NewFF-Kya Yehi Pyar Hai....part 10-page 15 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: maheen55

waiting for next part continue soon .good part



thanks for reading it
i am glad that u enjoyed it

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pearl29

Nice Nice ...............so there's a change in Sukk's behaviour.......good 2 read such parts....................now waiting 2 c what happenes at the College.............continue sooooonnnnnnnnn..............



yes there is a change in kusu..........i am glad that u enjoyed reading it..............thanks for ur comment
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hay it was gr8 n soooooooooooooooooooooo nyc...
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Originally posted by: *Shiny*

Hay it was gr8 n soooooooooooooooooooooo nyc...



thank u so much
i am gald that u liked it
hope u will continue reading
thanks again

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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
looks like love at first sight
waiting fr more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: preethi

looks like love at first sight
waiting fr more


yeah love at first sight..
thanks for reading it
i am glad that u read it and liked it
thanks
love u mariam
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey u all who read my ff
i am sorry but i will not be posting the next part of my ff for a week or 2
its and end of the school so i have lots of projects and HW to do so hope u all will understand
thanks and please pray 4me to do good on the projects and other HW
thank u n love u all
mariam

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hey u all i am back with my next part of my ff

sorry for the long wait............its all ur........

part 7: Singapore trip plan

pooja - kumkummmmmmm.....................kumkum, ma, chichi jaldi aao................

Yashoda - pooja kiya baat hain..................kiyo chilaaaaaaaa................kumkummm....................pooja kumkum ko kya howa................

10:00:58 sec

Kumkum ko yeh log room main lay gai aur doctor ko bula ya...............docter ne kumkum ka check up kiy

Veera - doctor kumkum ku kiya huwa.

Doctor- kuch nahi bas thodi si thakan hain aur.......... chandu ji aap mere saath bahar aye....

Chandu ji - hain chiley.............doctor kiya huwas hain kumkum ko

Doctor - chandu ji dara sal who baat yeah hain ki uska BP low ho gya hain...........

Chandu ji - BP low par kiyo.............

Doctor lagta hain who kuch tense hain...............isseley who bihush ho gai

Chandu ji - doctor ek min..................pooja zara yeah ana tu

Pooja - ji bade papa..................

Chandu ji - beta kiya kumkum tense this kuc din se

Pooja - bade papa kiya huwas..................

Doctor - awww pooja, kumkum ka bp low hain aur..............

Pooja - doctor kal se who ajeeb ajeeb si harkatein kar rahi hain................

Doctor- ahhh.......kaysi harkatein beta......................

Pooja - doctor who kal apne aap mujh par chila ne lagi aur jab main ne pucha ke tu mujh par kiyo chila rahi hain tu kumkum ne kaha ki who mujh par nahi kisi aur par..................

Doctor - chandu ji aap mera maan ye tu kumkum ko kahi bahar kuch week ke liye biajh dijey, hain agar koi college ka trip hain tu uss main beajh dijey who taha ga kumkum ke liye...............

Chandu ji - acha doctor main deakh ta hoon ke main kiya kar sakta hoon..............

Doctor - acha aab main chalta hoon.................agar phir se meri zarorat pare tu mujhey bula le na...............

Pooja - chaliy doctor main aap ko bhar chod de ti hoon..........

(pooja jati hain doctor ko bhar chod kar wapus aati hain tu bade papa se kumkum ke bare mian baat karti hain aur bata ti hain ke college main ek field trip 2 din ke baad jaha raha hain Singapore)

Chandu ji - beta tum aur kumkum waha jane ki tyari karo.....

Pooja- par bade papa main kiya karoungi waha ja kar aap sirf kumkum ko beajh dijey na........

Chandu ji - beta tumhare jana zarori hain..............tum waha rahogi tu hum log bayfikar rahengay kumkum ke iss se aur tum bhi Singapore deakh logi

Pooja- thiak hain bade papa main kal form fill kar dongi.........acha good night bade papa..........

