mujhse matlab rakhne ki zarurat nahin hai...

Su-jaanta hoon main...aur ye saath...ye dosti sirf chand dino ki hai....is se pehle hi alag hona chahti ho to mujhe koi fark nahin padta.... 😡

She cries and runs to her room..... 😭

Su-kk...ruko...kk sorry.... 😭



but she leaves....he too leaves...in the car....

Su-i m so sorry kumkum....main shaayad us ki wajah se....khair ab kuch fark bhi nahin padta hai....waise hi main u se door jaa hi raha hoon.... 😭 😳

In kk's room....
She sits on the floor and cries.....she cries her heart out.....
kk-...tumne to ek pal mein keh diya ki tum mujhse door chale jaoge....ek baar bhi nahin socha mere baare mein?....kyun sochoge?....pyaar thodi na karte ho mujhse.......shaayad mere pyaar mein hi kuch kami thi.....main nahin jee paoongi tumhaare bina sumit...main mar jaoongi....sumit.... 😳 😭

She breaks down into tears.......and cries the entire night........ 😭

In the morning:

Anjali enters her room......and finds her sleeping,sitting on the floor...looking very pale and weak.....

Anjali(strokes her head)-kk.....chinku 😳 ....aise kyun so rahi hai baba....?...kk....

But she doesn't respond.......

Anjali-kk.......

She holds her hand but withdraws her hand.....

Anjali-kk....tujhe to bahut tez bukhaar 😕 hai....kk?.....uth jaa beta....kk....chiinku?...

But she remains unconcious.....
Anjali rushes to rohit....

Anjali-...rohit...?.....rohit?....

Rohit-haan...anjali...kya ho gaya baba...chilla kyun rahi ho?....... 😆

Anjali-jaldi aayiye...kk ko bahut tez bukhaar hai.....

Rohit-bukhaar?.........

anjali-wo...behosh hai...jaldi chalo....

They rush to her room........

Rohit(hugs her)-kk...?...kk?...betaa....?...chinku?...bukhaar aa raha hai meri chinku ko?.....kk?....dikha..... 😭

He touches her forehead and finds it very hot.....

Anjali-ye lo thermometer......

Roht takes her temperature......

Rohit-....kk...?...anjali ise 106 bukhaar hai...dekho iske kapde bhi geele hain...

Anjali-dikhayiye?...

She feels her cloth and body.....

Anjali-haan...sar geela hai...aur ye to tap rahi hai bukhaar se.....rukiye main abhi iske kapde change karti hoon......

Rohit-ek minute....

He makes her sit on the bed...and hugs her....

Rohit-meri chinku....beemar pad gayi....kk...bas abhi bhaiyya bukhaar gaayab kar denge...thik hai?....

Anjali-...main iske kapde badalti hoon.....

Rohit-main pattiyaan rakhta hoon aur abhi dr ko bulaata hoon.......

Anjali-ok......

She changes her clothes and makes her lie down.....

Rohit calls the dr and enters the room ....

Rohit-anjali...pattiyaan rakhte hain....bukhaar kam hoga......

anjali-haan.....

They keep wet cloth all over her body to lower her temperature.......

Rohit-iss tarah achaanak bukhaar kaise ho gaya hoga ise?.....

Anjali-shaayad kal ye bheeg gayi hogi.....raat mein ye aur sumit der se aaye they na.....

Rohit-lekin sumt to tha.....usne bheegne kaise diya.....

Anjlai-rohit abhi iska bukhaar kam karna chahiye phir kuch aur...aur ye dekhiye...

KK cries.....

Rohit(kisses her forehead)-kk....ro mat beta...bhaiyya bhabhi hain na...?.....kk?

KK(crying)-pls...sumit ko rok lijiye......wo chala jayega......

Anjali-kk.....tujhe bukhaar hai......kk ro mat pls.....

KK-sumit mujhse jhagda kar ke.......wo nahin jaa sakta...

She's crying ....

Rohit-kk....bhaiyya hai na......main rok looonga sumit ko...thik hai?...woh kahin nahin jaayega......

KK-bhaiyya....(crying)....

Anjali-aaja....so jaa kk...aa mere paas aa....

She sits besides her and cuddles her up.....

Rohit strokes her hair.......

Rohit-shaayad in dono ka jhagda hua tha....sumit ne bataya hoga na ki wo jaa raha hai.....

anjali-isse bahut tez bukhaar hai rohit...layiye main pattiyaan rakhti hoon....

Dr cumes and checks her up.....

Rohit-dr...is she all right?....

Dr-ji...ab thik hain.....injection diya hai...aaram milega....agar bukhaar aaye to pattiyaan rakhte rahiyega waise bukhaar aana nahin chahiye ab....it was viral fever

Rohit-thanx......

anjali moves away from her but she holds her hand in semi-conciousness..........

KK(faintly)-bh..bha...bha....bhaabhi...

anjali so ja ....main yahin hoon...so jaa.....

Rohit-tum baitho.....

Rohit leaves......

Its 8:30......rohit calls sumit.....

su-haan bhaiyya.....goodmorning.....

