Abhi-Pragya fiction: RESTLESS (Epilogue- Page 85, Dec 29) - Page 71

Originally posted by: sanya_p

Tia,

Thanks for this story. I relished it. Also for giving me the kind of Abhi I always wanted to see in the soap.

On the lighter note, Abhi's leap of faith dialogue worked magic and he got lucky on his wedding night 😉

Originally posted by: anamika.vg

It's awesome ,tia 😊

It was nice to see tht it was his surprise plan to visit pragya with the marriage proposal :).. The reason he gave for their two years separation was so matured... His trust in her tht she will be there for him ...nice...

His naughtiness ☺️

Thanks for giving us such a wonderful read as a gift,Tia 🤗

Do Write more ..your stories are treat for us ❤️

Originally posted by: kirti1212

Hi dear thanks for this amazing ff. 😛

Just loved it a lot. ❤️

You are really awesome . 👏

Plz write more when you're free. I really Loved to read your works. Waiting for your next work.

And sorry for late reply.

Originally posted by: GA5if

Okay, so let me try arranging my haywire thoughts!! :D

And I am your Abhi's opposite-Woman of MANY words 😆 and Pragya's sister naturewise...So you will have to tolerate my detailed message(s). Pretty please.😛

I sincerely appreciate you taking so much time and effort for these comments. Hugs, Gayatri.

Hmm, so I am just jotting down all my random thoughts about you and your work..heart to heart waale shabd. No flattery intended.😊

But it is very flattering. I am blushing.

More than LOVED ALL' the parts to the hilt. Drop dead gorgeous a FanFic it was!❤️ But I did curse myself for seeing the banner of the last chapter before reading it for I forgot your cautionary note stating that it gives away the plot. Koi nahi, Sarla Maa ka phone aaya tab pata chala..thoda sa jaldi pata chal gaya na..was consoling myself then that it is okay. .LOL However that stunning proposal was a great surprise.*Mooniness returns*😳

Your story and writing strike an emotional chord with the audience instantly just like Abhi, his guitar and his songs 😃

So it ends 😭 But you were right when you didn't drag your story and ended it on a perfect note.The shimmer of your story lies in its sleekness..making each line of it attractive, intriguing and fun to read..😛

Loved how you drew Abhi's character sketch. You so intelligently incorporated those traits in Abhi that lend it its quirkiness while making it endearing as well.😊

IMDb rating of RESTLESS-the FF by Tia - 10/10 😉😊

Haaye!! Thanks for your comment on Abhi. He is my fav character in the show, obviously and I feel nervous to write him too. And glad that proposal worked. I was worried of it. Hehe IMDB rating. Thank you.😆.

I want to thank for so many things..appreciate you on so many levels...👏

...For being so dedicated and hardworking really!!!

...For being so giving.

...For being talented needless to say...the speed with which you finished such a beautiful flawless story is laudable.

...For the feeling of ecstasy and breeziness and for the mode of escapism that you gave me.

...For being the considerate, sweet and lovable self that you are...to be replying each one with patience and so much warmth and amiability...very few people bother doing that!!!

...And for everything else that I haven't written but is well understood.👍🏼

Confession here: I type at the speed of something very fast and then I can't believe how much concentration I end up having to write tics. I wish I had this for my other stuff too..Sorry for the delay in responding to you. Travel, holiday time and then my other fic writing bugs that occupied me.

I know what you must have gone through while doing this FF at this pace-the pressure of not disappointing people, of not creating flaws for one flaw is sufficient to spoil a story which we have seen time and again onscreen in KKB...You know it better than me.🤢

Earlier too I wanted to say that please don't miss out on your daily dose of sleep and play with your health for this. We aren't that selfish...And we and your FF would be waiting anyway, so take your own sweet time. But now that this one is over already, do consider my suggestion for your future stories. 😊

Actually, writing this has made me feel a week bit better about soap. I am not in a hurry to watch epis these days. I rather want to write my own stuff. But I am done for now. Not entertaining new ideas. The two one shots I wrote were conceived way before but hesitating to take birth.. now they are born.

I can sense how much heart, emotion and time you must be investing into all this- FF, other IF stuff, responding each reader with equal love while going about your real life.

When I imagine about the bug that bothers you, I totally get it because I am quite like that naturewise...Go take your well-deserved break sans any sleep deprivation, sleeplessness, pressure of meeting expectations and updating quickly.😃

'USE IT' well to relax!😆 🤣

Haha - did have a nice time in UK.. back to work next Monday, oh well!

