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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Whaaat 😆 it was a dream sequence..
I loved it so much in the show only Pragya dreams I wish they give us a dream sequence for Abhi too that will be awesome
Thank for writing it


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so guys here is the next chapter. i hope you guys like it. all your suggestions are welcome.keep commenting it means a lot to me and encourages me to write. happy reading people🤗


Chapter 8- Let's take a break!

The sun has risen, people can be seen jogging with their chords on, cycling. The day has begun, well for some people it hasn't. The sun rays through the window pane fell on her beautiful face, making her turn her face to the other side. They say "Every morning has a new beginning..."

Indeed it was a new beginning for them. Moments of last night crossed her mind- the confrontation, the care, their intimacy, their love...love? And that made her open her eyes. She smiled as she remembered him. She got up from the bed and walked up to her window and opened it. The cool breeze touched her face and she felt alive again. She couldn't stop smiling. She looked in the mirror and asked to herself- why am I smiling? Saying this she smiled again. She had classes to attend as the realization of exams struck her the smile vanished. Studies, exams and less time. She quickly took a shower and went downstairs to make herself a coffee and breakfast.

****Mehra mansion****

Abhi had got up early than usual days. He was at the breakfast table at 9. Is it love? He kept asking himself. Come on it's not love. It's just that I like her. Okay, I like her a lot. She is different from other girls than I have been with before. Okay, I haven't been with anyone before. Still, she is special for me. I...I...Abhi was brought back from his thoughts by alia-

Not bad. Too early.

Abhi smiled at her and said- good morning sis.

Good morning bhai. Everything fine?

Yes. Absolutely, why are you asking?

Yesterday night you went out. I was worried bhai; you didn't inform me before leaving.

Sorry alia. Everything is alright. I went out to meet ch...

Before he could complete alia said -Pragya right?

Abhi nodded.

Can I ask you something bhai?

Yes of course. Ask.

What's going on between you two? I mean are you guys ...

Abhi gave her a confused look; and shrugged his shoulders.

God!!! Come on bhai. Don't tell me you guys are just friends. She said just friends in quotes with her fingers.

Alia, if there is anything I will tell you okay?

Okay. She thought- there is something bhai between you two. Like me, I am sure everyone can see it. I just hope you figure it out soon.

****khanna mansion****

Purab was in his gym room working out when he received a message from alia-

Good morning 😊

He smiled looking at the text and replied- good morning dear😊

Purab thought- finally feels like the day has begun. Without alia wishing me good morning, my day doesn't start. Alia Mehra, abhis sister, my best friends sister, my girlfriend. He smiled again and whispered- I love you alia.

****arora house****

Pragya was trying hard to concentrate on the problem in front of her. Derivatives and integration, she hasn't solved even a single sum in last 20 minutes. Her mind was occupied with his thoughts. God!!!!!! Like this I won't be able to study. She sighed and closed her books. Just then she received a message from Abhi-

Hi. Good morning dear. I am going out for some work. I will be back in a few weeks. Take care.

Pragya reread the message for how many times only she knows. Where is he going? Why? She tried to calm herself and replied-

Take care of yourself Abhishek. 😊

Abhi read her reply and said - I am sorry chashmish to leave you like this. I need some time alone to find answers to my question. And I am going to miss you, I hope you miss me too



Edited by chestha5931 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Alia and Purap ..interesting ..wondering if this will be a fact or there will be a twist and Bulbul will come in ..will wait and see
Abhi ran away ..he and his love phobia ..but it's alright he will surrender at some point chashmish is his destiny and he will soon find out and be happy

nice update thanks
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Chapter 9- Are we still us?

It's been a long time since I wrote. The last time I wrote was on my birthday. Three months have passed. Time flies so fast. Exams were really good. I am pretty sure I and bulbul will clear it. Three months. It's been three months; I haven't received a message or text from him. Bhai had a talk to him yesterday. He had gone out all by himself on a trip to Delhi, Bangalore and Kolkata. I don't know if it's true, he had said he will be back in few weeks. I waited every day for a message, for a call from him which never came. He didn't wish me good luck for the exams. God!!!!!Why? Why???

