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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 aman tum bhi na....cummon we need more ppl 2 write..aman eks mehr......ne1
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

hmmmm dear....its sumit kumkum luv story n no jatin😛

so hope ur confusion is clear n now plzzz do write d story....

rachuu gr8 wrk.....

sum new ppl plzzz write na.....its so interesting yaar😉

ok thnx 4 explaining anku...acha ab koi continue to kare...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plzz sum1 continue yaar 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sab log continue karne ke liye bolte hi rahoge ya continue karoge bhi 😆 😆 😆 ............chalo koi baat nahi main kahaani ko aage badati hoon & tht widout any jatin 😆 😆
They both enter the movie hall, at that instant the smell of popkorn reaches kumkum's nose & she longingly looks at the popkorn centre. He looks at her & understands that she wants popkorn. He says " i'll b back in a moment." She wonders where he has gone to. After 10 mins. he comes back with a big packet of popkorn.
She looks at him & then at the popkrn packet & then says " how did you know that i wanted popkorn?"
He says " It was written on our face when you were looking at the popkorn counter."
She says " Thank you "
"uff.....tum ye thanks kehna kab band karogi??? maine tumse kaha hai na ki dosti mein no thank you aur no sorry" he replies.
She smiles naughtily & says " par maine kab kaha ki main tumhari dost hoon"
"Achha???? to fir mere saath film dekhne kyu aayi ho ?? he asks.
"vaise hi "
"vaise hi koi bhi sharif ladki kisi bhi ladke ke saath movie dekhne nahi jaati"
"kya matlab???? kya main sharif nahi hoon??"
"maine aisa kab kaha?"
"par tumhare kehne ka matlab to yahi tha na"
"accha baba sorry............galti ho gayi mujhse"
"mister..........dosti mein no sorry & no thank you!!! apna banaya hua rule khud hi bhool gaye"
"iska matlab ki hum dost hain??"
"umm.............haan"
"to ab........."
"ab kya???"
"ab andar chalo, varna picture shuru ho jaayegi"

itna saara to likh diya hai maine...........ab agar kisi ne continue nahi kiya na to 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
😆 lovely part nidhi.... il try n continue 2moro 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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2morow has cum...........par kahaani to abhi tak vahi atki hui hai 😕 ...........koi kuch to likho 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great job nature.. 😆 rach hun y don't u continue...ok herez abit from meee..they both walk in the hall...n then take their seats..
ok i rote alot.. 😆 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok since no1 else is continuing....

they sit down and the film starts, Kumkum is watching the film, Sumit keeps stealing glances at her
He wants to put his arm around her but is scared she might get the wrong idea
He decides to try, so he lifts his arm and is about to put it around Kumkum when she turns and looks at him, he quicly puts is arm down
Kumkum "kya hua?"
"kuch nahin" he says..he waits for a while and whispers "main abhi aaya"
He gets up and goes outside to the bathroom, he starts thinking
"kitna bewakuf hoon main, why didnt you tell her you wanted to put your arm around her stupid"
He goes back inside and watches the film with Kumkum
slowly Kumkum reaches for Sumits hand, he is surprised but smiles, the film ends and they go outside.
"tumhe ghar chordoon" he asks
"yes please" she says.........


someone else nw
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29

wow kya likha hai...chalo ill continue...

sumit is thnking ki kumkum ne mera haath pakra does she like me....he is engrossed in hs thuts...

and kk is thnking main kya sumit ko pasand karti hun....han acha ladka hai n they both go

now both r in d car n luking at eact othr...lukd as if it ws luv at tht sight 😳

both were engrossed...suddenly juhiz cell ring..its her mom

beta kab tak aa jaogi...woh actually hum sabko bahar jaana hai isiliye tum ghar sambhal lena..hum log raat tak aa jayenge....juhi is blushing 2 hear ths

she asks husein if he culd b wid her till her parents r back...he agrees instantly 😳 😳 .... now both drive 2 juhiz house n in d mean tym hu tells her mom tht he wl b a lil late

now both at her house....

okk now sum1 continue😳

Edited by ankuhujulover - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oooooooo lovely anku.....dono akele kya baat hai 😳

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