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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hum Tum Part 4

Previously.....Sharman is trying to befriend Rach but she wants nothing to do with him, Sharman found out that Rach is Siya's friend....now to continue....

Place - Whadwa House

The Whadwa family are preparing for Siya's mehndi ceremony.

Kumkum - haan voh phool vahan rakdo, Methi chacha saab kahana ban gaya??

Methi Chacha - haan sab ban gaya

Kumkum - very good, Dhruv aao ghar kaisa lagtha hai?

Dhruv - wow mom ghar kitna sajaya hai, ma vo Sharman kahin nazar nahin aa raha

Kumkum - yahein kahin hoga, achi tara se dekhlo, main kitchen mein jathi

Dhruv searches for Sharman he finds him on the terrace with Rach, at first he hesitates but then begins to listen to their conversation.......

Sharman - so tum aaj kya pehne vali ho

Rach - bas kuch dekhloon gi, kyun?

Sharman - nahin bas aise, so erm colour kya pehne vali ho

Rach - jab mujhe yeh nahin pata ke main kaun se kapre pehnoo gi tho colour kaise pata hoga?

Sharman - of course, how stupid of me

Behind them Dhruv coughs, Sharman turns around

Sharman - oh bro tum yahan, kya baat hai

Dhruv - yeh tho main tumse poochne vaala tha, aaj tum itni jaldi ut gaye

Sharman - voh Siya ki mehndi jo hai, isliye

Dhruv - oh i see......anyways chalo change ho jao tum dono

Rach walks off

Sharman - kya bro main usse baat kar raha tha

Dhruv - haan maine suna tha, tum uske kapre ki colour kyun pooch rahe the

Sharman - bas aise hi generally

Dhruv - acha, teek hai come on jao get changed Siya ke ghar bhi jaana hai (Dhruv laughs)

*Later that day at Siya's house, Kumkum and Rach are applying mehndi on Siya, Dhruv, Sumit and Sharman are sitting on the settee witht he other guests*

Sharman - god yeh kitna boring hai

Rach - tumhe tho har waqt boring lagta hai

Sharman - vaise tumne abhi tak bataya nahin ke hum dost hai ke nahin

Rach - dosti........

Dhruv - hai Sharman kuch nach gana ho jaye

Sharman starts smiling, Rach walks away but then she hears Sharman singing 😆

(sharman to rach)
kehdo ke tum mere dil main rahoge
kehdo ke tum mujhse dosti karoge
kehdo ke tum mere dil main rahoge
kehdo ke tum mujhse dosti karoge

(rach to sharman)
dekhoon gi, sochoon gi, kal parson kuch kahoon gi

(sharman to rach)
kehdo ke tum mere dil main rahoge
kehdo ke tum mujhse dosti karoge

(rach to sharman)
oh dekhoon gi, sochoon gi, kal parson kuch kahoon gi

(rach to siya)
hum saathi kitne purane
phir kyun hai itne anjaane
hum saathi kitne purane
phir kyun hai itne anjaane
kya rang laye na jaane
bachpan ki yeh dostane

(dhruv to sharman)
kab kahan kya kabar ja rookhe yeh nazar

(siya to rach)
arre kya pata kaun hai kis ka yahan humsafar

(sharman to rach)
kehdo ke tum mere dil main rahoge
kehdo ke tum mujhse dosti karoge

(rach to sharman)
oh dekhoon gi, sochoon gi, kal parson kuch kahoon gi

(sharman to rach)
kehdo ke tum mere dil main rahoge
kehdo ke tum mujhse dosti karoge

(sharman to siya)
tum bhi tho ho dost meri
tum tho mera saath dhedo
tum bhi tho ho dost meri
tum tho mera saath dhedo
apni saheli ka mere
haathon mein tum haath dhedo

(siya to sharman)
intezaar intezaar aur kya hai yeh pyar

(sharman to rach)
jhhot hi yeh sahein kehdo ek baar

(rach to sharman)
lo maine kaha tumse dosti karoon gi
tum bhi kaho mujhse dosti karoge

(sharman to rach)
dekhoon ga(acha), sochoon ga(oh ho), kal parson kuch kahoon ga

(rach to sharman)
eh maine kaha tumse dosti karoon gi
tum bhi kaho mujhse dosti karoge

(sharman to rach)
dekhoon ga, sochoon ga, kal parson kuch kahoon ga

Sumit - vaah kya gaana hai, Dhruv tum Siya ke liye kuch nahin gaho ge

Sharman (whispering) - tho hum dost hai?

Rach - maine kaha tho tha......

