NewFF-Kya Yehi Pyar Hai....part 10-page 15 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowow nicee part i love it



thank u so much yaar for reading it
i am gald u liked it
thanks again
mariam
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Pearl29

Firstly, thanku 4 writeing a longggggggggg update................then does Su really come in kk's dreams or is it Su trying 2 tease her......................well whatever is it but liked it.................I'm sure Sukk will end up going 2 the same shopping mall & will fight there also.............

I have a feeling that Su bought KK a surprise gift................something's going on his mind...................waiting 2 read more................so do write soooooooonnnnnnnnnnn.......................


thank u so much priya
i am glad u loved it
and also happy that enjoyed reading this long ff
thanks again
mariam
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: *Shiny*

OMG Mariam....

It was toooooooooo Gud yaar....
n yeh it was a long 1 but do write more vry soooooooooooooooooooon.



thank u so much sufia
i am glad that u liked it and enjoyed it
love u mariam
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: star_shiny

OMG yaar

u r toooooooooooooooooooo gud yaar
u jst gt de talent 2 entertain us............................
arre mera bi hindi ache nahin hai lekin koshish kerthe roho...
i luv sukk i jst luv em...
thr sooooooooooooooooooooooo adorable....
or summit me tho uski dewana hu or hamesha rohunga....

Pearl29 hspace5

i wish it never went plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cum back wid new eposidez.........


hey juthi
thanks yaar for ur lovely comment
i am gald that my ff entertained u
i am glad thatu u liked it
thanks for reading it and hope u will do it again as i post the next part of my ff
thanks again
mariam
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: preethi

intresting it is cont



thank u so much nitya for reading the ff
love u mariam
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
hi guys i am sorry for not keeping my promise..............
but i was sick............
so here is ur next part

part 6: KuSu in the mall......

6:00 pm,door bell,

kk ja rahi hain door open karne aur who deakh ti hain ki chachi (Yashoda) agi...............

Kk - Pooja, Maa................chachi agi

Yashoda (Pooja ma) - kumkum kaysi hain meri baachi

Kk - chachi main thiak hoon aap andar aao na................chachi, Bauji aur cha-cha kaha hain.

Yashoda (Pooja ma) - woh beta arahain hain...............Bhabhi Namaste

Veera (kk ma) - ji ti rah...............Pooja deakh teri maa agi...............

Pooja - chachi main arahi hoon................

Veera- beta Pooja jaldi ana

Kk - ma rah ne do na who a rahi hai............................chachi aap ek kam karo aap ja kar fresh ho lo...............tab tak Pooja bhi a jaeygi..............

Yashoda (Pooja ma) - thiak hain........

Kk - ma aap mere saath aao....................

Pooja - chachi aap bhi kamal kar ti hain main agar uss room se a ja ti tu ma tu phaley.................aur hamara surprise plan..........tie tie fish ho jata...............

Kk - Pooja aab chod yeah sab aur ja kar jaldi se puri decoration finish kar................

Kumkum Yashoda ke room main gai hain............

Kk - chachi aap jaldi aao na

Yashoda - a rahi hoon kumkum...............

Kumkum Yashoda ki aankho par patthi bandhi hain aur kk Yashoda ko decoration room la ja ti hain aur who log party start kar te hain...............sab log bauth maza se 11:00 baje party finish kar ti hai.................then they all go to sleep.................

7:30 am........

Pooja gai hain kk ko utthane taki woh dono shopping ke liya ja sake

Pooja - kumkum jaldi uthna aur ready ho

Kk - kiyo aaj tu Sunday hain ne...................

Pooja - hain par aaj hamien shopping kar ne jana hain...

Kk - shopping...par kyon...............ohhhhhhhhhh hain...........main tu ek dam bhol gai thi..........Pooja tu mujhay bas 10 min de...

Pooja - thiak hain tab tak main ma ur chachi ko bol deti hoon ki hum log shopping ke liye ja rahein hain............... (Pooja went to the kitchen) Ma dekaho chachi ka haat jala howa hain to tumhey unke saath hi rah na hoga

Yashoda - tu aur kumkum ja main yeahi hoon Bhabhi ke paas..

Kk - Pooja chal..............

Pooja - bey ma chachi..........kumkum wayse hum kis mall main ja rahein hain..............

Kk - Pooja abhi tu patha nahi chal deakh te huway chalet hain...............

Kk aur Pooja taxi main se deakh te huway ja rahi hain................phir Pooja ki nazar ek mall pe par ti hai....................

Pooja - kumkum deakh.............

Kk - kya...............

Pooja - iss mall ko...........kumkum kiya hum iss mall main chale..............pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee

Kk - uhhhhhhhhhhhhh thiak hain...................

