NewFF-Kya Yehi Pyar Hai....part 10-page 15 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: preethi

su suspended
sounds interesting cont soon



thanks a lot for reading it
and i will surely post the next asap
thanks again
mariam

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Posted: 16 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Shafoo

cool part plzz contuied soon



thank u so much
and thanks for reading it
thanks again
mariam
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
hey i've posted my comment😳
sorry for being late again...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ...Noorya...

Hey Mariam😊


sorry dear posting once
again my commtn late...


the part was just too good yaar!šŸ˜›
uffff but i just hate Sonam....baar baar kk ke middle
class hone ka mazak ura rahi hai😔😔

but yaar i also dont like su's behaviouršŸ˜•....
actually i dont like that sumit

i hope the real sumit bohut jald wapis aayega aur yeh wala jo
hai naa Sonam ke saath gayab ho jaaye


i really liked that veena goes to say sorry to kk
mom that was soo nice of her😳

and i hope su bhi sache dil se sorry kahega...
but i dont know ab voh baldla kiss tarah se lega kk sešŸ¤¢šŸ˜•
uff yaar jaldi sab theek karao thats killing mešŸ˜†šŸ˜†

sorry once again for my late comment😳

Love ušŸ¤—




its ok noory for ur late comment
i am gald that u liked the part...........
and sorry for making summit like this.........
he will be not taking any revenge
and he will be soon a good summit
and i hope u will like that summit
thanks for ur lovely comment...............
thanks a lot noorya.............
love u 2
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
hi guys i am back with my ff
and
sorry for being so late but form now on i won't be this late i promise u all
thanks a lot for reading the previous part and liking it and i am glad that u all are enjoying the ff
thanks again here is the next part


Part 5 - kumkum imaginary summit

Kumkum- Pooja uthna hamien bhar jana hain

Pooja - kumkum tu jaa main abhi nahi uthna wali, mujhay abhi aur sona hain.

Kumkum- thiak hain tu soo aur main..................aur main tujhe par pani dalti hoin.

Pooja - kumkum..................nahi kumkum nahi. Yeah tune kya kiya, acha kumkum mujhay yah tu bata ki ham jaa kaha rahein hain

Kumkum - aaaaaa.....................hum log shopping kar ne jaa rahein hain, aur dinner par bhi.

Pooja - chachi bhi ready hain.

Kumkum- nahi maa....................maa hum logo ke saath nahi chal rahi.

Pooja ' par kiyo........................accha kumkum tu mujhay sirf aur sirf 15 min de aur main yon ready ho kar aati hoin.

Kumkum- thiak hain.

Veera - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.........................kumkum, Pooja jaldi aao.

Kumkum- maa, Pooja yeah tu maa ki awaz hain, Pooja tu ayk kaam kar tu jaldi se ready ho jaa tab tak main dekh ti hoin ki kiya howa maa ko.

Pooja - thiak hain.

Kumkum- maa tum kaha hoin

Veera - beta kumkum main yeaha kitchen main hoin.

Kumkum - arre maa tum ne apna haat keyse jala liya, rook main doctor ko bola ti hoin.

(Doctor ake ke deakh kar chal jata hain)

Pooja - arre chachi yeah sab keyse howa aur kumkum kaha hain.

Veera - (kk maa) - who doctor ko bahar chodne gai hain.

Kumkum ' tum bhi na maa

Pooja - kumkum hum aaj shopping kar ne hai ja rahe.

Veera (kk ma) - kiyo Pooja beta.

Pooja - chachi aap ka haath jal gaya aur hum shopping karne jaeyn...................nahi..............

Kumkum - ma Pooja bilkul thiak kah rahi hain, aur phir aap ko agar kisi cheez ki zarorat pari tu phir hum dono tu nahi hongay na ghar par tu.....................

Pooja - iss liye hum aaj ke badle kal chale jaynge...............aur phir saam ko ma bhi tu arahi hain to woh kal aapke saath rahigi tu humey fikar karne ki zarorat nahi raheygi ki aap ghar main akeli ho.................

veera -(kk ma) par beta tum log aaj kiya karogi aur phir tum ne tu aaj shirf shopping ka hi plan bana ya hai..................

Kumkum- maa hum jo kal surprise chachi , chacha (Pooja ma and pa) aur bauji (kk pa) ke liye kar ne waly thein who hum aaj kar lete hain...............................

