Short FF: Drifted Apart :Part6 :pg17/10/07/09 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
eagerly w8ing 4 da nxt part
plz plz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Waking up next morning, Sumit finds himself on the bed..Sitting up, rubbing his eyes, he looks at the clock.."its 10:00?????What the hell..!!"😕

Jumping from the bed, he calls or rather screams for his coffee..Giving him the newspaper, Madhav kaka has enquiring looks.."Wo..kal ..kumkum.."😕

Remembering her, he almost runs to his room..

"Kumkum?.."He remembers the passionate night..But, was it passion or the regular "lust" or..😳

"oh shit..!!What must she be feeling..we..we always had a healthy friendship and..she was not that type and..what am I supposed to do now.."He was seriously confused and guilty...

"Ahem..kumkum?..?.."He knocks the cabin attached to his room..😳

"Sir?..She is absent..sent an application.."Kumkum's colleague, Jasmine replies..

"Oh..Thanks Jasmine.."Sumit quickly moves out..
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DING-DONG..!!!

The bell rings, but no one answers the door..

"Why isn't she answering?.."He thought, but he didn't have the courage to call her name..

He clumsily turned the knob of the door..and it worked..!!!The door wasn't locked at all..

"Kumkum??...Are you there?.."Sumit whispered silently...

Moving inside, he turned to her room..Hesitating for a while, he decided to move on..

She was there, lying on the bed, facing the wall opposite to him..😕

"Kumkum?.."He went to her and touched her forehead..She looked really pale..😭

"Fever??.."He said to himself..😳

Weakly she opened her eyes..."Su..Sumit?.."She said dreamily...

"Tum..tum you are unwell..??.."He held his hand, but she moved it away..😭

Getting up from the bed, she immediately covered herself with her dupatta, kept near her.."Su..Sumit sir?.."😭

"since when have you started calling me sir?.."Sumit asks awkwardly..

"Kumkum..I..I am really sorry...sorry for yesterday night..I..I was.."He looked down..😭

"No sir...I..I apologize..actually, I crossed my limits..and.."She says feebly..

"No..no..I...Kumkum..I.."He tries explaining something, he couldn't...😳

Kumkum broke down and unable to see her, he closed his eyes..."If..if something happens, I..I will be responsible because I crossed my boundaries..I broke the laws..I..I .."😭

"I love you..will you please stop saying all this non-sense.."Sumit utters..😳

Kumkum looks at him..She's in complete shock..!!"No.you can't love ..?"😲😲😲

"I love you..and I promise to be with you...the step we took wasn't an act of sudden passion or lust..I really loved you and couldn't say anything..do..do you love me..?.."He looked and kumkum..😳😳😳

"Haan.."She managed to express..😳
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"I loved you too..but I didn't want things to turn out this way..."..She sobbed..

"Its okay...it was destined.."Sumit takes her into an embrace..😳

"I love you.."He kisses her forehead...😳

"I'll call the doctor first.."He gets up with his cell phone..

"Sumit..?.."she holds his hand..

"Haan?.."He turns back..😕

"Are you sure..you love me..I mean..do ..do you love me..?..Tears streamed down her face..😭

"Yes honey..I love you.."😳

He bent down and softly placed his lips on her..She felt good, feeling close to him..He kissed her softly..😳😳
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She calmly enjoyed the touch..But, something inside her heart, made her worried..Something wasn't right..Maybe because it all happened in a very short time..😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
Wow....Well done..very well written...
'Love'.... aww how cute....Bless Su.
Poor Kk i hope she will be better in your next part.....
Can't wait for the next part....mwah x

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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: .x. Simran .x.

Wow....Well done..very well written...
'Love'.... aww how cute....Bless Su.
Poor Kk i hope she will be better in your next part.....
Can't wait for the next part....mwah x



Oh..!!Really gld that u liked it.😳..Will try to update ASAP.

And will try to make her fine soon too..😆😆

Love,
Sonali
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
Good 2 c u after such a long time....................& yes i loved it but was a short one.........do write soooooooonnnnnn & not keep us waiting otherwise we will forget what happened..............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76

wow what a cute part!!! i just loved it😳

so sweet su loves her..................................but dont know why me too feeling something wrong😕
anyways hope to see the next part soon😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
Awwwwwwwww
what a part yaar loved it
fabulous
what a fabulous part
rocking
lovely
fantabulous
hats off to u
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78

sonu lovely part thoda different hii yaaa paar cont soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
Ohh so it seems it was not a lust..good part sonu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
hmm... love... kaafi jaldi haan.... tu beech mein koi twist nahi daalegi??😉😉
Waise nice part... sweet one... haan if u need suggestion, just one... try to write the dialogues in hindi... will have better effect.😳... bura nahi manna... I felt so I said...😊😳
Cont soon... luv u...😊

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