Short FF: Drifted Apart :Part6 :pg17/10/07/09 - Page 13

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Posted: 16 years ago
hello sonali
thanks a lottttttttttttttttttt for writing
i was really waiting for it

ok regarding the part
omg it was really an amazing part dear
loved it sooooooooo much....
it was toooo emotional😭
very well written yaar....main to ro pari😭😭
my god never imagined su in this phase
ye to ekta ke kisi serial ka character lagta haišŸ˜†
omg now let see aage kia hota hai
overalla AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
do cont soon

luv,
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Posted: 16 years ago
Omg😲 Thank u thank u thank u for writing after so longYou are definitely one of the best writersšŸ‘šŸ¼ No questions abt that. Pls do continue😊 a really very shocking part. Amazing Sonu
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Sonali,
I just caught up with this FF and it's truly amazing.
I can't believe, Sumit was saying all this, whatever sumit said were too harsh and rude, I hope he realize soon what he had done and what Kumkum means to him.
I hope Kumkum got a person who will support her, and I really want her to show sumit what she truly is.
Pls continue soon and please do PM me if possible.

Luv u<333
Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago

Drifted Apart:

Two months passed, since they drifted apart, since he teased her last, since she smiled last, since they shared togetherness last, since they shared their last piece of the bitter memory…

"Tumko ek kaam kaha tha who bhi theek se nahin kiya tumne?...tumne London wala call miss kaise kiya?..."

"Ma'am…meri tabiyat theek na.."

"We're not here to listen to your fables of illness …you are a f****** *****!Get lost now!!"

Moving out of her boss' room, Kumkum took her place again and stared at the idol of Lord Krishna, without any human expression. She hardly cried after the last month and nor did she smile!

"Hey Kumkum !Woh…Nagar ne jo file no. 212 kal tumhe di thi na..woh mangayi hai…"Nikita came rushing towards the reception counter, which was Riddima's workspace.

Watching her still lost, she pats her head…"Tabiyat toh theek hai na teri…kya hua Kumkum?..."

"Hunh? ...nahin…kuch nahin…ye…ye lo…"Taking out the file, she takes a deep breath, coming out of a trance.

"tu thak gayi hai…bas 2 ghante main shift over ho jayegi phir wapas ghar chalenge…Atul aur Sapna bhi saath aayenge…"Caressing her cheek Nikki went away.

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"you'll be reporting an hour early tomorrow!" Her boss smirked as she signed the register.

"Jee…"Quietly, she moved out to the office parking, where Atul, Sapna and Nikita were waiting for her.

"Kumkum?...Kitni der kar di…kahan thi tum…"Atul asks her , while tying the helmet around his head.

"Wo…Mr.Kharbanda ne rok liya tha .."She explains…

"Chal…ab tu baith Atul ke saath hum auto dhoondhte hain…"Sapna patted her back.

"Sa…Sapna…aaj main aur Nikita auto se chale jayenge…tum dono saath…"

"Kumkum aisi haalat mein tum auto mein travel nahin kar sakti ho…tumhe takleef ho sakti hai…pichle hafte decide kiya than a humne….ab bas chup hi raho tum…"She and Nikita walk away to search for an auto.

"I'm sorry Atul…"she mumbled as he started the scooter…

"Kyun Kumkum?..."He was a bit taken aback.

"Ek wife husband ke beech aa jati hun mein…tumhe aur Sapna ko meri wajah se…."

"Kyun…main apni behen ko nahin bitha sakta?...hmm…aur waise bhi Kumkum…hum sab tumse pyaar karte hain aur yehi chahte hain ki iss waqt tumhe zyada stress naa ho.."Atul explained …

Kumkum was quiet for the rest of the journey…

"Pahunch gaye.."He announced and waved to Sapna, who stepped down the auto with Nikita…

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"Kya hua tujhe??...kahan khoyi hui hai Kumkum?..."Nikita asks her as she frantically turned a half-burnt chapatti.

"Kuch nahin Niki…"She turned the stove off.

"Mujhse jhooth bol rahi hai?.."She casually replied while serving food in two steel plates.

Kumkum looked up to her eyes and then, Nikita noticed the moistness in her eyes…

Keeping the plate aside, she hugged Kumkum tight…

"Aaj birthday hai uska Nikita…"She sobbed hard and it was perhaps, the first time she was doing so.

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Nikita moved out of the shabby one bedroom apartment and rushed to the similar looking apartment next doors. Knocking it once only, woke its residents.

"Kya hua Niki? itni raat ko?" Sapna draped a dupatta over her faded, cotton night gown.

"Kumkum ki tabiyat theek nahin hai…tu thodi der ke liye aa sakti hai?..."She pleaded.

"Jaldi chal…"Without any ado, Sapna ran barefoot to their room.

"Kumkum?...kya hua?..."Sapna settled herself on the mattress placed on the floor, where Kumkum was groaning in a low tone.

"Main thee….aah…theek hun……"she held her hand.

"Ise dard bhi ho raha hai aur…thodi si vomiting bhi hui thi…"Nikita informed.

"Dhania hai?...main abhi kadha bana deti hun…"sapna caressed her stomach a bit and then, rushed to the kitchen to make kadha for her.

The kadha did wonders, as Kumkum fell into a deep slumber after drinking it, relieved of the pain. Sapna still, caressed her stomach as Kumkum felt better by the gesture.

"Is agle hafte doctor ke paas lejana hoga na…"Sapna asked Nikita.

"Nahin…check-up date toh isi week ki thi par abhi haath thoda tang tha…meri choti behen ki fees jani thi aur…Kumkum neb hi bas davaiyon ke paise rakhe aur baaki mujhe de diye…isiliye…"Niki looks at Kumkum's pale face.

"Agle hafte Arul ko salary milni hai…phir hum log check-up karva denge…"Sapna assures.

They had been a family to each other-sharing joys, sorrows and pains. Though Kumkum had known them since 2 months only, but they were her family now…

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Sonu,
The part is really awesome;
So that's kumkum's life, the poor had to go throw a lot, but she has really good friends.
I am really looking forward for Sumit's side of story.
Please continue soon and thanks for the PM.

Luv u<333
Kashish
Posted: 16 years ago
we read all episodes today and they are so good that we want you to write soon, as it is like watching kumkum serial. we love this ffs. plaese continue soon. can't wait long.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Please please continue soooooooonnnnnnnnn...............really looking forward 2 c what happens 2 their relationship.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice part sonu....well done

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