TS: Revenge, Pain, Passion & Regrets Part 6 (Pg10) Completed

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Posted: 10 years ago
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The OS depicts when Alia will send the pictures from holi to Purab who will be unaware who sent it. Purab will be in guilt trick and tells Bulbul and everybody the truth that happened with between him and Alia on holi. Bulbul will be heartbroken and break up with him. She joins with Purvi and Pragya to expose Alia.

Abhi and Pragya gets caught by goons. Neel points the gun on Abhi

Neel : Rockstar, you show is over, now continue your show after death

Pragya comes in between and takes the bullet. Abhi gets astonished when he sees blood on her hands

Abhi : Fuggy, open your eyes

Police come at the same time and arrests Neel. Purab and Bulbul comes too

Bulbul : Di, what happened

Abhi : Purab, lets take her to hospital

Bulbul : she is so much bleeding

Purab : don't worry we are here

The guard tells abhi to park the car at the back

Abhi ; Please it is emergency

Purab : Abhi, you take her, I will go park the car

Abhi take Pragya inside the hospital while Bulbul follows him

Pragya is taken to operation theater

Purab : should we call dadi

Abhi : No way, nobody should know specially dadi, you know her condition

Bulbul : But they know you will come at home in evening

Abhi remembers all the moments from the marriage, their nok jhok and when Pragya took bullet for him. Doctor tells them Pragya is in critical condition. He sees a small temple nearby and goes there

Abhi : what are you punishing this innocent girl for? if you have problem with me then you should have punished with me but why do you target the girl who believes in you so much, I am asking you first time something though you did not listen to me earlier , today you have to save Pragya at every cost, you cannot snatch her from us

Pragya's letter comes in Abhi's hand making him wonder if it is the same letter Pragya gave him at the before. He opens the letter and reads it

Abhi,

I know after reading this letter you will upset but it is very important for me to tell you everything. You know i married you only for the sake of my mother. I never expected I would be marry with a person like you whom I hated the most. I know you only married me to take revenge from me but i still stayed in the marriage thinking I would make my marriage work one day. I don't since when I started falling in love with you knowing that I will never get your love. But still I loved you from my whole heart but I don't expect anything from you. I know one sided love can never stay for long and can never be happy with it. I know you will never be happy with me so I will respect your decision after you read this. I will be grateful to you for giving me small happiness and sweet memories. I will live my whole life with it,

Abhi gets in tears after reading the letter and calls Purab

Purab : what do you think about this

Abhi : how can she even love me after what I made her go through

Purab ; Love does not have time or reason to come, it just happens

Abhi : But she know I love Tanu and still

Purab : Thats your thought but think that if Tanu was in Pragya id's place would she take bullet for you, would she take care of Dadi and everybody just like Pragya di does, you think Tanu will give you happiness but will she ever support you in your pain,

Abhi gets in thoughts hearing Purab's words. He remembers Tanu's selfish nature he saw during the drunk driving and behavior with Dadi

Doctor informs that Pragya is under observation and is out of danger and she can be taken home.

Bulbul ; Di, you are okay? do you know how much I missed you

Abhi takes Pragya to home later. Dadi and the whole family gets happy to see them home.

Tanu and Alia gets irritated to see Pragya safe at home,

Alia ; I don't know how every time this two sisters are saved every time

Tanu : destiny never favors us

Alia : they don't deserve to live after what they did to us

Tanu sees the camera blinking and sees something on it

Tanu : Alia, look at this

Alia gets very much happy seeing the pictures she took during holi with Purab with her in the room.

Tanu : how did you forget this? it is a jackpot for you

Alia ; Seriously this is the which can bring my love back, now just wait and watch how will break that Bulbul

Abhi tells Purab that someone from the family helped Corporator to kidnap Pragya

Purab : what are you saying

Abhi : I am telling the truth, you just think it inspite of this security they managed to kidnap her and nobody even saw them, it is only possible when somebody is familiar of this house

Purab : but how will we find it

Abhi : I will definetly find out and then that person cannot imagine what I will do, but this is between two of us nobody in the family should know it, not even Alia

Purab : Don't worry

Alia sends her and Purab's pictures in a compromising state to Purab's house. Purab gets the biggest shock of his life when he sees the pictures.

