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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sijay.is.real

First of all, sorry for not commenting on ur story as I was not here for some days.

OMG! U cannot skip commenting on such as an excellent fiction.
So, here is a little feedback. -
I reall like ur story it's good yet different than others. The concept is varying kind of thing. The way abhi is in ur story is different than in kkb story line. And for.. pragya she is always a sweet and understanding girl.
But at the end of part 4 who is pragya talking about. Totally curious to know what happens next.

Thanks for this beautiful story.

And at last I am eagerly waiting for next update for sure.


Thanks for the review Sijay. It's nice to read that you find my story different and beautiful. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaraPriya

I think 'she' is sarla


Good guess 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hailly

Read all the updates in one go.
Awesome update. Loved it
continue soon plz.


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

that is soo amazing updatee


Thank you Shafoo 😊
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Part 5
It was getting dark. Abhi and Pragya were sitting in a bench near a road side tea stall. Abhi said, "You just met your father. Why would Maa hate you? You are thinking too much Pragya". His mouth said those words but he knew that she was affected very much. It was more than meeting her father.

Flashback
Pragya's dad felt it weird that a young lady came to talk to him but left in a jiffy. He got suspicious. He wanted to see the camera recordings. He saw that the lady didn't go outside the restaurant but went inside. He told the person in the monitoring room to get details of the lady as she must be staying in the restaurant or must have come to visit someone in the restaurant. One of the hotel staff identified her, told him that her name is Pragya Arora and her room number was found. His eyes had hope instead of doubt now.

He knocked her room the next day morning. She didn't see his face after opening the door as she was hurrying up for the conference. She felt awkward to see him. He said, "Madam, you wanted to talk to me yesterday."
"Yes, but I have to go now." she said abruptly.
"Would you mind 10 minutes at the lounge before you go?" he asked in a pleasing voice.
She couldn't say no. She nodded yes slightly.
"I will be waiting for you Ms. Pragya Adora", he left saying this.

They sat on a table near the glass window with a pool view. He asked, "Your mom's name is Sarla, right?". I know why he was asking that and replied yes. "Do you know who I am? I am your dad". How weird it is to hear your dad introducing himself as your dad when you are at your 30s! She had mixed feelings. He was so happy seeing her. He took out something from a bag. It was a small photo of two kids. He had a photo of Bulbul and her. She was touched when he told her about the childhood moments of her with him. She didn't even remember them but he did. She was lost in his talks about how she wanted to become a pilot one day. After few weeks, she would want to be an astronaut. He laughed while saying how she switched careers within weeks.

He asked about Bulbul. When he came to know that Bulbul is no more., he went out and sat by the pool and covered his face with his hands. Pragya's phone rang. It was Abhi. She said in a husky voice, "I will call you back later". He could know that she was talking happily even in that low voice. He asked what was the matter. She said, "Please, I will you tell later. You are my baby na? Bye"

He accused Sarla Maa. He added that Maa had brought up us like herself. If it was someone else, she wouldn't have tolerated any accusations against her Maa. But she was mum.
She hesitated but she decided to ask him. "Why did you.."
"leave your Maa?" he finished her sentence. He was silent for few moments. She put her hands on his hands on the table.
"I had an affair"

She took her hands off. "I don't want to hide any fact from you. I know I made a mistake. I apologized her. I said sorry for more than 100 times. People make mistakes. But I apologized. She started treating me like I was a criminal. She didn't talk to me for 2 months. My mom she behaved as if I was invisible to her. I thought why should I be there? Why should I work hard and earn for people who treat me like trash? So I left one day. But I didn't elope. I told Sarla about my decision. She slapped me. I didn't see her after that. I came to London 10 years ago", he continued.

He could see that Pragya had a disgusted look on her face. "Beta, you don't get it. I am not saying I m right. I accepted my mistakes. But she humiliated me. She belonged to the old school. She is not broad minded." he told Pragya. Pragya started leaving. He tried to stop her.

"What will you do if your son in law cheats your daughter?", she asked. He left her hand. She said, "You belong to the old school. Different rules for daughter and wife. Guys like you want your daughter to be independent, confident and have all the luxuries. But when it comes to wife, you want her to tolerate whatever you do."

Part 6

Edited by nive_kb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Loved it.
Pragya finally spoke for herself against her father. But felt Sad for their family because of their father.
Continue soon now.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
somewhere pragya dad accuse pragya related to sarla that's wat now pragya going through broken & afraid...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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As promised :) Life comes in the way, like 7am exams three days in a row, and then you update way too fast for me!
First of all, I forgot to say this to you last time-I LOVE THE BANNER! Is it your edit? Love love...happy love. 😆 Also God bless you for putting links at the end of your chapters for the next update. Makes it so convenient!

Chapter Two Thoughts:

Aww, the challenge of her calling him by his name until they get married again! I'd want to see this on the show, yes please! Because as much as I want her to call him by his name, I love "Suniye" too much for it to be let go of.