Ro-tune aaj kk ko phone nahin kiya sumit....kya baat hai....apni dost se naaraaz hai kya...?

su-nahin bhaiyya...main kyun naaraaz honga?.....

Roht-saari raat woh kehti rahi ki sumit ko rok lo...jhagda ...sumit....aur tune phone bhi nahin kiya....tu ghar aayega na....use teri zarurat hai?...

Su-saari raat?...matlab?....

Rohit-yaar use high fever hai......raat se 100 se upar bana hai bukhaar...tu aaja ..wo thoda khush ho jayegi....

Sumit is tensed and worried for her....

Sumit-bukhaar?.....ye ladki bhi na....kal kaha tha maine....mat bheego...aur...bhaiyya main aata hoon....i m just reaching in 15 minutes.....

Rohit-theek hai.....

sumit rushes to sharman....
Sumit-sharman main kk ke ghar jaa raha hoon...use bahut high fever hai...uski tabiyat thik nahin hai....

Sharman-haan jaanta hoon....pratha ne subah bataya tha......

Sumit what?....tujhe pata tha?....tune ek baar bhi batana zaruri nahin samjha...?sharman?...tu...oh God ..

He rushes to her house.....

Sharman-ye aise kyun behave kar rahe hain?...God knows.....

sumit is driving very fast.....

Su-kk ki tabiyaat thik nahin hai....100 se upar bukhar...hey bhagwaan....meri hi galti hai....mujhe ladna nahin chahiye tha...woh bechaari...main..ah...

He himelf doesn't know what he's thinking..... 😆

hey it's really sweet.........now next???? 😃 😃

very nice one jj 😛
now make tht sukk dosnt get seperated
cont soon

great
and now make su and kk one
continue soon

nice part.now make su-kk one.continue soon. 😊

Graet, great. Magar ab plz Sumit ko rok lena varna meri Kumkum, yaar sab kuch hona chahiye magar Kumkum ko taklif nahi honi chahiye. Aur you're writing really veri well. Great thinking & writing

sumit rushes to her house......
he hurries to her room and reaches there...panting...

Sumit-bhabhi?...bhaiyya?...kumkum kaisi hai ab?.....

They are looking tensed and worried.....

Kumkum is chanting his name and crying......

KK(faintly)-su....su..sumit.....

Sumit sits besides her......and touches her forehead.....

Sumit-bhabhi....ise to bahut tez fever hai....

Anjali-sumit pata nahin.....injection dene ke baad bhi 104 hai.....maine dobaara pattiyaan rakhni shuru ki hain abhi......

Sumit-bhaiyya doctor ne exatly kya kaha hai?.....

Rohit-sumit viral hai....ye raat mein bhig kaise gayi?.....

Sumit-bhaiyya wo...maine use apne us jaane ke baarey mein bataya...aur pata nahin....woh gussa ho gayi ki maine use pehle nahin bataya aur aap to jaante ho na...

Rohit-bas ek hi burayi hai ismein...ziddi bahut hai ye ladi......

KK suddenly feels suffocated....her breath beomes fast...she's unable to breathe....

they all gather around her.....

su-kk...kya hua?....

Rohit-beta...?...kk?...

She's having an asthma attack....

Anjali-sumit...table par inhaler hai...jaldi...i think she's getting an attack.....

Sumit gets the inhaler and makes kk inhale it....She gets relieved.......

Su-kk...?...are you ok?...kk?

Anjali-chinku?...munna tu thik hai?...kk?...

She soon falls asleep......

Rohit-isko bukhaar nahin aana chahiye...ashthma bhi hai....kuch complication bhi ho sakta hai.....

Sumit-(tensed)nahin...bhabhi....aap bahut der se baithe ho...mujhe do main pattiyaan rakhta hoon......

Anjali-sumit...?

Rohit-use karne do anjali....kk use bula rahi thi.....

He keeps the wet cloth on her head.....

2 hours pass and kumkum and sumit are alone in the room

very wrong movement u stopped cont soon 😆 👏

kumkum is still in a semi-concious state.......

KK(faintly)-sumit?....bhaiyya...su sumit?...

Su(keeping wet cloth)-kk....main yahiin hoon...tabiyat thik nahin hai?...kk?....

KK-sumit....

Su-so jao...kk main yahin hoon...tumhe bahut high fever hai...pls aaram karo.......

KK-(in tears)tum jaao...chale jao....tumhe kya....

She faints due to weakness...........

su-kk?....kk?....

Sumit checks her fever...its 105.4......

Anjali and rohit return......

Sumit-bhaiyya?....bukhaar badh raha hai.....

Rohit-sumit...main dr ko bulaata hoon.....

Sumit(angry)-woh dr. kya karega?.......usne injection hi thik nahin diya....ab main karta hoon kuch....

He calls sharman....

su-sharman....jaldi se ek combiflam ka injection le aa...within 10 minutes..

Anjali-sumit combiflam?......

Sumit-asar karega...aap dekhna...main pattiyaan rakhtaa hoon....

rohit keeps talking to her and trying to wake her up....

Sumit-kk...pls aankhein kholo ek baar?...kk?

But she's very pale and weak....