Abhi-Pragya fiction: RESTLESS (Epilogue- Page 85, Dec 29) - Page 73

Originally posted by: SaaraDON

More than anything...having something to READ excites me to a greater extent!

Enjoyed the whole setup...and of course jealousy 😛 Even after a decade of togetherness and having a kid...Abhi still thinks she will ever entertain anyone else? 😛

He doesn't even want to entertain that possibility! So he was trying to just erase Suresh off of Pragya's sight. even though he knows she doesn't have emotions for him.😆

It's always good to see Abhi jealous and if it leads to what it led to in the epilogue 😛 Mauja hi mauja for Pragya 😆

Hahaa

Excited to know what happens while Abhi is in London and how you take this story forward!!! And I feel THIS Suresh will develop feelings for Pragya???

And by the way...am I just assuming or you are continuing this?? 😳

All in all this epilogue was very well written.

Originally posted by: apple123flower

Tia! I haven't commented on this thread till now but I've read all the chapters. Its such a beautiful story! <3 I loved reading it. :)

Originally posted by: Nora9497

Wah Tia...Wonderful jealousy Abhi

Which I really wish to see in the show. I want a male Tanu in AbhiGya's life after TANU EXIT but of course that's only in my dreams because I don't think she'll ever go away

Originally posted by: Asma-

Hey thank you for the Pm
Suresh ! It's so good to see him at least in a fa fiction I miss him a lot on screen
I loved Abhi jealous and Aarav is so cute
They are amazing

Originally posted by: harisha_kb

I still read your RS fic Tia.
It gives me some mental peace when i am stressed.
God knows how many times I read that 😊
I love this fic.
I am so glad u dedicated this to me.
I love RS more that doesn't mean I love this less.
Tads close to my heart and it will remain like that.

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

Hey tia
Hey tia. Tia tia tia. After reading the topic of your story. Really I felt happy that you'd written new story. Love this story. As first I readed chapter first, rishu omg rishu you'd entered her in this story. Everywhere abhi, I thought that you're getting into the scope like pragya hating abhi for he is rockstar. Andi thought she hates him, but what you used is There is now escape to me from abhi how where I tried. Wow this line is superb. So she is trying to escape from him. Superb update.

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

The story progresses I really admire much. Oof pragya' s remembering her college life is superb. Abhi, purab, nikhi and pragya team I like it.
Abhi's first met with pragya is cute and lovely. Parotta eating I like it, andthe concept last bite who did is boy friend or girl friend. It so sweet. Your writings perfextly explaining situation, their circumstances and their reactoons. Loved the humor sense you using in your story Every single scene you trying to tell about their college life is really realistic and enjoying.
Flutters and bulbul's teasing of boy friend is awsome. She done parotta for him, cute and , much cute. The missing scene and phone fight, adorable, it reminds me initial momemt of every love. I just want this story continue continue with never ending. I always impressed by your, minu, rishu, rose and scarlett works. Much more write impressinging story. Loving every ounce of twist and relishing it.
Do much and banner for every topic is cute and working. All over it shows your dedication to story and involved in the story. Thanks for your quick updating. Love you and hugs for everything. Didn't I deserve kiss for this comment?

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

Omg tia tiq, you're flaming heat all over just on your writing. The story also heating up, you're rocking tia tiyu.
Omg first kiss, pragya bridesmaid and stage performance. Ooh cute!!!
Strange behaviour, yeah I remember this you'd used this in rockstar ff too. Pragya telling abhi to keep distance, abhi got angry, and avoiding her. Atlast she goes and clarify abhi, yeah cute formula used by you.
Who am I to you? Wow such a perfect question.
The intimate scene love, you had chanhed this story into flaming up passionate story. Every scenes are perfectly encarved for every situation. Abhi and pragya increasing live, missing theory, and passionate love making everything is good.
All sememed well until they both started making way to their own journey.
I liked the way you show the changes between their relation from college to job.

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

They are separated oh no not, like I thought the separation reason wil be tanu. Yeah she is, She is the only women capable of that. It's not such bad for pragya to think them both like that, in security feeling.
But I felt bad that she used abhi used her in bed. No really he doesn't deserve this. The last dialogue, I loved you as I felt love is. Cute dialogue and emotional. You had stolen my heart on your 10 chapter.
Overall you are hypnosis me on yoir writing skills tiyu. Rocking tia, omh really if you are here before me, I would have hugged you, and made bhai (your man) jealous of me.
Sorry just kidding. Love it. Please write more. And sorry for late reply. Love you and hugs tiyu...

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

Tia tiyu.
Thanking you so much for this nice story.
So overall Abhi's plan tomake praga hisnice , so nice.
Abhigya SR really it is rocking 🥳
The epilogue, oofso much hot [:D/]
Thank you for this nice chapter and story.
Take care and tell everyone I miss them 🤗