Pooja - hain..................yeah thiak rahega..................aur maa bhi kush ho jaeygi.

Kumkum - Pooja aab tu kitchen mian chale gi ya sab kuch mujhay hi kar na parega.

Pooja - kumkum tu chal main chachi ke liye pillow aur blanket le kar aati hoon.

Kumkum - thiak hain, jaldi ana.

Kumkum kitchen main gai aur who cake banane ka samaan nikal ti.......................phir cake ke saman ko mix kar ti hai aur uss ko oven main dal de ti hai.......................phir who Chicken Dum Biryani , Mutton Dum Biryani ka saman ni kat ti hai aur jab kumkum chicken wash kar ti rahi ti hain tu uss ko koi "HI" karta hain, woh confussed ho kar palati hai tu deakh ti hain tu samne summit hain woh bhi cooking ke dress main. Pahle tu kk shocked ho ga ti hain aur phir summit ki traaf chal ti huway uss pe chilne lagti hain.....................aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..................tu...............................tu....................tum yeaha kiya kar raho ho. Main......................main ne tumhey manna kiya tha na ke mere ghar ke as pass bhi mat ana aur tum....................tum tu mere kitchen main hi agay................tu....................tum mere ghar se nikal te ho ya main kisi ko bola uoon.

Summit- kumkum tum....................tum itna chila kiyo rahi hoon...................mujhay tumse kuch kahna hai.....................

Kk - kya...........................kya kahna hai tumhey.................

Summit - main tu tumse yeah kahna chaha ta hoon ke main tu tumharei maddad kar ne aya hoin.................

Kumkum - ji nahi mujhay aap ki koi madder nahi chaiya...................... Tum yeaha se nikal te ho ye nahi............. main tum se akhiri bar kah rahi hoon tum yeaha se jao warna main tumhey iss baylan se hit karongi

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....................

Pooja - kumkum tu yeah kiya kar rahi hain..........................mera sar thodi gi kiya

Kumkum- Pooja......................Poo..................Pooja tu.........................tu kab ayi.......................aur who kaha gaya.........................

Pooja - main tu bauth deer se hoon aur kaun kaha gaya aur tu itna mujh pe kiyo chila rahi hai......................

Kumkum- Pooja main tujh pe chila rahi thi.........nahi main tujh pe nahi main tu uss uss par chila rahi thi.

Pooja - kiss par chila rahi this aur yeah baylan tere haat main aysa...............................

Kumkum - main who suuuuu.................chal chod iss baat ko aur meri maddad kar.

Pooja - arre waha jab main kah rahi thi ke mian teri maddad kar ne ayi thi tu..

kk - acha aab iss bat ko chod aur please meri maddad kar.


Summit in on the phone talking to Rohit

Sumit - yaar aaj main shopping ke liye nahi ja sakta................. I am not feeling well................

Rohit - yaar koi baat nahi................hum kal chaleinge

Summit - hain yeah thiak rahe ga....................hum kal chalte hain

Veena- (su mom) - beta summit aab tum kya sa feel kar rahe ho.

Su - mom much better

Veena - beta main aur tumhare pops party main ja rahe hain.

Summit - thiak hai mom'mom mujhay kuch money chaiye.....................

Veena - beta tum apne bank se nikal lo na........................

Summit - mom main aaj bahar nahi ja rah hoin'aur main ne pizza order kiya hain aur........................

Veena - acha beta bolo tumhey kitne ki zarorat hain........................

Summit - yeahi 25 ya 30 thousand.......................

Veena - here u go beta...................

Summit - thank u mom...ur the best mom........................

Veena- bey beta..................apna khiyal rakhna

Summit - ok bey.....................

(2:00 pm) kumkum aur Pooja, dono sweets bana rahe hain aur who dono kal ke shopping ke baat kar rahe hain, aur phir kumkum jaati hai oven main se cake nikalne aur idhar Pooja jaati hain chachi (veera) ke paas.....................

Hi kumkum.....................

Kk - Hiiiiii..................Pooja tu pagal tu nahi ho gai.........................tu ruk..........................aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa (kk palat ti hain tu who phir se summit ko deakh ti hain).....................tum.................nahi...........nahi (she think that he is Pooja') Pooja mian maa ko deakh kar aati hoon..................(kk jab jaati hain ma ko deakh ne waha par kumkum Pooja ko deakh ti hain aur woh waha se dour kar kitchen main aati hain par waha par summit nahi rahta hain aur phir se kumkum apna kaam karne lagti hai...........................phir thodi deer ke baad kumkum phir se summit ko deakh ti hai aur phir woh jaati hain summit ke paas aur summit ko touch kar ti hain aur usse lagta hain ki yeah real ka summit hain..................)