Pooja - thank u kumkum...........

Kk - bahi sahib aap yehi pe gari rok do.................

Taxi - thiak hain.................

Dono taxi se nikal

Kk - kitna huwa................

Taxi - 100 rupee

After paying the taxi man..........kumkum aur Pooja jaati hain mall ke andar aur Pooja ka reaction to this mall

Pooja - OMG kumkum.............kitna acha mall hain aur kitna bara bhi.

Kk - who tu hain.............acha chal first floor par chalet hain...

10:00

(summit bhi is shopping mall main aya hain Rohit ke saath shopping karne, aur who bhi first floor main ja raha hain............kk aur Pooja jewelry ke section main ja raha hain.............summit Ruhal ke saath sport section main hain.................kumkum aur Pooja kuch jewelry buy kar te hain.............kumkum Pooja ko bata kar jewelry section se bahar aati hain aur idhar summit bhi sport section se bahar nikalta hain............phir kumkum aur summit backward chal rahein hain stuffs ko deakh te huway aur phir dono ek dosre se tak ra te hain aur summit kumkum ko girne se bacha ta hain par un dono ki nazray phir ek dosre se tak ra ti hain ..............aur thodi deer tak tu yeah dono issi tarha rahein ek dosre se Nazarene milaey huway.........phir jab Pooja ki awaz kumkum ne suni tu who uss pal se nikalti hain aur is bar khaylo main summit ko samajh kar usse thanks bhi nahi kar ti hain aur woh Pooja ke paas chali ga ti hain..............summit is walking toward the sport section and at the same time ha is kind of confused by seeing the reaction of kumkum ke us ne usse gir ne se bacha ya aur woh thank u bhi nahi kaha...............summit is in the sport section and lost in figuring about kk and then Rohit comes and interrupts him.............)

12:00 clock

Kumkum aur Pooja went to canteen as well as summit and Ruhal and again summit aur kumkum ek dosre se takratein hain aur jab Ruhal kumkum ko deakh ta hain tu woh kumkum ko deakh te hi uss se love karne lagta hain................aur idhar yeh dono ek dosre ko hold kiye huway thi aur yeah deakh Pooja aati hain aur kk ko awaz deti hain tu phir kk waha se phir bina thank u kare a jaati hai..............aur phir jab Pooja ne kumkum se pucha ki tune summit ko thank u kyon nahi kiya.............

Kk - (kumkum Pooja ko shocked ho kar dekhte hain) aur kah ti hain ki who real main tha..............

Pooja - kiya matlab tera ki who real main tha..........

Kk - kuch nahi, tu ruk main abhi aye

Pooja - par main........Kumkum sun kumkummmm

Kumkum jaati hain summit ke table ke paas par waha par summit nahi rahta hain aur kumkum wapus apne table par aati hain............

Pooja - kumkum kiya howa.............tune thanks kaha.......

Kk - Pooja kiya hum iss mall se Kahin aur Chalein...........

Pooja - hain chal chalte hain...........kumkum aaj kal main deakh rahi hoon ki tu ajeeb ajeeb si harkatein kar rahi hain...............sub kuch thiak hain na............

Kk - hain Pooja sub kuch thiak hain.............mujhay kiya howa hain...........kuch bhi nahi.............then she is lost in herself and asking herself the same question Pooja asked her.................

7:30 pm kumkum aur Pooja shopping kar ke ghar wapus aati hain aur waha kumkum ke cha-cha aur Bauji ghar pe thein..........kumkum aur Pooja jaati hain apne ne apne Bauji ke paas gale lag ne................aur phir kumkum aur Pooja sab ko deakh ti hain ki un logo ne kiya kiya buy kiya hain aur kaun sa samaan kis ke liye buy kiya hai..................

9:30 pm....kumkum aur Pooja sab ke liye dinner bana ti hain aur phir sab ko serve kar ti hain...........jab sab log dinner finish kar leti hain tu kumkum aur Pooja wapus food fridge main rakhti rahti hain aur ta bhi kumkum ko chakar ane lagta hai aur woh bihuash ho jaati hain aur who zameen pe gir ja ti hai.................aur iss awaz pe Pooja jab turn ho ti hai t tu deakh ti kumkum ko zameen par phir Pooja...............

Pooja - (chila ti hain) kumkummmm

to be continued
i hope that u all will enjoy this part of the ff too
love u mariam
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Edited by mariam14 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
Nice Nice ...............so there's a change in Sukk's behaviour.......good 2 read such parts....................now waiting 2 c what happenes at the College.............continue sooooonnnnnnnnn..............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowwowow nicee i love it plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waiting for next part continue soon .good part

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowwowow nicee i love it plzz contuied soon



thanks for reading it
gald that u liked it

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