TS: Revenge, Pain, Passion & Regrets Part 6 (Pg10) Completed - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Nice
Lovely story
Liked the dialogues
Glad Abhi finally knows
Glad Pragya knows about the "clients"
Overall really nicely written
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

Pragya remembers Abhi calls her a cute fool and gets hurts thinking Abhi lied to her. Abhi comes to room and finds Pragya sitting on floor with no reaction

Abhi : why are you sitting like this? are you okay

Pragya does not answer him

Abhi : I am talking to you, are you listening


Pragya still does not respond him making him worried now. Abhi holds her shoulder and make her get up.


Abhi : what is wrong with you ?


Pragya pushes Abhi in anger, Abhi gets shocked to see Pragya with the behavior


Pragya : Enough, stop sympathizing me, I thought you at least consider me your friend but no you consider me a fool


Abhi wonders if Pragya have to got to know the truth


Pragya : Yes I got to know truth, finally you made me a biggest fool, I look a joker to you to who you can make a fool of (in tears)


Abhi : I tried a lot to tell you but never got a chance


Pragya : Chance? or you wanted to hide it for me so you can prove that I am nothing but just an idiot, you could have said it once, I would have left so far from your life you could never hear my voice


Abhi : what are you saying


Pragya : Enough! grabs his collar, Abhishek Mehra


Abhi felt as if he broke her into pieces


Pragya : Now listen to me carefully, I am leaving this house right now


Abhi is stunned to hear the harsh words from her


Abhi : do you know what are you saying


Pragya : I came into senses now, I signed the divorce paper and it is on the desk, sign it and submit it to lawyer. I will explain everybody after the marriage but till then I will put this charade


Abhi holds her back and stops from leaving but Pragya jerks him off.


Pragya : Now what do you want from me, I am freeing you from this relation, consider this as a return gift for what you did to my family (says angrily)


Abhi gets a big blow of his life, he tries to run after her but Dadi comes in between when she is about to leave.


Dadi : where are you going


Pragya : Dadi, I was coming to you, I am going to Ma's house till marriage if you give me permission


Dadi : You don't have to take permission, go ahead


While leaving Pragya does not look behind while Abhi controls his tears and goes to his room. He starts breaks everything and finds the picture of Pragya


Abhi : Why you could not understand my feeling Fuggy? you left me just due to a misunderstanding, how should I tell you I loved you the most, I realized when you took bullet for me, nobody can ever love me like that


Pragya reaches Arora house


Sarla : Pragya?


Pragya : I thought I could help you here till Bulbul's marriage since we will have the marriage in our hall


Bulbul : Hi, di , I am so happy you are now


Pragya controls hardly her tears and makes herself busy in work. Next day everybody gathers at Arora house for Mehndi ceremony. Purab decides to finally confess everything during the function.


Pragya : Listen, make sure you write Purab's name properly, he loves my sister a lot (says teasingly)


Bulbul gets shy and looks at Purab


Purvi : Lets see how dark the color will come, we will know how much he loves our sister


Abhi is not able to face the Pragya but still musters the courage to come at Arora house


Purab : Bulbul, I need to talk something important to you


Purvi : Jiju, you can talk after marriage


Later after the guest leaves Purab tries to talk to Bulbul but does not get a chance. Finally he gathers everybody and tells that he cannot marry Bulbul


Bulbul : Purab, whats wrong? are you okay?


Purab breaks down in tears


Purab : I am sorry Bulbul, I broke your trust and betrayed our love


Bulbul gets more nervous hearing it, Alia gets happy in her mind.


Bulbul : what are you talking about?


Purab reveals everything making everybody stunned. Abhi hits him in anger while Bulbul slaps him. He shows the pictures to Bulbul.


Bulbul : how dare you did this to me? why, just because I chose my family over you


Purab : No, I can never imagine to do this with anybody but I don't know how did this happen


Bulbul : how could you do this Purab (cries soberly)


Sarla tells Purab to leave the house in anger


Purab : I know, aunty you all will not trust me but I did not do this intentionally, I had bhang that day and I don't remember what happened, I saw Bulbul everywhere


Bulbul : Just shut up and get out from here, I break all relations from you, don't show this face to in whole life


Dadi : weren't you ashamed of doing this? did not humiliate my Alia that you ruined both girl's life again, you don't deserve any girl, you should be punished severely


Purab felt as somebody snatched his life and his world was shattered badly which he can never make it normal, He lost his best friend's trust and love due to a mistake he did, He goes to talk to Abhi but he ignores him in rage.


Bulbul sobberly cries and tears her dress and tries harder to remove the Mehndi from her hand.


Sarla : Biji, I still cannot accept that Purab can do this deed


Dadi : I know, even I can't believe that he will hurt, I have always seen immense love in his eyes for our Bulbul

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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
arre purab??? why does he keep doing such foolish things. good thing sarla believes in him!! nice update ash, thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: -mina-

arre purab??? why does he keep doing such foolish things. good thing sarla believes in him!! nice update ash, thanks!


what happened? 😕 what did Purab do
Edited by ashpat3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat3


what happened? 😕 what did Purab do



I think mina wants to say that "Purab always breaks marriage during the day of wedding(LIke in aliya's case and now in bulbul's case)"...

Between nice update ashpat...Abhigya are always misunderstanding each other...
purab always gets into trouble because of aliya...
Waiting for next part eagerly...as you stopped at a crucial point😕...
Edited by MarGan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MarGan



I think mina wants to say that "Purab always breaks marriage during the day of wedding(LIke in aliya's case and now in bulbul's case)"...

Between nice update ashpat...Abhigya are always misunderstanding each other...
purab always gets into trouble because of aliya...
Waiting for next part eagerly...as you stopped at a crucial point😕...


Make sense, thank you, I know I will update soon and there will be very interesting turn in the story now
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Posted: 10 years ago
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not exactly what ganesh said. i meant there were better ways for purab to tell the truth. but i understand it makes a good story. anyway looking forward t the next part!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

not exactly what ganesh said. i meant there were better ways for purab to tell the truth. but i understand it makes a good story. anyway looking forward t the next part!


Never mind😊, anybody wanna make some guesses about next parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Loved it Ash! Hope Abhi goes to aroras to get Pragya back and help there until she does
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi...nice update...!!!
Cant see Purab in such a bad state...it always happens with him...whenever he is this close to happiness...something comes and takes it all away...suffering alone is like shadowing him from childhood...but hope this MU ends soon...and he'll be there in the arms of his love which will give him the care and treatment he has yearned all his life...and it will also end his desperation.

Well guesses for next part...since bulbul is nowadays determined not to leave purab at any cost..and is adoring even a spy cap against Alia...so hope she'll question herself about all what man has done and gone through for her...and tries to investigate the matter..and prove purab innocent!

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