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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vivkriti

Awesome Tia. You never fails to impress me with your writing. I was in Abhigya dreamland while reading. Loved double battery n Rockstar chemistry n little possessive Rockstar. Abhigya & Aarav mind blowing. Fabulous job 👏👏👏


Miths, thank you so much.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aakanchanadevi

Awww.. Awesome..👏

Thanks for the Epilogue Tia..😊

Please don't stop with this one alone😭 do continue😃

See I am continuing with one shots. It's an addiction.😭😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --simmi--

Aww thanks for the epilogue! I was gonna ask for one too! ❤️


Thank you Simmi!!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anamika.vg

Tia..its so beautiful 😊 ..and u worried for us hating it 😆...no way... loving it


gosh..u reminded me tht bathtub scene 😛...now i want to see one more abhigya scene in bath tub 😆..its your mistake tia😃


Hahaa.. honestly I wasn't thinking of that scene when i wrote.. now yeah..😆
Thank you Viji.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tisha1313

Phew!! In the entire story there were flying butterflies around me. And seemed like I was in a dreamland.

Perfectly written. We prefer you to write more as we are tend to read more of the stories from your side.
Haha... First baby in bathtub and second one on the floor. But at last the first baby came and the dream of love making was left in its own Wonderland.

You write freely and that's why I have chosen a proverb for your hard working.. 🤗
Like people say- "When the going gets tough, the tough gets going." means=
--Strong people don't give up when they come across challenges. They just work harder.
You are one of those people 😃, Tia...
Do write more.


Aww Tisha.. lol.. thank you so much for those words. Means a lot.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_5

hmm big surprise han..😲 Epilogue with Suresh..😆

loved it.. especially Suresh part..😳 i am dying to see abhi's jealously track.. till then got something to read about jealous Abhi.. and totally loved it.. full justification to his char..😛

thank you for PM..😊


Hehee. This jealousy thing I always wanted to see. CVs took Suresh away.

Thanks for reading Kulsum.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hutanbandar


Haha Tia, that was awesome👏...never thought there's gonna be an Epilogue. I just have one teeny tiny weeny crazy idea, why don't you just start with RESTLESS AGAIN...(a continuation story, I meant [..cough...cough])...haha...go girl.😉Anyways, thanx again.


Restless again?😆😆😆
Well, they finally found rest na? Bring in a problem? 😆
Thank you!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanya_p

nice one Tia!!

Suresh ki yaaden tazaa ho gayee :)


I know right! My SuBhi!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Aww my wish came true ..remember my " selfish wish " that a story bug you in your vacation well I meant a new story but this is even better... it was so unexpected and so so amazing.. loved to see AbhiGya happy after many years of marriage and loved to see them as parents

like you I'm a Suresh fan and I really believe that his character would have add so much to the Show but sadly we lost him so thank you for bringing him back
Thank you so much for the awesome treat but I have something to say
"So what? Is that important? Okay tell me this, you are making a big deal out of this, but what about you dancing with so many hot and beautiful girls? What about that Tannu who never leaves a chance to perform with you? What about ad shoots with those skinny long legged girls who don't even wear 10 inches of clothes...", I retorted.
@bold Is this necessary?😒
Yes It is !!😆


I am glad your wish came true Nuha. And I got a chance to write this SuBhiGya thing I always wanted to see in the soap. Thanks to Nadia.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: GA5if


Like writer, like reader.

We know how to touch someone's heart, don't we?? ☺️ 😆

Just Kidding!😃

You surely know how to!*☺️I know you are blushing reading this☺️ and you know why*

As for me, purpose served, mission accomplished. I wanted the girl who made so many people so so so happy with her masterpiece to feel all the felicity, bliss, pride and ecstacy she deserves.⭐️👍🏼🤗

The poster(s)/book cover- Thank you so much. Means a lot to somebody who has never done anything of this sort before.😛

To bana lo apni book ka cover if you like, I will be honoured.

