Anmol Mohabbat ( dheersay dheeray se meri zindagi

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San

@sanw

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

good beginning

all the best dear

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surakshita

@surakshita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

a very good intro and start to the ff

so we have another ff going in full force here. do continue keep it up

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Nazia

@Nazia16

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Part 2
In college:(Sony says) holidays start horahi hai aaj say. kya planning hai tumhari holidays main Zara?
Zara: well! main apna most of the time best friend (Zara's Anti) kay saat spend karoon gee and khoob mastiya karoon gee.🥳
Another girl in college: hi every! i am Nushi
Zara and Sony: hello
Nushi: Zara mujh se dosti karo gee?
Sony: os k laye tumhain ZAHAN ki story sunni hogi 99 times main sunn chuki hoon
Zara: leave her! v r friends now
Nushi: thanks👍🏼
Zara: in that case u have 2 go with me 2 canteen
Nushi: y not😊
Zara: lets go, lets try my favourite pineapple festri😛
Nushi: wow! very delicious, now tell me about Zahan
Zara: 6 months ago my cousin sent me some songs DVD's. also she told me ek new singer hai us k awaz bhoot achi hai and handsome b hai. app ko woh definitely pasand ayega.
Nushi: phir kya woh app ko pasand aaya?😎
Zara: well! jaisay main ne dekha tu, mere dil mai yeh khayal aaya
Dekhtay He Dekhtay Dil Kho Giya
Dil Ko Gaya tu.................................
Nushi: tell me how is he look like?
Zara: os ki eyes
From other side in Karachi(Pakistan) on his concert show his eyes, give me my glasses,
Zara: os ki awaaz
Zahan: start his song
Zara: his personality
Zahan: song finished then he gives autographs 2 his fans
Nushi: i am very impressed👏
Zara: look his pic
Nushi: wow! very cool😎
Zara: i pray that he will come here
Nushi: me 2
Zara: i am going now have a nice holidays
Nushi: same 2 u
Zara: bye
Nushi: bye
at Zara's home: Zara anti ka phone hai ( BF) Jannat Says
Zara: salaam Anti, howz A 2 Z?
Anti: fine n u
Zara: good
Anti: guess wt?
Zara: ZAHAN ki baat hai?
Anti: kaisay tumhai pata chal jata hai, chalo nahi batati
Zara: plz BF tell me
Anti: then wt is my gift?
Zara: anything u want accept Zahan? plz tell me i can't wait
Anti: OK i tell u, i got a ZAHAN mobile number😲😲
Zara: WHAT? r u kidding?
BF: really! Haya and Armaan says waisay b tum hamaray ghar aarahi ho. un ko b Zahan ki Awaaz sunni hai
Zara: ok c u tomorrow......

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soundsofcedar

@soundsofcedar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

That was A GREAT PART hun😃 it's so sweet to see Zara in love with Zahan and I am excited to find out what she talks to him about when she calls him😉

Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

wow another ff
Nazia ur ff sounds really nice
i really liked it

i really liked the title of ur ff
anmol mohabbat....sacchi mein mohabbat
to anmol hoti he hai
mohabbat ek aise cheez hai..jiska kkoi mol nahiin

zara and zahan nice name
and its sounds really great

ek he din mein do do parts
mazah a gaya padh kar

can't wait for the next part
do cont soon

love afreen

Edited by juhuti - 16 years ago

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Nazia

@Nazia16

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Part3
Jannat: Zara jaldi karo Anti kay ghar jana hai?
Zara: i am coming, lets go
Zara, Jannat, Rehan and Sameer says: bye mom, bye dad
Mom/Dad: bye
At Anti home: salaam uncle and anti, hello Armaan and Haya🤗
Armaan and Haya: hello friends how r u? howz uncle and anti?
Rehan: they fine thanks
they sit together and talking with each other
Zara: where is my BF?
Haya: she is in kitchen
Zara: i'll be back in a min guys
In Kitchen: Zara and BF talking about Zahan
Zara: number kahan say mila?
Anti: tumharay uncle nay diya
Zara: abhi baat karain Zahan say
Anti: pehlay tum loog kuch khalo phir kartay hai
Zara: ok fine, jaldi khao guys Zahan ko phone karna hai
Rehan, Sameer and Armaan: hmmmmmmmmmmm😉 ZAHAN????
Jannat and Haya: haan tu phir kya?
Zara: anti dekho na in saab ko😔
Anti: leave her alone
Zara and Anti in separate room, can v come (Jannat and Haya) come but don't tell 2 boys
Haya: anyway they play cricket
Anti: Zara bell jarahi hai
Zara is shivering also very exited
Jannat and Haya: loudspeaker pay karo
Zara: ok
from other side: HELLO
Zara lay down in bed❤️
Haya: say something......
Zara give phone 2 Jannat
Jannat: HELLO
Zahan: who is this?
Jannat: r u Zahan?
Zahan: yes! Who r u?
Jannat: i am Jannat from UK. my sis is very big fan of u
Zahan: thank u
Jannat: cud u sing a song 4 my sis plz
Zahan: where is ur sis?
Jannat: she is here but she is speachless at the moment
Zahan: strange! phone pe song... ok i sing 4 ur sis
Jannat: by the way my sis name is ZARA
Zahan: ok i sing 4 Zara
Zara:shocked😲
Zahan:i sing 1 of my fav song hmm???
Which song Zahan sing 4 Zara
i give u 3 clues u. guys guess?
1 kisi roz tum se mulaqat hogi......
2 kya khoob lagti ho......
3 bachna aye haseeno....

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

heyy i love your part 1 ,2And 3 i think zahan sing kisi roz tummsay mulqat ho gii

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soundsofcedar

@soundsofcedar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Hey Nazia I like the part👏 sorry for commenting so late but kya karoon stupid exams😭 anyways I agree with Shafoo it has to be Kissi Roz Tumse Mulaqat Hogi😉...Can't wait for the next part😃

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Hi, Nazia.....nice going....really lovely and touchy part...i think ZAHAN will sing KISI ROOZ TUMSE MULAKAAT HOGI......any way great update....and plzzzzzzzzzzz upload the next part soon.........
love afreen