Kk - tum phir.......................ohhhhhhhhhh just leave from here................before I scream......................

Summit - summit kumkum ko apni bahoon main le leta hain aur usse kiss karne lagta hai.................idhar kumkum apne aap ko summit se chodne ki bauth kosish kar rahi par summit usse chod hi nahi raha...............................phir summit kumkum ko chod deta hai aur kumkum usse door jati hai par phir summit uss ka haat pakar leta hain aur uss ka haat chumne lagta hain............................kumkum summit ko zor se DHAKKA mar ti hai aur apne aap ko choda leti hain tu summit par knife tan kar uss pe itna chila ti hai ki Pooja aur Veera a ja te hain aur kumkum ko deakh kar who dono shocked ho jaati hain

Pooja - chachi aap jao yeah se main deakh ti hoon.....................

Veera - thiak hain......

Pooja - kumkum yeah kiya ho raha hain.................phaley jab main yeah par thi tu tum mujh par chila rahi thi aur aab tu apne aap baat aur chila rahi ho aur who bhi knife le kar.............

Kk - Pooja mujhay khuad bhi nahi pattha ki mere saath yeh sab kiya ho raha hain...............

Pooja - kumkum tu ayk kaam kart u jaa kar ayk bar aur shower le lye''tera mind bhi fresh ho ja ayga.

Kk - hain yeah thiak raha ga'tab tak tu yeah sab clean kar de.................she goes and takes shower................

(5:30 pm) sonam summit ke ghar aati hain.......................

Sonam - summit....................summit...............where are u....................

Summit - ohhhhhhhhhhhhh sonam.............thank god ur here..................I was so bore

Sonam - ohhhhhhhhhhhhh baby.....................agar mujhay pattha ho ta tu main jaldi hi a jaati.................

Door bell

Sonam - janno main deakh ti hoon

Summit - ok

Sonam - janno tum ne pizza order kiy hain...................

Summit - ohhh yes............ main abhi aya............hey man here is ur money

Door bell-

Summit - sonam tum pizza kaho main dekh ta hoon...................

Sonam- ok

Summit - ohhh good good ur here..............acha aap andar le aye zara

Sonam - omg........................this is so beautiful................kitna pyara gift hai................kya yeah mere liya hai.................ohhhhhhhhhh thank u so much..........................aur summit ko kiss kar ti hain.......................

Summit - ohhh thanks for the kiss sonam but this is not for u, yeah tum hare liye nahi hain hai...................yeah kisi aur ke liye hain...............

Sonam 0 kisi aur ke liye ..................kis ke liye hain

Summit - sonam main tumhey nahi bata sakta

Sonam- acha summit main aab chal ti hoon....................

Summit - ohhh..sonam thodi deer aur rook na................

Sonam - no janno i got to go................... ( sonam bhar jaati hain aur sooch ti hain) kis ke liye ho sakta hain ...................aur summit ne mujhay bhi nahi bata ya...............


to be continued
i hope that u all will enjoy this part of the ff to as u did
for the other 3 part and hope its long enough to read

so here is it its all ur
love u mariam

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Edited by mariam14 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowow nicee part i love it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67

Firstly, thanku 4 writeing a longggggggggg update................then does Su really come in kk's dreams or is it Su trying 2 tease her......................well whatever is it but liked it.................I'm sure Sukk will end up going 2 the same shopping mall & will fight there also.............

I have a feeling that Su bought KK a surprise gift................something's going on his mind...................waiting 2 read more................so do write soooooooonnnnnnnnnnn.......................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG Mariam....
It was toooooooooo Gud yaar....
n yeh it was a long 1 but do write more vry soooooooooooooooooooon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG yaar
u r toooooooooooooooooooo gud yaar
u jst gt de talent 2 entertain us............................
arre mera bi hindi ache nahin hai lekin koshish kerthe roho...
i luv sukk i jst luv em...
thr sooooooooooooooooooooooo adorable....
or summit me tho uski dewana hu or hamesha rohunga....

Pearl29 hspace5

i wish it never went plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cum back wid new eposidez.........
Edited by star_shiny - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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will read and comment soon

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