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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww loved it! Wonder if abhi will get a answer!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hailly

Nice update .continue soon plz.



thank you dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simsim25

Aww loved it! Wonder if abhi will get a answer!



you will know soon...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey...buddy me for pm...
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here is chapter 5b-anything for you cont..

**** Arora House(Mansion)******

As Pragya reached home,she strangely felt alone and unhappy, this was house not home she thought. she started missing her family. usually on this day there used to be pooja at the Arora House and the Mehras , purab,tanu, bulbul all used to come here, and all day she used to be with them. Everytime she used to go out in the evening,till she came back ,no one slept as they wanted to be sure that their princess was back home safe and sound. Ma,Papa,Bhai,Dadi...i am missing you all...her thoughts were broken by a phone call. she picked the phone and her face lightened up listening to the voice on the other side
---pragya-hello
hello beta..kaisi hai beta?
Main theek hu ma...her voice chocked saying this , as she was nissing them all even more now and her eyes were filled
tu ro rahi hai beta?
nai ma...main bilkul theek hu..
theek hai..ek minute ruk Papa se baat kar..
haaa...
-----hello mera bacha..how are you?
I am fine Papa...I am Missing you all a lot...
we are missing you too dear...we will be back soon.
ok papa..where is bhai?
1 second i will give him the phone
ok
------ayeee papdi...Kya haal hai?
ufff bhai...aapko koi aur naam nai mila?
chal natak mat kar and tell me where were you? i have been calling you so many times ...
Bhai main bulbul ke saath dinner pe gayi thi..
Okay..only you and bulbul?asked sid to reassure
Pragya knew the meaning behind the word only , she took a deep breath,crossed her fingers and said- yes bhai
okay then...
where is dadi?
she is here waiting for her chance to talk to you.wait will give her the phone..
----hello pragaya..
hiii sexxxyyy
chup badmash...koi apni dadi o aise bulata hai...
come on dadi...aap meri friend ho na...fir main apni friend ko aise hi bulati hu...
tujhse baat kiye bina humlog ko neend nai aati hai beta..
jaanti hu dadi...dekho baatho gayi na..ab aap jake so jaye...main kal baat karti hu..
theek hai beta. apna khayal rakhna.
ji dadi..

she kept the phone, wiped those tears and a small smile appeared on her face.She had gone with her family but as her competitive exams were nearing, she couldnt afford to miss any classes lately. its been just few days and she has missed her family a lot. Mr.&Mrs.Arora never gave pragya and sid everything as per their want, they wanted both of them to work hard for things they want and made sure their children excelled,they were very supportive and made sure the Arora siblings were grounded. Dadi was their support system and their friend who knew solutions for their problems. this is the Arora Family

***Mehra Mansion***
As abhi entered the house, he saw alia waiting for him in the hall.Seeing him come home so early she asked-
Bhai...itni jaldi aap aagaye?
haan..kyu?
kuch nai bhai..aisei..
hmmm...jao alia...its late..go to your rrom..
ok bahi

saying so both the Mehra Siblings left to their respective rooms. Abhi freshened up and changed into a track pant and white T-shirt. He laid on his bed and thought about his chashmish,about today and took his cellphone to type a message and sent it ti chashmish...

***Arora House***

Pragya freshened up and changed into a pyjama and loose t-shirt. She tied her hair into a pony tail and went a stood near her window. As the cool breeze touched her face ,she closed her eyes to feel the wind and only person she could remember was him, she opened her eyes and could feel that she was blushing she said-Mr.Abhishek Mehra..just then her cellphone beeped. She went near her bed to get her cellphone..the mobile flashed- 1 new message from Mr.Abhishek Mehra. she happily opened the message it read-
**abhi to Pragya- hey chashmish😊
Pragya was super happy and she didnt realize what she was tying and later she regretted her reply...
**Pragya to abhi-100 years
ohhh..so chashmish was thinking about me...
**abhi to pragya- so you were thinking about me?
as pragya read the message,she bit her lip cursing herself for having replied like that..she thought for a while and replied
***Pragya to abhi- no
liar...thought abhi...i will make you confess the truth chashmish...wait and see..
***abhi to pragya-ok.so it was only me who was thinking about you.anyways gn.sd.tc
pragay read the msg again and agian to be sure that she wasnt dreaming after a lot of thinking she replied
** pragya to abhi-no.nothing like that...even i was thinking about you, thats why i said 100 years😊
abhi was super happy with the reply and he thought- chashmish you are so innocent ...and replied
***abhi to pragya- You lied chashmish..so your punishment is answer my question-WHO AM I TO YOU?
Pragya was shocked she thoght god he tricked me...god!!! i hate him..I hate you Mr.Abhishek Mehra
***Pragay to abhi- If you are so eager to get your answer come here and get it...

abhi was surprised...he didnt expect such a reply from her...he looked himself in the mirror before leaving, applied a bit of deo and left in his car...on the way he messaged her
***abhi to pragya- ok cahashmish . i am coming.

the reply made pragayas heartbeat fast,she had a strange feeling of happiness as well as she was worried as to what to tell him as an answer...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome plz update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 5c-here it goes

