Short FF: Drifted Apart :Part6 :pg17/10/07/09 - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I think I knw whts coming up next...nways lets see...keep it up sonu...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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fabulous part sonali😛
lagta hai i know whats comming next lol lekin phir bhi dhekte hain.............................it was a very romantic part dear just loved it.........but i dont know why but feel that something wrong is going to happen😕...............well lets see!😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i too gussed aga kya hoga sonu
yuup lovely naration cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowowow nice part plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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too good

mind blowing
too good
updtae soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really nice part sonu

plz continue soon with next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: verni

Hmm.. guess to kar liya... but lets see tu aage kya likhti hai...Awww..i know..u noe me better than me.😳

the part's gud... kaafi bold topic chuna hai is baar... nice write up...all ur aashirwaad😳


Lov u,

sonu

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: seemahujufan

wowww veyr nice dialouges and all romantic...keep it up and do update it soon....and anniversayr woww....it is nice part...



Thanks Ruhi di..!!😳

Originally posted by: panjwani

hi sonu

kk might be pregnant
su is good or bad i dont now but
maybe he doesnt love her now or then he does and leaves her for some reason
continue soon



Lo aa gayin hamari antaryaami didi jee..😆

Well..dimaag ke ghode zyada mat daudao..i m posting a part today itself.😳

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi

fantastic part sonu.....full of love & passion......😳

cont soon...dear



Passion of what?..their love or my stories?..😆

Thanks di..😳

Originally posted by: *Resham*

I think I knw whts coming up next...nways lets see...keep it up sonu...



aapke toh pair padti hoon..u noe y..!!Pleeaaseeee!!! FF restat kar do naa
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mdtafan

fabulous part sonali😛

lagta hai i know whats comming next lol lekin phir bhi dhekte hain.............................it was a very romantic part dear just loved it.........but i dont know why but feel that something wrong is going to happen😕...............well lets see!😉



Thanks a lott dear..well.m riting a part now...hope u like it too..😳

Originally posted by: preethi

i too gussed aga kya hoga sonu

yuup lovely naration cont soon



Ek aur antaryaami jee aa gayin??..Roku i m riting.😛

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowow nice part plzz contuied soon



Thanks dear.😳

Originally posted by: miss.sonia

too good

mind blowing
too good
updtae soon



Thanks dear.😳

Originally posted by: juhuti

really nice part sonu

plz continue soon with next part



Gld that u likd it dear😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
"Damn it..!!!"Sumit threw his briefcase on the bed..

"Kya hua Sumit?..Tum pareshaan kyun ho?..aur conference kaisi rahi?.."Kumkum asks sumit..

"Yaar..ek toh wo Natalie..I hate that woman..jaanti ho usne kya kaha?.."Sumit was looking aggressively hot-tempered.

"Kya?.."Kumkum asks, scared by his looks.

"She's expecting..!!I know its just another trap.These girls want to trap me.Oh! not me, but my property.."He was angry

He didn't know why it made Kumkum even more pale, than she was looking when he saw her first.

"Kumkum tum..kya soch rahi ho?.."He lies down on the bed..

"Wo..Natalie.."Kumkum fumbled..

"One of those girls.."He said softly.."Par believe me, I am sure she's just trapping me..she's not ..I mean even if she is..then sh can just..erm..clean it up.."

His words suprise Kumkum.."Sumit..!!"

"Kumkum..chalo..chodo ye sab..aur ye batao..yahaan office mein sab theek tha na?..aur tum theek ho na?..itni pale kyun lag rahi ho?..hmm.."He asks her to sit besides him..

"I..I am fine..tum aaram karo..main abhi cc..cc..coffee mangwati hun.."She moves out of the room and cries bitterly..

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"Call kumkum please.."Sumit instructs his receptionist.

"Yes sir."she replies.

Kumkum enters, wearing a blue sequined kurta and jeans.."Hmm..bulaya?.."

The tear marks on her face, made sumit worry more "Baitho kumkum.."

She sits down and asks.."kuch kaam tha.."

"Kya baat hai kumkum?..jab se aaya hun tab se dekh raha hun...tum pale bhi lag rahi ho..aur..tum royi bhi ho..batao..kya baat hai?.."Sumit holds her hand..

"Ku..kuch nahin hai sumit..wo bas tab..tabiyat theek nahin thi..aur..aur koi baat nahin hai.."she smiles.

"Tumhaari reports toh aa gayi hongi na?..Reports do mujhe..hum abhi chalte hain doctor ke paas.."He says firmly..

"Nahin..nahin..wo..rep..reports theek aayin hain..main..main gayi thi doctor ke paas aur..i..I am fine Sumit.."She's near tears now..

"Kumkum..kuch aisa hai ki tum mujhse theek se nahin keh paa rahi ..accha.." he goes to her ..She too, gets up..

"Idhar aao.."He hugs her tightly.."Ab batao mujhe..kya pareshaani hai..??"

She immediately breaks down into tears.."sumit..main..main kuch kehna chaahti hun tum..tumse.."she hesitates for a while.."magar samajh nahin.."

"ssh..kuch mat socho..bas bol do.."He caresses her back, though glancing at the office clock time and again, calculating how much time, he can spend with her before his next meeting..

"Sumit..main..sumit..main.."She looked on the floor..

"Tum kya kumkum?.."He was getting impatient..

"Sumit..I ..I am pregnant.."

Her last three words left him dumbfounded.."WHAT..????.."He screamed.

"Ky..Kya kaha..tum..DIMAAG TOH THEEK HAI TUMHARA..??.."He shakes her violently..

His rash behaviour makes her cry all the more..

"I..I don't want to hear anything now..I can't bear any more shocks..It'd be better ki abhi tum mujhe akela chod do..Just get out.."He screamed and she ran away from his room, sobbing badly..


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"Main..kya karoon..ab kahaan jaoon?..Kis se baat karoon..??Kya Sumit aur mere beech ka woh rishta jhootha tha?..Kya sumit iss bacche ko apnayega?..Main..main kya karoon..??.."

Tears streamed down Kumkum's face as she walked down the road.The weather was violent.Wind was slowly turning into a storm.

Her heart was shattered into pieces.She had never thought even in her wildest dreams that Sumit would treat her like dust.

She was heartbroken.Suddenly, her chain of thought was disrupted by sound of mandir bells.She looked around and saw herself in front of a mandir.

As she was crossing the road, something sudden happened.

"SUMITTTT...!!!!" she screamed as a truck approached her.Within minutes, she fell to the ground, bleeding heavily .
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