Chandu ji- thanks and good night beta................

6:45:27sec

Kumkum utth ti hai aur who college ke liy ready ho ti hai...............aur phir Matarani ke paas ja kar maatha tek ti hai..................phir bhar a kar breakfast karti hain........

8:00:45sec

Summit sonam ko pick karne gaya hain college ke liy Rohit ke saath..........

8:30:59sec

4/7/09

Kumkum aur pooja college ke liy ghar se nikla gai hai.............who dono aab college pauch gai hain aur pooja principle ke office gai hain form fill karne..............aur idhar kumkum class main gai....................

Kumkum- ohhhhhh no............summit abhi tak nahi aya.......mujhey ussy thank u kah na hain aur.......ahhhh who agya....................

Summit and sonam is in the principle office giving the principle the sorry letter.....................

Summit - sir here is my sorry letter....................

Principle - good summit......................sonam tumhara.........................remember if u haven't done it then u can't go tho any field trips..............

Sonam - sir main ne bhi kya hai aur yeah rahi mera sorry letters...................

Sonam and summit goes toward the class room

Sonam - hehe.................summit hush....................woh yahi class main hai.................

Summit - ohhhhh...................ok................

Kumkum - summit mujhey tum se akele main kuch baat karni hain

Sonam - kumkum tumhey jo bhi kahna hain yehi pe kaho..............summit kahi nahi jayga.............

Kumkum - summit please tum bahar aao main tumhara wait kar rahi hoon...........(kumkum door ki traf jati hain aur Rohit se takra ti hain..............

Kk - I am sorry( kah kar class se bhar chali ja ti hain)

Rohit - ooooooo...................but I am not.................

Summit- hey yaar aab tak tu kaha par tha....then he looks at the door and sees kumkum is wating.......................ek min Rohit main abhi aya..............hain kumkum bolo kiya kahana hain.................

Kk - summit woh...............woh thank u

Summit - kis liye

kk- wok kal tum ne mujehy gir ne se backa ya than a isiliye

summit - ohhhh woh................koi baat nahi ................aaaaaa kumkum tumhey aur kuch kahna hai.................

kk - ohhhhh no....................mujhey aur kuch bhi nahi kahna..............hain magar ...................kuch nahi.......kuch nahi...............

Summit - ok

Kk - thank u

(Pooja principle ke office se arahi hai kumkum ke pass.)

Pooja - kumkum tu class ke bhar kiyo hai...

Kk - woh bas aysi hi.................

Pooja - acha chal class main......................

11:35:07

Kumkum aur Pooja canteen main hain aur Pooja soft drink order karne gai hain..................idhar kumkum ki table pe Rohit ata hain aur kk se baat karne ki kusish karta hain par kk Pooja ke pass chale jati hain....................idhar Rohit kumkum aur Pooja ki baatein suntan hain)

Pooja - aaa kumkum hum dono kal college ke Singapore ke trip pe ja rahein hain.................

Kk - kya................par kiyo

Pooja - aysi hi aur bade papa ne permission bhi de di hai.....................

Kk - what..................I don't believe ke baui ji ne..................

Pooja - kumkum deakh main sach bol rahi hoon......................acha tujhey yakeen nahi ho raha na tu phir yeh trips ke form deakh le..................

Kk - OMG Pooja ................par Pooja yeah tu ne kab plan kiya

Pooja - kumkum tu yeh sab chod aab.................

Rohit - aaa................tu iss ka naam hai kumkum aur yeh Singapore ja rahi hai..............(then he goes to sit with summit and sonam) summit main ne decided kiya hai ki main Singapore ki trip par jane ke liye ready hoon......................

Sonam - wowwwwwww.................summit can we gooooooooooo

Summit - but sonam we can't.....................

Sonam - summit pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee

Summit - aaaaaaaaaaaaa let me think...................yesssss we can go....................par iss trip ke pay main karunga

They all went to the classes......................

