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Nazia

@Nazia16

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Part4

Zahan: hmmm! kisi roz tum se mulaqat hogi...........

Zara: kahin main sapna tu nahi dekh rahi😲

Jannat: wow its amazing thank u so much, u r the best👍🏼
Zahan: my pleasure😊
Jannat: bye
Zahan: bye
In Karachi( PK)
Zahan's friend: airport k liye late ho rahai hain
Zahan: lets go
Zahan is going back 2 his home(Islamabad)
In Islamabad Zahan's brother Saif recive him from airport
Saif: hi buddy!🤗 how r u?
Zahan: i am fine n u?howz every1 at home
Saif: well main teek hoon aur ghar main b sab teek hai
At Zahan's house
Zahan: salaam maa
Mom: w/s beta kaisa raha safar
Zahan: bilkul teek taak , abu kaisay hain?
Mom: teek hai
Zahan: where is hira
Hira(sister): salaam bhai
Zahan: w/s hira kaisi ho,mujhay miss kiya
Hira: bahut miss kiya,mere liye kya laye ho
Zahan: tumhari fav chocolates & books
Hira: wow!😃 tnx a lot bhai
Zahan: np
Next morning
Hira: mom i am going 2 college bye
Mom: bye
at 2pm
Mom: Zahan beta utto dopehar k 2 baj rahai hain
Zahan: ok maa
Mom: tum fresh ho jao main nashta lagati hoon
Zahan: maa app kay haatoon ka koi jawab nahi, omlate zabardast bana hai
Dad: Zahan yeh omlate tumhain roz roz nahi melay ga
Zahan: salam abu, woh Q...
Dad: Q k, tumharay liye ek khushkhabri hai
Zahan: woh kya?
Dad: tumhain Manchester(UK) main addmation mil gaya
Zahan: really! wt a surprise😲😲
Dad: then when u going 2 UK?
Zahan: next month, i'll call 2 my friend Numaan

Zahan: hello Numaan how r u?

Numaan: oh Zahan yaar kahan gum ho

Zahan: main tu yahan hoon. tumhara koi ata pata nahi

Numaan: yaar kya karoon Uk ki life itni busy hai

Zahan: acha tu main b wahaan aarha hoon

Numaan:oh haan tum nay tu uni k liye apply kiya ta na aur kab aarahay ho

Zahan: next month

Numaan: i am very happy 4 u that u r coming and also i am waiting 4 u buddy

Zahan: c u next month

Numaan: keep in touch with me buddy

Zahan: i will.... take care bye

Numaan: bye

UK main aaraha hoon....

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soundsofcedar

@soundsofcedar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Oh great part Nazia...At first I thought he was at the airport because he was going to UK😆 but anyways I like Zahan's relationship with his sister it is so SWEET...I AM SO HAPPY that he is going to UK next month and then he will meet Kumkum there oh sorry I mean Zara😆...Please update SOON...Can't wait for there milan😃

Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago

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Nazia

@Nazia16

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Part5
Zahan: playing guitar
Hira: bhai mere friends aap se milnay k liye aaye hain, plz un say milay aap k buhat big fans hain
Zahan: ok 2 mins araha hoon
Hira: thanks bhai
Zahan with Hira's friends
Hira's friends oh my God i can't believe this Zahan is front of us,😲 hi Zahan! can v take pics with u plz
Zahan: ofcourse y not
Hira's friend: thank u so much
Hira: by the way bhai is going 2 UK next month,
Hira's friends: ohhhhhhhh really! then when u come back
Zahan: not sure bcoz i am going 4 studies
Hira's friends: v wish u best of luck
Zahan: tnx a lot
Hira's friends: anytime
after 3 weeks
Zahan UK janay ki tiyari ker raha hai
Mom: beta main nay clothes pack kar diye
Zahan: acha maa kuch reh tu nahi gaya
Mom: nahi beta, main phir b check karti hoon
Hira: haan bhai sab say important cheez reh gai hai
Zahan: woh kya?
Hira: meri shopping list
Zahan: oh mujay yaad hai woh main kaisay bhol sakta hoon
Hira: u r the best bhai in the world
Saif: aur main best brother nahi hoon kya?
Hira: Q nahi, app tu meray Big B ho
Dad: Zahan yeh kuch important documents hai
Zahan: thanks abu
Dad: wahaan puhnchtay he phone zaroor karna
Zahan:fikar na karay main kar doon gaa
Mom: apna khiyal rakna aur khana waqt par khana
Zahan: don't worry maa, Allah Hafiz😭😭😭
Mom/Dad and Hira: Allah Hafiz😭
at the airport
Saif: ok buddy take care, Numaan ko mera salaam kehna
Zahan: sab ka khiyal rakna, ok bye
Saif: bye
Zahan arrive at Manchester airport
Numaan: hi Zahan! how r u?🤗🤗
Zahan: hello Numi! i am fine tnx n u?🤗🤗
Numaan: fit fat aur gapshap ghar main hogi
Zahan: ok
Numaan & (ZK)Zahan (at Numi house)meet with my friends
Numaan's friends: hi, hello rock star nice 2 meet u🤗
Zahan: same here
Zahan: i am very tired Numi
Numaan: ok ZK tum rest🥱 karo kal baat karaingay aur haan tum nay ghar phone kiya ta?
Zahan: haan kiya ta k main teek puhunch gaya hoon
Numaan: ok good night
Zahan: good night
How Zara knows that Zahan in UK and how she will meet with him?
plz feed back