Alia : I am sure till now Purab would have got the pictures

Tanu : but do you think he will accept you if you will caught

Alia : Till then we will be married and he will have no choice

Tanu : what if he does not tell anything to Bulbul

Alia : then Bulbul will break up by herself when we will send her the pictures

Tanu : Your work is done, now do something about me

Alia : Then before bhai tells everything to Pragya, you go and tell her that the clients were your parents and she fixed your marriage with bhai

Tanu ; thats a great idea

Purab gets in depression and tries to remember what happened but cannot remember anything. He is in dilemma if he should tell Bulbul or not. He calls Alia over and talks to her. Alia feigns innocence.

Purab : how did this happen Alia? i don't know anything

Alia : Purab, you drank Bhang and took me to room thinking me Bulbul

Purab gets more and more guilty as if his world is shattered hearing it

Alia : but don't worry this thing will remain between two of us, its nobody's fault. I will never tell anything to anybody

Purab leaves from there.

Alia : Now nobody can separate me from you

Purab in his house injures his hand with a glass for betraying Bulbul and his best friend. He shouts out loud

Purab : I am sorry Bulbul, I don't deserve you nor your love, I will have to bear this punishment by separating from you

Tanu goes to meet Pragya and shows fake concern

Pragya ; you?

Tanu : So how are you know?

Pragya : why are you showing so much concern to me

Tanu : because of you I am finally getting married to my Abhi

Pragya gets a big blow hearing it

Tanu : the clients you met the other day were my parents and they wanted to meet you, they came to fix our marriage and you made it so easy for us

Pragya does not say anything

Tanu : what happened, did Abhi not tell you anything? I understand but you should know by this that he does not even consider you his wife. he only saved you for Dadi, not because he cares for you

Pragya : Are you done with your nonsense, now go from here, I don't have time to listen to your rubbish talks

Tanu leaves in disgust

Pragya remembers Abhi calls her a cute fool and gets hurts thinking Abhi lied to her. Abhi comes to room and finds Pragya sitting on floor with no reaction

Abhi : why are you sitting like this? are you okay

Pragya does not answer him

I will continue this later in the weekend

Part 1 : Pg 1

Part 2 : Pg 3

Part 3 : Pg 5

Part 4 : Pg 7

Part 5 : Pg 9

Part 6 : Pg 10

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abhiya23 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritzee967

Interesting monologue...typical characters...!

Continue soon!


Typical characters? I am sure you will love this OS, because it will bring the intensity of your Rabul
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat3


Typical characters? I am sure you will love this OS, because it will bring the intensity of your Rabul

Hey by typical characters i wanted to say..that the characters here are exactly behaving the way..they are shown in the actual show...like in some os's..characterisation slightly gets changed by writer's perspective...and nothing else...

And yes I am looking forward to it...it seems interesting...I love reading stuff..and this will surely give me my little dose😊.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritzee967

Hey by typical characters i wanted to say..that the characters here are exactly behaving the way..they are shown in the actual show...like in some os's..characterisation slightly gets changed by writer's perspective...and nothing else...

And yes I am looking forward to it...it seems interesting...I love reading stuff..and this will surely give me my little dose😊.


not little but most part, i will probably update later
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Loved this! So much drama! Wonder what Pragya does now! And Rabul situation is serious! Do update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ash ash wow awesome I love It ...drama and drama nice ASH ...why did you stop here I want more 😭😆...it's a beautiful story with different emotion ...I like every situation each part is perfect
I can't wait to read more pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start ashpat😊...
Tanu and Aliya are hell bent on getting back their ex's😡...
waiting to see what happens when Abhi and Purab finds the truth😉 ...
UPdate soon ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh my ash!! what a start!! really liked the letter you wrote for pragya.

purab!! didn't he learn his lesson last time to tell bulbul right away!

and this pragya, oh my!! wonder what will happen next.

just one thing ash, os is supposed to mean one shot, done in one chapter. so now we have to wait!! haaaye!!

thanks for the good read :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

oh my ash!! what a start!! really liked the letter you wrote for pragya.

purab!! didn't he learn his lesson last time to tell bulbul right away!

and this pragya, oh my!! wonder what will happen next.

just one thing ash, os is supposed to mean one shot, done in one chapter. so now we have to wait!! haaaye!!

thanks for the good read :)


This OS is kind of long so there will few chapters, should it change to TS? but I will update it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yes change it to TS! so we know to expect more :)

or if there's gonna be a few parts, SS for short story...!

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