Why is Life so unpredictable? We think life will go as per our plan, as we want, as we dream of but, we forget that everything that's going to happen is written in our destiny. Our fate decides everything for us- whom we meet. Who enters our life? But, isn't it us who decide who stays? No. we don't have even that in our control. I am so tired of this. Everything that happened between us was it a mistake? Doesn't that mean anything to him? Is he ignoring me? There is a flurry of questions in my mind and I am feeling helpless.

31.12.2014- the day it all started. I can't forget how we spent the New Years Eve together here. He had left the party as soon as I left and he had said something which matters a lot to me. -You are special chashmish. You mean a lot to me. I had thought it was just a moment but things were never the same between us. Every now and then we went out. Meeting near my library, going for a movie, bike rides, long drive and of course the valentine day celebration, graduallyme and him became us.

14.02.2014- Mr. Abhishek Mehra who likes the being single tag, asked Miss. Pragya arora to be his valentine. And I being myself fell for him, that very moment when he got down on his knee and asked me out. Everything was so beautiful. The music, the roses and orchids, just as I like it and how can I forget... the dance.

After everything that has happened I am feeling alone now. I don't know what to expect from him. Should I even have expectations? Anyways, I will have to face him, face him tomorrow. Yes, tomorrow is the first day of college and I have a feeling that things have changed between us.

******Mehra mansion*******

Hello -

Hello Abhi - Purab

Yes Purab say.

I just wanted to check on you man. Where were you? You just left without informing any of us. What happened?

Nothing, I Just wanted to spend some time with myself.

Okay. As you say. By the way, college starts tomorrow. So I and akaksh will meet you in our usual place.

Yea, sure Akaksh, is he coming? He had his exams right?

Abhi, where are you lost? His exams got over weeks back. Even Pragya and her friend, what's her name, yes bulbul, they are done with their competitive exams.

Oh...yea, I completely forgot.

Are you sure you are fine?

Yes. I will meet you guy's tomorrow.tc man.

Abhi sat on his bed and looked at his mobile. Chashmish was smiling at him. Her eyes were gleaming with joy. He had kept her photo as his wallpaper, before leaving from Mumbai. People thought he had gone out for fun, to enjoy. The truth was -he was running, he was afraid of falling in love, Afraid of commitment. After being away for so long, 3 months, nothing has changed. He still had strong feelings for her. He had missed her. But, he didn't make a call nor did he message her coz, he didn't want to admit his feelings for her. He knew he will have to face her tomorrow. After a while, with so much in his mind, he dozes off.

***********************

Bikes parked on either side of the road, girls in all sorts of dress from shorts to chuddidar. Handsome hunks with their gang, giving high fives and hugs. The dream of every youngster Excel College of arts, commerce and science - Pragya was happy, at least she faked as being happy, she was in one of the best colleges in Mumbai. They were about to enter the college they heard noises, they turned to see three bikes coming through the crowd- she didn't recognize the one on the right but, she knew the one on the left- its Purab his bike-black karizma, which he got a year ago. The guy in the middle- of course she knew the one she wanted to erase from her life, the one she hated in the past few days.

Her thoughts were broken as bulbul held her tightly and took her a little back; Pragya realized he was standing in front of her. He removed his helmet and stood there staring at her intently. It was as if time has come to a still. He could see pain in her eyes where once he had seen love for him. He was the reason. He knew.

Hi Pragya- Purab waved at her. Thus, bringing them back to reality.

Hi Purab. - She greeted him

We should get going. Our classes will start any moment- saying so bulbul took Pragya with her. Abhi looked in her way till she was lost in the crowd nowhere to be seen. All this was seen by a guy standing near the parking area. He was wearing a blue faded jeans and white shirt folded till his elbow. He took a deep breath and walked towards his gang.

Hi Abhi

Abhi turned around to find Sid. Siddhant arora. Sid smiled to him.

Hey Sid, Abhi smiled back, (he has missed Sid, and his best friend whom he knew will after finding about him and Pragya will kill him. But, for now, let's not think about that he thought. ).

They had a brotherly hug. Sid greeted akaksh and Purab and they went to their respective class room.

**************

Pragya and bulbul were looking around the college, actually finding their classroom when she received a message-

Good luck for the first day in college.

She smiled and replied- thank you alia.

As Pragya was busy in her mobile, she bumped into a guy. She was about to lose her balance and fall when tight pair of hands held her...

