Abhigya FF;Pragya dying updated

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HI guys
Nareen Ayesha helped me with this story.Thank you for telling mw what to improve on and helping me with bits and bobs thanks!
i want to write a story on mms track .
pragya does not prove her innocence and does not get married to her' ashique ' however its revelation time for her too. pragya also has a bigger problem she has cancer.

chapter 1 =p1
chapter 2 =p2
chapter 3 =p2
chapter 4 =p3
chapter 4.5 =p3
chapter 5 =p4
chapter 6 =p4
chapter 7 =p5
chapter 8 =p5
chapter 9 =p5
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Posted: 10 years ago
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please don't give pragya any illness or have her dying...
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I have written a story, about her having cancer but that was with no mms track, in fact Abhigya were happy but sad ending, I still remember loads of people cried, and then I wrote an alternate happy end.
Sounds like a sad storyline but as Mina once told me, sad stories need to be told too! Would really like to read what you write! <3
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Do continue your story plz ,i like to read it.
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Oooh, I would be interested in reading your take on it! We usually don't get such sad stories, but every genre adds more to this forum and the fans.
GOOD LUCK! 😊
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Please do write it. I would love to read it.
Good Luck on writing your story.
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Oh please do write it!! I'd like to read it!
Stories can't always be happy right? Even sad stories are nice to read at times! So, do write!
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chapter 1

Pragya 'enough!how many times do i have to tell you i didn't cheat you how could you even think i could do some thing so disgusting but i am disgusted to see you actually believed a mss over a person you've known for some time now' she exploded

Abhi 'pragya you say you are disgusted i am disgusted that a women who is married is having an affair in my room i actually thought you could never do such a thing pragya you cheated us all you are characterless' acussed abhi

Pragya 'I didn't cheat any of you if you actually think i did such a filthy thing i want to prove i am innocent that will be the best thing you have ever done if you do let me prove my innocence' argued pragya with tears streaming down her face'

Abhi ' I will give you 24 hours that's it.if you can't prove your innocence you know what is going to happen'abhi spat

With that abhi went to his room the crowd that was watching had disappeared,Pragya was left alone .
she had to prove her innocence she left the mehra house thinking of what to do
pragya ran out of mehra mansion and didn't know where she was going to start to prove her innocence one thing she knew she had to is to prove her innocence for her sake and to prove to her 'husband' she was innocence.
How could that man say i am characterless when he is having an affair himself how shameless of him he stands with pride thinking he does everything right well for this case he is wrong thought Pragya.
Helplessly, she was walking on the roads.Absentmindly,she contemplated of how she would prove her innocence, she had reached his house.
As she was walking in she saw the mehra siblings watching over her she hurried into the guest room and let her tears fall,forming a river down her cheeks.she rushed to have a shower all her tears came out as the warm water poured over her;she was relaxed for now. she continued to sooth her self with steamy warm water,as she was rubbing her self she felt a bump on one of her breast.she didn't know what it was however she had read about this and decided to go to the hospital even though her time to prove her innocence was running out.she had believed in herself for so long she couldn't let her self down.
Hastily,she was running down the stairs she didn't want anyone of his family to see her.
Looking back to see if their was anyone looking at her she was okay for now.Peering back and forth,something had caught her eye the cctv camera she decided to go to the room where the footage was kept.
she asked one of the security guards to get her the footage of that fateful nights. she had got the footage and constantly watched it over and over again to know who it was that had tricked her and finally she knew who exactly it was.
10 HOURS REMAINING
she was happy that she was going to prove her innocence.As she had time remaining she decided to relax.
Nonchalantly,she was walking down the stairs with a bright smile on her face.
Suddenly,she felt dizzy.Before she could react everything went blank.
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present