And thanks a lot for the PM. Great epilogue. You have taken care of very very fine details like the Phd research paper, its topic etc as always. Applaud your eye for minutiae. For me the chapter name is - Oomph reloaded!!

Here is a song for your epilogue- Suresh vs. Fangurls(Closest representative of this epilogue I could think of😊)


Haaye Rabba, sachchi mein I wanna hide somewhere.. I can't take so much.. you know what..

Jealous Lyrics

"Jealous"-Nick Jonas

I don't like the way he's looking at you
I'm starting to think you want him too
Am I crazy, have I lost ya?
Even though I know you love me, can't help it

[Chorus:]
I turn my chin music up
And I'm puffing my chest
I'm getting red in the face
You can call me obsessed
It's not your fault that they hover
I mean no disrespect
It's my right to be hellish
I still get jealous

'Cause you're too sexy, beautiful
And everybody wants to taste
That's why (that's why)
I still get jealous

'Cause you're too sexy, beautiful
And everybody wants to taste
That's why (that's why)
I still get jealous

I wish you didn't have to post it out
I wish you'd save a little bit just for me
Protective or possessive, yeah
Call it passive or aggressive

[Chorus:]
I turn my chin music up
And I'm puffing my chest
I'm getting red in the face
You can call me obsessed
It's not your fault that they hover
I mean no disrespect
It's my right to be hellish
I still get jealous

'Cause you're too sexy, beautiful
And everybody wants to taste
That's why (that's why)
I still get jealous

'Cause you're too sexy, beautiful
And everybody wants to taste
That's why (that's why)
I still get jealous

You're the only one invited
I said there's no one else for you
'Cause you know I get excited, yeah
When you get jealous too

[Chorus:]
I turn my chin music up
And I'm puffing my chest
I'm turning red in the face
You can call me obsessed
It's not your fault that they hover
I mean no disrespect
It's my right to be hellish
I still get jealous

'Cause you're too sexy, beautiful
And everybody wants to taste
That's why (that's why)
I still get jealous

'Cause you're too sexy, beautiful
And everybody wants to taste
That's why (that's why)
I still get jealous

Oh (that's why)
I still get jealous
Oh (that's why)
I still get jealous

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yw04QD1LaB0[/YOUTUBE]


Actually,I have got 2 'jealous' songs- one is the aforesaid one from Abhi's POV suited to this epilogue and then there is a second one from Pragya's POV- the young girl Pragya's when she was left by Abhi for two years and when she would see him on TV and when she met him and wanted to know about his life,Tanu and other girls he worked with. Here it goes-

Jealous -labrinth lyrics

By: Labrinth

[Verse 1]
I'm jealous of the rain
That falls upon your skin
It's closer than my hands have been
I'm jealous of the rain
I'm jealous of the wind
That ripples through your clothes
It's closer than your shadow
Oh, I'm jealous of the wind, cause


[Chorus]
I wished you the best of
All this world could give

And I told you when you left me
There's nothing to forgive
But I always thought you'd come back, tell me all you found was
Heartbreak and misery

It's hard for me to say, I'm jealous of the way
You're happy without me


[Verse 2]
I'm jealous of the nights
That I don't spend with you

I'm wondering who you lay next to
Oh, I'm jealous of the nights

I'm jealous of the love
Love that was in here
Gone for someone else to share
Oh, I'm jealous of the love, cause


[Chorus]
I wished you the best of
All this world could give

And I told you when you left me
There's nothing to forgive
But I always thought you'd come back, tell me all you found was
Heartbreak and misery

It's hard for me to say, I'm jealous of the way
You're happy without me


[Bridge]
As I sink in the sand
Watch you slip through my hands

Oh, as I die here another day
Cause all I do is cry behind this smile


[Chorus]
I wished you the best of
All this world could give

And I told you when you left me
There's nothing to forgive
But I always thought you'd come back, tell me all you found was
Heartbreak and misery

