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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anamika.vg

hi suk!..sorry..i dont know your name..how shd i call u?..

nice story...:)

suk thats my name n thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Suks its so cute update continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Very interesting! Sadly, they did not meet today. May be, they feel each other - two Abhi? Please update soon. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Suresh " Bulbul shouts

" I have not done anything wrong Auntyji, Pragya was not happy , you all saw her happy, but you did not see her tears her pain, I did this for her and her only. She must have heart me calling Akash".

"Abishek " Sarla shouts

"He has come back Sarla" Dadi says

Sarla looks back , shocked her eyes wide open standing in front of them was Akash, Rachna, their son Dadi, purab & Abhi.

Everyone turns round, Bulbul looks at them tears swell up in her eyes.

Abhi , purab look at each other.

Suresh walks up to them "Namesta" he touches Dadis feet for blessing then goes to hug Rachna .

Bulbul walks out, Sarla follows her "Bulbul", Purab follows them.

Dadi stamds up " cough syrup anyone"

Abhi smiles walks over to her, bows down to touch her feet, "Dadi I will need one glass, as I have to persuade your granddaughter"

Dadi smiles " you will need several"

"Dadi where's Pragya?"

Suresh speaks "Pragya has gone, she must have heard my conversation with Akash"

Tears roll down Abhis face.

"Abhishek you are going to meet your papa" she hugs him tight

She looks at the house that had brought her so much happiness then flashback to when Abhi hurt her, holding back tears walking towards the main gate she stops FOR SALE , "This is Dadis dream house her family was here together in this house how can it be for sale?" she dails the number that is shown on the notice board no one answers. Pragya goes to offices everything shut down she then go back to airport .

Sarla comes back , she hugs Rachna blesses Akash and their son. "Namesta Dadiji" she does not speak to Abhi. Suresh has invited you to his wedding we have no right to tell him what to do, I have one request that please keep your grandson away from me and my family."

"Bulbul please forgive me" Bulbul walks away

Abhi comes " Purab don't lose her I have lost pragya for good she has gone"

"Abhi we made the biggest mistake of our lives, you know persuading Pragya di and Bulbul is not going to be easy, Abhi flash back when he had to say sorry about kiss which was mouth to mouth respiration, he was so nervous his heart was beating fast . Both laugh together

Sun rising.

Pragya walking into house Sarla stares at her!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Oh, how interesting! Pragya and her family have suffered from too Abhi and his family ... Even Purab not remained aloof from this injustice ... What will happen to Abhi, when he sees son... Please update as soon as possible. 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that was really good
do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Interesting update suk!
Continue soon. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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""Pragya , Abhishek" Sarla shouts

"Ma I should have told you but I didn't as I did not want you to stop me , Abhishek needs to know his father he has every right, I cannot be selfish anymore, he is our little star, I know you cant live without him neither can I, he needs his father "

Sarla cries putting her hand on her mouth"

From behind Abhi, Dadi & purab are standing

"Pragya" Dadi speaks

Pragya turns towards them holding Abhishek who is sleeping , shocked she takes a few steps back Sarla comes to hold her. Pragya smiles seeing Dadi not looking at Abhi or Purab then walks towards Dadi Sarla tries to stop her, Pragya looks round to shake her head "Ma he is theirs as well" .

Dadi kisses Pragya on both cheeks, " I am very angry at you Pragya how could you just leave me like that?" Pragya cries. "Dadi your great grandson" Dadi laughs with tears rolling down her cheeks hugs and kisses both of them together.

"Pragya mujha maff kartheir" Abhi could barely speak

Pragya looks at him does not speak lifts Abhishek head of her shoulder, then gives him to Abhi. Abhi holds him nervously "Dadi he is too small I may drop him" Dadi smiles" he is your son you wont"

Bulbul comes towards Pragya " Di what are you doing?, he will say Abhishek cannot be his as he did not sleep with you, Di he does not deserve Abhishek"

"Bulbul you and I always wondered if papa was alive what fun would it had been, papa died ma and dadi became our parents, I don't care if he denies Abhishek at least I have done the right thing. I am prepared to be mother and father to raise my child alone."

Abhi kisses Abhishek " I made a big mistake I said hurtful words to you, I know you cant forgive me I cant forgive myself please give me one more chance".

Abhishek wakes up looks at Abhi smiling "ma: papa" Pragya looks at him smiling

"Pragya is not like you I have given her the right teachings your son knows who you are but you don't, how many chances should my daughter give to you, you married her for revenge, kept a ongoing affair with Tanu, divorced her then destroyed her, she was trying to save you , how much more should my daughter suffer because of you.?" Sarla shouts.

"Ma don't Abhishek even though he is not old enough to understand he can feel the tension in this room, I don't want him to feel anything negative".

Pragya leaves to gp to her room, dadi follows her. E

"Pragya I cant understand why you left me knowing I was on your side to get you two back together when I finally became conscious you were gone"

"Dadi please forgive me I took a promise from ma to leave that night as Tany & Aliaya had threaten to have Bulbul and me killed we had to leave, I did not know you had become conscious when I left the jail I went home to Ma."

Bulbul comes in Dadi puts her arms out, Bulbul & Pragya both go to hug her, "dadi we have missed you so much" all crying

"Dadi is here I will make everything alright".

Abhi & Purab play with Abhishek then he smiles, "Abhishek say Fuggy"

"puggy"

"Nahi beta Fuggy"

"Puggy"

"that will do I will get fuggy to smile Purab I am going to get her back" purab nods his head

"Dadi Abhishek has not eaten, come and see your great grandson whilst I feed him"

Pragya goes to the kitchen gets dhal & rice, whilst dadi & Bulbul go to Abhi . Purab & Abhishek , Pragya sits near to Abhi & Abhishek , "beta eat first"

Abhi goes to kiss Abhishek , he whispers in his ear "fuggy"

Abhishek goes over to Pragya " puggy", Pragya looks at him confused " Abhishek what did you say?"

"puggy"

Pragya looks at Abhi with a frown on her face but then laughs when Abhishek says "puggy"again.

"Purab hassee toh phasee"

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=euQ-C42PoRE[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by suk19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Thanks everyone hope you enjoy
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Aww! Puggy! 😆
And Hasse toh Phasee! 🤣
Loved the chapter! Very nice. :)

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