Robin 'bhabi! tum teek ho' he said grabbing her to the living room.he squirted a little water over her she was still unconscious.He decided to call one person who he knew would trust his di like bhabi, Purab!
Out of all the servants Robin was the only one that knew what the Mehra family was really like and what the Mehra siblings and Tanu were doing to his di like bhabi. he did not like it and had decided to quite his job but pragya convinced him not to quite.
Purab had arrived and he had never seen his di in this state he questioned Robin about what was going on . Robin narrated the whole mms fiasco and what had just happened.Purab quickly picked up his di and brought her to the hospital.Robin and Purab waited.
As one of the nurse was getting pragya changed,she saw something unusual and got a female doctor to check out the patient. X rays were taken.The docters knew the decease .
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Doctor's cabin
Doctor 'I know its a shock mr purab but you need to be strong for her' clarified the doctor
Purab'my di's got breast cancer' said Purab with shock and fear a tear escaped his eye.
He came out of the doctors cabin with a saddened face and went to see his di.
Robin was with his di.
Purab walked in and was mumbling something.
Purab 'Di's got breast cancer why cant she be happy why does she always end up breaking ha' Purab chocked on his words tears followed.
Robin:What are you saying bhai di has cancer no this can't be happening there's too much going on in her life for this to happen so sudden'.Tears ran down his cheeks.
Just then the doctor came in
Docter 'We need to check how the patient is doing so please wait in our waiting room'.
20 mins later
She was conscious.
Pragya 'what happened where am i' she gently whispered.
Doctor 'you are at the hospital can you explain what happened or what you remember'
Pragya 'I was coming down the stairs to go to the hospital because i found a lump on my breast as i was leaving i felt a little dizzy then everything went blank'
Doctor 'You arrived at the hospital and as a nurse was helping you change your clothes she saw a lump we did some x rays and found out that you have breast cancer'.the docter explained to Pragya about cancer, while pragya silently cried.
Pragya 'I've got cancer'.she sobbed
The doctor left her to have some peace.
her peace short lived as Purab and Robin walked in, Pragya wiped her tears.
Judging by their state pragya knew that they had found out about her tragic news.
Pragya 'Don't worry i will be absoutly fine .the doctors informed me I'm at the early stages so i can probably be cured.as long as i got my brothers i'll be fine. I've booked chemotherapy so one of you can join..okay no one should know about this it is only between me and my brothers okay' She revealed with a sweet smile.
They were leaving the hospital.
MEHRA HOUSE
abhi 'Your time is up where is your proof'
pragya looked around and saw his and her's entire family here just looking at her.
Pragya 'I don't have any proof.i don't need to prove my self to you i can't believe purab and bulbul and purvi were the only ones to trust me i am disgusted.my mother trusted her son in law over her daughter funny i thought they said blood is thicker than water what happened to that.' she yelled Pragya had never made so much noise when she was here.
Before she could finish her sentence a slap landed on her face.
Sarla 'you deserve that slap I'm so happy you don't have my blood running through you', disappointedly bellowed.
Pragya 'what do you mean',Pragya questioned.
Sarla 'your not my daughter if you were i would have disowned you long ago i adopted you from Sunshine Adoption Centre . Do you know when people kept saying you were ugly they were right you are the most ugliest person I've seen, your ugly from the outside and the inside'.
Bulbul 'ma stop your hurting di's feelings'.she requested
Sarla 'she's not your di okay she's just a burden'.she reminded Bulbul.
Pragya just looked at her so called family,her whole world was crumbling.
Bulbul looked up at Purab,who was now hugging his di just then Purvi went upto Pragya and comforted her.
Abhi 'why are you two comforting a s**t ha .she's bad luck she's like a curse you can't get rid of'.
Abhi raged at Pragya.
Silently,observing Mitali,Tanu and Aliyah smiled at their luck and smirked at the behenji.
Dadi 'you are disgusting you can live here until the divorce procedure is over and my Abhi is free from you otherwise you might go spread rumours about us if you stay some where else. you can stay in the servants quarter',Dadi shouted.
Everyone left, Pragya got her stuff and moved her self to the servants quarter.She got all her arnarkeles and her childhood and her sham of a wedding pictures and burnt everthing .
FREE SHE WAS FOR NOW
Edited by KIHminnie123 - 10 years ago
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hope you enjoy chapter one
please comment it will encourage me to write more

