pyrasa bandhan updated pg40 on 06.02.07 - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago
as kumkum sees rohit...she runs to hug him.....

kumkum-bhaiyya......

Rohit is all right only...a minor injury is there on his forehead and anjali is sitting near him....

kumkum-bhaiyya...kya hua tha?....aap thik ho na?....ye...(touches his forehead)...

Rohit-bilkul thik hoon...zara si chot hai...septic ka injection lagana baki hai bas....

Sumit-thaank God...bhabhi aap...?

Anjali-mujhe kuch nahin hua baba...main bilkul fit hoon... 😆

Kumkum-phir woh phone...?

Sumit-ek minute kk....bhaiyya pehle aap ye batao...apko phone nahi karna chahiye tha kya...apko pata hai hamari kya haalat ho gayi thi...kumkum to rone lagi thi...pata hai aapko kitna darr gayi thi wo..aur hum dono bhi....aur bhabhi...bhaiyya ko chodo...

Kumkum-haan ...aur aapne bhi nahin phone..kiya.....kyun aap ko kya zarurat hai...hum to aise hi log hain na....

Anjali and rohit start laughing....

Sharman-haan haan...hanso...apto hansoge...paershaan to hum they na...

Anjali-rohit samajh nahin aata....bhagwaan ne ek jaise tin item dharti par eksaath kaise chod diye....

Su-kya...?

Rohit-haan...abhi tak main samajhta tha ki kumkum...ek single piece hai...meri khabar lene wali...par ab pata chali..ki carbon copies bhi hain.....

Sumit & kk together.--bhaiyya.....

Dr. comes and injects him and they leave for home...

Sumit-arrey bhaiya ...woh panditji....

rohit-haan..unko bhi to laana tha na...

Sumit-aap log ghar jao...main unko laata hoon....

Kumkum suddenly gets worried...

Kumkum-nahin...tum akele nahin jaoge...abhi bhaiyya ka accident hua hai na us route pa...tumhe kuch ho gaya to....main.....

She stops...she doesnt know what she was saying...everyone is amused...Rohit and anjali understand and smile.....

Sumit-.kk...?

Kumkum-kuch nahin...sorry...woh main....

rohit-thik...to decide ye hua hai...ki kumkum aur sumit mandir jayenge aur...hum tino ghar...chalo...ab jaldi karo....

They leave for their destinations....

kumkum is still embarassed....sumit himself feels that both r in love with each other...... 😳

Both keep quite for sumtime.......Sumit swithes on the stereo...and once again it plays:




dhaage tod lao chandni se noor ke.....
ghoonghat hi bana to roshni se noor ke
sharma gayi to...
aagosh mein lo....
saansoon se uljhi rahe meri saansein...
bol ne halke halke...
bolne halke halke....
honth se halke halke bol na halke.....


both are lost in the song...remebering their previous meetings......
aa neend ka ..sauda karein..
ek khwab dein...ek khwaab leein....
ek khwaab to ankhon mein hai...
ek chand ke takiye tale...
kitne dino se ye aasmaan bhi....
soya nahin hai...
isnko sula dein...


suddenly both of them come back to reality.....they look at each other and an stimulus smile comes to their face...

Kumkum-shaayad main sumit se....

Sumit-haan...main kumkum se....

Kumkum-par sumit kya...

Sumit-shaayad kumum bhi...

They reach the temple....

Sumit-kk...mandir.....

Kk-haaan chalo...

they go to the mandir and meet the purohit...he gets ready and gets to the car....
they reach sharma house.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
gud bachcha.....more ...soon plzzzz 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
good update.now i hope in mandir both say that they love each other. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
good job 👏 . like it a lot, keep writing!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great going, aakhir pyar ho hi gaya magar ab jaldi likho kyonki pyar ka izhar bhi to karna hai.
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh my god u r the best writer i have ever met i love ur fanfic
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Posted: 17 years ago
Both are in love with each other....They have realised their feelings for each other but still the confession is left....

