SS: Abhigya apart yet close - PART 10 (Last part) updated Pg11 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

wow that is awesome update love it


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maggie11

Awesome updates, I read them in one go
Can't wait to read more


Thank you 😊
Updates will be done as regularly as possible.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4:
Sarla Maa attended the phone. "Maa" said Pragya. "Beta, How are you? How was the presentation? Did you have dinner?" Sarla Maa fired questions. Then she realized that she didn't allow Pragya to speak. Pragya said everything was good. "I miss you Maa", she added. Sarla Maa replied that she went there just three days ago and now she started missing her. Pragya said, "I want to talk to you ma. I wish you were here". Sarla Maa felt that Pragya was home sick and she started telling what happened in the marriage hall and other neighbourhood stories. After some time, she couldn't hear any reply from Pragya. Sarla Maa realized that Pragya had slept. She smiled and ended the call.

One day later -

Abhi was coming down the stairs and he saw Bunty sitting in the hall alone. Abhi asked him why was he sitting alone. Bunty sadly explained that Bubbly started going to dance class and he feels bored. He said everyone is busy. Abhi sat on the sofa and took him in his lap. Abhi suggested him to go and play with friends. Bunty showed his leg injury and told that his mom won't allow him to go out until it heals. Abhi asked what game does he want to play with his Chachu. Bunty replied "Ludo. No, chess. No, Snakes and Ladders. No, Carrom. No, hide and seek" Abhi said, "No problem man. We can play all games one by one.".

Pragya on the way to airport kept calling Abhi twice. Abhi's phone was on the table near sofa. He was playing with Bunty and doesn't notice it. Pragya boarded the flight. Abhi came to his room tired and noticed that his phone is missing. He asked Robin to look for his phone. Robin searched for the phone and a message notification sound makes him see Abhi's phone. He went to Abhi's room and gave him the phone. Abhi saw two missed calls from Pragya. He saw a message.
"I am returning to India"
It was from Pragya. He called her immediately. Her phone was switched off.

She is supposed to be attending conference now. Why is she leaving London? Is she in any problem? She spoke very happily yesterday. What happened today? She has been online 3 minutes before. Why has she switched off her phone? Has she boarded the flight already? His mind was going wild with reasons for her message. He called Purab and asked him to check for Pragya's name in the passenger list of flights departing from London. He was right. Pragya's name was there in a flight. He decided he shouldn't tell anyone about Pragya's early arrival before knowing the reason. How did she get flight tickets at the last minute? What was the urge to leave from London one day earlier? He was thinking while waiting for her at Mumbai Airport. He went three hours early to the Airport.

Finally he saw here but she didn't see him. She was walking like someone sucked her energy up-to last drop. He called her "Pragya". She turned and saw him. Her helpless face had a relief. She came to Abhi quickly and stood for few seconds. He couldn't understand her. She hugged him. She didn't cry. Not even a single drop of tear came from her eyes. But he could feel that she was in pain. He asked, "What happened?" She didn't utter a word. She hugged him more tightly.

She just said "She shouldn't hate me". Abhi asked "Who?"

Edited by nive_kb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm also eager to know who pragya is referring to ????? Update next part soon...its good to see abhi spending time with bunty ...cvs has stopped showing kids in the show..its refreshing to see them here
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Posted: 9 years ago
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that is soo amazing updatee
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all, sorry for not commenting on ur story as I was not here for some days.
OMG! U cannot skip commenting on such as an excellent fiction.
So, here is a little feedback. -
I reall like ur story it's good yet different than others. The concept is varying kind of thing. The way abhi is in ur story is different than in kkb story line. And for.. pragya she is always a sweet and understanding girl.
But at the end of part 4 who is pragya talking about. Totally curious to know what happens next.

Thanks for this beautiful story.

And at last I am eagerly waiting for next update for sure.
Edited by Sijay.is.real - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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NOTE:

First of all thanks for being interested in my SS so far. Do you people want to be PMed whenever there is a new update? Please like this post if you want to be PMed about new updates.
Edited by nive_kb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice updates nive :)
Did pragya met her father ?! Waiting 4 the next ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all the updates in one go.
Awesome update. Loved it
continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anamika.viji

Nice updates nive :)

Did pragya met her father ?! Waiting 4 the next ...


Thank you Viji !

You will get the answer in the coming update.

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