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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you! It's so tragically beautiful!!! I could actually picture Abhi's sad, yearning smile !!! I'm loving it 😊!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Loving it :)
Update freq :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
wow this story is awsm, i luv the story plot, and clearly written
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Excellent SS ! I loved this first chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Woah! Abhi and Purab did so wrong to Pragya and Bulbul! Nice update! I like this story!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Your story is sad and surprising! Little Rockstar's so cute, but why Abhi not knew about his son? I do not want to have someone of sisters to marry Suresh, please ... I'm waiting for an update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Suresh watched Pragya at night time she paces up and down the roof top patio, he wonders how he can help his friend who is still in pain, he knew Abhi was no good, but for Pragya he was her one true love. The night Pragya was freed from prison Alia had sent some goons to Sarla they told her if they didn't leave tonight she would find her daughters dead, Bulbul , Dadi were so scared. I was leaving anyway so asked them to come with me, when Pragya came Sarla made her promise not to stay there anymore.

"Rachna sorry calling you so late at night"

"Suresh bhai"

"Yes Rachna I have a favour to ask can I speak to Akash?"

How will I face him? How can I tell him he has a son? As much as I have rights on Abhishek so does he. Then flashback you're a dirty women from the sewer, she even seduced me whilst she was drunk, I cant believe that I fell for her Tanu and Alia were right she is disgusting, tears fall our son has given me such joy, why should I be selfish and keep him to myself. He has hurt me what scares me the most if he denys that Abhishek is his son, I will be mother and father to my son if that is the case!

"Dadi Rachna is going to her brothers wedding as you know I think we should all go"

"Akash beta you go with Rachna Abhi is here to look after me , we will be fine ",

"Nahi Dadi we are all going including Bhai , you always talk about Ludihana its time we all went , this way bhai will get out of the house, also its bhabis friend Suresh who is getting married who knows bhabhi may come there "

Akash watched as Dadis face lit up, "Abhi" she shouts Abhi comes running "ji Dadi"

"we are going to Ludihana with Akash and Rachna tell purab to come as well "

"ji Dadi" he could not refuse her .

Pragya packs her clothes in her bag enough for her and Abhishek, they fly to Mumbai tomorrow and will be back the following day , I cant tell Ma or Bulbul they will try to stop me but I cant do this anymore.

FLIGHT FROM MUMBAI JUST LANDED (Chandigarh Airport)

(Abhi and family walk into arrival lounge )

FLIGHT TO MUMBAI BOARDING IN 30 MINUTES

(Pragya & Abhishek walk on the other side to Departure lounge, )

(they past each other not knowing , Allah warriaya song)


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X0sSmCvBiMg[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by suk19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Thanks everyone i hope you enjoy part 3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
hi suk!..sorry..i dont know your name..how shd i call u?..
nice story...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
please continue. loving this.
Is so different. finally story seems to have moved forward.
Ah and Suresh is back.
waiting for Rabul and Abhigya to reunite

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