The star that fell ss part 5 page 5 updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Three years ago I made the biggest mistake of my life, I threw her out of my life, what was I thinking ? I was'nt

My family is Dadi, akash Rachna & their son, Abhi the rockstar is no more.

Even Auntyji, Dadi Bubul are no longer here, don't know where they are ?I die every night just to be with her in my dreams, it turns into a nightmare which continues during the day.

My heart my Fuggy "where are you"?

Suresh and Pragya are walking back from the University of Ludihana, as they reach home, Pragya hears her mum shouting, "Abhisek wait till your mother gets home". Pragya smiles and thinks he is only 2 .3 years old and mischievous like his father. She walks in Abhi rockstar junior is jumping up and down on the bed in his leather jacket & sunglasses which Bulbul brought him. Dadi sitting down drinking her cough medicine.. Pragya puts her arms out , he leaps into her arms, she closes her eyes , she feels her Abhi her heart.

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Let me know if i should continue ?




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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow interesting..😃
very nice u should continue..😳 wanna know about our junior rockstar..🤪

but why his name is abhishekh?

abhi is not aware of his kid? pragya suresh got married?😕
so many questions r arising in my head so plz update it soon.😆


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Posted: 10 years ago
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so many questions! please continue!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that sound amazing
the title sound interesting
dio continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Keep it going...interesting 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds great! Please continue!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm so exited to read more. Please do continue soon. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part two


"I love you" "mah tujsa bahout pyar karthi hai" he holds her hand smiling , she fades into the distance. . Abhi wakes up and the reality hits him, tears rolled down his face.

Dadi is his life , 6 weeks after she woke up after the incident that nearly killed her, Tannu and Alia destroyed my life.. Tanu tried to kill dadi but it was Pragya who was arrested, I abused Pragya so much that she pleaded with me that she was innocent , I did not believe her, Bulbul and Purab split up, Purab told Bulbul that Alia was right that the sisters were only after our money. A rock star fell that night with his best friend in the eyes of their true love.

Tanu found out that it was Dadi who was helping Pragya , she decided to kill

Dadi ,so that the blame would fall on Pragya. When Dadi woke up , her first words were Pragya, when the police came , Dadi told them what actually happened , I was holding Tanu's hand whilst Dadi was talking, I atarted to ssqueeze her hand harder and harder so she was feeling the pain I had in my heart. When Dadi revealed that the child Tanu was not mine i slapped Tanu hard, Tanu pleaded with me that Dadi was wrong, I shouted "my Dadi is never wrong. " Alia and Raj were also arrested for fraud, I have no sister.

Pragya was freed that day, the family just disappeared where to we don't know.

Purab comes to see Dadi everyday, who asks him "beta any news yet"? everyday that would be her question and everyday the answer was the same "nahi Dadi ji Pragya di ab tak nahi mili". I destroyed my friends pyar as well, I cant look him at him anymore, knowing I am the cause of his pain

Everyday I write a new song my feelings hoping that Pragya will hear my words, my pain, its not just my pain it's the pain I have given to her, I wonder how she will forgive me .

Closing my eyes I smile I have flash back of all those cherished moments with Pragya . I pretended to be drunk one night so was Pragya, it was then we finally made love to each other, next day Pragya told him she did not remember anything and continued to torture my family and i. I was so mad furious, how could she not remember so I started to fight with her. I punched the wall next to her face I was that furious.

Ludihana

Pragya listens to samjawan whilst putting Abhishek to sleep that Abhi sang to her it's the only song that she listens too . Bulbul walks in, her sister a mother to this beautiful boy who has given joy to her family. Di "is Abhi sleeping?" Pragya nodsf her head as one single tear rolls down her face. Bulbul goes to hugs her.

Suresh smiles as both sisters come out of the bedroom, "Suresh your wedding is next week, you biwi will not like you coming round here" Bulbul teases Suresh he smiles. Suresh still loved Bulbul but he knew she was in love with Purab, now he was marrying a girl of his mothers choice. "Rachna will be coming in two days, I am so excited, I have not seen my nephew in 3 years". Bulbul and Pragya smile. " I have not seen Rachna for so long cant wait to meet her". Pragya says. Sarla walks in "we have so much to do, I will do all the catering ", she looks at Pragya " Abhishek " Pragya smiles . "Ma Di is his mother don't worry"

Bulbul hugs her, Sarla looks at Pragyas face " I know "

During the day Ma looks after him whilst I go to teach, he is so mischievous it keeps her so busy, he is like his father cute loveable adorable he is our love. He loves to sing he loves drums he will go into the kitchen take out pots and pans make so much noise that ma always chases him. When he talks we cant understand what he is saying but when he sings he is Abhi the rockstar!!

Enjoy

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww cute Abhishek.
So much happened in their lives.
Eager to read more. Update soon. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that was so amazing
do continue soon
loved how you put an end to this track sad though
can't wait till abhigya and rabul unite

Edited by KIHminnie123 - 10 years ago

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