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Posted: 10 years ago
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hii guys...extremely sorry i havent posted in a long while...next update tomorrow.for sure...i hope you havent forgotten the story😉
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Hiii guys. I know I am updating after a long time. Sorry friends. Better late than never. So here comes the next part. I have changed a scene in part 5-c. Also the next updates will be much more sorted. Ayesha thanks for the tips dear. I hope you guys enjoy reading it, all comments, suggestions and likes are welcome.

Chapter 6- new beginning

Mumbai was moving fast. The stations were busy with buzzing people, the roads were lit up with the headlights of cars and taxis, and the queen's necklace was looking beautiful. Mumbai the city of dreams like every day was full of life and getting ready for the next day. It was midnight. The moon and twinkling stars added beauty to the dark night. The night was indeed beautiful. But, all this didn't matter to two souls who have found everything that night in each other's arms.

Have you guys ever experienced that moment when you are so happy that you don't wish anything more from God. You are on 9th cloud. As if all your life this was the moment you were waiting for. You want the time to just stop here, right now; you don't want this moment to pass. You know nothing can make your world more beautiful, more meaningful, than the person who you are with at this moment. You know for sure your life has changed. That's what was exactly happening with two people who have found something more valuable than a mountain of gold, more valuable than their life, and they knew they have lost their heart to each other.

Abhigya were still in their tight embrace. When abhis mobile rang, this made them break their hug and finally after that heart melting confrontation for the first time they looked at each other. They could see happiness and something else in each other's eyes, a different feeling in their heart, and butterflies in their stomach. Abhi could feel his body vibrating. It was his cell phone in his back pocket. He broke the eye lock and reached for his cell phone. Purab?

He answered the call. Pragya who was back from her world of romance was staring at Abhi who was talking with Purab.

Hello.

Hey Purab.

I have been calling you at home. You didn't answer the call.

Actually I...I...I was asleep.

Okay.

Why were you calling me?

Mmm...Nothing much...Just Like that. You are home?

Yes. Why?

Nothing let it be.

Say it bro. I got a call from Alia actually asking if you were with me.

Oh god! I completely forgot to inform alia that I am going out to meet chashmish.

Abhi are you there?

(Abhi looked at Pragya who has been staring at him and trying to figure out what the two were talking about. He gave her a smile and she returned the same.)

Yes Purab. Actually I got an important work. (He winked at Pragya and this time she blushed and looked down)

I guess I know the important work.

May be you do. I am leaving for home now. I will talk to you later bro.

Sure bro. Take care.

After the conversation with Purab, Abhi went near Pragya who was now sitting in her bed and tiring to read her novel. He took a place beside her and took the novel from her hand. This action of Abhi made her look at him. He could sense her tears forming in her lovely eyes that always took the help of spectacles to hide her emotions. He removed her spectacles and looked straight into her eyes. The eye lock was broken by Pragya

You should go abhi. Alia is alone at home.

Abhi was so much thankful to Pragya that she told this to him because after the eventful night of their lives, he knew how much they wanted to be with each other.

Thank you chashmish.

For what?

He took her hands in his and said looking down, not meeting her eyes.

For everything. You are a blessing for me Pragya. I promise never to hurt you. I won't ever break the trust you have in me. I know I don't deserve you but I am so happy you don't mind at all. He looked up to see Pragya looking at him with so much love in her eyes for him.

Abhishek Mehra, you really are a headache for me. But I want this headache all my life. I am sure everything will be fine, you know. And Pragya gave Abhi a side hug assuring him, this thing between them will not ruin anything but will be a new beginning for them.

Abhi left from the Arora house with his answer and all the more important with happiness and hope for them.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi chestha, so u updated after much time
Loved ur concept when I read it.
Awsm upd
Waiting for next part
Once again upd soon buddy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update do continue soon.
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Chapter 7: unbelievable

There was a ball room, a huge ball room decorated beautifully with white roses and blue orchids. The ceiling had lights that looked like stars. Someone could be seen standing far and noticing all this, wearing a jeans, white v shaped t-shirt and a blue denim jacket. He looked around and said to himself- I am sure she will like this and looked at his wrist watch. Its 8, she will be here any moment. He herd tip toe sound of heels and the spotlight fell on the entrance. As the spotlight fell on her she had covered her face her left hand. Abhi walked towards her and removed her hands and looked intently at her. He could not take his eyes off from the beauty standing in front of him. She was wearing a white anarkali with chicken work that had golden border. She hasn't tied her hair, she has let them free. She had kept her specs, little makeup. She looked like an angel, so serene so beautiful. You look beautiful chashmish

She smiled at him. He took her hand in his and walked towards the centre of the hall beneath the stars. Pragya has noticed everything - the blue orchids and white roses, the ceiling where they were standing was twinkling with stars, though not real, they looked so beautiful. She loved stars. She looked at Abhi and she could see the care and love he has for her.

Why did you do so much Abhi? She asked

For you chashmish. For your smile that takes my breath away. For that twinkle in your eyes which is more serene than the moon. For your happiness which is the very reason of my existence. I love you Pragya.

I love you too Abhishek.

They had a tight hug, not wanting to grow apart ever. They have found all the happiness in the world. After sometime they broke the hug and Abhi asked Pragya for a dance. She happily gave her hand in his and smiled. Her left hand in his right shoulder and his right hand was on her waist. They slowly moved with the music

Abhi started singing- Haan aa...

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye (x2)

(He looked in her eyes, telling her how she was the world to him now...)

Pragya s eyes were filled with tears. She wanted to confess and make him know how he meant to her. She sang now with her back on her chest and he held her with his hand on her stomach.

Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe beinteha pyaar doon (x2)

Saari hadein maine meri, ab maine tod di
Dekar mujhe pataa awaargi ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye...

Abhi turned her around. He cupped her face and placed a kiss on her forehead. And then they were in each other's arms. Love was in the air

Beep...beep...beep...something started ringing loudly...

Abhi was disturbed. He held on to her more tightly. He started making faces. He opened his eyes and he saw something familiar and as realization struck, he was in his bedroom hugging his pillow. He looked on his either side and found his mobile. He switched off the alarm and again lay on his bed.

He looked at the ceiling and all he could think of was her. The dream was so beautiful. It's unbelievable what love can do to you - he thought...love? I love her?


its a small update...i hope you guys like it...all comments and suggestions are welcome😊

Edited by chestha5931 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice chestha, its super
abhi what he think of
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update .loved it.
Continue soon plz.
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Whaaat 😆 it was a dream sequence..
I loved it so much in the show only Pragya dreams I wish they give us a dream sequence for Abhi too that will be awesome
Thank for writing it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

nice chestha, its super

abhi what he think of
cont soon


thank you dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

Love your parts 6&7


glad you liked it

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