Abhi-Pragya fiction: RESTLESS (Epilogue- Page 85, Dec 29) - Page 74

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: UltimateFangirl

TIA TIA TIA TIA TIAAA
So I read a lot on this forum and out of all of the amazing stories you have written this is probably my favourite :D

Because I have no self-control in terms of reading, I read the all the chapters yesterday on new year's eve and guess what? I felt so happy after reading it all!

Thanks for making so many people like me have a better day after reading your writing!
(I get overly attached to the stories I read so what i'm saying isn't an exaggeration 😛)

Keep writing amazing stories like these!!


I am glad you find this your fav. Thank you so much for reading and commenting CB!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mystery1

Loved everything about this A-Z...Can not pinpoint one thing but but but you referencing the bathroom making 😛 when I watched the Abhigya bathroom scene few days before made me I don't know how to express it but but but we sooo need a Abhigya bathroom scene in the soap now 😉 😆...


Jealous Abhi over Pragya was a treat 😳 And the way he dealt with it and claimed her infront of Suresh and the way he dealt with her on the dance floor and in their room to make sure she knows she belongs to him, sooo cute 😆...

Leap of faith ❤️ mentioned again ...Which is what makes them successful...

Thank you for showing me a glimpse of them having a happy and bliss marriage and life ❤️ Also for showing them as parents with their child and the second child on the making 😛 😆...

And Tia, 🤗 for writing the epilogue 😊...


Finally you are here! Funny that i did not thnk of that scene at all, but it makes so much sense.😉

Glad you liked the jealousy and its reactions.😳

Yes, happy AbhiGya for our dreams at least.. Don't know when will the show is gonna have mercy on us!!

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting passionately throughout Madia sorry Nadia!🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Referring to these-

@blue- your messages

@brown- my replies

Hi 🤗

Sorry Tia. I am so so late. Well, firstly my gifts were incomplete and then the forum was on fire when I last logged in which made me refrain from posting for I felt you might not be in a good mood, followed by my internet throwing tantrums when I next tried and then the show got engrossing deviating my attention from this. Aldo I felt just a Nice OS' comment doesn't suit me so...lol

And whatever I am posting on all four of your works is a combined draft written by me on the 5th January, 2016 which I am splitting and posting as it is on the Desi Girl OS, Guilt OS, Restless FF, and 30 Year Old OS.

Draft dated 5th January, 2016

Confession here: I type at the speed of something very fast and then I can't believe how much concentration I end up having to write tics. I wish I had this for my other stuff too..Sorry for the delay in responding to you. Travel, holiday time and then my other fic writing bugs that occupied me.

No sorries please. I know and understand.

Speed and concentration- Arrey sabme kaise hogi?Jo specialisation hai usi mein one blossoms na.

And I wanted to say this right then but somehow didn't.No, you are not like Abhi of Restless. You talk quite a lot, of course the quantum is less than me. But u do.😃😉


I chose to write in Pragya's POV because I am a woman, it's hard to get into a man's head that way.😆 But then, I am glad Abhi came out as Abhi.. Pragya as you would see is not the typical Pragya we see these days.. nevertheless, glad most people do see the not clearly told Abhi's POV.

Aap Abhi ko nahi samajhtin! Kidding? 😃Hum koi aur 'man' ki baat kaha kar rahe hain?? Vo man agar Abhi ho to Nobody knows him better than u. Okay I know you wouldn't be watching the show if Shab weren't a part of it. But hypothetically speaking, if somebody else was playing Abhi, would u still interpret Abhi the way u do on/off show? Would u still draw him like u do? I mean does being the actor's fan bring about a bias in a positive or negative way? Like u see the brighter sides of the character or see it in a light some people fail to see or interpret in a very beautiful way with a far deeper perspective than others can see?? Or it makes u ignore the flaws and like them so much so that u defend them at any cost? Ofcourse things are very subjective and subject to multiple interpretations/ points of view, rights & wrongs would vary from eye to eye depending on their perspective, I know.Would like to know your thoughts??

I am so glad you stumbled upon this FF. I would have missed a special reader too. And those gorgeous book covers/posters. Aww. THIS- means soo much!

