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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sad part, will Pragya have a happy end? Will Abhi meet her, will she live her life in a good way? Please update soon and make it longer! <3
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Originally posted by: --simmi--

Sad part, will Pragya have a happy end? Will Abhi meet her, will she live her life in a good way? Please update soon and make it longer! <3

sorry i was about to carry on but had to go somewhere
I'm sorry to say but this has a sad ending
i will post the next chapter soon and hopefully that will answer your question

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CHAPTER 5


PREITY'S DIARY
I hugged her till all the tears were drained out of me, the doctor broke the hug and just smiled at me.
I gave her my innocent and sweet smile thats what bhai named that smile, cute in it.
Once i was bored and i counted all of my signature smile.I have 5 signature smiled,pretty good if i do say myself.
After a while I was cheery again but then my doctor told me about the dangers if my cancer spreads.
She said 'if the scans i have next month show that i have a hint of cancer there is very less chance of me to live'. That brought back the tears but that was normal in one of these sessions so she carried on talking. All i remembered was me weeping and her telling me she will pray for my well being,
other than that everything else was a blurr.
How nice of my doctor to pray for me; those kind of people don't knock on doors daily so i will treasure these moments till my last breath. how nice of her?
She is definitely a mother figure.

This got me thinking,it got me thinking of all my memories.
Purab taught me many things the one thing i will remember the most about my bhai is that he was kind but strict the reason for my living was him and robin bhai.My bhai's stylish,protective but mostly the most amzing brother in the entire universe.MY BELOVED BROTHER.
Robin was scared of Purab bhai but me and him always had fun,once we got caught by Purab bhai it was hilarious seeing Robin bhai freaking out. I love him to bits , he is so cute.
Bulbul the most amazing and beautiful person i have met she is the most incredible the most fantastic sister you could ever get. Her smile could change my world my chirpy bird.
Purvi my sister so beautiful and so talkative i love her so much she was like my daughter she would charm anyone i loved my little girl.
Bulbul could never be my daughter it was more like i was her daughter she is older by a year but i could share anything with her. She would force it out of me make me feel better even when i feel insecure, she was my chirpy bird
Abhi i know he shouldnt be involved in my list even after his torture's to me but he taught me many things
Abhi was the most innocent, lovable thing i have ever seen he taught me how to laugh, live, be happy and be selfish when your time comes. I lost my way in his perfect imperfections and fell in love i couldn't stop my self it was him. I never blamed Abhi for nothing it was just pressure and manipulation from his sister and i totally know what its like Bulbul and Purvi do it every time once they manipulated me to go to a nightclub i know. After all, i really enjoyed it.

present
After i went to the washroom to freshen up ,sadly my doctor bought me some porridge so i had eat it. I literally shuved it all in my mouth so the porridge actually tasted alright for once .
Once i finished my porridge i had an idea more like a surprise for bhai and soon to be bhabi.
after a lot of pleading and tears my surprise was going to be put forward
i reached our house for now(preitys and purab's house) it was soon to be bulbul as well than soon to be only bulbul and purab's house soon after i left.
I just noticed something i am such a pessimistic person,ain't i.
I got rose petals decorated the whole house with the help of my doctor then bhai's room ready for his suhaag raat,some cheeky things are going to go down.LOL! FINISHED,WE HAD FINISHED DECORATING.
All i needed to do was get changed in my clothes for the rasams when Bulbul and Purab do come as newly weds i will be freshly washed and looking amazing to welcome them.
I had a shower got changed into my clothes that i made myself i was looking stunning if i do say so myself.
I was wearing a pink and sea blue dress i chose these colors because they will match my wheelchair:cool idea.
Now it was time to collect my stuff from Mehra mansion my doctor drove me there and was going off to her clinic.
I was frightened to come back to the Mehra mansion i asked a security guard f i can go in he told me that aliya mehra and tanu mehta are going to come to the mansion in a short amount of time he told me to go out of the mansion before they come coming back from their trip to the Bahamas. It seemed to me that he was frightened by them two. I didn't want to go in because i had a feeling my past will come in front of me again,however i made my mind up to go in side otherwise my health would be at risk. reluctantly, i wheeled my self in.
sorry diary but i have to stop writing i have to go in or more likely wheel myself in.
LOVE YOU LOADS DIARY
btw did you notice something because i did, i noticed last week both of my brother would sneak into my room and get my diary,which is you, out of my draw they were reading you so i decided to hide you in my pillow case on the left side where hopefully Robin or Purab won't look.
The antics of my brothers are insane, love them to bits.

