FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 24

thnx anku ,raji n preethi 4 ur comments 😊 😃..this means alot
n we will surely have some rain dance 4 su-kk..thnx 4 idea preethi..but u'll have to wait n stay tuned 😉

The next day kk goes to the meeting…whilst su stays at the hotel…he finishes off some outstanding office work and makes some important business call. Kk returns from the meeting and decides to sit in the gardens for a while to relax. 😊

Su gets fed up with all the work😡 and decides to get some fresh air…he too goes to the gardens….

Su relived to get away from all the work strolls into the gardens…but stops abruptly on seeing kk. She is sitting on the grass reading a book peacefully…he admires her standing there. 😊

He goes up to her from behind and grabs the book…

Kk: (screams as it was unexpected) 😕

Su: (laughs uncontrollably) 😆

Kk: (she quickly turns around) SUMIT!!!! 😲

Su: continues laughing and sits down next to her 😆 😆 😆

Kk: tum!..😡...tum na…(getting angry at him)

Su: sumit baad mein karna tum pehle apni shakle dehko! 😛(points at her and smiles)

Kk: dara diya….(slaps his arm) bohut maza aaya na! 😡(annoyed)

Su: (looks at her naugtily)…haan 😉

Shes about to hit him again when he tries to get up and run but she holds his arm and he falls back….he lies on her lap

Kk: (blushing)…sumit…shakes him 😳 😳 😳

Su: kk mujhe disturb mutt karo mujhe neend aah rahee hai…plz 😉

Kk: sumit uto….😳

Su: hmmm kya hai? 😊...maine kaha naa disturb nah karo…😉(pretending to sleep)

Kk: sub dekh rahe hain…😕

Su: to kya hua?..😃..tum bhi apnii aankhen baad karlo phir who nazar nahi aaienge! 😆(laffs to himself)

Kk: sumit yeh funny nahi tah 😳

Su: turns towards kk and puts his arm around her waist 😛

Kk: (surprised) arre…😲

Su: ssshhhh….kitna bolti ho 😳

Kk: tum jo suntey nahi ho…isliye 😊

Su: acha kaho…kaunsi important baat hai…jis ki wajah se mein paanch minate bhi nahi so sakta 😳

Kk: pehle tum uto! 😈

Su: (shakes his head sweetly) …nahi 😛

Kk: plz!!!....(innocently) 😳

Su: kk…(sighs) tum bhi naa…😕.meri koi baat nahi maan thi ho….

Unwillingly he gets up….

Su: acha baatao?

Kk: kahoon? 😊

Su: haan baba kaho?

Kk: (goes closer to him)

Su: (gets happy) 😃

Kk: maine yeh kehna tah…(goes closer)…😉

Su: eagerly waiting with a big smile on his face 😆

Kk: …kay….pushes him and quickly runs off

Su: arre yeh kya baat hui…😕

Su gets up and runs after her…kk purposely runs to a secluded place…finally su catches up with her and grabs her tight from behind…

Su: pakar liya tumhe miss. Cheater 👎🏼

Kk: hey maine kub cheating ki?😛

Su: acha to tumne cheating nahi ki? 😡

Kk: nahi mere baat puri nahi hui 😉

Su: turns her in his arms so that she faces him 😊

Kk: looks him in the eyes and puts her arms round his neck 😳

Su: (moves closer)😆…acha to baat puri karo phir

Kk: ok…maine bus itna kehna tah kay….I love you ❤️

Su: (smiles) luv u too! ❤️

He holds her tighter and brings her really close to him…he leans forwards to kiss her…😳 😳 😳 😳

…but his phone rings! everything becomes blurred…suddenly su comes back to reality…😲he sees kk still sitting there at a distance on the grass reading and then su looks at his phone dazzled …he picks up its rahul.

