FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 31

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kk:agar mujhse pyaar karte to mujh par vishwaas bhi karte.....magar tumne to mujhe is kaabil samjha hi nahi. 😭 😳

su:nahi kk........aisa nahi hai.

kk:aisa hi hai.......itna bhi bharosa nahi tha mujh par ki mujhse apni takleef baant sako........kya mera tumhari zindagi par koi haq nahi........kya mera tum par koi haq nahi..... 😭 😳

kk was also crying saying all this........

su:haq hai.........poora haq hai.........aur main jaanta hoon ki maine tumhe bohut taqleef bohut dard diye hain.......

kk (crying more) :haan tumne sach mein mujhe bohut chot pohchanyi hai.......mujhe hi nahi tumne mere su ko bhi bohut chot di hai.......

while crying kk gets a little pain....

su:kk plz ro mat dekho tumhari tabiyat aur kharaab ho jaayegi.....

kk:hoti hai to ho jaaye.......tumhe kya.......tum to mujhe chod kar jaane waale the naa.......yeh bhi nahi socha ki main tumhare jee nahi sakti....kuch hota hai ho jaaye.....main mar bhi jaaon.......

su comes closer and keeps his hand on her mouth...

su:kk plz aisi baaten mat karo ....(then wiping off her tears says )....theek hai tum jo chahe mujhe sazaa de do......par mujhse dur jaane ki baat mat karo.

kk:haan doongi main tumhe sazaa.....

she takes her hand upwards

kk:waada karo ki ab tum mujhse kuch bhi nahi chupaoge....chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye......mujhe kabhi bhi chod ke jaane ki baat bhi nahi karoge.....aur hamesha mere saath rahoge. 😃 😃

su (smiles and keeps his hand on hers) :waada karta hoon....kabhi tumhe chod ke nahi jaaonga.......ab to mujhe maaf kar do....... 😳 😛

kk crying bitterly hugs him tightly.......he too hugs her and kisses her....... 😊

kk:i luv u.........i luv u very much.

su:i luv u too.....

then kk keeps her head on his chest and falls asleep,while sitting,........su sees her sleeping.....and kisses her forehead. 😳 😊

then ra comes in....

ra:aaj kk ko itne dino baad chain ki neend sote dekh raha hoon....

su smiles.

ra:tum yaheen par ho to main ghar jaakar aata hoon aur sabko bata doonga ki kk ab theek hai.....

su:haan theek hai.

ra goes away....su makes kk lie down properly.....she is still asleep.....he tries getting up but kk was holding her hand tightly......so he just sits there...besides her.......

now i m tired...........cont........

hope u all like it. 😊

👏 itz awesome!!!!!!!!! phew!! that scene was really touching..it was 😭 but 😳 !! great going!!

Hey I was just thinkin... before bumping of Vishals character 😃…we should atleast give him a proper exit so here it is…😉

Back at kk's house

All guests are standing there gossiping…Vishal has broken down into tears in the mandup…😭

Vi's dad: im gonna abbreviate him Vd...ok 👍🏼

Vd: (puts his hand on vi's shoulder) Beta…

Vi: (in a state) nahi pyar karti thi who mujse.. kk mujse pyar nahi karti papa..😕 (tears in his eyes)

Vd: (bends down to console him) Vishal apne aap ko sambalo 😳

Vi: kyun kiya usne aesa mere saath papa…😭 (tearfully) agar mujse shaadi nahi karna chahti thi to yeh sub kyun kiya😭… kyun? 😭...kyun meri feeling aur emotion key saath istara kilwaar kiya usney…😭

Vd: (not listening to Vi's sobbing) Vishal…beta uto chalo ghar chaltein hai…😕

Vi: papa 😭..(continues sobbing) aap ko pata hai… I hate her 😭…(angrily) nafrat karta hoon main usse…aaj jo huwa uskay baad who sirf meri nafrat key kabil hai 😡…pyar keh nahi …aur sumit, mera dost…mera dost papa. 😡.(looks to his dad helplessly) 😕

Vd: (manages to get Vishal up on his feet…he too is feeling angry and upset seeing vishal like this)

Vi: Dost kehta tah mein sumit ko 😡…dehkiyeh papa sumit neh kitni achi dosti nibhai 😡… jis haath se khusiyan dee thi ussi haath se sub kuch aaj waapis cheen liya hai ussney

Vd: (pulling him towards the door)

Vi: choroonga nahi mein sumit ko 😡…khabi nahi 😭…usko iss baat ki bohut baree keemat chukani pareygi 😡…( he continues ranting on whilst his father drags him outside)

Finally he leaves and all guests are just astounded by the drama that has taken place…slowly every1 starts to leave …muttering to each other.😕

GREAT PARTS VERNI AND AMRIT!!!!

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: raji05

..it was 😭 but 😳 !! great going!!

Hey raji i c even u like talkin thru the emtoicons!!! lol 😆

Originally posted by: raji05

😳
that was soooooooo awesome!!! Thank God I read it after you wrote both the parts....the suspense would have been too much to bear 😆 😆 😆
Really enjoyed the dramatic part - rahul screaming tehro! and su revealed...you caught me goggling the first time though - when kk's mum said tehro... 😆 😆
thanks for the great parts!!
And btw, hoping kk gets okay sooooooooon and they get married!! 😉 😃 😳

hehe i knew it would catch u guys out...atleast u were brave enuff to admit it...and a genuine thanks to you for taking the time to feedback with some amazing comments.... Thank you! 😳

awesome part 👏
hope vishal character doesnt become negative
n kk gets wel soon n thy both (sukk) gets married

Originally posted by: janu_2006

awesome part 👏
hope vishal character doesnt become negative
n kk gets wel soon n thy both (sukk) gets married

Thanks for the appreciation...

well your jus gonna have to wait n watch...😉 all will be revealed soon enuff!!!! 😆

n janu keep posting n keep rockin 👍🏼