FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 30

Congrats to everyone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm really enjoying this fanfic!!! Hope your creative thoughts keep flowing to reveal the undying love of su-kk!!
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Sorry guyz the long wait wasn't intentional...just been extremely busy 😡...but to make up guess what??? 😳...yep theres as usually a double dose 😉...so take this for now....nxt 1 comin up shortly

Rahul and Su are at the airport

Ra: koi nahi utara hai

Su: rahul ek bare phir try karlo plz!!! 😕

Rahul tries again….rings…..after a while some 1 picks up! 😃

Pr: Hello

Ra: haan priya…(before he can say nething)

Pr: arre aap abhi taka aye nahi hai 😳…kk tumhare intazaar kar rahe hai…kahaan ho tum 😳

Its getting really noisy now

Ra:…dehko main sumit ko lehkar aah raha hoon 😊

Pr: Kya keh rahein hai😕…mujhe kuch suniyee nahi deh raha

Ra: (shouts) main su ke saath aah raha hoon 😃

Pr: (only hears bits of what he said) 😕

Ra: acha! Tum wahaan sum kuch sambalo 👍🏼

He cuts the phone…she is really shocked 😲 and disappointed 😕

Pr: Rahul neh kara key who nahi aah raha!....kk ka kya hoga 😲..iss din pey us key bhaiya bhi nahi hain uske saath…😭

She goes to find kk and tell her…

Back at the airport rahul relaxes…

Ra: Thank god key phone mil gaya 😃…maine priya ko batadiya hai…woh sub kuch sumbal lehgee 😉

Su: (still in some discomfort) Kya hum waqt pey ponch payegein? 😒

Ra: Fhikar mutt kar mere yaar 😆…ab humey koi nahi rokh saakta 😉

Rahul has an enormous smile on his face 😃…Su looks at him still a little unsure but smiles too. 😊

Back at kk house

Kk is sat in front of the mirror 😔…she is in quite a state she doesn't know if going through with this marriage is the right thing to do or not 😕…Priya comes in

Pr: kk…

Kk: (in a normal tone) gee bhabi 😳

Pr: dehk duhki mutt hona 🤔…per tere bhaiya nahi aah payeinge aaj

Kk: (extremely sad) kyun bhabi? 😭

Pr: erm…lagta hai key abhi tak unka kaam nahi poora hua…bohut shor tha nah neeche to zyaada baat nahi ho saki 😳

She leaves her to tend to the guests…kk sits down in front of the mirror…shes in tears now 😭…she can't help it 😭

Kk: bhaiya aapney bhi mere saath chor diya sumit ki tarah…ab jub mujhe aap ki sub se zyaada zaroorat thi…(she sobs) 💔 😭

Back at the airport the wait is over…su and rahul board the plane…

But now vishal and all baratees r on there their way…( 😡 )

All girls are in kk's room giggling and chatting away 😳…kk is waiting anxiously as she doesn't know what will happen 😕…she doesn't know herself if she will actually go through with the wedding…😕 😕

Su in the plane just thinks about kk…😊

Su: plz aesa kuch mutt karna 😕…maine jaanta hoon tum sirf mujhse pyar karti ho…plz kuch mutt karna….😳

Su is getting restless from all the anxiety…he doesn't thinks about the pain he is feeling still from the operation

Vishal is extremely happy 😆…its as tho he is bringing the whole world with him to witness his wedding 😆…he is just estatic 😉…they all arrive at kk's house 😕

Inside the mundap has been set up…everything is rearing to go!!! All we need now is the bride and groom….😳

In kk room all girls are watching from the window as Vishal gets of his horse and enters the house…

G1: chalo aeise nahi under aane deinge 😆

G2: haan kuch naa kuch to dehna hoga 😃

All girls hurry out of the room in order to go harass Vishal

G3: bus ab thodi dare aur hai kk…kuch dare tumhe akele intazaar karna hoga…ok 😳

She too leaves

The flight lands…

Ra: jaaldi karo Su 😳

Su: (slows down he's not feeling too good) 🤔

Ra: (sees this)😲 tumne thoda araam karna hai?

Su: (determined) nahin… 😵

Both get in the car and Rahul really puts his foot down on the gas…

Vishal manages to get away from the girls and sits down in the mandup

Kk alone in her room…she looks in the mirror…she imagine su there…n remembers his words…from the night they were on the terrace…

***flashback***

Su: kya hua…nahi kar sakti?...bus yeh thi tumhari mohabbat 😡…itne gahree? 😡...ab to mein maan loon nah keh tum mujse suchi mohabbat nahi karti…😡

***end***

kk: mujhe yeh karna hoga Sumit key liye...

She wipes her tears…kk has a determined look on her face…looks like she has made up her mind 😳

At the mundup vishal is sitting there waiting…the guest are really enjoying themselves...the Pandit asks to call kumkum now…

Enjoy Guyz!!! 👍🏼

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... now jaldi se gt thm married na 😭

Heres the second dose as promised!!! 😳

At the mundup vishal is sitting there waiting 😃…the guest are really enjoying themselves 😆...the Pandit asks to call kk now 😳…

The girls go to bring kk… kk is at the top of the stairs 😳…she sees everything and knows that she has to go through with it now for the respect of her family…🤔

Rahul is trying to get there as quick a possible 😡…su just sits and hopes…😭

Kk gets to bottom of the stairs…n she stops 😭…she has tears in her eyes…her heart isn't letting her walk forwards 😵…priya comes running up to her 😕…every1 is silent and all eyes are on the bride…

Pr: kk…(softly) chalo…😳

Kk: nods

Priya holds her hand and takes her forward…she takes kk to the mundup 😕…she tells kk to sit…every1 is admiring how beautiful kk is looking…😳 😳

Su and Rahul still haven't managed to get there…😕 😕 😕 😲

Kk is about to sit down…she looks towards the entrance one last time…😭 shuts her eyes and with a heavy heart sits down next to Vishal…she prays that Su will come and stops this madness…😵

Vi: (whispers) u look gorgeous 🤢

Kk: a tear falls down her cheek 😒

Pandit asks someone to come forward for kk's kanyadaan…

Kk's mum: arre Rahul kahaan hai priya usse neh to karna tah 😃

Priya: (look towards the ground disappointed) woh nahi aah rahein 😔

Kk's mum: kya?..(shocked)😲 …acha chalo koi baat nahi...