And the trophy of pride and elation is all yours- you worked hard, more than met expectations and how, lived the pressure of it all- Love you totally!👏

But do think about Restlessness Part 2 or any other Abhigya FF or independent novels LATER ON, really! Although I would love to read and learn more and more from you, I wouldn't put any pressure. Do it when you feel like.

Until then I will find solace in your other works none of which I have read as yet. And thank God for making me stumble upon your FF, varna I would have missed something so SPECIAL in life!!😛

I am so glad you stumbled upon this FF. I would have missed a special reader too. And those gorgeous book covers/posters.

Okay, I have tried making something for you with whatever little skills I have to thank you for everything wholeheartedly. Hope you like it. Well, I haven't really made any posters or anything of the sort ever. I made some for you as a gift. I couldn't select which ones I like the best..so I am sending you some 16 of them. 😆😃

And all of them are gorgeous. I will put one in the first page and I am assuming you won't mind.

I know I am appearing like a mad mad woman who is going on writing..but I can't help it..the train of thoughts doesn't seem to stop and I fail to understand why.😆

At the risk of sounding boring and irritating, may I share some more songs that I imagined for some other situations in your FF if would like? I don't know why but I love relating situations mostly the crucial ones in stories to apt songs ans imagine them and the story like a film before my eyes:D It is fun to do and takes the reading experience to whole new different level all together I feel.😉😊

Anyway I think I SHOULD STOP BUGGING YOU FURTHER. Sending you the posters.

Wishing you Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!😊

The FR(Fan Reality) ends here, you may take a breather.😉

Love❤️

Gayatri

Lots of love and happy new year to you too. And so much gratitude I feel for you right now. Hugs!!!!!

PM 2:Dated 24th December, 2015

I am speechless. Seriously...- Main hoon hi aisi..laakhon mein ek..I have that effect on people.😆🤣(remember Pragya's dialogue?)

But since I am on travel mode now, I will get back later.Sure. Will be waiting.😛

Just wanted to say two things- you mentioned like that leap of faith is the last chapter*.. but there is one more, hope you read it.

And here is my index. Thank u for the link. Will read all(SLOWLY as I don't want to exhaust this inventory FAST) and BUG you later.😃

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kumkum-bhagya/4164722/tias-abhi-pragya-fictions

Later, take care.

*Last Chapter- Oops, my mistake. I meant the second last chapter. I had read all. Aur last chapter ke to kya kehne? Msg already itna long tha that I refrained from saying everything I wanted to, feeling nervous that you might not be liking the way and how much I am talking.

Ab bol hi deti hoon. Bol doon? 😃Bear with me. 🥱But I promise this is the last set of emotions that I want to convey about this FF.👍🏼

Icing and cherry on the cake the final chapter was.😛

Is quality ko main kya naam doon wherein you are drowned deep into an ocean with the intensity and depth of the story and at the same time made to float in air with the lightness, light-hearted humour, and a whole myriad of positive emotions but your sunken body is constantly upthrust on surface with buoyancy-of-ocean water-like arresting attributes that keep you on tenterhooks and your airborne feet pulled down to Earth to rest your feet firmly on floor with its gravity-like gripping attributes- the chapters and the ending of each chapter justifying the name of the FF- RESTLESS at all times. What a virtue it had such that the restlessness of the protagonist seeped out of the story to be soaked by readers who then kept oozing it throughout. Those are the skill set and virtues you are gifted with. Gifted you are truly.😎👍🏼👏

Itni poetic writing!!!! I just so enjoyed reading those lines.

I didn't quote any specific lines because everybody has pointed everything that I thought of each line, mentioned every line that I loved and that won my heart 'n' number of times. What is the point in repeating things that you know? Instead I chose to write the kind of feel and emotions the story aroused at various points of time and throughout. Mere case mein to there was not a single line that I didn't see as a treat rather it was a grand buffet served lavishly.🥳😉😛

The last chapter gives the story its depth, balancing and tying an already well knit perfectly balanced story more tightly with great finishing touch and polish, adding a super delicious pinch of humour and serving it HOT HOT HOT☺️😛 with all its HOTNESS☺️😆 on reader's platter...

Hahaa It's hard for me to hot parts.. But I am glad it's still came out hot!😳

Implying your story was a sarvaguna 'sarvamausam' sampanna story rather😆- warm, hot, cool, cold,chilly, moist,rainy with summer, winter, spring, autumn and monsoon all tied together and served with witty/carefully thought of apt titles ,banners, gripping twists and turns. 😃An all-weather VOLTAS AC story 😉..a pan-emotions story- covering thrill, suspense, romance, pain, sorrow,elation, intensity, love, passion, fun, faith, etc with lessons to learn for readers, and beauty of simplicity being painted all this while..and all of this in such sleek, well chiseled, well crafted, well paced chapters and oh-not-so-long story. It is a tribute to the beauty of simplicity simply.❤️ This realization and emotions are overwhelming for the contrast with the real onscreen KKB(which makes people cringe, wince and feel horrible all the time nowadays🤢) is way too striking!

