SS: Abhigya apart yet close - PART 10 (Last part) updated Pg11

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Part 1:

After Tanu was exposed, everything returned to normalcy. Abhi and Pragya were like they were bonded by fevicol. Everything was well until Abhi accidentally called her Mugambo. Pragya reminded him that he shouldn't call her by that name and whether he wants her to be like that again. After that Abhi called her Mugambo whenever he wanted to annoy her and to start a pillow fight.

One day after such a fight, he said that they need to talk and took her to MM garden for a night walk. He said that he feels awkward whenever he sees her in those glamorous sarees. It reminds him of the LM days which he doesn't want to remember. Pragya felt like someone opened the lock of her heart's door. Words rushed from her mouth faster than the speed of light. She said how uncomfortable she felt and she couldn't be normal at all. They both decided that they need to be apart for some time and things will get better soon. Daadi and Sarla Maa were totally against this. Abhi convinced them by saying they are divorced now. So they need to marry again. Abhi told, "I haven't enjoyed my marriage days. I want to know how it will be to wait to marry the girl you love. We can have the engagement now and can have marriage few months later. Please" Sarla Maa nodded yes. Daadi also said OK for Abhi. Abhi and Pragya gave attention to their careers.

It was almost a week after the engagement that Pragya decided to attend a conference in London. It was new to her to wait for her boyfriend at the airport. Abhi was a little upset at her going abroad but he bid her Godspeed happily. Finally, she arrived at London. It was too cold and beautiful. She stood outside the Airport for few minutes staring the place forgetting everything else. Someone rushing inside hit her accidentally and she fell down. A man helped her get up and she was appalled to see the old man. Her mind raced back to her childhood. A cute little chubby girl running into her father's arms screaming "Papa". She came back to present when he asked her "Are you OK?". After seeing she was fine, he went. She couldn't believe that she saw him.

She boarded a Taxi to her hotel. She couldn't adore the beauty of the new place while travelling but lost in thoughts. She wanted to see him again. She couldn't understand what she was thinking. She wanted to meet the man whom she never wanted to see in her life. Is it because he was her father? May be not. She wanted to know how he was. She wanted to know whether he is happy now. She was feeling a little guilty for thinking about him. Her phone rang. It was Abhi and she smiled. She said, "Hello Rockstar ji, I reached London and I am alright." She laughed without any reason. Abhi replied, "Haan Professor ji. How is London?"

"You are back to calling me by names" retorted Pragya. Abhi said, "You can call me Rockstar but I shouldn't call you Professor. It's unfair. Are you a female chauvinist?' Pragya argued that she called him Rockstar out of love. Abhi replied, "Professor is also a loveable name." Pragya told Abhi that she saw him. Abhi asked "Who?". The word denied to come out of her throat. It was stuck there. She finally managed to tell him that she met her father accidentally. The Taxi driver told her that they reached the hotel. Pragya told Abhi that she will talk to him later and ended the call.

Abhi felt happy. It's not because she met her father. He even didn't know whether she was happy or sad for seeing her father. He was happy that she chose to tell it to him. He didn't even know why her father left her family. He didn't know her past completely. He was glad that she didn't hesitate to share it with him even when he didn't know about her equation with her father.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey... Good start!!

Mutual seperation, Pragya working and Pragya's dad.
So many things many of us want to see and everything in one single fic...

Looking forward for the story.
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Nive šŸ¤—!! Loving it ā¤ļø 😃
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Nive ā­ļøšŸ‘
Pragya met her father and missed him😭
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Yeay...they decided to be apart for a while...Keep going NivešŸ‘
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that is awesome plzz continued soon
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Thank you all for your feedback 😊
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Its nice please continue soon
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Part 2:
The hotel room was comforting for her restless mind. She didn't know when she slept. Her phone rang. She picked it up while being half asleep. "Good Morning Fuggy" she heard Abhi say.

"My Handsome fiance, we are at different time zones. We can't have mornings together. Let me sleep." she said in a sleepy voice. "Pragya, it's afternoon for me. I said Good morning to you only. Come on wake up now. Did you go to London one day earlier just to sleep?" he said in a dominating voice. "Suniye, I am tired. Please". As soon as she said, she bite her lips. He started asking curiously, "What did you just say?". She had challenged Abhi that she won't call him Suniye but by name until marriage. She said nothing and told him that she will go, get ready.

She wore her favourite plain red Saree. It was her favourite not because it was her favourite color but she had wore it during two important moments in her life. She wore a brown overcoat to manage the cold climate. For the next 7 hours, she was like a professional tourist. Pragya never had taken much selfies. But today was a different day. She clicked a selfie and send it to selfie and Abhi's reply was about her dress. She blushed when he found out that she was wearing his jacket. She was clicking hundreds of selfies and sending it to Abhi. Abhi was sending quick flirty replies.

It was already 5 in the evening She returned to the hotel and found someone calling her Pragya. Who knew her name here, she thought. It was a young man with a gift wrapped parcel. The guy said it was from Abhi. Pragya called him and asked about the parcel. "Abhi has fans abroad too", he said. She opened it and saw her photos that she took today. But there was a change, Abhi was with her in all photos. She was amused. She asked him how. "Technology Pragya", he said. "But how fast is this? How did this just happen?". She was excited beyond anything. He again said Technology. She was blushing so much that he could hear her blushing. This stopped his thought of asking her about her dad. He thought she will tell when she is comfortable. She was about to open her room when she heard a voice of a lady screaming and things falling down.

It came from a nearby room. She went there. The room was not locked. It was just half closed. She asked, "Is there any problem? Do you need any help?". All she could hear was silence . She was hesitant. It was a new place but she couldn't leave. She opened the door with an embarrassed face. She saw a young girl lying down with few cardboard boxes over her. Abhi was still on the line. He asked whether there was any problem. She said she will call him later.

She informed the hotel staff. They were there in few minutes. It seemed that the girl just fainted seeing an insect and left the things in her hand. As Pragya went to her room, she could hear one of the hotel staff requesting the girl to talk to her father because he is making the presence of an insect a big issue.

Edited by nive_kb - 9 years ago
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Its so cute that abhi is using technology to make her blush...is hotel staff referring to that girls father is pragya's father??? Im curious to know...please update soon

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