To be continued...

hope you guys like it.😊

Edited by chestha5931 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update,loved it.Hope Abhi sorts out his feeling soon. Continue soon plz.
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Hey I liked this story
And I love Puliya
I can't wait for the next it was beautifully well written
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wow nice update.
Your describtion about destiny its awsm
Hope abhi will sort everything i don't know why but i think that guy as suresh to make envy abhi.
no this can't happen
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Chapter 10- I hate you

The boys- Purab, Abhi, akaksh and Sid were going towards their classroom when Purab noticed abhis shoes.

Hey Abhi .Your shoes (pointing at them)

Abhi noticed that the shoe laces were open.

You guys go. I will meet you in the classroom.

Akaksh, Purab and Sid went ahead.

Abhi tied his shoelace and when he got up, he saw a girl in a guys arms, on the floor below. He smiled. As he noticed the girl, his smile faded and anger got into him. Chashmish?

**********

Pragya had thought she would fall. But, she had realized that someone had held her. She could feel strong masculine arms around her. Knowing she is fine, she opened her eyes to see a guy smiling at her. She composed herself and stood properly. The guy was expectantly looking at her. She looked at him and smiled.

Thank you.

You are welcome. Hi I am aman mathur.

Hi I am pr...

Pragya Arora. Pragya knew that voice. She turned back to see Abhi standing with anger in his eyes.

Pragya. He smiled at her and she smiled back again. To break their smiling session, Abhi interrupted.

And you are?

I am aman mathur, he said giving his hand.

Hi aman. I am Abhishek Mehra. And they had a handshake.

Which year? Asked bulbul

Ohh...hi...2nd year IT.

Okay. Your classroom is on the top floor. Room 315. There, said Abhi pointing on the classroom on the opposite side on the top floor.

Okay thanks. And he left.

Abhi turned his glance towards Pragya. She could feel him staring at her, but she ignored him, ignored his presence. Bulbul could sense the mess between the two. She wanted to get out from there, but she couldn't leave her best friend like this. She spoke up breaking the silence- the lectures have probably started. We should get going.

What were you doing here anyway? Asked Abhi looking at Pragya

Actually, we were finding our classroom. And then this happened and you came.

Abhi took a deep breath and said- 1st and 2nd year finance is on the other building. Take a right from here you will find it.

Okay. Bulbul rushed from there taking Pragya along with her.

**************

In a pitch dark room, a girl in white anarkali walked in, her dance anklets filled the room with musical sound. With each step she took the sound of anklets got louder. She stood in the middle of the room and tied her duppatta in an appropriate way, tied her open hair into a bun and played the music. She danced; she danced with the beat of the music. One could tell, she wasn't a trained dancer but she was so graceful. She was full of life and energy as she moved like a swan with the flow of music. After she was completely drained out, she fell on the floor, gasping for breath.

Someone who has seen her perform walked in clapping, and held out a bottle of water to her. She looked at the person who was giving her a smile of happiness and appreciation. She got up and gave the person a tight hug. The person held her more tightly and said- I missed you.

I missed you too. They broke the hug to face each other; she took the bottle from his hand and took a sip.

You were amazing.

Thank you. So when did you come back?

Yesterday. I knew I would find you here.

And I knew, you would come here searching me. The performance was especially for you partner.

Ahhh...that touched me...he said keeping his hand on his heart.

So, let's go.

Come on. Sit here. Anyways, the lectures must have started. We have met after 3 months, tell me what's up?

Actually there is nothing. Life is as it was 3 months before.

You mean it's still the same? Like seriously? He kept his hand on her shoulder and continued Partner, in 3 months many changes happen. Don't tell me nothing happened in this break.

She also kept her hand on his shoulder and replied- is it necessary? And looked at him

Hmmm... so you mean to say still Purab is your best friend. Your bhai and Pragya are lost. And you and s...

Neil...she took her hand away and was about to beat him with the bottle...when he stopped her and took the bottle from her. He took a sip and continued.

What Neil? You, your bhai and your friends, you guys are so confused.

See, these things happen. She shrugged her shoulders. Neil held her by her shoulder and said- everything will be alright partner. Trust me.

Thanks partner.

***********

Abhi and Pragya were in different classrooms but in the same world- their dream world, which was total mess.

Abhis pov-

What is her problem? She hasn't spoken to me even once. She is ignoring me. How dare she ignore me? God!! Chashmish, I hate you. And who was that guy? Aman mathur.