Still a little shocked she asks a relative to do this for kk 😳…the relative gets up and comes forward 😲….after this is done the pundit asks the bride n groom to stand up for the pheres 😲 😲 😲…kk's eyes are still shut tight…they get up! 😭

Voice: THAYRO!!! 😃

Kk: quickly opens her eyes 😕

Kk's mum: ek minute thayro… u haven't tied the knot properly 😃

Vi: impatiently starts looking at his watch 😡

The guest see this and laugh whilst kk's mum sorts out the knot.

Kk's mum: ab teek hai 😆

They start the phere 😲…kk reluctantly takes the first step…😲 😲 😲

RUKO!!! Someone shouts from behind…(no im not joking this time 😆) its RAHUL!!! 😉 (finally)

Ra: ruko…yeh shaadi nahi ho sakhti…😉

Every1 gasping with shock😲😲😲…they start whispering…😲

Ra: Maa yeh shaadi nahi ho sakti 😳

Vi: Shocked 😲 😕…steps down from the mandup and comes slowly closer to rahul 👎🏼

Pr: per kyun nahi ho sakti?????😕 (astounded by rahuls behaviour)😲

Rahul moves to the side and everyone looks past him to see Sumit 😳 standing there 😆 😆 😆…he still has his bandage on his head…😛

Ra: Sumit…tum kk key paas jao…mein inn sub jo batata hoon..😳

Su takes a few steps in kk's direction 😆…she is looking at him 😊…just dying to come into his arms ❤️… but vishal steps in front of Su 😡…su stops

Su: Vishal mein…

Vi: kuch mutt kaho 😡…nahi suna maine kuch bhi…😡

Su: lehkin..😕

Ra: (looking vi in the eye) Su..maine kaha tum kk key paas jao! 😳

Vi: lowers his eyes and moves out of su's way…😭

It takes su less than a second to reach kk 😆…shes smiling at him with tears in her eyes 😊…he grabs her hand and takes her from there…😃 Meanwhilst rahul starts to explain the whole story to every1.

Su and kk are in kk's room

Su: mujhe maaf kardo kk…😭

Kk: looking into his eyes..😭 her eyes are full of tears

Su: mere majboori thi 😒….jis ki wajah se yeh sub kuch mujhe karna parah…mujhe maaf kardo

He holds kk's hand and tells her the whole situation 😳…kk is just looking at him waiting to come into his arms…😳

Kk: is overwelmed by what he is telling her 😭 and also proud 😃 at the same time that her love was not wrong…❤️

Both are crying now…😭

Kk: touches su's bandage with so much pain in her heart 😭 ❤️…she can't believe that su is still with her 😊…and so close to her right now…❤️

Su: gently removes her hand and brings into towards his face…he kisses ❤️ her hand…then wipes her tears 😉

Kk: suddenly unable to control herself ❤️…hugs him tight and crys…😭

Su: trying to control his tears & he hugs her too 😃…sighs with relief 😛

Su: ab tum dehkna kumkum sub kuch teek hogaye ga! 😃

Kk: still crying uncontrollably 😭 😭

Su: I love u kumkum (hugs her tighter)

Kk: per ab bohut dehr hogaye hai sumit…

Su: 😲 😲 shocked to hear this…😲 😲 😲

Slowly moves her away from him to look at her 😲…all of a sudden kk faints …su catches her in time and lies her in his lap both are on the floor now…panicking he quickly calls every1.

They all come running…😲 😲 😲

ok now i haven't done my work for 2morro..its 11.15 and i only have 45 mins left of today...aaaarrrggghhhh!!!!

panick time!!!!!

😆 😆 😆 😆

don't worry i'll find some way to get round it!!!

Enjoy the fanfic guys!!!! 😉

n do comment...on wateva bits u liked!!! k ?

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that was soooooooo awesome!!! Thank God I read it after you wrote both the parts....the suspense would have been too much to bear 😆 😆 😆
Really enjoyed the dramatic part - rahul screaming tehro! and su revealed...you caught me goggling the first time though - when kk's mum said tehro... 😆 😆
thanks for the great parts!!
And btw, hoping kk gets okay sooooooooon and they get married!! 😉 😃 😳

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i hope words are not needed........ 😊

now my turn 😊

su is sitting beside kk and crying.......keeping his head in her hands......... 😭 😭

then kk slowly opens her eyes.......sees su.....

kk(still unconsiously) : sumit.........

su looks at her.

su:kk tum.........tum theek ho i knew that you'll be alright.......main jaanta tha.... 😊 😊

kk tries getting up....

su:kya kar rahi ho?..........leti raho.
kk without replying tries getting up....
su helps her sit.

she sits and closes her eyes.........

su:kk main jaanta hoon ki tum mujhse naaraz hogi.......main jaanata hoon ki meri galti hai.....magar.......

kk:magar kya su?..........haan bohut naaraz hoon main tumse....aur sahi kaha tha tumne tum mujhse pyaar nahi karte. 😭 😭

su:nahi kk plz aisa mat kaho.....
kk:sahi keh rahi hoon main.......nahi karte mujhse pyaar.........