haha bet u thought i had gone mad when u were reading...bet u couldn't believe ur eyes at first!!!! 😆 😆

good track henna 😊 initially i read the starting twice to make sure what i actually read was correct 😆 😆

awesome.pls continu
i was witing eagerly since yesterday.my request is:
1.pls dont bring vishal beteen kk-su
2.let kk know about reality
3.i wish there were scenes where kk is ill and su is concerned and vice-versa

thank u
ps i hope u ll consider my request.
bye i will write when i am free

so the phone is of rahul
su picks it up - hello..
ra - sumit...kya hua..doctar ne kya kaha..
su - kuch nahin...bas main operation kar va raha hoon...
rahul happy on hearing this says - gr8...dekhna ab tum bahut jaldi theek ho jayoge...
sumit smiled on his misfortune - nahin..aesa kabhi nahin hoga...
with a long pause....
rahul' smile fades...
su continues - operation k baad mere bachne k chances ....zyada nahin hai...
he started shedding tears....looks at kk sitting n reading...
ra - sumit tum itne pessimistic kyun ho rahe ho...tum zaroor theek ho jayoge..agar tumhe kuch ho gaya to kk ka kya hoga..use kaun sambhalega...
sumit sees vishal came n sits alongwith kk - wo khush rahegi...ab aur gam nahin sehne doonga use...
ra getting a lil hint what he wanted to say - kya matlab...tum kehna kya chahte ho...
su - kuch nahin....(he didn't wanted rahul to know nething about vishal's presence)
ra - main kk ko kya jawaab doonga...
su - wo tumse sawaal poochegi hi nahin...
ra - mujhe kuch samajh nahin aa raha sumit tum kya keh rahe ho...
su - main kuch nahin keh raha...kismat apna faisla pehle hi keh chuki hai..phir main bolne wala kaun hota hoon...
he is continously watching kk with vishal
rahul too has tears in his eyes
su - shayad yeh aakhri baar main tumse baat kar raha hoon..pata nahin phir mauka mile ya nahin...
ra - tumhe kuch nahin hoga...
su - ab to umeed karne ka bhi koi fayeda nahin...
rahul with a heavy heart - bye..take care...
su - hmmmm...u too tc of urself n kk...
he cuts the fone....
he is in alot of pain mentally....he is crying...
there...kk just feels lil uncomfortable...
vi - kya hua...
kk - kuch nahin...aesa laga jaise...
vi - jaise...
kk - kisi ne bade pyaar k saath yaad kiya...
vi - kisne...
kk looks in his eyes - sumit ne😊

she feels as if sumit needs her at that point of time..but how can she explain her feelings to vishal who doesn't listen her..

so she gets up n moves away from there...

sumit sees this n understands that still alot is needed to b done...
he thinks sumthing...

Originally posted by: jj thomson

awesome.pls continu
i was witing eagerly since yesterday.my request is:
1.pls dont bring vishal beteen kk-su
2.let kk know about reality
3.i wish there were scenes where kk is ill and su is concerned and vice-versa

thank u
ps i hope u ll consider my request.
bye i will write when i am free

vishal is not coming in b/w su-kk..don't worry..we won't let that happen...

we want all of u to wait eagerly 4 the next parts..if kk knows the truth..then whole fun will b gone..sum suspense is needed....u'll know it shortly😉

romantic scenes will b added soon...just keep telling us what u want..n we'll definately serve u with that but it will b some extra spicy..beleive me..

note - a wonderful story is waiting 4 u ahead....just hold ur hearts tightly

Hey guys please don't be silents readers 😭

plz be more interactive! 👍🏼

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n Amrit gets very upset when there is no returns for her hard work 😡

...n i don't want to see her upset in the future 😕

so just take two minutes more to reply 😉

thank you! 👍🏼

wow gr8 part
hope kk gets 2 knw abt su's illness(i think bt)nt sure so nt mentioning it
n hope vishal helps her(kk) 2 knw da truth abt su's illness soooooooooooooooooon

👏 very good really appreciate ur work
more interesting than real kk
i am eagerly waiting for the updates
plzzzzzz continue 👏

omgggggggggg wowwwwwwwww whhttttttttt a lovely update...w8ting fr the breath taking story ahead 😉 😳 😳

keep it up guys 👏 👏