pyrasa bandhan updated pg40 on 06.02.07 - Page 15

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Posted: 17 years ago
hi

thnaks for this. great work. keep it up

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey just caught up on the story and its great, feel bad for sumit, plz update soon.
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SUMIT CRIES OUTSIDE THE ROOM....rohith and anjali make kk sleep and come to sumit's side..

anjali-sumit?...

rohith-sumit..ye kya...tu to ...ro raha hai?...

anjali-sumit...kk ki taraf se main maafi maangti hoon...tujhe to pata hai na sumir...wo ...ek to wo beemar hai isiliye...

she folds her hands in front of him...sumit holds them..

sumit-nahin bhabhi...ye kya kar rahe ho aap...arrey...main to aapka bhai hoon na..to phir..aur main jaanta hoon ...kk upset hai..tabiyat thik nahin hai na uski...thoda better feel karegi to sab theek ho jayega...

Rohit-to tu kyun ro raha hai sumit...

sumit-kuch...kuch nahin...bas...usko thodi takleef ho rahi hai na...accha ...aachha nahin lag raha hai use aise dekhte hue...har samay sabke baare mein sochna...uska hansna...apnapan..ye ladki apne baare mein to kabhi sochti hi nahin hai....

tears are running down his cheeks...he's unable to control his tears and runs out of the house...

anjali-sumit?...sumit wo thik ho jayegi..

Rohit-(holds her hand)jaane do use anjali..ye sumit nahin...uska pyaar bol raha hai...kk ke liye uska pyaar...

anjali looks at rohit...he smiles thru tears...and hugs anjali..
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Posted: 17 years ago
a few days pass....kumkum is still not totally fit...sumit comes to see her everyday while she's asleep...kk too misses sumit a lot...

one fine morning-

kumkum is lying down on the bed...holding anjali's hand..rohit massages her head as her head is on his lap......sumit enters ...

su-bha...bhaiyya...main andar aa jaoon..??

rohit-sumit?...poochne ki zarurat kabse pad rahi hai...

Sumit(hesitatingly)-goodmorning....

Kumkum turns her face to look at him.....her eyes are moist to see him....

sumit-..i...im sorry kk...agar tumhe prob ho...bhaiyya can we talk outside....

they all look at kk...

kk-mere liye chocolate nahin laye na sumit?....

sumit is relieved to hear this from her...he goes to her and holds her hand...he's in tears...

su-main kaise bhool sakta tha....fridge mein rakh di hai...kaisa lag raha hai ab...

kk-tumhaare paas shaayad waqt hi nahin tha poochne ka....isiliye itne din baad pooch rahe ho...

su-waqt to bahut tha...par ..khair..tum phir ladne lagi jhansi ki raani??....

they laugh....anjali and rohit are glad to see them talking again...

kk-...sumit..tu...tum us kab jaa rahe ho?...

sumit-10 days ke liye extend kar liya hai plan....wo..bhaiyya ek prob ho gayi hai...

Rohit-kaisi prob sumit?...

Sumit-wo...valsad wali zameen par workers ne srtike kar di hai...maine deal sign karke rahejas ko papers diye they na...wo wahaan hotel banana chahte hain...

KK-workers ke ghar tode jaa rahe hai?..

She starts getting up with anjali's support...

Su-tum aaram karo..itni mushkil se thodi si thik hui ho..pls dont strain urself...

KK-main thik hoon...chinta ki koi baat nahin hai sumit...par ab kya hoga?...

Rohit-sumit...humein papers lekar wahaaan jana hoga...unse baat karni hogi....

sumit-to phir jaldi karna hoga...mere jaane se pehle...

rohit-thik hai..par..sumit...ye deal to kk aur tumne sign ki thi na?...

Sumit-oh...mujhe laga ki..maine aur aapne....nahin...main police ko handle karne ko...

KK-sumit...aisa kaise kar sakte ho tum....nahin...hum pehle unse baat karenge...aur kal subah hi niklenge...

Su-nahin...bilkul nahin...aise mein tum kahin nahin jaogi...ek to waise hi tabiyat kharab hai aur....

KK-kab tak fikr karoge meri?...US se pattiyan rakhne to nahin aaoge na ab...

Rohiit-kk...pls..tu fir se lad mat ab...aur sumit...kk bhi thik keh rahi hai...tum dono kal nikal jao...

Sumit-bhaiyya...aisi haalat mein?..raat ko fever aata hai na ise?...shaam hote hi phir bukhaar ho jayega abhi...davaiyaan kitni high dose ki hain...weakness hogi ...shareer mein taakat nahin hogi aur...

Rohit-tere hote ise kuch nahin ho sakta...ab bas....main aur anjali tayyari karte hain...tum dono baitho...

sumit and kk are left alone....
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part 😃 👏 👏 .
cont soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok...now lets get back....

sumit has to agree and take kk to valsad....

su-...kk...baba..tum abhi to let jao....aisa karo...tum rest karo ab..main lights off karke jaata hoon...

KK-jaana chahte ho toh jao...mujhe rokne ka haq to waise bhi nahin hai na...

She's still upset ....

Su-kk...tum aise kyun baat kar rahi ho mujhse...

kk-aadat dal rahi hoon...tumse zyaada attachmment ho gaya to shaayad tumhe na ho...mujhe taqleef hogi na...

su-kk...mujhe laga ab sab normal ho gaya hai hamare beech....bhaiyya ke saamne

KK-main bhaiyya ko taqleef nahin de sakti hoon...sumit...hamare beech kuch rishta hai hi nahin...rishta to tumne hi todne ko kaha tha na...bas usi raat sab khatm ho gaya tha...isiliye...pls dont get attached to me...

sumit gets up and looks away facing away from her....he is in tears ...kk is also crying facing away...