This sarvaguna sampan thing sounds like a marriage mantra something.. don't they say it for the bride and all..

Last chapter ka to hangover hi kaha gaya hai abtak? It was subliminally playing in my sleep.😆

I wanted to post the content of the two msgs in the thread going on the record about it so that it remains there forever for sweet memories but like I said I was jittery about what you would think of me and didn't want to end up making a fool of myself before people. Will post these there though if you like.Also tell me if I should select any specific posters of your choice to post provided you liked any or all of them or none if you didn't like any.

Safe and happy travels.😊

See u soon.

Arey baba, kya jittery.. I am jittery with so much compliments here.

Need not reply now.

P.S.- Ek aur beautiful smart trait tha is story- on a weighing balance if you measure, about 11- 12 kgs( 11-12 chapters) belong to Pragya's POV(And quite a few people tend to favour her). But Abhi manages to balance his side of the pan with 1-2kgs(1-2 chapters) of his POV with great ease and smoothness. So here is a story of 1-2kgs equalling 11-12kgs and how! Balance kiya ya shayad overweigh hi kar diya Pragya ke POV ko and went on to win people's hearts❤️(including your friend Harisha's who didn't quite like him earlier) flat out, fair and square, checkmate style, Abhi- the rocktar⭐️ style..That is the power of your Abhi..that is the power of your writing, talent, wits and wittiness.👏 More power to you!😊👍🏼

Crazy loony girl 🤪signing off for now ☺️😃

I chose to write in Pragya's POV because I am a woman, it's hard to get into a man's head that way.😆 But then, I am glad Abhi came out as Abhi.. Pragya as you would see is not the typical Pragya we see these days.. nevertheless, glad most people do see the not clearly told Abhi's POV.

Originally posted by: Aafrah-SA

OMG Tia!! I finally had the chance to read your fiction and I read the rest of them together!! Was off on a mini honeymoon and was so damn restless to read this!
It was absolutely fantabulous to say the least! What I love about your stories in general is that no nonsense attitude that's reflects. Here we have a plot, a separation, very believable MUs, and in a very realistic way they come together. It was simple near and absolutely amazing!!

I wish television had shows like this!
Tia kudis for this story!!

And please please please write more!

Oh and I loved it how Abhi said he is going to say it once and not repeat - to marry him - the dismissal of all the differences and acknowledging no matter what Pragya was his. It was adorable!!

As usual in tor story too, I love Abhi more than Pragya!!

Do wrote some more!!!

Originally posted by: hailly

Reaf all the updates, awesome.story loved it.
Beautifully.written. 👏

Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_

Awesome story.

Enjoyed it so much.

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Tia I have just read your ff in one go and it was AMAZING. It is definitely one of the best ff I have read on IF in some time. At a time when I am beyond frustrated with this serial you story was a balm to me...I suppose one could say it soothed my own restlessness due to the nonsence we have had to endure these past month😆. Kudos to you for such a poignant story.👏👏👏

Originally posted by: SaaraDON

OMG OMG OMGGG CIRCUITTT!!!!! BIG TIGHT KISSIE FOR UUU!!!!!

I was just gonna start my Harvey Specter marathon buttt I'm distracteddd!!! And it can wait becauseee RESTLESSNESS CALLING!!!

Originally posted by: frenzyy

Aww, Tia!! that was jus soo awesome!! Abhi threw a party for Chashmish when she graduated and now when she is Doctorate!! Love the bonding they share and their depth of the relationship has gone stronger over the decade - from young teens to parents! They are simply made for each other.. Loved chashmish as the ever caring and multi tasking person.. Abhi complimenting chashmish on handling everything so well, he saying her prince (aarav) has come, taking care of dadi by insisting aarav sleep in their room, organizing the party for his wife, everything well was so awesome - can your abhi get any cuter?😳

He he, loved the jealous, boyish, possessive, innocent abhi - and his talk about double battery🤣🤣 Chashmish handling his fan girls😆 Gosh, these two are soo soo adorable😳😆 Chashmish with her boys😳😳

As chashmish and rockstar await their second child - you have to pen down another story as a treat for aarav's little bro/sis- bas! 😛😛