It's hard for me to say, I'm jealous of the way
You're happy without me


[Outro]
It's hard for me to say, I'm jealous of the way
You're happy without me

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=50VWOBi0VFs[/YOUTUBE]

And finally a song dedicated to the ''LIFE WAS GOOD'' end of this epilogue. Suits it well symbolically-

KENNY CHESNEY LYRICS

Life Is Good Lyrics


from Everywhere We Go

Darlin', if you think back
To the heartbroken past
Before we found each other
It's so amazing, it's almost crazy
What a difference lookin' through the eyes of love

Life is good, the grass is green
The good Lord, smilin' on you and me
Gonna knock on wood
Sweet sunshine everywhere I look
You love me like no one could, life is good

People stop me on the street
Thinkin' I'm the old me
Talkin' about the bad old days
But ever since you came along
Them old blues are long gone
I break into a grin and all that I can say is

Life is good, the grass is green
The good Lord, smilin' on you and me
Gonna knock on wood
Sweet sunshine everywhere I look
You love me like no one could, life is good

Someday girl, this old world will try to beat you up
Let 'em bring it on 'cause every time we touch

Life is good, the grass is green
The good Lord, smilin' on you and me
Gonna knock on wood
Sweet sunshine everywhere I look
You love me like no one could, life is good

Life is good, the grass is green
The good Lord, smilin' on you and me
Sweet sunshine everywhere I look
You love me like no one could, life is good
Life is good


OMG you found the perfect songs. to play along. When we make a Restless movie, we could use all this, or have people make new such songs na?😆😊


I would have loved and not loved to see this triangle in the soap. Loved for the obvious reasons and not loved' because I know the typical EK show Cvs would ruin it with their dragging,taking the jealousy to the extreme and making Abhi see 'an actually non-existent' infidelity from Pragya's side, misunderstand her,blame her yet again, get drunk, hurt her and himself and after an year or so of dragging & destroying the story not knowing how to take it further end the track stupidly yet unaware how to resurrect the sanity of the story. So thank God it wasn't there.

I don't know.. I do believe in Shabbo and Faisal to have done a fantabulous job in this jealousy thing regarding Pragya. I know it's a dream never to come true. I have enjoyed SuBhi scenes (so few they were) to the core.


Glad YOU wrote it. Slick, sleek, precise and pitch-perfect!👏

What was there to hate? Enjoyed their pillow talk to the core.❤️

But yes, I get this nervousness of yours a little too well as is evident from my PMs about the posters and oration. Was cute how you said you would run away immediately after posting.😆 Because I do the same when I feel like that. I knew you would want to correct that 'their' and the other stuff later. It is okay.Don't worry. We know you leave no stone unturned in making things perfect and those tiny mistakes neither count nor matter. So chill.😛😊

I like how pragya now expresses clearly, is able to retort and abhi dorsn't go into silent mode, gives her a fair chance to express herself and doesn't misunderstand for no reason. Liked how they have evolved and are celebrating ten years of togetherness with the same newness/spark of their old days.

Keep them coming.😊


Thank you for noticing the growth in their relationship I did try to put in in this light hearted epilogue. I wanted to say it without making a big deal and you caught it, what more can I ask for?

However I have to admit that my inferno like excitement for RESTLESS and this epilogue was doused to some degree yesterday as I read through all that is to come on KKB, the negativity and the evilness surrounding it and felt utterly frustrated. I better stay away from the real KKB(till it becomes bearable) like I had been doing until now and stick to your works and selected stuff from other writers/fans.

Nevertheless, I had fun reading it. It was lovely, cute and hot. Super stuff. Will read it again with a calm mind so that I can relish it to the fullest.

PS- Some things about this chapter somehow reminded me of a 2012-2013 bestseller!

Gayatri



Don't know what is going on in the soap, but I am a bit positive that the pregnancy track is finally getting to be solved.. I am a bit positive int he new year!!!

And I put that poster in the first page now. Won't say thanks again, but my replies are in blue and I love you.

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