Short FF: Drifted Apart :Part6 :pg17/10/07/09 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
reallyy cool part i love it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82
hi sonu
well written
but i feel su is saying false
he is just telling her so tht she is not upset
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83

Hhhhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuu

nice imagination & v well written. but as verni said it would be good to stick to one language probably hindi so that the effect would be more.
continue soon & let us know
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
Sonali, A real good part!!!
You are writing after such a long time that i had to read it from the beginning!!!!!!
Please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
hey sonu read ur part after long time...really nice part and nice dialouges...i just hope kk is fine inur next part...i cant see either su or kk to be in trouble
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
"Goodmorning.."Sumit kisses Kumkum's forehead..😳

"goodmorning.."She smiles, hugging him tightly..

"Neend aayi theek se?.."He caresses her hair..😳

"Sone diya tha raat ko..??.."She hides her face in his chest..😳😳😳

Life had been blisful for them.Some 11 months had passed since their confession to each other..Their relationship had reached to a new height.😳😳

Moving her hands on him, she asks.."Sumit..hum shaadi kab karenge??.."😳

Sumit smiles.."Bahut jaldi hai madam ko?"😉

"Nahin sumit..mein mazak nahin kar rahi..tumne kaha tha ki we'll marry each other in an year...press conferences mein log sawal poochte hain.."She's anxious, as her looks tell..😳

"Unka toh kaam hi hota hai kehna kumkum..aur..hum shaadi karenge na..I need a little time..main chahta hun ki sab planned ho..well-planned..fursat se sab kuch ho.."He explains..😳

"Par Sumit..agar us se pehle kuch ho gaya toh.."Kumkum looks at him..😕

"Toh main hun na..tumhaare saath.."He envelopes her in his arms again.She closes her eyes with a sigh.."I love you Sumit.."😳


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"I DON'T KNOW HOW IT WILL BE DONE..YOU HAVE TO DO IT BY SATURDAY THAT'S IT..!!!!"Sumit shouts at his assistant, Gaurav.

"Sir, but.."As Gaurav continues, Sumit screams.."QUIET.."😡

"Sorry sir."Gaurav says..

"Call Kumkum.."He massages his head, which is about to blast with pain.

He's extremely tired.

"Sumit?.."Kumkum enters with a coffee mug.😳

She moves behind him and massages his head with her soft, delicate hands.😛

"Tum thak gaye ho..pareshaan mat ho, kaam main sambhal loongi.."Sumit smiles.

"Dimaag kharab ho jata hai in logon ko samjhane mein..ek choti si baat nahin samajhte.."Sumit feels relaxed as she presses his temples.😳

Kumkum smiles "Tum rehne do..main kar doongi..Gaurav se hi toh baat karni hai na?.."😳

"Thanks yaar.."Sumit kisses his hands.

"Ghar chale jao na.."She continues massaging his head.

"Nahin yaar..abhi meeting hai JW Marriot mein.."He pulls her closer, making her fall on him.

"Ouch..Sumit..!!"She's shocked.

"Pyaari si kissie milegi?.." Sumit pulls her even closer.😉

"Shaitan"..Kumkum smiles.

"Yes, I am."He pulls her towards him and places his lips on hers.The warm imprint of his affection, makes her beetroot red..😳

As he loosens his grip, she runs away in embarassement.😳

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"Happy anniversay" Kumkum opens the door, making sumit astonished.

"wow..!!Its awesome.."Sumit looks around.😲

The entire room is decorated with red ballons, streamers and roses.As he moves ahead, he finds the dinning table already laid...😉

"Baithiye sir.."She switches off the lights and lights a candle.The soft music being played is suiting the romantic atmosphere..😳😳😳

"Tumne kyun kiya itna sab..aur..madam..din mein toh aap office mein thin..??..toh ye sab?.."He is really suprised at her efficiency..😛

"Haath ki safai?.."She winks at him..

"In haathon ne hi toh deewana bana diya hai.."Sumit gets up and gives her a warm hug.😳

She stands up and reciprocated his affection.

"Shall we dance?.."Sumit asks her and she nods.

Waltzing to soft music, they get closer to each other.Lost in each other's eyes, they forget time and place.😳

Dinner was a swift event.They kept whispering sweet nothings to each others.

"Kumkum..I am really sorry..main kuch nahin laya na tumhaare liye..wo actually, dhyaan hi nahin raha.."Kumkum keeps a hand on his lips.."its ok..tumhaare pyaar ke siva kuch nahin chahiye.."she smiles..😳😳😳

"I love you kumkum.."Sumit slowly gets closer to her lips.Kumkum closes her eyes.His intoxicating breath gives her goosebumps.

Sumit moves one hand at her back, kissing her gently.They forget time, place and circumstances and ghet lost in their lovey-dovey world.😳

He takes her in arms and carries her to the bed.

Soon the gentle love, turns to wild passion and they lost each other to be victorious in love.😳

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"Sumit..please mat jao.."Tears stream down her face.

"Kumkum..baba agar zaruri nahin hota toh main nahin jata na..tum jaanti ho naa ye conference attend karna kitna zaruri hai..??"Sumit hugs her warmly.😳

"Sumit..pata nahin kyun aisa lag raha hai ki hum .."Sumit kisses her cheeks.."Kuch nahin hoga..hum kabhie alag nahin honge hmm?..ek toh pichle kuch din tumhaari tabiyat bhi theek nahin thi na..tum isliye bhi pareshaan ho.."Sumit makes her sit..

"Tabiyat ka khayaal rakhogi aur jaa kar tests karva logi ok?.."Sumit gives her a glass of water.

Kumkum wipes her tears and takes a gulp of water "Mera appointment hai aaj shaam ka.."She hugs him by his waist.😊

"Good.abhi driver ke saath chali jaana aur take care hmm?..chalta hun..varna flight choot jayegi meri.."He kisses her head.

"Bye.."She feels choked up again as he leaves.😭

"Bye honey..!!"He touches her face and leaves for a new destination.😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#87

Hmm.. guess to kar liya... but lets see tu aage kya likhti hai...

the part's gud... kaafi bold topic chuna hai is baar... nice write up...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
wowww veyr nice dialouges and all romantic...keep it up and do update it soon....and anniversayr woww....it is nice part...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
hi sonu
kk might be pregnant
su is good or bad i dont now but
maybe he doesnt love her now or then he does and leaves her for some reason
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
fantastic part sonu.....full of love & passion......😳
cont soon...dear

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