Purab 'i guess you know what happens from there. I'm on my way to the hospital',he said wiping tears of his face and standing ready to leave.
Everyone followed...
Purab 'now you feel guilty you want to give her sympathy ,pity her. whats the point now you murdered pragya',he bellowed.
The whole Mehra and Arora family looked at each other ashamed they all knew what Purab said was true but they still walked out of the mansion to go to the hospital where Preity was hospitalised.


Edited by KIHminnie123 - 10 years ago
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Aww so they will meet her? This is gonna be emotional
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All parts r really interesting.Do update soon please
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wonderful haleema,
loved these parts nice
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CHAPTER 6
Purab was the first to reach the hospital,moments later the Arora and Mehra family arrived.
The Arora and the Mehra's stood not wanting to go in front of Purab or Robin,however they stood listening to Purab's meltdown.
How could they do this to di without feeling guilty i would have killed Aliyah and Tanu. Di has gone through enough pain, me and you both know that Robin.Remember that time we read her diary and we both ended up crying di knew about this.
'I can't lose her she's my everything no one can take her place she knows that no one can take my place in her life,we both need each other. Why are people so evil? Do you know when the doctor told us that di has a better chance of living i was so happy,just knowing my di could live it made me so happy di's wish could finally be fulfilled.She wanted to go traveling she wanted us to come didn't she,i told her after my wedding i will go traveling with her and you.The nice person she is she told me i forgot to add Bulbul in the list. Also she said i have new responsibilities and i have to worry about Bulbul and forget about her.I just hugged her tight and told her she is always my responsibility i will never leave her i need her now with me i want to hug her; i want her to hug me; ask me to sleep by her side so she feels secure; i want to protect her and i want to hold her hand while the operation is going on so i can reassure her.Yesterday in the night she said she wants a niece and nephew she can hold without feeling pain she had so many dreams i want her to achieve all her dreams,while i was leaving the Mehra house the Arora's and the mehra's followed me while i was leaving to go to the hospital i said something they still followed i just left knowing my di was hurting and she needs me',he whimpered.
The Arora and the Mehra family just stood listening to Purab's plea.
Purab had bursted into tears with his head in his hands he was seated on the floor next to Robin, who was silently crying and praying.
The silent witnesses were teary eyed;they watched from afar.
The next moment the doctor came out of the operating theatre.
Purab and Robin immediately leapt up to the doctor and rapidly sprang questions about their beloved sister.
The doctor avoided the questions and with great difficulty he said the operation was successful but he wants to talk to the two alone.

DOCTOR'S CABIN
doctor 'MR Purab and MR Robin your sister is unconscious for now but she had an attack where she couldn't breathe at all so she fainted.we had noticed in the files you handed us that your sister has been suffering from cancer for some time. Purab nodded.We took some x.rays and I'm afraid to say from the X-rays we tookwe have found out the cancer had spread from its normal location. Immediately, we had asked MR Robin for permission to do operation to stop it spreading even more,
as we had permission we pursued the operation. It was successful she needs complete bed rest.Does the patient have any older relatives?'he explained.
Purab 'no its just me and Robin why do you ask?'he answered.
doctor 'its just that me and my medical team don't think she will survive for very long.Unfortuanatly, her cancer has spread from the original location so their is not much we can do but its up to the almighty. It could be her last days so we recommend to be with her every moment you can visit her while she is unconscious but the others that have arrived can meet her while she is conscious you can take her home today.Me and medical team think she will live less than 2 years.I'm sorry',he said comfortably.
Robin 'that is quite long but i know my di won't go away she'll stay with us she will have a speedy recovery.My di has a lot of time left she will live our almighty will save her,she deserves to live',he sputtered.
doctor 'you may think so but time does go fast i'll leave you both to digest and acknowledge this news',
he said giving a reassuring look.
The doctor let his cabin leaving the grieving brother duo crying.
They left the doctor's cabin to meet their dying sister.
Unconscious: she lay tubes every where, bandages on her wrist,she was pale and their was nothing that they could do about it but pray and fund for her treatment.She was an innocent soul lying in her bed.
The thought of losing their di had gave them a shock they was shook they didn't know what was going on.They never thought they could ever live without thieir di she was his life.
haan hasi ban gaye
haan nami ban gaye
tum mere aasmaan
meri zameen ban gaye
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PURAB'S THOUGHTS.
His world was crumbling; he had craved for some one that he was related to his sister Preity is what he had wanted for 17 years of his life. Finally,he had got it but now he was gonna loose it.
He wasn't thinking straight.They had an amazing bond, after she's gone how is he going to share such a special bond with anyone else.
he sat down holding her hand he kissed her on her forehead and started crying. What was he without her?Could he live without her?
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ROBIN'S THOUGHTS
He had got the sister he had always wanted he didn't see a world without her.He needs her ,their talks their memories meant the world to him and her.
Where would he be without her?He couldn't live with just her memories he wanted her.