Sharman shakes Rach's hand, both are smiling at each other meanwhile Dhruv begins to sing for Siya

(dhruv to siya)
ah-ah-aashiqui mein teri
ja-ja-jayegi jaan meri
de de dil china town mein
de de dil china town mein
hai kasam hai meri

ah-ah-aashiqui mein teri
ja-ja-jayegi jaan meri

tu meri janat hai
tu hi meri chahat hai
tu meri beecheni
tu hi meri rahat hai
tu hi manzil meri

ah-ah-aashiqui mein teri
ja-ja-jayegi jaan meri

main teri deewanagi mein hadh se guzar chakahoon
kya batoon kis kadar main tujpe mar jakaoon
main teri deewanagi mein hadh se guzar chakahoon
kya batoon kis kadar main tujpe mar jakaoon

tu meri saasein hai
tu hi meri dhadkan hai
tu meri madhoshi
tu hi meri tharpan hai
tu hi manzil meri

(siya to dhruv)
ah-ah-aashiqui mein teri
ja-ja-jayegi jaan meri
ah-ah-aashiqui mein teri
ja-ja-jayegi jaan meri

har ghari nazar mein hai chehra sirf tera
kya karoon main ab nahin hai bas mein dil ye mera
har ghari nazar mein hai chehra sirf tera
kya karoon main ab nahin hai bas mein dil ye mera

(dhruv to siya)
tu meri tanhaai
tu hi meri mehfil hain
tu meri betaabi
tu hi mera qaatil
tu hi manzil meri

ah-ah-aashiqui mein teri
ja-ja-jayegi jaan meri
ah-ah-aashiqui mein teri
ja-ja-jayegi jaan meri

de de dil china town mein
de de dil cina town mein

(both)
ah-ah-aashiqui mein teri
ja-ja-jayegi jaan meri
ah-ah-aashiqui mein teri
ja-ja-jayegi jaan meri

everyone is very happy, after all the dancing Sharman manages to grab Rach and takes her to an empty room

Rach - kya kar raho ho, yahan kyun laye mujhe

Sharman - voh main tumse kuch erm kehna tha

Rach - bolo phir...kya baat hai

Sharman - voh main erm voh

Rach - kya hai Sharman bolo bhi

Sharman - tum aaj bohat khoobsurat lag rahi ho

Rach (blushes) - thanx, tum bhi aaj teek hi lag rahe ho

Sharman - bas! teek hi?? maine blue issiliye paya tha ke main tumse match kar saktha tha. oh damn kuch zyada hi bhol gaya

Rach - Sharman tumne mere liye......thats so sweet

Sharman is smiling, Rach is about to walk away but Sharman holds her hand

Rach - Sharman mera haath chordo

Sharman - mmmm nahin

Rach - Sharman tum......

before Rach can finish her sentance she sees that Sharman's mom, Kumkum is standing at the door.......to be continued........ 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
GR8 part GR8 👏 going yar ,keep it up gr8 WORK
LOVE
SONA
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
hmmmmmmmmmm.............to love-story aage badh rahi hai.......gud 😉 😆
infact a wonderful part. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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glad u guys liked hey lovely siggies shilpz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: rachandeep

glad u guys liked hey lovely siggies shilpz


thnks rach....buts urs is awesum 👏
n i was jus thinkin y not u replace d current writeers of kk😉 u write so gud i feel lyk im watching it...keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
rach ji your taking so much time u must be thinking a lot what should be the next scene.
please write the special part of kk-ssas writters of kumkum serial are not showing anthing like that 😭 .
atleast u do it 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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rach i luv ur story. 😳 its so good. wat an entrance u made. u r so good. well done. 👏 👏 👏 continue, ill be waiting for the next part. 😛 its like u r writin 2 stories. both r really good. 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww u guys r 2 sweeet ino ive made u wait but heres the next part

previously Sharman and Rach begin to get close, at the mehndi ceremony Sharman grabs Rach's hand she asks him to let go but he doesn't listen, before she could say anything else Kumkum is at the door, now to continue

Hum Tum Part 5

Place - Whadwa House

Kumkum - Kya ho raha hai yahan?

Sharman - ma voh

Sharman looks and realises he is still holding Rach's hand, he quickly lets go, Rach walks out the room, Sharman follows but Kumkum stops him

Kumkum - ruk, tumne uska haath kyun pakra tha

Sharman - ma voh hum, bas aise

Kumkum - tum mujhe pagal samaj the ho, kya tum aur voh..

Sharman - nahin ma, aisa kuch nahin hai

Kumkum - dhek Sharman, agar aisa kuch hai, tho tu bata de varna tumhare pa ko bulathi hoon ar voh tumse pooch le ge

Sumit - kya pooch na hai

Sharman - nahin pa, kuch nahin main aur ma bas aise baat kar rahe the (whispers to kumkum) ma please, agar kuch baat hui to main aap ko bata doon ga

Kumkum - kya hai Sumit, tum apne bete ko poocho......usse Dhruv ki shaadi mein kya chaiye

Sumit- bas itni si baat, arre chordo ye bach karo ge chalo, sab log intezar kar rahe ho

Kumkum - haan chalo

Kumkum and Sumit both leave, Sharman is left on his own

Sharman - god, bal bal bach gaya, yeh ma bhi na, galat waqt par aayi, aur Rach kahan gayi

Outside Rach is sitting with Siya, Kumkum comes up and takes Rach to the other side of the room

Kumkum - Sharman tho kuch nahin bataye ga, dheko agar tumhare aur Sharman ke bich

