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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: -Sunkissed
RES!!!
UNRES!!!
MINA DI! What an idea!? This story is just jaw-dropping.
Wonderfully constructed and I love the title! Perfect!
I love our Chashmish's character here, apt for her personality. Loved when she wanted to get in Slytherin just stay with Abhi..
Tanu!! 😡😡 I hate her.
And I'd love to see Phataka with Raghav anytime soon.
Loved it. Continue soon and keep up the great work.
I have returned after many weeks so *runs off to check Min di's new stories and updates*

Hello my sunny Sanny!! So glad you are liking the story. Glad to know this Chashmish appeals to you! And good to know your thoughts on Phataka and Raghav too 😉

I haven't updated my index in like a year really...so if I have new stories and updates you won't find them there 😕 Umm if you're reading Anarkali, I posted chapter three just before Christmas...other than that I can't think of anything major I posted. I'm always, always, always writing, but most of it stays in my private files for a looong time until it's ready to post so I get confused between what's actually public and what I'm only still working on...😆

Nice to see you back Sanny, thanks for the comment!! 😃 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: anamika.vg
Waiting for the next part Mina

Accha! Aur kuch toh kahiye ji 😲 😛

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: dreamtoshine
Hi Mina
This is my first post on IF and I am glad it is on this FF.
The concept has me spellbound literally coz two of my favourites are coming together here- Harry Potter and Abhigya.
I always had a dislike for Slytherin and oh boy u put abhi there.Now I wont be able to hate slytherins anymore. That was such a smart placement.
Only complaint I have about this one is that we dont get a fair share of Abhi.. It is more of Pragya..I wish u have a little more of the boyish charms of Abhi.. Not trying to judge you.. Just consider this as rant of an Abhi fan!!
Also felt abhi was upset with pragya not wearing the lehenga.. So went to vent out the disappointment with Tanu. He might have noticed her changed clothes even if she could not see him.
So he is back to her and gives her hints that he is always committed to her and only her. I simply cant imagine Abhi to be so brutal. Sorry if I spoke too much.
Thanks for this brilliant stuff again. Waiting for next update.

Dreamer

Aww, Dreamer, thank you so much! Great to have you joining us on the forum. Always happy to find another HP lover who also loves AbhiGya!!

Woohoo, good to know my tiny contribution to rehabilitating Slytherin has some success! 😆 I love Slytherin and as I mentioned in the notes, it's the biggest compliment I could give to put him there. If I didn't like him I would've put him in Gryffindor - not because I dislike Gryffindor, but because all the parts of his personality I don't admire (ego and brashness mostly) would fit there - but I think he's more than those parts so I had him Sort where I think his strengths would thrive 😃

I try to keep my stories consistent in point of view, either they're told entirely from one character's POV or POV alternates equally. This is very much Pragya's story so Abhi has to be read between the lines. If a juicy Abhi-centric HP-AU idea grabs me I will surely write it!! Can't get enough of HP or AbhiGya and combining them both just makes me really happy. Good to know it appeals to others too 😊

Please never be sorry for sharing your opinion! In my view Abhi wasn't with Tanu for venting but that's an interesting way to read it and quite possible if you want to imagine it that way. But indeed yes he noticed her clothes, whether she saw him before or not! As for Abhi being brutal I feel he's been much more so on the show itself so what's hard for me to imagine is how sweet he will ultimately prove to be...you'll see in the next part, please let me know what you think!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, it means a lot to read your thoughts. Honoured to inspire you to post on IF finally...and a little apologetic too because now you may get as hooked on the forum as the rest of us 😉

Next part should be up on Sunday, hope you'll join me then!

Edited by -mina- - 9 years ago

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Mystery1
Urghhh, I don't like your Abhi in this story with what he is doing to Pragya, urghhh...

The reasons being...

In the first chapter...He was not honest with Pragya the first time around. This is unfair on Pragya. That was brutal to me. She's got feelings for him but him, no comment. Took advantage of her nice and kind nature. I do not appreciate such guys 😭...

In the second chapter...It's like he's using her like taking the picture with her. Expects her to be okay with whatever he wants from her and he does not think at all about her of what and how she would feel. How would he feel if she did the same to him?!...Even though she is not okay at all with everything and she is clearly beyond hurt, devastated, heartbroken, and everything, but she has no choice but to accept. This is what she thinks. But she can have a choice. She can run from him. I'll take her with me 😆. I do not appreciate such guys 😭...

Right now I am just reading the face value of it because you are showing the fic through Pragya only so I do not know what Abhi feels about Pragya and I know they are young and I don't care what age they are 😆...I still do not appreciate such guys 😭...

Sorry Shabbir 😳 😭...I just realised he has seen this thread and favourited it on Twitter...*Awkward*...*Runs*...😛 😆...