Edited by KIHminnie123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! That was so emotional! Will Abhi come to meet her?
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CHAPTER 7
Purab 'i can't this anymore how long do we have to wait for her to wake up. i need her tell her, Robin and she needs me it can't go on like this.Robin tell her to wake up she wants to see me she wants to talk to me i know she does.she is hurt we need to help her',he cried,while continually trying to wake her up.
Bulbul ran in wanting to comfort Purab.
Bulbul 'Purab calm down your di wouldn't like seeing you so upset.She will wake up and she won't want you to in this state so don't worry she will be alright',she whispeared
Purab 'Bulbul you don't know my di you only know Pragya my di is not Pragya.She is different she is hurt they have hurt her i know she is deeply hurt.Tanu and Aliyah broke her once again tell them to stop its not funny its causing my di pain i can't stand it knowing my di is hurt when she is hurt i am',he sighed holding his di's hand.
Purab walked outside calling the cause of all the problems into the cabin.
The Mehra's and the Arora's walked into the cabin guilty.
Purab 'see all of you look at my di you know what the doctor said he said my di is going to die within 2years. well thank you very much for causing my di so much pain because yet again you broke her i didn't think my di could get more hurt but i was wrong. You all are disgusting ,me and my di were doing fine in fact great di's chemotherapy was going good we were all happy yet again you caused her pain you guys tell her to wake up because she is not responding. Aliyah and Tanu if you wanted revenge why on my di you could of tortured me with your revenge.I would of happily taken all the pain ',he shouted .
Aliyah 'Purab no i can't take revenge on you.I love you nothing will harms you as long as i am with you',she told trying to grab my hand.
Purab 'wah kye ishq if you really loved me you would of protected me and my family. my family is Preity.Your just obsessed',he cleared the misunderstanding Aliyah thought was love.
Sarla 'mere beti Pragya tum teek ho',she yelled with tear.
Purab 'no aunty Pragya is not your beti you disowned her your offending Pragya by saying beti you can't see Pragya because Pragya died a long time ago.Thats my di and i will not let harm come to her don't touch her i will not stand it if anything happens to her. you've all killed Pragya di your killing Preity my sister my di what have you all got left to do?'Purab slumped onto the ground.
Robin 'you've ruined everything Robin said walking to where Purab was
my di wanted to go travelling with me and Purab,we were going to accompany her.She wanted to forgive and forget, live, laugh, achieve dreams why did you have to do this? She is hurt i wanted her to be happy but why do you keep breaking her? It took some time for her to pick up the pieces of her remaining self,it was hard for her. I love my di and i don't want any harm coming to her but you did it all again. I never had thought about my life without my di ,my life would be a waste', Robin burst into tears and his knees buckled and he fell to the ground.Robin and Purab stayed on the ground mumbling something.
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As the night arrived,the Mehra's and the Arora's slept on the couches and Purab and robin slept in the same position,while their tear stains dried on their cheeks.
They all fell asleep except for one:Abhi.
Abhi was waiting for everyone to fall asleep so he could have sometime with his fuggy.
Abhi swiftly walked over to the bed were Pretty was sleeping on.
He sat down on the seat.
He gently took her hand, she was still the frail petite woman he had seen before,however things had changed.
preity didn't were makeup (natrual beauty); wore western clothes; happy, joyful exactly like a teenager; she had no chashma and she had lost her flowey black hair falling on her shoulders perfectly it was like he had met a completely different person.
To him his fuggy would always differ from other girls he knew she was just amazing but was just so unique.
Abhi 'fuggy i know it's rather late i had given up on you when you left the house falsely being accused of having an affair. I wish i myself had tried finding the truth i ruined you ,shattered you in all ways.
I now your hurting but remember your suniye ,your Abhishek will always be with you; even when were far apart i live for you you live for me fuggy.Your my success your my everything the one i need but i know you deserve better. I love you always love you my fuggy chasmish', tears were streaming down his face, he was trapped in his thoughts.
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Edited by KIHminnie123 - 10 years ago
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it's really perfect upd, dear.
do cont soon

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