And all of them are gorgeous. I will put one in the first page and I am assuming you won't mind. Like I said earlier I am 'honoured'. A mutual feeling it was I guess!😊

Lots of love and happy new year to you too. And so much gratitude I feel for you right now. Hugs!!!!!🤗🤗 Me honoured honoured 10X😛

Itni poetic writing!!!! I just so enjoyed reading those lines. And I enjoyed writing those so much.Mental imagery led to this imagery!😉

Haaye Rabba, sachchi mein I wanna hide somewhere.. I can't take so much.. you know what..

Arey baba, kya jittery.. I am jittery with so much compliments here.


Thank you so so much for all your warm words

An honest confession- Your replies made my heart do a 'Pinga' and a 'Dola Re' when I read them.🤣I am sure mine did the same to you. Oh then if your answer is yes, we could dance to the two numbers together (virtually). Here are the songs for a better feel 🤣😆

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jbn39j-xa-k[/YOUTUBE]

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xz-Vac75to4[/YOUTUBE]





OMG you found the perfect songs. to play along. When we make a Restless movie, we could use all this, or have people make new such songs na?😆😊

Thank you. Mere dimag mein to film hi hai..isliye I gave u the posters and songs. Film jab banaayein to mujhe Gaana department mein rakh lena ;-)


Thank you for noticing the growth in their relationship I did try to put in in this light hearted epilogue. I wanted to say it without making a big deal and you caught it, what more can I ask for?

I am glad that I could do justice to your story as a reader and gave you that state of'Writer's satisfaction'.😛

And I put that poster in the first page now. Won't say thanks again, but my replies are in blue and I love you.

❤️🤗 Shukriya.

This sarvaguna sampan thing sounds like a marriage mantra something.. don't they say it for the bride and all..

No, it isn't according to me. It is an adjective generally used by mothers/mothers-in-law/others to describe a bride/bahu/beti who has all the possible qualities/virtues/talents that can be asked for.😃 I used it for your FanFic😆😉 You now know what I meant?!!

Quoting your PM-
'And guess what, I am keeping on writing.

It's amazing how I am able to write one shots in a couple of hours. I am tuned to it, really. I mean the technique of writing.. not talking content.
Actually these are some ideas I have had last year.. didn't want to write since it gets addicting. But hopefully this is the last one in this addiction bout."

Felt delighted and ecstatic that you wrote these.You shouldn't be amazed anymore for by now u should be able to recognise ur forte..innate talent..Gods gift.
I am amazed rather. 👏 Hayye! I know you wouldn't be writing more. You don't want to entertain further thoughts. Don't! I can see how much it bothers you. Yet I know when ideas strike you will not be able to stop them and lo we will have another bout/spree/irregular gunshots 😉😆 which will be more than welcome. Because it is your talent and you cannot build a dam upon it or new turns in KKB and/or events in your surroundings which might sprinkle fragrance of inspiration on you time and again. Until then meditate and control. I hope and wish as a compassionate and empathetic human😊 that you control and as a loyal sincere reader cum fan of your works that you don't! Paradoxical Gayatri!😃 But certainly the former side of Gayatri shall overweigh always!!!

Ps- when i set out, my brain was at sea wondering what to write and when i began writing, it turned into Sanya's pragya..Lol

PPS- I myself don't remember what all I had written and what all I referred to in the posts. But anyway posting things.

Thank you once again for everything.😊


I know my message is stale par ab late ho gaye to kya karein?? Hum post na karte in messages ko ye humein bilkul gavaara nahi!!😛






Edited by GA5if - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This was so so so so beautiful!! Hats off to your way of writing. I was totally lost in your words.
Edited by Abhigyaislife - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhigyaislife

This was so so so so beautiful!! Hats off to your way of writing. I was totally lost in your words.


Hi thank you so much.. I was very addicted to writing this fic when I did.😳
Edited by -Tia- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This fic is bugging my head again. Ugh
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Posted: 9 years ago
OOOH does that mean there could be more??
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg Tia ...this is Awesome... Read the whole thing in a go... Loved each n every bit of it...
Ahhh how I wish Abhigya are somewhat like In ur fic...
Now I can't get this fic out of my.mind...

👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
I have read the story lot of times still when everi read it keeps me hooked and excited . you are an amazing story teller and narrator. I am fan of your writing.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shreas

I have read the story lot of times still when everi read it keeps me hooked and excited . you are an amazing story teller and narrator. I am fan of your writing.



Thank you yaara.. Honored if you re-read..

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