But it's TiSha, Abhigya and it's referenced with Harry Potter and you have written it so I have to read, Mina 😊...

Aww nads you're so cute!!!! I don't think he's seen the thread, just my tweet with the banner. And besides Shabz and Abhi are distinct na, you can criticize the latter without offending the former. Shabz has been known to make fun of Abhi's flaws himself 😊

Hehe I'm so glad you feel obligated to read it, means I get to read your thoughts!!! 😈

Now as for Abhi, totally fair to be upset with him, he's been doing some selfish things indeed. But his age is a factor and frankly speaking I think show Abhi has often been more breathtakingly manipulative, oblivious and unfair, so it's not difficult for me to write him like this. In this fic though he will redeem himself. When he has to face the question you raise it has a pretty quick impact on him 😉

As for Pragya, at the end of the day she does have a choice, but her whole life and her whole social world have always centred on this betrothal, and she can't imagine life without Abhi. And why should she have to? He hasn't done anything unforgivable yet, as far as she's concerned 😃

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and continuing to read even though a lot of the story has not been to your taste so far. I hope you'll find that the last half makes up for it. I did initially intend to post this all in one but life had other plans...give Abhi just a bit more benefit of the doubt, he will surely come through! 🤗

Edited by -mina- - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha
Oh minu.
This cute story like you do.
I lpoved to read it.
But no time.
But wil read soon and comment it in detail.
And I'm sure this is best story like always.
Hope I read it before 3rd part.
And update soon 3rd part too.
Love you minu

Hehe thank you Ayeshu, I'll look forward to your comment! Third part will be in just a few days, on Sunday, so no problem if you don't read until later.

Love you too Ayeshu, always! ❤️

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chubbygirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Waiting for the next update Mina.
Awesome👏
Felt like Abhi is jealous of Raghav and Pragya when he gave the pendant.

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dreamtoshine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: -mina-

Aww, Dreamer, thank you so much! Great to have you joining us on the forum. Always happy to find another HP lover who also loves AbhiGya!!

Woohoo, good to know my tiny contribution to rehabilitating Slytherin has some success! 😆 I love Slytherin and as I mentioned in the notes, it's the biggest compliment I could give to put him there. If I didn't like him I would've put him in Gryffindor - not because I dislike Gryffindor, but because all the parts of his personality I don't admire (ego and brashness mostly) would fit there - but I think he's more than those parts so I had him Sort where I think his strengths would thrive 😃

I try to keep my stories consistent in point of view, either they're told entirely from one character's POV or POV alternates equally. This is very much Pragya's story so Abhi has to be read between the lines. If a juicy Abhi-centric HP-AU idea grabs me I will surely write it!! Can't get enough of HP or AbhiGya and combining them both just makes me really happy. Good to know it appeals to others too 😊

Please never be sorry for sharing your opinion! In my view Abhi wasn't with Tanu for venting but that's an interesting way to read it and quite possible if you want to imagine it that way. But indeed yes he noticed her clothes, whether she saw him before or not! As for Abhi being brutal I feel he's been much more so on the show itself so what's hard for me to imagine is how sweet he will ultimately prove to be...you'll see in the next part, please let me know what you think!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, it means a lot to read your thoughts. Honoured to inspire you to post on IF finally...and a little apologetic too because now you may get as hooked on the forum as the rest of us 😉

Next part should be up on Sunday, hope you'll join me then!

Hi Mina

Gryffindor for egoistic and brashness eh? Hmmm.. Am trying hard to understand why you feel so.. Not quite successful yet..

But I definitely agree Slytherin is for the people who strive for excellence. Voldemort was an exceptional wizard. Abhi is very ambitous too.

But is he brutal? NOOO.. He does not harm someone who he believes to be innocent and sweet.. He misbehaved with chashmish only during times when there were some serious misunderstandings. Never without a reason. He is brainless but He is not selfish.

So I am eagerly waiting for your next update where I can see the positive side of Abhi.

One more day to go.. 😃

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Ayesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Oof munu thank god at last I reade.
It was 4A.M when I was reading it not able to slep juat on the fact of reading this.
It is superb like I said.
Bethroned each other wow this is super and cool idea.
Yeah. I could clearly get on what abhi is llaning of with the school. And dating with tanu.
Reallly I hate this witch even in show and also story.
Only three parts or more.
Surely I needed more than three.
Please update soon dear.
I liked how oragya evolution about the hands that she changed from. And a kind of hate for abhi allowing over himself.
And I liked how he noticed her tears making eyes.
Loved all and make fast minu.
And love you as well as story.

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Ayesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: -mina-

Hehe thank you Ayeshu, I'll look forward to your comment! Third part will be in just a few days, on Sunday, so no problem if you don't read until later.

Love you too Ayeshu, always! ❤️

Always is this a promise 😳