Rohit - chalo aab main kumkum se bhi dosti kar lunga aur muaqa pa kar uss se apne dil ki baat bol dunga...........

College end hogaya hain aur summit sonam ko le kar club main jahara hain aur rohit kumkum ka piccha kar raha hain ta ki rohit ko kumkum ka ghar pattha chalsake......................idhar kumkum aur Pooja ghar pouch gaye hai.

Pooja- ma we are home..

Yashoda- acha tum dono freash ho kar sinning table pe ajao main lunch serve karti hoon...............

Kumkum - chachi we are not hungry.................aur hum packing kar ne ja rahe hain.

Veera- packing....................kaha ja rahi ho tum dono,,,,,

Pooja - chachi hum dono Singapore ja rahe hain collge ke trip ke saath...............

kk - pooja.........kya tumne ma aur chachi ko bhi nahi bataya hai kya.

Veera- par beta Pooja tune bade papa se pucha

Kk - ma yeh kah rahi hain ki Bauji ne isse permission de di hain....................

Chandu ji - Pooja...............pooja.................

Pooja - ji bade papa...............

Chandu ji - beta yeh kuch money rakh lo...............

Veera - ji yeh log yeh log Singapore ja rahe hain aur aap ne hamen bata y bhi.........................

Kk - maa...............mujhey bhi kaha bataay .......................iss pooja ne tu mujhay aaj college main batya hain................

Pooja - chachi aap zara mere saath room main ayi

Veera- kyon Pooja.................

Pooja - aap ayi tu ................

Veera - kiya hai Pooja.......

Pooja-chachi........chachi main ne aur bade papa ne kal hi yeh decided kiy tha ki main aur kumkum Singapore ja ayinge......................

Veera - par kyon.............

Pooja - chachi who.woh doctor ne ham se kaha tha ki kumkum to thodi din ke liye yeha se baha le kar kahi chale jaen tu isseliy...................badi ma abhi aap bade papa se kuch mat puchiya ga warna kk jaan jagi ke hum kiyo jarahe hain.................aur phir woh nahi jaygi...................

Veera- thiank hai......................

9:45 pm

Dada ji, dadi ma, veena , and kul are eating dinner and summit comes from club..............

Veena - beta summit won't u want to eat something.

Summit - mom no I gotta go and pack my bag...............

Kul - summit are u going somewhere..................

Summit- yes dad..................main college ke trip pe Singapore ja raha hoon...............

Kul - ok beta have fun there...............

Summit - thanks dad............

Kul - beta ek min..............here is my ATM card..................if u need more money u can use this card in singapore.................

Summit- ohhhhhhhhhh thanks dad good night dad............................

Veena- beta you go to sleep..................main tumhara bag pack kar doungi.

Summit - no mom I will do it by myslef.............

Dadi ma- summit beta Veena sahi kah rahi hai u go to sleep........................hum log pack kardenge........................aur phir tumhey jaldi bhi tu jana hain na kal............

Summit - ok mom - good night everybody

Whole family says goodnight................

Summit apne room main jata hain aur undress ho kar sleeping dress ho ja ta hai................aur phir apne balcony main akar sonam ko phone laga ta hai..................idhar kumkum chath (roof) pe hai akeli chand aur tare ku deakh rahi hai................idhar summit ka phone lag gya...................

sonam - hi summit..........

summit - hi jano....kya kar rahi ho

sonam - main packing kar rahi hoon............tumne kar li packing......

summit - nahi...........mom will do it..............acha sonam ek bar tum i luv u kaho na

sonam - summit............what is up with u..........

summit - please kaho na..............please................Summit baat karte karte huway aasman main deakh raha hain aur sonam se baat karte karte who ruk jata hain...................kyon ki aasman main woh kumkum ka chehradeakhta hai aur jab woh kumkum ka naam leta hain tu udhar kumkum ko lagta hain ki summit usse awaz de raha hai.....par who plat kar deakti hai tu waha par koi nahi rahta aur phir waha se apne room main chali jati hain......