***Arora House***
Pragaya went downstairs so that she will be able to open the door quickly once Abhi comes. She knew he wont ring the bell but will instead send her a text that he reached. Her mind was preoccupied with thoughts of abhi and the answer and also why he was suddenly asking all this.She remembered their new year which started all this between them.How the guy she disliked so much was now so important for her. The way abhi has been treating her, making her feel special always was doing something to her, and all this while she has been smiling. just then her moblie beeped. It was message from him
**abhi to pragya- I reached
she quickly opened the door and to her surprise there wasnt anyone. she went outside and found his car parked in the parking area. where is he?just then her mobile started ringing..it was him.she answered it
hello..
chashmish...where are you?
i am outside...where are you?
wow!!!you called me here and you are outside...
god!!!!abhishek, i am outside my house...i cant find you...
chashmish ...
hmmm...
I am in your room...
what??????

she cut the call...and ran into the house, closed the door and was quick to get back to her room. She saw abhi was sitting her bed with a big smile on his face.As he saw her he lifted his right hand and said- hiii...
he got up and went towards her to give her a hug but pragya stopped him...
you again came from the back door and through my window?
yes..come on i am more used to that way than coming through the door
god!!!!!! i seriously wonder how can i like someone like you????
and as soon as she completed her sentence she bit her lips again She hoped abhi hasnt heard it but her bad luck he hadnt missed it at all
ohhh...so you like me?
He again started going near her
You dont need to come near me...i can hear you from there...
Abhi gave a smirk that said dare you stop me...
God!! this guy is making it so tough for me- thought pragya
to divert his attention from what she said she took out the question for which he was here
you came to get your answer right?
Abhi stopped, looked at her and said- yes...i need my answer...
okay...but i want you to sit there pointing towards her bed
why?
do you want your answer or not?
yes...
so please sit there...
abhi nodded in agreement and placed himself comfortably on the bed while pragya went and stood near the window. She saw abhi and then turned her back towards him.
She smiled at the thought of abhi having come through the window, it has been about 5 times...yes today is the 5th time , she has been keeping a count of his antics .
Abhi was all the while staring at her, patiently waiting for her answer. Even he has been wondering why he asked her that. may be because of their recently growing fondness and intimacy. He never liked her in the first place and now today he is with his chashmish in her room.god!!!she is special he thought.
After a few minutes Pragaya spoke, still looking outside the window...
I dont know abhishek...i dont know who you are to me. I dont know what this is..this thing happening between us. I never allowed any guy to come so close to me. Never have i had a guy in my bedroom and that to through the window, i never lied to my parents or bhai about anything. But, now i have changed i dont know if its right or wrong but i feel its beautiful,You are important for me abhishek. i know that. You are now a big part of my life and you mean a lot to me.I never liked you before and i know it was same for you also and today i like everything about you. your i am cool attitude, your smile, your fear for horror movies, everything about you and want to be there for you always. I dont know abhishek, it might happen someday we might forget all this and move ahead in life but i dont think anyone ever will be able to replace you in my life...as she said a tear fell from her eyes and as she turned to face him, he was standing there and she could see that he had listened to her and then something happened which she didnt expect- he came towards her and hugged her tightly

as he hugged her he spoke- I dont know chashmish why i asked you this...i know we are still figuring out the thing between us...all i want you to know is...You are important to me chashmish. You are the most important person in my life and i have feelings for you which i never felt for anyone ever. I never allowed any girl to come so close to me, and i want you to know that i just want you to be the girl of my life..I wont leave you chashmish...I will be there always...Anything for you my girl..everything for you...
Pragya was fine..she was smiling now...as they broke the hug, abhi cupped pragyas face and wiped her tears with his thumb fingers.

Pragya moved away from him but abhi caught her wrist and pulled her towards him and her back hit his chest. He held her tightly with his hand on her waist and he kept his chin on her neck..his rough stubble on her soft neck made her close her eyes. abhi placed a wet kiss on her neck and whispered in her ears-chashmish..his husky voice made pragya go weak in her knees , she turned around to face him and she saw twinkle in his eyes and all abhi could think was how beautiful she was.
Pragya could read his eyes and as abhi came close to her this time,she didnt go back but stood there. soon they were so close that they could feel each others breath. Abhi cupped pragyas face and his eyes were on her lips. Pragya tied getting away from his hold as she very well knew what was going to his next step.abhi seeing this tightened his hold on her and asked-why chashmish? why do you always go away from me? am i doing anything wrong? Abhi could see her blushing hearing this and as soon as he said- chashmish she was in her arms and placed a soft kiss on her forehead.

please ignore mistakes...happy reading😊


Edited by chestha5931 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was a lovely update, thanks for such a story, pls con soon,then pls dialogue in english
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi chestha, i loved ur writing the outline was nice, but mistake i am not here to point out that but for u to rectify it.
1.you have to describe scene, the day and weather everything.
2.mostly 8Lines enough in a par
3.use name first letter in caps.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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pls keep an index to contact.
one post one part it will be good to read

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