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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi, everybody, my name is Deepa, and this is my first time writing something. I suck at writing so I'm pretty sure this will be bad but here it goes.
It had been 4 years since they had last seen each other, but he was drunk. So if you don't count that it's been 7. They were at a party and were enjoying. Pragya has had a crush on Abhi since the first time that they have seen each other. Since then she just couldn't forget him. That party had changed everything including Abhi seeing Tanu for the first time. Tanu, oh how Pragya hated her so much. That day Pragya was going to say everything to Abhi and now she never could. Since then she hasn't told anyone and she hid those feelings. "Di" Bulbul yelled bringing her out of her thoughts. "Yeah" she yelled back. "Look what I got, a letter from Tanu" Pragya cringed. "She invited me to a party and ... she said not to bring... you". Pragya was beyond caring so she said to Bulbul "you can go. I don't really want to"
Bulbul left and Pragya thought "hmm, what if I did that to her" she decided to and got to work. She made invitation cards and started mailing them out. Then she took her savings and booked the best party hall and started to decorate it. The day after next was going to be her party. She invited everyone, but Tanu. She left her out. She knew Abhi and Tanu were still dating but she was sure Abhi would tell Tanu what was in the letter.
Abhi found a letter in his mailbox and when he opened it, he was shocked. It was from Pragya and it said she was having a ... party? And it also said not to bring Tanu with him. He told Tanu and she wasn't really paying attention so she said "hmm okay go ahead." Then she started talking about her party and how great it was. Abhi left to get ready for the party.
At the party Abhi ended up having a great time and took lots of pictures for Tanu to see. When Tanu was calling his phone battery died and he never heard it. At that moment he crashed into Pragya. "Sorry" they both said in unison. They were shocked to see each other and they both looked really good with each other. Pragya came out of her comfort zone and was wearing a long western dress(like the one she was wearing when the actors of Kya Kool Hai Hum 3 came on) she was looking gorgeous and Abhi couldn't take his eyes off of her. They caught up and Pragya ended up getting drunk. While she was drunk she told Abhi what was in her heart and they made love to each other(yes Abhi was sober but he couldn't stop himself and realized he loved Pragya too and not Tanu)
The next day Pragya woke up and realized what had happened and saw Abhi next to her. Abhi woke up and saw her. He said to her that when he leaves he is breaking up with Tanu and staying with her from then on. Then he said the three magical words to her, "I love you and I know you love me, you said it while you were drunk." Pragya looked and him and threw herself on him. Then they got married and lived happily ever after dealing with everything TOGETHER! Thanks to THE PARTY!
Hope you all liked it and leave you're comments if you want me to write more"! Thanks!😊 Also if you would like me to make this into a SS and include things on what happened in the past, please let me know.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello deepa.
It's beautiful written. Do write more.
I would love to c ur stories.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sijay.is.real

Hello deepa.

It's beautiful written. Do write more.
I would love to c ur stories.


Aw thank you so much. If you would like the next time I write I will PM you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepa1121


Aw thank you so much. If you would like the next time I write I will PM you.

Yea for sure. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi Deepa!
i loved it
do write more
you write beautifully
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -haleemzz-

hi Deepa!

i loved it
do write more
you write beautifully


Thank you so much. Would you like me to PM you when I write again?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Deepa the OS was so sweet and beautifully written.
I loved it a lot.write more stories on Abhigya like this.Thanks for the PM sweetheart.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sweet and cute moments of party written very well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Scarlettkevin

Deepa the OS was so sweet and beautifully written.
I loved it a lot.write more stories on Abhigya like this.Thanks for the PM sweetheart.


Thank you. I will try and write again soon!
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Thank you very much!

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