Rach - nahin aunty, aisa kuch nahin hai, Sharman ne bas aise hi haath pakra tha

Kumkum - dekh main teri ma sabmhan hoon, jaise mere liye Siya beti hai, vaise tum ho, to tum mujhe bata sakthi hai agar koi baat hai

Rach - haan aunty jaanti hoon, lekin sach mein aisi koi baat nahin hai

Kumkum - teek hai tum jao

Rach goes and enjoys the rest of the night while stealing glances at Sharman however Kumkum is convinced that both are lying and something is going on

Next Day, Sharman is at college waiting for Rach outside her music class, he hears her sing

Khwabon Khayalon Khwahisho Ko Chehra Mila
Mere Hone Ka Matlab Mila
Koi Mil Gaya Koi Mil Gaya
mmmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmmm

She goes outside and sees Sharman

Sharman - tum to ache mood main ho

Rach - tho koi gunah kiya

Sharman - nahin ye baat chordo, voh ma ne tumse kya kaha

Rach - kuch nahin, poocha ke humhare bich kuch hai ke nahin

Sharman(smiling) - aur tumne kya kaha

Rach - nahin, maine kaha hum dost hai

Sharman - bas dost....aur kuch nahin

Rach - kyun tumhe laga ke kuch aur hai

Sharman pulls Rach towards him

Rach - kya kar rahe ho

Sharman - jo dil mein aaya

Rach - Sharman chordo koi aajayega

Sharman (softly) - aane do

Rach - (while looking in Sharmans eyes) koi dekhlega

Sharman - dekhlene do

Rach closes her eyes as Sharman leans towards her, both their hearts are racing. Rach feels as if Sharman is about to kiss her but instead he whispers

Sharman (whispers) - jab tak tum nahin kaho gi, main kuch nahin karo ga

He lets Rach go and walks away leaving Rach confused yet happy, later that day Rach is at the Whadwa House, in her room and all she can think about is Sharman
She has a flash back of Sharman holding her and whispering to her when Dhruv comes in the room

Dhruv - tum kiske kiyalon mein kohi ho

Rach (blushes)- voh bas aise hi

Dhruv - vaise shayid tumhe pata nahin lekin Sharman ki bhi yahin halat hai

Rach - tumhe kaise pata ke main Sharman ke baare.......

Dhruv - lo tumne khud hi khediya, vaise tumne usse bataya

Rach - nahin

Dhruv- to tumhe usse batana chaiye

Rach - haan bataoon gi, lekin usse thoda tarpa ke

Dhruv (laughs) - yeh hui na baat, acha tum kahne ke liye aaja

At the dining table, Rach sits down, Sharman comes and sits next to her, secretly under the table Sharman holds Rach's hand

Rach (whispers) - chordo, sab yehi hai

Sharman (whispers) - to dekh to nahin rahe

Rach (whispers) - tho bas hato

Sumit - tum dono kya batein kar rahe ho

Rach - kuch nahin uncle

Kumkum sees that Sharman is holding Rach's hand

Kumkum - Sharman tum ek haat ke saath kyun ka rahe ho, dusra haat kahan hai

Sharman - ma ab aap ko kya, main ek haat ke saath kaoo ya dono

Kumkum - janti hoon tumhara dosra haat free nahin hai

Sumit - voh kyun

Kumkum - isne Rach ka haat jo pakra hai

Sharman quickly lets go, Rach gets up blushes and runs into her room, Siya and Kumkum go after her

Siya - to tumhari chori pakri gayi, tumne mujhe kyun nahin bataya

Rach - kya bata thi

Kumkum - yehi ke tum Sharman ko pasand karthi ho

Rach (blushes) - voh main......

Kumkum - to tumne us din mujhse jhoot kaha tha, lekin koi baat nahin hai, Siya aur Dhruv ki shaadi ke baad hum tumhari aur Sharman ki bhi shaadi kardoon ge

Rach - aunty aap.....

Kumkum - dekho agar tum aur Sharman ek dusre ko pasand karte to is mein harj hi kya hai, main Sharman se baat karthi hoon

Rach - nahin aunty, main kudh hi........

Kumkum - teek hai kudh baat karlo, main Sumit se baat karti hoon

Kumkum goes, she sees that Sharman was standing outside listening to everything, he has a big smile on his face, he gives Kumkum a big hug

Sharman - thanks ma, ab aap hi pa se baat karo, mujh mein himat nahin hegi

Kumkum - fikar maat karo, main hi baat karooon gi

Inside Rach is very happy, she is thinking about Sharman

Siya -ab tum Sharman ke baare mein soch na bandh karo

Rach blushes and hugs Siya

Ab aage kya hoga Rach aur Sharman ke pyar ki kahani mein, Find out in part 6.........

Edited by rachandeep - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
Wow.. u r soo goood 😛 can't wait to find out what happens next... 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy gooooooooooooooooooooooooooood waah waah!!!!!!!!! 👏

oye tumhari story mein koi twist ya koi villain nahi hoga kya??????????

😛 kuch to daalo yaar warna interesting kaise hogi? 😉

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