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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

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Posted: 19 years ago

#31

tht's shooo shweet anku 😳 .............akele hum akele tum, jo hum tum sang hain to fir kya gam...... 😆 😆

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Sumra

@Shazia_haya

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Posted: 19 years ago

#32

kya baat hai dono pehle time ek movie ke liye gaye or end mein dono ladki ke ghar akele hai......nice anku keep it up!!

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Rachandeep

@Rachu_1987

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Posted: 19 years ago

#33

heheheh shazia u shud also write!!!

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Ankita

@anku2cute

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Posted: 19 years ago

#34

ab koi likhega ya sweet sweet hi kehte rahoge 😡

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Rachandeep

@Rachu_1987

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Posted: 19 years ago

#35

lol anku gusseh kyun hoti...chalo main hi likhti hoon

Kumkum opens the door and lets sumit in, he looks around
"acha ghar hai" he says
"thanks" she replies "aao"
She takes him into the living room and asks him to sit
"kuch loge?" she asks softly
he looks at her and replies "nahin aao beto mere saath"
Shes hesitant but sits down, theyre both silent for a while, Sumit keeps staring at her, she notices him staring and becomes shy.
Suddenly the lights go off, Kumkum gets scared and hugs Sumit
"kya hua?" he asks concerned
"mujhe andhere mein daar lagta hai" she says
"koi baat nahin main hoon na, koi candles hai?"
she looks in his eyes "haan hai lekin kitchen mein..."
he smiles at her to reassure nothing will happen
"chalo hum lehte hai" he says
She smiles at him and goes with him into the kitchen to get the candles, once they get them she lights one, Su sees her face light up with the candle and smiles

next.......................

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Ankita

@anku2cute

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Posted: 19 years ago

#36

wow gr8 write up....hug bhi kar liya...hmmmmmm

nice...very nice 😳

chalo sum1 write...ill write a bit later 😛 😛

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Rachandeep

@Rachu_1987

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Posted: 19 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover
wow gr8 write up....hug bhi kar liya...hmmmmmm

nice...very nice 😳

chalo sum1 write...ill write a bit later 😛 😛

lol hug tho hona hi thaaaa haan sum1 else continue.....nahin toohhhh don ko tumhare peeche ladoon ge😆😆

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Ankita

@anku2cute

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Posted: 19 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: rachandeep

lol hug tho hona hi thaaaa haan sum1 else continue.....nahin toohhhh don ko tumhare peeche ladoon ge😆😆

😆😆😆

han sum1 plzz do write else humse bachke rehna😆

n don se bhi😆

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Rachandeep

@Rachu_1987

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Posted: 19 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

😆😆😆

han sum1 plzz do write else humse bachke rehna😆

n don se bhi😆

lol😆

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neela

@sukk rocks

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Posted: 19 years ago

#40

hey guys great rite up...herez abit from meee..
after lightening te candles kk leads su to her bedroom...dere is wind so the door behind dem shuts..kk is feelin very awkward n nervous..

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