I've mentioned this to someone else as well...I love when writers describe what the characters are wearing! Shes sending him selfies???!! WHAT...who is this? What were the quick, flirty replies? Emojis or words? Nive, you can't leave me hanging there!

Very-Abhi like to send back the pictures with himself in it. Hmm, since when did he get so good with photoshop? Or did bechara Purab make those for him last minute? And I like how he's not asking her about her father, noting that she might not be comfortable speaking about it.

Ooh, who's the girl? She fell because of fear from an insect? I wonder who that reminds me of...

So I'm guessing the girl is her step-sister? How old is this girl? Does she look like Pragya? Will they become friends before Pragz finds out about her father?

Maybe I should stop asking questions. Will read the next part soon, dear! So far, its great Nivu!

Edited by Naina- - 9 years ago
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Part 6:
Pragya heard a thud and turned back only to see him falling on the floor. The chair behind him had made him slip. She called for help and the hotel staff came to rescue. She was waiting in the hospital corridor. She got a call. She attended it and it was from a fellow participant in the conference venue. He was very impressed with her presentation so that he had thought of publishing a paper with her. So he had got her number from the conference organizer with much difficulty since she couldn't be seen at the conference. How could she forget about the conference! She scolded herself. She thanked Mr. Arjun and was about to reply when she saw the doctor there. She told him that she will talk to him in a few minutes. The doctor told her that he had just
suffered a minor head injury and there won't be any problem.

She was waiting beside her dad for almost half an hour. He was sleeping. Her phone rang and the hospital staff asked her not to use mobile phone as it will disturb the patients. She cut the call and texted Arjun that she is with her dad in hospital and will be coming late to the conference. After 15 more minutes, he opened his eyes. She said she just wanted to bid goodbye to him and stood up to go. He asked, "You are lying. You couldn't leave me. That's why you accompanied me to the hospital. You wanted to be sure that I am fine. That's why you have been waiting for me wake". She replied, "I am not lying. Yes, I wanted to be sure you are alright because you are a person, not because you are my dad. Infact, I hate you. It's the humanity that my mom taught me that made to wait here. Good Bye" She had silly thoughts. She wanted to forget that day. She even thought that the dark pink saree always brings her bad luck.

When she reached the conference venue, it was past lunch. She no longer felt curious about her dad. She focused herself on the conference. She didn't know when she returned to the hotel and slept. The next morning was a fresh start. She took her phone only to get terrified. She didn't send the text to Arjun but Sarla Maa. She checked the delivery status and it was delivered. Her fingers stumbled to call Sarla Maa. Maa didn't pick up. She called her Daadi. Daadi picked up the phone. She asked about Maa with a shivering voice. Daadi said she went to the market and asked "What happened to you? Why is your voice shaking?". She replied, "Nothing Daadi. Woke up from a bad dream". Daadi murmured, "What happened to both mother and daughter? Both are behaving weird." Pragya was quick to ask "What did Maa do?". Daadi said, "She is not talking properly. She must have been worrying about you. Does she want a reason to worry? She always gets some reason. Leave that. How is your conference going on?"

"It is going well. I have to go now, Daadi. Bye", she said as she ended the call.

Maa is behaving weird. What did she think after seeing the message? What will she think about me now? Why is she not attending my calls? Pragya couldn't think anything beside these questions. She couldn't stay in London anymore. She decided that she should see Maa as soon as possible.

Now


Abhi assured Pragya, "I know Maa very well. She would not be angry on you if you tell her what happened. She would be proud of you. Don't be a cry baby. Let's go home now". Pragya wanted to go home, but she didn't want to. Abhi asked her in a teasing tone, "If you don't want to go home,
may be we could go on a night date." She went and sat in his car. Abhi dropped her at her house. Maa was sitting near the door lost in thoughts. She didn't see them. Pragya went near her and shooked her. Maa was shocked to see her. "How are you here? When did you come? When did you start from London? Why didn't you talk to me?" she went on asking and hugged her.

She was angry on Pragya like a kid. Pragya said she tried talking to her, but she didn't pick up her calls. Maa said that her phone got repaired yesterday and she went to the market today to give it for repair. Pragya looked at Abhi who was standing near his car. Abhi and Pragyed smiled like maniacs. Pragya kissed her Maa and said, "Thank you so much". Sarla Maa was puzzled. But she was happy to see her daughter back that she didn't think about Pragya's behaviour. She saw Abhi standing and welcomed him inside. It was indeed a happy dinner.

The next day, as soon as she sat on her table in the staff room, the clerk came and told her
that the Principal wanted to see her immediately.

Part 7
Edited by nive_kb - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sijay.is.real

Loved it.

Pragya finally spoke for herself against her father. But felt Sad for their family because of their father.
Continue soon now.



Thank you Sijay! Updated 😊

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