Su-chocolate to le hi sakti ho....main lekar aata hoon...

KK-nahin sumit...ab aadatein badalni hongi na..tumhe bhi aur mujhe bhi...toh dooriyaan hi thik hain...mann nahin hai abhi..pls swith off the lights after u...i m feeling tired..thodi der aaram karna chahti hoon...

su-hmm...

he goes out...kk cries for behaving badly...sumit wipes his tears...

su-thik hi kar rahi ho tum...mujhe koi haq hi nahin hai tumhaari dosti paane ka...
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Posted: 17 years ago
outside-

ro-sumit..kal subah 6 oclock par u shud leave...varna der ho jayegi...hum kk ko tayyar kar denge...tu aa jana time par ok?...nashta saath karenge...

Sumit-ok...

Anjali-kya hua sumit?....kuch hua kya?...kk se baat nahin ki aaj?...

sumit-ki na bhabhi...wo...thak gayi thi...so gayi hai na....

anjali-oh...accha...

sumit-bhaiyya main jaata hoon....kal ki tayyari bhi toh karni hain na...

Rohit-ok...gudnite

Sumit-bye....

he leaves....

rohit-hum...jaldi hi kuch na kuch karenge anjali...

Anjali-bas waqt aane par sab ho hi jayega ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
next morning-

kk's house..

Su-bhaiyya...bhabhi?..

Anjali-sumit?...a gaya tu?..

Sumit-bhabhi...bhaiyya kahan hain?

anjali-woh dekh...

She points to rohit n kk...

Rohit-kk...davaiyon mein koi laaparwahi nahin hogi...aur sumit ka kehna manegi..zid ki tune toh main bata raha hoon tujhe..

KK-kabse bata hi to rahe ho aap bhaiyya...

Rohit-tujhe to bolna hi bekaar hai na...sumit ko aane de usse hi..arrey sumit?..

Sumit-goodmorning...maine sab sun liya hai...ab u dont hav to repeat the instructions...

Rohit-arrey sumit...ye zid kare na toh tu daant dena...

Su n kk look at each other...

su-bilkul...mere saamne kisi ki nahin chalegi...

Anjali-baba ..niklo bhi ab...der ho jayegi...

Rohit-haan...sumit ...meri gaadi se jayega tu..sab packed hai bas apna suitcase rakh de...

sumit-ok...chalo...

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Posted: 17 years ago
on their way-

Sumit-are u comfortable...aaram se baithi to ho na..

KK-pls...tumhe mera khayaal rakhne ki zarurat nahin hai .

su-(upset)....

They keep quiet for an hour...

Su-halt le raha hoon...ek chai ki shop hai....whaan rukenge...

KK doesn't comment...he stops after 2 km...

su-bahar aa jao...chai pi lo..

KK gets down the car...still quiet...

Sumit orders tea for two...

sumit-bhaisahab ...do chai...

KK-mere liye ye ganne ka ras ...

Man-ji...

Sumit-rukiye...kk..ye ganne ka juice..kk tumhaara bukhar poori tarah thik nahin hai...nuksaan karega..aur raaste mein aise ...kk...its not right..hum valsad mein le lenge agar mann hai tumhaara to..

KK-bhaiyya...aap mere liye to le hi aayiye...paise main de doongi...

Sumit is hurt by her action....he gets away..

sumit-kk..ek baat main kehna chahta hoon aaj...bhale hi hamari dosti kam samay ke liye ho...but itni kamzor to nahin thi jo tumhe paise ki baat beech maein laani padi...khair mujhe kuch nahin kehna chahiye...jo tumhaara mann ho karo....

sumit doesnt even drink his tea due to being upset...but kk has her sugarcane juice...

she sits inside the car then...sumit too returns to his seat...he drives for two hours....

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kk soon starts feeling uneasy...sumit notices her uneasiness....

Sumit-kk?...kya hua...sab thik hai?...

kk(angrily)-haan...

But sumit keeps noticing that she's feeling unwell...

Sumit-feverish to nahin ho rahi ho?...

KK-nahin...

Sumit doesnt say anything...
half an hour passes...kk is extremely anxious now..she holds sumit's hand softly...she's in tears now...

Sumit(stops the car)-kk..baba...kya hua?kk?..

He caresses her hair..

KK(crying)-sum...sumi..sumit...vo...vo...vomit karungi..

Su(woried)-vomitting aa rahi hai?...koi baat nahin aao...

He holds her hand and takes her to the other end of the road....he holds her from back and rube her neck and back...

Su-kk..pareshan mat ho...koi baat nahin...tum aaram se vomit karo..its ok...

KK cries and throws up...sumit pacifies her and hugs her...

KK-bas...

Su-bas?..chalo ab gaadi mein baitho...main glucose de deta hoon..thik hai?..ro nahin kk...

HE makes her walk to the car and makes her sit...

Sumit-kk..bas ye dekho..ye ..

KK-(in tears)...nahin piya jayega...

She hugs him and cries...

Su hugs her back-kk....accha..bas thoda se kha lo tum aise hi...ok?...paani piyo aur kha lo bas use...

he makes her do it..

sumit hugs her...

Su-kk..kahaa tha na maine..tumhe zid nahin karni chahiye thi na kk?...kk ko takleef ho gayi na?..kk...bas ab ro mat..tum thak bhi gayi ho...tum aaram se pair upar karo aur so jao....

KK-sumit..pls tum mat jao...

Su-thik hai main waada ...

but he stops

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