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Posted: 19 years ago
omg..i noe hu it is!!! its that guy..........ummm wats his name....ahh...its prem rite??? omg wat if it is
😭 nywayz..wounderful part as usual...cant wait till next part...wud write a longer comment, but gotta go do homework 😭 ttyl..byeee luv ya lotzz 😃 😛

Aman 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx guys 4 ur comments......hmmmm shahid.....ull jus have 2 wait and read 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey even I feel it's Prem.......maybe he is now acting as Sujal too!! Anyways I'm impatient I hope the next part is a normal part!!
Edited by Shazia_haya - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
So happy man....I'm so happy.....glad it's gonna be a NORMAL part!!ok then I'll go and sleep now it's late already and got to go school tomorrow!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Mystery person being disclosed in todays update oh and erm....hes not prem 😉

Previously

He runs off towards the shadow, the person runs off, Sharman chases them for a while but loses them

Rach - kya hua?

Sharman - pata nahin kahan chale gaya

Now to continue

Part 28

Rach is highly disturbed by the stalker, Sharman tries reassuring her

Sharman - dheko im sure sab teek hoga..tum chinta mat karo

Rach - kaise chinta mat karoon, tumhe yaad hena...hmm yaad hai

Sharman - haan sab yaad hai....

Rach - humhari shaadi hi nahin ho payi uski vajaa se...yahan tak ke humhari shaadi ke din.......

**FLASHBACK**

Rach is with Sharman....its been a month since Prem's death

Sharman - hey kahan koyi hui ho?

Rach - bas soch rahi hoon ke kisi ki nazar na lage hum par

Sharman - dont worry kuch nahin hoga..ab kuch hi hafton mein humhari shaadi hai. dont worry ok

While these two lovebirds are having a good time...someone has just returned to Mumbai from the US. Hes on his motor bike, he stops outside a house....takes his helmet off but his face isnt shown.
He walks inside the house..sees that its been deserted

????? - kahan gaye sab.....

He looks all over the place, he stops at a door, he knocks

????? - bhaiya....

Noone answers so he opens the door, the room is vacated, hes mistified about where his brother is. he searches the house and finally finds an address. He gets on his bike and goes there...coincidently its the Whadwa House

Kumkum - kaho...kisse milna hai?

????? - erm.....pata nahin...

Kumkum - pata nahin?

Rach comes out from the kitchen looking for Kumkum

Rach - aunty.....aunty kahan ho aap

She sees the guy

Rach - oh my god....Nikhil tum

The guy is finally shown....hes looking very handsome wearing jeans, t shirt and leather jacket

Introducing Deepak Bajaj as Nikhil Basu


Kumkum - Rach tum isse janti ho

Rach - haan aunty....yeh Nikhil hai...Prem ka chota bhai

Nikhil - bhabhi....aap yahan kya kar rahe ho.i went to the house no one was there..aisa laga ke voh ghar khafi dino se nahin use kiya

Rach - Nikhil...voh ..erm..tum aao yahan beto

Nikhil - bhabhi...bhaiya kahan hai?

Rach - voh tumhare bhaiya...hes erm..hes gone out of town

Nikhil - out of town?

Rach - haan voh...kuch kaam aahgaya tha tho usse jaana pada....

Nikhil - koi number hai? ya address..bhabhi i really need to talk to him

Rach - nahin...voh ek jaaga rehta nahin tho isliye no address or number

Nikhil - hmm ok bhabhi

He notices Rach isnt wearing a mangal sutar or sindoor

Nikhil - bhabhi yeh kya..aap ka mangal sutar aur sindoor?

Rach - voh erm i was getting changed tho isliye pehna nahin

Nikhil - ok

Later Kumkum talks to Rach

Kumkum - tumne usse jhoot kyun bola? usse kyun nahin bataya ke uska bhai mar chuka hai....aur usne tumhe dhoka diya aur ab tum doosri shaadi kar rahi ho

Rach - nahin aunty main nahin bata sakti...aap Nikhil ko nahin jaante.....jitna gussah Prem ko aata tha....us se kahi zyada gussah Nikhil ko aata hai agar usne apne bhai ke khilaf kuch ulta seedha suna

Kumkum and Rach keep talking......3 days later....Nikhil comes back to WH and bumps into Shravan

Shravan - Nikhil...wow how are you

Nikhil - great Shravan....

Shravan - voh im very sorry

Nikhil - kis liye?

Shravan - Prem jaisa bhi tha....voh tumhara bhai aur Di ka pati tha

Nikhil is shocked....hes confused as to why Shravan said "tha"

Shravan - jab Di ke saath usne itna burah kiya tho usse moht tho milni thi

Nikhil gets a fit of anger he begins hitting Shravan

Nikhil - kya kaha tune mere bhai ke baare mein....huh...tumhari himmat kaise hui yeh sab kehne ke...how dare you

Nikhil continues hitting him until someone stops him and slaps him...its his bhabhi Rach

Nikhil - bhabhi aapne mujhe....yeh saala kya bakwaas kar raha tha bhaiya ke baare mein

Rach - CHUP! tumne isse maara kyun....isliye kyunki isne kaha ke tumhare bhaiya ne mujhe dhoka diya....

Nikhil is stunned

Rach - ya isliye kyunki isne kaha ke tumhara bhai mar chuka hai.....agar yeh baat hai tho kaan khol kar sunlo Nikhil....Prem is dead! voh mere saamne maara

Nikhil - nahin aap jhoot....mere bhaiya.....aapne kaha the ke voh business...

He collapses to the floor, Rach tries to support him but he pushes her, hes very angry

Nikhil - nahin bhabhi main jaanta hoon....aapne bhaiya ko maare...main aapko chordoon ga nahin...you killed my brother....you did

He loses his senses and starts to strangle Rach, Sharman and Dhruv get him off and throw him out the house

Nikhil - im not going to leave you....

**Fast forward to Rach and Sharmans wedding Day**

Everyones ahving fun...until...Nikhil shows up and starts ruining things. He gets very angry and points a gun to Sharmans head

Rach - Nikhil stop it..tum kya kar rahe ho

Nikhil - agar aap sochti hai ke Bhai ke jaane ke baad main aapko sukoon ki zindagi jeene doon ga. then youre wrong....aap isse chahte hai na....dheko kaise isse Bhai ke paas bejta hoon

Before Nikhil could shoot the gun, Sumit pushes him, Dhruv had called the police....Nikhil is arrested

Nikhil - main aaonga...aoonga aapki zindagi barbaat karne...main aaonga

***END OF FLASHBACK***

Sharman - lekin Nikhil tho jail vich hai...

Rach - tum vahan phone lagao..agar voh vahan hai tho yeh koi aur hai...agar nahin tho yeh vohi hai

Sharman phones the police...he is shocked

Rach - kya kaha?

Sharman - Nikhil....Nikhil.....jail se baagh gaya

Rach is shocked, she sits on the bed.....Nikhils words come to her mind

Nikhil - main aaonga...aoonga aapki zindagi barbaat karne...main aaonga.....

To Be continued

What does Nikhil have in store for Rach and Sharman...will he avenge his brother Prem's death.....Find out in part 29 😃


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Posted: 19 years ago
wonderful Rach.......well in a serious scene......you're gonna have a special part na.......but I hope it's a normal part next too 😳 .....but i have a feeling that itz gonna be special part!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
yea shazia.....i do 2 normal parts then a special 😊 glad u liked it
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey there will be no night, only days everyday if I don't like your updates!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
hw sweeet 😃 read the other one n comment on there as well 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
rach fav written 😛
waiting for spcl part next 😛

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