AFTER ONE YEAR
Kumkum's room:

Kumkum is lying down on her bed with her diary.Its 12:30...She is engrossed in writing her diary...
"aaj poora ek saal ho gaya hai...mere us ehssas ko jisne meri zindagi hi badal di hai....shaayad main khud hi badal gayyi hoon.....i dont know if sumit thinks the same par pata nahin kyun mujhe aisa lagta hai ki..kahin na kahin ...haan..."

She remembers what has happened the entire year:

Sumit-kumkum chalo na aaj ice cream kha ke aate hain...

kk-abhi...time dekho sumit....11 baj gaya hai...bhabhi wai8 kar rahi hogi...

su-arrey yaar..main bol doonga na unhe ....just wait

He calls anjali telling her that they wont be able to reach home before 12...

Kumkum-su ye kya...

su-main nahin jaanta...chalo aur files band...

They go to a beach and enjoy each other's company....


"........woh lamhe...main kabhi nahin bhula sakungi sumit...jo maine tumhaare saath bitaye hain...pata nahin...ki tum mujhe dost samajh kar mera itna khayaal rakhte ho...ya phir....par main tumse pyaar karti hoon...i m in love...."[

FLash back:

Sumit and kk at a construction site.....Sumit is talking to an engineer...
su-that's great mr.singhania....bas this project will prove to be a ...

Kumkum is having very high fever but she doesn't tell sumit.....she feels weak and sits down on the stairs only...

Su-mr. singhania...pls excue me.....

He goes to kumkum and sits with her...

Su-kk ....kya hua ...are u ok?

Kk-haan....

Su-u r looking tired...aankhein dekho....tabiyat to thik hai na....idhar dikhao...

He touches her forehead..

Su-kk....u r having very high fever...tum...tum jal rahi ho.....kk...why didn't u tell me...

Kk-nahin su ...wo...

But before she says anything, he goes to the builders...

Su-ok thanx ...now we'll take a move....humein jaana hoga...

singhania-par sir ye...

Su-mr singhania...if u need to discuss sumthing pls call me tomorrow...i m sorry..i'll take a move now...

Kk-(gets up)su...tum pehle baat kar lo...i'll wait...

Su-koi zarurat nahin hai...chalo hum abhi doctor ke paas chal rahe hain...

Kk-sumit...baba listen to me i m fine....woh subah se hi fever tha....meri davai hai purse mein...rehne do na...office chalo...

Sumit-subah se fever tha...aur mujhe ab tak nahin bataya tumne....

Kk-sumit...

Sumit-tum janti ho aajkal viral...kitna zyaada ho raha hai. roz news mein aata hai kis tarah se logon ki jaan jaa rahi hai...dr s kitna warn kar rahe hain aur tum?...utmhaara dimag kharab hai...tum aisi haalat mein office aa gayi....kumkum...tum samajhti kya ho apne aap ko....tum keval ek bussiness executive nahin ho...kisi ki behen kisi ki beti aur....kisi ki....tumhein pata hai tuhe kuch ho gaya to un sabka kya hoga...main...main... mera kya....😳

He stops....
Kumkum also understands what he intended to say...

kumkum-i m sorry....

Sumit-actually u neednt be sorry...i m sorry...main hyper hoi...gaya...ek to vaise hi tumhe bukhar hai ....main aur bhi daant raha hoon..i m sorry...

Kumkum-thik hai hum ghar chalte hain...

kumkum remembers how he took care of by visiting her everyday as she cudnt join the office for a week....
how he used to call her ..telling her not to worry.....how he joined her bhabhi when she scolded her abt being careless abt her health....

COLOR=RED]"'....jaante ho sumit ...hamari pehli mulakaat mein hi tumhaari aankhon....tumhaari saadgi ne mujhe chura liya thaa....ab main sirf tumhaari hi amaanat hoon...sirf tumhaari....."
And she signs off.....


Edited by jj thomson - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!
PLZ,CONTINUE!!!! 😊
u are a great writter 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great, hats off to you, please, jaldi likho, we can't wait.
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part.
now waiting for su confessions

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