TS ABHIGYA ' IM WITH YOU ' UPDT PART 6 PG 20 SEP 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 2 PG 3 part 5 pg 16

PART 3 PG 9 PART 6 PG 20

PART 4 PG 13


HI GUYS MY SECOND SHOOT ON ABHIYA IT WILL BE TWO SHOTS IF YOU WILL WANT ME TO CONT THEN I WILL.


A BIG THX FOR YOUR COMMENTS ON MY FIRST SHOT TOO. IM GLAD YOU GUYS RESPOND ON MY OTHERS THREAD TOO THX AGAIN.


HERE WE GO

NOT PROOF READ N IGNORE MISTAKE OR WRONG SPELLING TOO.



IM WITH YOU


PART 1


WHY I LET HIM GO , WHY YOU TAKE SUCH A DECISION TOO, IF YOU WOULD BE HERE , IT WOULD BE EASY FOR ME TO PROTECT YOU FROM YOUR ENEMY, PUT AN EYE ON YOU ALSO N MOUSTLY I WOULD FEEL MORE RELAX IF YOU ARE INFRONT OF ME N YOU ARE MY STRENGHT TOO ... WHY YOU THINK I CHANGE IM STILL YOUR FUGGI WHOM YOU LIKE TO FIGHT WITH, PLEASE RETURN AT HOME , I WONT BE ABLE TO FIGHT WITHOUT YOU . Pragya talk with abhi pic with tears too .


Abhi who left home with ego n being hurt too with his fuggi talks n bad behavior, he thought try to understand her but he still stay in confusing too , he was paving in his flat n think on fuggi n



WHY , FUGGI WHY ,? WHAT THE NEED FOR CHANGE ? ,OK YOU LOOK MODERN GOOD LOOKING TOO, BUT YOU CHANGE YOUR BEHAVIOR TOO, YOUR NAUGHTY FACE N SIMPLENESS
...IM MISSING IT FUGGI, YOU KNOW HOW IT HURT ME TO SEE YOU LILE THIS, BEING RUDE WITH ME N WITH THE FAMILY TOO ,WHY YOU ARE HURTING ME N YOU TOO, WHAT IS THE REASON BEHIND IT, I KNOW YOU ARE THAT GIRL WHO FALL FOR MONEY , THEN HOW YOU DID ALL THIS IN TWENTY DAYS FUGGI , I KNOW YOU ENOUGH ,IM SURE THERE ARE SOMETHING WRONG SOME WHERE , THAT MAKE YOU TO DO IT , YES MY HEART IS TELLING YOU ARE NOT WRONG, I WILL FIND OUT ON MY OWN ,THAT WHY I LEFT THE HOUSE SO YOU WONT KNOW WHAT I WILL DO FUGGI , I HAVE FULL TRUST ON YOU , YOU CANT BE ALONE , IM SURE THERE MUST BE SOME ONE ALONG WITH YOU, BUT WHO CAN HELP HER, PURAB YES HE CAN BE AS HE ALWAYS WITH HER IN EVERY THING OR BULBUL TOO WHO KNOWS I WILL ASK PURAB, NO HE WONT TELL ME IN STRAIT WAY , WHAT TO DO.


Abhi was cont walking in the room tanu arrive in anger style as she enter she start talk rudely with abhi.



T " WHAT HAVE YOU DONE ABHI? HAN ".



A " RELAX , TANU ! IT HAPPEN , I WILL WORK AGAIN N GET ALL THAT LUX TOO BUT FOR THAT WILL STAY AS MIDLE CLASS ".


On hearing him say as midle class peoples that not possible for her she cant stay as poor no ways



T " BUT ABHI , ALL THAT IS YOURS N IF YOU HAVE ALL THAT LUXEST NAME FRAME , WHY YOU SHOULD START AGAIN , JUST GO IN COURT N FIGHT A CASE AGAINST HER ,THINK ABOUT OUR BABY ABHI ".



A " IM THINKING ABOUT HIM ONLY TANU , THAT WHY I WILL START I NEW LIFE WITH YOU N BABY ,YOU WILL BE WITH ME NA ,TO SUPPORT ME , YOU KNOW I WAS POOR BEFORE TOO ,IT NOTHING FOR ME WILL MANAGE ,IN TWO DAYS WILL GET MARRIED RIGHT ,IT GOOD THERE WILL BE NO ANY PRAGYA BETWEEN US THEN RIGHT ,YOU WANTED IT SO CHILL ,YOU ARE GETTING WHAT YOU WANTED ME ".



T " NO ABHI , I CANT LIVE AS A POOR AGAIN ,I WAS NOW IM NOT ,IM A BIG MODEL NOW , IF I WILL LIVE A POOR LIFE , WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO MY REPUTATION ,IF YOU DONT CARE OF YOURS I DO CARE OF MINE ,SO ABHI MEHRA I WONT GET MARRIED WITH YOU NOW ,YOU DONT HAVE ANY THING ,SORRY IM BROKING THIS RELATION N FORGET ABOUT THIS MY BABY ITS NOT YOURS OK IM LEAVING BYE ". Abhi hold her



A " HEY TANU , DONT LEAVE ME , YOU LOVE ME NA N WHY YOU ARE SAYING BABY IS NOT MINE , YOU SAID I WAS DRUNK N SO IT MINE, YOU ALWAYS SUPPORT ME N I SUPPORT YOU TOO ,NOW I NEED YOU MOST PLEASE DONT GO ".



T " I DONT LOVE YOU , YES WHEN YOU HAVE MONEY REPUTATION FRAME ,THEN I WAS BUT NOW NO I LOVE THE RICH ABHI ROCKSTAR NOT A POOR ABHI N THE BABY IS FOR NIKKIL NOT YOU , YOU WERE WITH PRAGYA ON VALENTINE DAY GOT THAT , I WANTED TO PUT IT ON YOU N GOT YOU BUT NOT ANY MORE LEAVE ME ". n she leave.


leaving abhi in a shocked he was sure he was not wrong he know his limit but so far to destroy his life tanu did wrong . Abhi got idea how to reveal truth from fuggi


PRECAPE : PRAGYA RUN ON HEARING ABHI MET WITH ACCIDENT



IF YOU GUYS LIKE IT PLEASE DO COMMENT N LET ME KNOW IF I SHOULD CONT IT.



THX HANSA
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Zaalima_5 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fantastic hansa👏
loved it...😊
waiting for ur next part...😊, update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice Hansa.
Glad Tanu showed her true colours now. Abhi now only need to know Aliya's truth.
I hope Abhi's accident is his plan for Pragya to reveal the truth to him? ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one! Please do continue!!
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It's good Tanu showed her true colours!
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Originally posted by: kulsumbanu

fantastic hansa👏

loved it...😊
waiting for ur next part...😊, update soon



thank you so much for comment n like too im glad kulsum
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: apple123flower

Nice Hansa.
Glad Tanu showed her true colours now. Abhi now only need to know Aliya's truth.
I hope Abhi's accident is his plan for Pragya to reveal the truth to him? ;)




thank you so much for comment im glad hmm you got it about accident
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow lovely hansa tanu show her true color im sure it a plan from abhi to reveal truth from fuggi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that is awesome plzz continued .
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Originally posted by: abi5991

Nice one! Please do continue!!



thank you for comment

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