Idhar summit stunned hogya aur phone cut kar deta hai aur shook rahta hain ki ussne kk ka chehrakyon nazar aya Aasman main............aur pohi summit sone chal ja ta hai................phir thodi deer ke baad summit apne dream main deakh ta hain ki uss ki shadi ho rahi hain...............aur woh sooch ta hai ki usske ki shadi sonam se horahi hainaur jab dulhan ko deakhta hain tu woh kumkum rahti hain aur who jaldi se utth ja ta hai alarm clock ki wajha se............................

7:45 am

Kumkum aur Pooja college jane ke liye ready hain aur Yashodaamrit jal pooj aur kumkum deti hain aur Omi ju aur Chandu ji Pooja ur kumkum ka bags car main dalte hain.................

Summit apne car main apna bag dalta hain aur sonam aur rohit ko pick kar ne ja ta hai....................

8:00

Kumkum aur Pooja college ke liye nikal gay hai.................

10:00

Sab log bus main baith gay hain aur kumkum Pooja apna I pod sun rahi hai..................

Idhar summit tense main hai kal raat ki baat ko le kar aur who kumkum se baat karna chatha hain par who kar nahi pa raha kyon ki summit ko nahi malom ki kumkum bhi Singapore jarahi hai.................

11:45

Yeh log air port puach gay hain..................

Kk - pooja tu chal main bag le kar aati hoon.

Pooja thiak hain jaldi ana...........................

Summit sonam tum aur rohit jao main bag le kar aata hoon.................

Rohit..................kumkum ko deakhta hain ki who bhi bhar hain tu who summit se kah ta hain

Rohit - aaa.....................summit main bhi ata hoon..................kumkum aur summit dono hi bag le kar jate rahte ahin ki phi se who dono ek dosre se takra te hain aur summit kumkum ko halod karta hain aur yeh deakh ke ki summit ne kumkum ko touch kiya hain tu Rohit jealous ho jata hia aur undono ko un ke takray huway nazron ko hatane ke liye who apna haath cut kar le ta hai.................aur phir Rohit ko andar le ja ta hain summit.....................aur kumkum bhi andar jati hain................phir summit kumkum ki traf jata hain.........

Summit- kumkum tumbhi Singapore ja rahi hoo...........

Kk - hain, Pooja ne yeah sab kal he plan kya

Summit-..aur hamne bhi kal hi plan kya Singapore jane ka...............

Aur phir summit aur kumkum dono check in ke liy chale jate hain aur summit sonam ko deakh ta bhi nahi hain................

Rohit - sonam tum summit pe zidya dehan do......................

Sonam tumhar kah ne ka kya matlab hai................

Rohit - mujhay lagta hain ki summit kummmmmmmm...............

Sonam - don't say anymore............................he just loves me aur tumhey iss ki fikar kar ne ki zarorat nahi hai......................aur Rohit tum yeh mujhay yeh batao ki tum yeh sab kyon kah rahe ho...................

Rohit - kyon ki main kumkum se...............pyar kar ta hoon....................

Sonam- kya.....................Rohit tum pagal tu nahi ................tum uss do kauri ki............

Rohit - sonam shut up don't say anything bad about kumkum............

Rohit waha se angry ho kar chala jata hain aur sona bhi but she hates kumkum after these things happened................

to be continued
i hope that u all will enjoy this part of the ff too
love u mariam

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Edited by mariam14 - 16 years ago
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wowowowow tht was cool i love it
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Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what a part..................just enjoyed reading it after such a long time......& that 2 a long one............
So finally Su has started 2 have some feelings 4 kk which is a very good start...............& i'm sure something will happen in this Singapore trip that will bring them closer............I think Rohit & Sonam will do something 2 seperate them..........please do write sooooooooonnnnnn with a nice & a long part with some Sukk scenes....................continue soooooooooonnnnnnnnn.....................

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