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chapter 2
DIVORCE DAY
Pragya came out of the servant quarter freshly showered and was wearing western clothes .
She had tied her hair in a ponytail and was wearing a plain white top and some denim jeans with Pumas trainers on and no specs.She had brought her luggage down and was all set to leave.
The divorce was finalised.
Purab 'Di your staying with me', he commanded.
Pragya 'Fine', she replied.
They drove to Purab's house.
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1 year later
Purab 'di wake up we need to go to a celebrity house to design someones clothes',bugged Purab.
Pragya had always had this desire to design clothes scince she was young so she had set up a business to proceed her dreams. Pragya was now one the top designers in the world.
Pragya 'I'm so tired why would you arrange to meet a client now bhai your wedding is in a couple of days are you sure about this also can you help me into my wheelchair', she yawned.
After a quarrel Purab convinced his di to get out of bed and get going.
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CELEBRITIES HOUSE
purab wheeled his di in.
'Hello welcome to my house thanks for coming'
The brother and sister duo instantly recognised that voice only to look up to notice it was Abhi Mehra.
Abhi 'Purab tum yaha aur yeh kahaun he' he asked confused.
Pragya 'I am Preity Khanna and this is my brother Purab Khanna. I design clothes my brother has informed me you want our brand to design clothes for you' she smiled.
Abhi 'Pragya!'he gaped in shock.
Preity 'No i used to be Pragya, you probably know I'm adopted I went to the adoption centre and found out who my real family is my real age and everything else',she replied honestly.
Abhi just stared at his chasmish,she had changed so much she was almost unidentifiable.
She was wearing no specs, her long flowing hair had gone, she had lost her hair, she was wearing western clothes and she had tubes going into her nose, which were connected to a tank.
Abhi 'what has happened to you chasmish?' he questioned.
Preity 'I am here to make clothes for someone not to discuss my personal matter you had the lost the right to question me a year ago',she mention starting to get annoyed.
Abhi 'Can you make some clothes for Tanu and Aliya, cocktail dresses would be okay' he said
Preity flinched at the mention of Tanu,which was noticed by Abhi.
They walked over to the seating area where they started to expand on the idea of cocktail dresses.
Preity 'bhai! I can't breathe help bhai help',she fell unconscious gasping for air weakly whispering to her brother.
Purab 'bhai call the ambulance no use my phone to call this doctor. Di don't leave i finally found someone who is related to me your going to be okay .where's the medicine box?'
fearfully,Purab reached over to the medicine box.
Also,Abhi did what he was asked,Purab scrambled through the medicine box, which was filled with injections,chocklate bars and pills just for Preity. Abhi was shocked he knew something was wrong.
Purab picked up his di and took her to the guest room he was followed by Abhi.
The doctor arrived and checked her up.
Purab 'what happened to my di',he questioned
Doctor 'Her oxygen tank was empty i filled it up so don't worry. I would recommend staying in the house today she will be unconscious for some time,she will wake up in a few hours',she answered.
Purab 'okay doctor thanks for coming!,I will show you out',he thanked her and showed her out of the house.He asked Abhi for permission to stay in his house.
NIGHT TIME
Preity had woken up a couple hours ago and had had her food with Purab. He decided to stay with his di.
4:00am
preity 'ahh bhai! save me! save me!'she shouted and woke up terrified.
All the Mehra's came to see what had happened they were all peering through the door.
Purab 'don't worry everything will be alright i'll get you some water',he comfurted her.
Purab went outside to get the water he promised his di.
Abhi 'chasmish is she okay',he asked with care.
Purab 'why do you care if she's dead or alive for your information she's alive',whispered Purab with caution .
Everyone was shocked to see Purab use that tone in front of them.
Purab walked back to the room and had a glass of water in his hand.
MORNING
Preity 'bhai ajj tum harey shaadi ha',she yelled
Doctor 'Preity your brother left me with you he didn't think you were well enough to go to the wedding',
Preity ' my bhai told me you were coming so welcome doctor. I want to set up his room and get my clothes to get ready for the rituals after the wedding i really want to set up my house please',she pleaded.
doctor 'I will check if you are well enough to go okay ',she said with a smile.
Preity nodded in agreement.
The doctor checked her she was good enough to go.
Purab's house
Preity and the doctor were decorating the whole house with flowers especially the suhaag raat room.
After,redecorating the whole house Preity had a shower and got ready.She was hoping her sister in laws was looking stunning, she herself had designed her sister in laws and her clothes.She was pretty sure she had done an amazing job.
She returned to Mehra mansion while the doctor went back to her clinic.
Preity went to Abhi he just stared at pragya she was looking amazing.
Preity 'Abhi can my bhai have a month off, Robin I'm talking about Robin by the way i have made the cocktail dresses in their favourite colours they are ironed there in your room you don't have to pay me. my new client get their first 2 dresses free',she said with a large smile.
Abhi 'of course Robin can have some days off. thank you for the dresses!' said abhi munching on some food
The whole mehra family were eating no one dared to look at Preity
Racho 'di tum keso ho youve lost so much weight.you look so weak what has happened to you by the way how is Sarla ma',she started the convo off.
Abhi looked at Preity she had lost weight in fact a lot she looked so weak he stared at her and just waited for her response.
Preity 'how are you Racho I've missed you so much whose Sarla by the way bhai's getting married',she squealed with happiness.
Racho 'Purab's getting married to Bulbul wow he must be so excited',she chatted with her di.
preity 'racho can you help me up please',she requested.
Everyone could see she was having problems standing.
Ranchana helped her but Preity was really was weak.
Robin'di go back in your wheelchair watch what happens when bhai comes back and sees you standing he's gonna kill me',he said gesturing his di to sit back in her wheelchair.
Robin 'dI! di!' he shouted
Before,she could fall Robin caught her.
Robin 'di tum teek ho', he whispered,getting an injection out of the medicine box.
Preity 'ow you do not know how much an injection hurts it kills bro,the pain is gone time to eat something',she said grabbing a chocolate bar out of the box.
Robin 'are you sure you want to eat that it will make you more weak your bhai is going to kill me if i give you this',he explained to her,who was in no mood to listen.
preity 'you never let me eat chocolate its my favourite dairy milk orea it's so nice please don't worry you won't get in to trouble i got it clear',she winked opening the chocolate, she nearly drooled.
Robin kissed her forehead and he split it.She devoured it within seconds.
Abhi was getting jealous.
Preity 'get ready here take these clothes now before you say anything yes I've asked Abhishek okay
now go',she joyfully smiled.
Abhi was surprise Preity called him Abhishek.




Edited by KIHminnie123 - 10 years ago

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