Spellbound | [COMPLETE all parts p1] | AbhiGya Hogwarts AU FF by mina

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hailly

@hailly

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Awesome update Mina .
Loved it. Continue soon please. 👏

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 28

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Awesome.

Hope abhi gets his due soon.

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Kanishka

@-Sunkissed

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

RES!!!
UNRES!!!
MINA DI! What an idea!? This story is just jaw-dropping.
Wonderfully constructed and I love the title! Perfect!
I love our Chashmish's character here, apt for her personality. Loved when she wanted to get in Slytherin just stay with Abhi..
Tanu!! 😡😡 I hate her.
And I'd love to see Phataka with Raghav anytime soon.
Loved it. Continue soon and keep up the great work.
I have returned after many weeks so *runs off to check Min di's new stories and updates*

Edited by -Sunkissed - 9 years ago

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anamika.viji

@anamika.viji

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Waiting for the next part Mina

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dreamtoshine

@dreamtoshine

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Hi Mina

This is my first post on IF and I am glad it is on this FF.

The concept has me spellbound literally coz two of my favourites are coming together here- Harry Potter and Abhigya.

I always had a dislike for Slytherin and oh boy u put abhi there.Now I wont be able to hate slytherins anymore. That was such a smart placement.

Only complaint I have about this one is that we dont get a fair share of Abhi.. It is more of Pragya..I wish u have a little more of the boyish charms of Abhi.. Not trying to judge you.. Just consider this as rant of an Abhi fan!!

Also felt abhi was upset with pragya not wearing the lehenga.. So went to vent out the disappointment with Tanu. He might have noticed her changed clothes even if she could not see him.

So he is back to her and gives her hints that he is always committed to her and only her. I simply cant imagine Abhi to be so brutal. Sorry if I spoke too much.

Thanks for this brilliant stuff again. Waiting for next update.

Dreamer

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Mysterious7

@Mysterious7

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Urghhh, I don't like your Abhi in this story with what he is doing to Pragya, urghhh...

The reasons being...

In the first chapter...He was not honest with Pragya the first time around. This is unfair on Pragya. That was brutal to me. She's got feelings for him but him, no comment. Took advantage of her nice and kind nature. I do not appreciate such guys and I do not appreciate him doing that to her 😭...

In the second chapter...It's like he's using her like taking the picture with her. Expects her to be okay with whatever he wants from her and he does not think at all about her of what and how she would feel. That was brutal to me. How would he feel if she did the same to him?!...Even though she is not okay at all with everything and she is clearly beyond hurt, devastated, heartbroken, and everything, but she has no choice but to accept. This is what she thinks. But she can have a choice. She can run from him. I'll take her with me 😆. I do not appreciate such guys and I do not appreciate him doing that to her 😭...

Right now I am just reading the face value of it because you are showing the fic through Pragya only so I do not know what Abhi feels about Pragya and I know they are young and I don't care what age they are 😆...I still do not appreciate such guys and I still do not appreciate him doing that to her 😭...

Sorry Shabbir 😳 😭...I just realised he has seen this thread and favourited it on Twitter...*Awkward*...*Runs*...😛 😆...

But it's TiSha, Abhigya and KumKum Bhagya, it's referenced with Harry Potter and you have written it so I have to read, Mina 😊...

Edited by Mystery1 - 9 years ago

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Ayesha

@NasreenAyesha

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Oh minu.
This cute story like you do.
I lpoved to read it.
But no time.
But wil read soon and comment it in detail.
And I'm sure this is best story like always.
Hope I read it before 3rd part.
And update soon 3rd part too.
Love you minu

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: sanya_p
Okai...so Abhi babu is struggling between guilt, hormones and heart.
It is time to either break up with Tanu or be ready to be punished from Pragya.

Not sure what is in your box but if Abhi has continued even now then I would like to see the later.

Again awesome update and good to know you have already decided your next deadline😊

Interesting thought!! Indeed he is subject to opposing forces, but I don't think he's struggling yet. His troubled days are yet to come 😉

Thanks for reading and commenting!