Pragya pov-

What was that? First of all, he disappeared, leaving me like that and now he wants me to talk to him. Why was he so rude with that guy, what was his name...Yes, aman, aman mathur. God!!! I hate you Mr. Abhishek Mehra.

The lectures were over for the day. Bulbul was talking about the subjects and professors whom she found very well, but Pragya was not interested. She wanted to meet him, confront him. Just then they saw alia waving at them from a distance. They walked towards her. They found her with a guy. The guy was looking smart. Alia looked beautiful in her anarkali; she had left her hair open.

Hey girls. How was your first day?

It was great. The professors are very well. And the subjects don't seem difficult, as of now.

That's good to hear bulbul. Alia noticed that Pragya wasn't fine.

Hey Pragya. Are you all right?

Yes alia, I am alright. She said with a pale smile.

By the way, girls- he is Neil Oberoi.

And Neil, she is Pragya and she is bulbul. Alia did the introduction.

Hey partner, I am hungry. Let's go to canteen.

Okay. Why don't you guys join us?

No alia. I need to meet bhai. So...

Okay. No issues. Alia gave her an assuring smile. Alia and Neil walked towards the canteen while bulbul and Pragya walked on the opposite direction to find Sid.

.

Abhi and Purab were waiting in the parking area for Akaksh and Sid. Abhi has attended the lectures but has not paid any attention. Purab was concerned for him. Abhi has not been himself lately and Purab knew what was bothering him. But, Abhi being the cool dude , he is has not shared any of it with anyone.

Abhi, where are you lost? Asked Purab.

Nothing, how many times I have to say this.

I will ask till you reply properly.

I don't know.

Listen.., Purab stopped as he saw two beautiful girls approaching them. Abhi looked at Purab who was looking somewhere else. He turned, and found chashmish and bulbul coming towards them.

Pragya ignored Abhi and asked Purab- where is bhai?

That was enough for the day. The lava erupted. Abhi held her hand and took her away with him. Bulbul was about to walk behind them but Purab stopped her. It's best if they talk and sort things you know. Bulbul nodded in agreement. Abhi took Pragya to the terrace of the cultural building. All the way, while Pragya tried to free herself, abhis hold got tight. As they reached the terrace Abhi left her hand. There was pain, anger, hate, that's what they felt for each other lately.

What's your problem Mr. Abhishek Mehra?

Abhi turned to see her and held her tightly by her shoulders and said- what is my problem? What's your problem? Why are you ignoring me?

Even Pragya was tired now. Tired of her questions to herself, she too spoke in the same tone as he did.

I am ignoring you? Seriously, Abhishek, after what you did, what do you expect from me?

Abhi realized what she meant. He had hurt her. His behavior was the reason that she was in so much pain. His voice softer now-

Listen, I am sorry. I am sorry chashmish, for hurting you.

Sorry? Don't be sorry Abhishek. I am sorry that I understood you. I am sorry that I waited everyday for one call or one text from you. I am sorry for being a fool. I am sorry Mr. Abhishek Mehra coz I love you.

Tears flowing from her eyes, her voice evident of what she felt for him and how much he has caused her pain. She freed herself from his hold and was about to leave when Abhi held her wrist.

Leave me Abhishek. Abhi didn't let her go.

She turned looked straight in his eyes and said- leave me.

I can't let you go. I can't leave you chashmish. I know I am a fool to have left you like this. But I have realized that I can't live without you. I have missed you chashmish. I left to find answers and now I have realized you are the answer to all my questions. I love you chashmish. I love you. Saying he left her, and turned his back to her. She couldn't leave him he was a mess, he was her mess. She hugged him from behind. Abhi turned and took her in his arms.

I love you chashmish.

I hate you Mr. Abhishek Mehra

Abhi smiled.I know.

To be continued...

hope you guys like it. enjoy reading.

note: the role of aman mathur will be played by harshad chopra

Edited by chestha5931 - 10 years ago
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Nice update but I was lost in some parts specially the end ..the parts written with the red font did they really said this out loud or it was an inner conversation ?

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Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Nice update but I was lost in some parts specially the end ..the parts written with the red font did they really said this out loud or it was an inner conversation ?


hey it was their confrontation. no inner conversation. i have used red fonts to highlight their confession.

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