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soundsofcedar

@soundsofcedar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Good Job Nazia...I loved it I am glad that he is in UK already and I can't wait till he meets Zara btw it was a great treat that you updated so FAST😃

Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

wow i love your parts 4&5

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Nazia

@Nazia16

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Part6
Zahan busy in studies
after few weeks
Numaan: yar Zahan mujay yaad aaya aaj morning time mere friend say baat hoi. woh keh rahata k hum yahaan Nottingham main "asian commennity" concert karna chahtay hain
Zahan: phir tum nay kya kaha
Numaan: main nay kaha k Zahan study k liye aya hai, woh concert nahi karta but uno nay mujai kaha k, app kay bohut fans chahtay hain k aap concert main perform karay, main nay kaha k main Zahan say pooch k batadoon ga.
Zahan: kab ker rahain hain woh concert
Numaan: within few weeks
Zahan: let me think about it then u tell him
Numaan: he'll call u tomorrow, i think tumhain concert main jana chahiye and yeh tumhara first concert hoga UK main
Zahan: ok BOSS
In London
Zara: Zara doing chatting with friends on an internet and she also looking Zahan's website, Zara ko Zahan ka mobile number mil jata hai magar woh confuse hai? Q K woh UK ka number hai, also she is very excited and shocked😲
She call her Anti i found Zahan number on an internet but i don't know k main kya karoon Q K dad say daar lagta hai
Anti: rehan say kaho k woh phone ker lay
Zara: ok main abhi kehti hoon aur aap ko batati hoon bye
Anti: bye
Zara: Rehan bhai plzzzzzzzz mera eik kaam karo
Rehan: kya kaam hai?
Zara: pata hai mujay Zahan k website say un ka number mela hai woh b UK ka, plz tum un say abhi baat karo
Rehan: ok
Zara: really! thank u soooooooooooo much😃
😃Rehan dailing his number
Zara is next to him, loudspeaker on ker lo
Rehan: shhhhhhhhhhhh ok
from other side: HELLO
Rehan: r u Zahan?
Numaan: no
Rehan: Can i speak to Zahan please
I am his friend Numaan
Numaan: yeh number tumhain kahan say mila?
Rehan: Zahan k website say, is that Zahan's number
Numaan: no! yeh mera number hai
Rehan: kya main Zahan say baat ker sakta hoon
Numaan: sorry but he is in bathroom, if u want 2 talk 2 him call back after 10 mins
Rehan: ok thank u so much
Numaan: Zehan kisi nay phone kiya ta main nay kaha k 10 mins baad phone kerlain woh few mins main karay ga
Zahan: ok
after 10 mins
Rehan: Zara ab tum baat karo
Zara: nahi plz tum karo na aur loudspeaker peh lagao
Rehan: Hello! Salaam r u Zahan?
Zahan: yes i am
Rehan: how r u? aur UK main kaisay aana hua
Zahan: im fine, main studies k laye aaya hoon
Rehan: thats great👍🏼
Zahan: thanks! tum kya kartay ho, r u student or .....
Rehan: yes i am student and live with my family in London
Zahan: thats great 👏👍🏼
👍🏼Rehan: tnx! meri sis aap ki big fan hai,aap ka koi show tu nahi London main?
Zahan: London main tu nahi hai magar Nottingham main hai
Rehan: wow! when?
Zahan: next week on Sunday
Rehan: tnx thats huge surprise 4 my sis,thank u so much 4 ur time
Zahan: no problem
Rehan: tc cu on Sunday,bye
Zahan: bye

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

ohhhhhhhhh i am really sorry nazia
i wasn't able to read it and comment
abhi mujhe time mila hai to mainne read kia hai

the story is going great
just loved it
can't wait when zahan and zara milyenge
do cont soon
love afreen

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Nazmien aka Naz

@NazNgs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Hi nazia

My name is Naz and i just read alll ur parts of the fanfic

wow its amazing love it totally

i thought first it was a Sumit Kumkum story

but when i saw Sachin and Juhi..then started to read

its a very fresh and new story..but love it totally

love the way the story goes about Zara and Zahan..

loved all the parts and can't wait to read the next part

and what is gonne happen...

and imaging Sachin and Juhi as Zahan and Zara

is totally amazing....😉

btw my sister name is also Nazia..😃

anyways keep it up girl...

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soundsofcedar

@soundsofcedar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Hey Nazia GREAT JOB I LOVED THE PART😃😃😃...I took a break from studying and your update made me feel BETTER👏👏👏...I hope Zara and Zahan meet at the concert I am SO EXCITED UPDATE SOON😃😃😃

Luv Alwayz Sahar😳